The Legendary Sage of Konoha: Kakashi Chronicles 1

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*gasp* ur out of ideas or wut? if so then the seemingly impossible has happened
Well not out of ideas, but I can't just write down the chapters as I used to, as I have to think while writing for them to make sense now:p For all the old chapters, I could just write them down in an instant, as I knew everything about how they would turn out on forehand:p;)
 

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Retrospective after-thoughts, Part 14:

So the secret is finally out. At the time it was an intriguing thing to set up for sure but I feel now I could, and perhaps should, have executed the 'Akashi being Kakashi's brother reveal' a bit better. The backstory and the explanation for it is quite good but the reveal itself could have been better, oh well. Other than that, this was probably the shortest chapter in ages so not too much to say I suppose.

Short and sweet, 6/10
 
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