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    (FF) A Ninja's Love Part 2 Revenge and Love

    For first part

    *As Johninto start to use Chidori on Santana his Sharingan reacts to a clone from the side of him trying to counter against the Chidori. As John sees the clone he uses Chidori Current to protect himself while hurting Santana. When the current hits both Santana and his clone Johninto finds out they were both clones.*

    Johninto: Where did he go?

    Mariana: John I didn't know...

    Johninto: Found him.

    *Johninto uses his Sharingan and finds Santana on the other side of the wall. John does hand signs quickly and uses Fire Ball Jutsu on the wall to try and hurt Santana. As John's Fire Ball starts breaking the wall Santana uses Mud Wall to protect him self from the fire.*

    Santana: Those are the same jutsus your brother use before I killed him/

    Johninto: Shut up!!!!

    *As Johninto's memories of his younger brother come back to him he realizes how far he gotten cause if his brother. As Mariana is standing there shocked she thinks of how Johninto and her was before.*

    Mariana: Johninto please stop! We can figure this out.

    Johninto: Mariana I love you but I can't have you stop me from this I'm sorry.

    Mariana: What?

    *Johninto quickly makes a shadow clone and the clone grabs Mariana and dissapears with her.*

    Santana: Where did she go?

    Johninto: Somewhere safe so nothing happens to her.

    Santana: You're wasting your time here she's mine and so is her love.

    Johninto: (In a low voice)Shut up. (Yells) SHUT UP! *Johninto's Mangekyou Sharingan is activated revealing his Susano. Consume in hatred Johninto's Susano comes out in full version. Santana in shocked sees the Susano and seems like he doesn't know what to do. Santana quickly makes 100 shadow clones and starts throwing shurikens at all directions hoping to to damage. The Susano deflects all the shurikens and uses it's scythe to destroy all the clones. As Johninto sees Santana standing there his memories of Mariana and Zero keep coming back to him. overwhelmed int hatred and love Johninto stops his Susano and goes into 3 tail cloak.*

    Santana: Why would you stop your jutsu?

    Johninto: If you're going to die I'm going to do it my self.

    Santana: Whatever you say it's your funeral.

    *Johninto's clone puts down Mariana on the floor of a living room. Mariana's mom and cousin sees Johninto and is shocked.*

    Mom: Why are you here Johninto I thought you were in Amegakure?

    Johninto: I'll tell you later I've got something to do.
    *Johninto's clone dissapears as Mariana is crying and telling her mom what is happening. When hearing about Zero they all leave to try to stop Johninto from destroying everything.*

    Back to Johninto and Santana
    Johninto: Prepare to die
    *Johninto starts forming a Chidori but with Amaterasu covering it. As he is doing this Santana starts forming Rasenshuriken. As they look at each other Santana start covering him self in a cloak of chakra to boost his Rasenshuriken. As John sees this he goes into 6 tails form cloak to help his Chidori gain more power. As they run towards each other Mariana arrives from a distance to see the men she love go at it.*

    Mariana: Please stop!
    *As she yells to get their attention it is too late. Johninto and Santana get close to each other and their jutsus clash against each other.*

    Johninto: Amaterasu Chidori!

    Santana: Rasenshuriken!

    *As their jutsus clash a huge blast happens destroying buildings around the place and sending a force of wind blasting at all directions pushing Mariana and her family back. As the explosion settles down Mariana looks up to see Iwagakure mostly destroyed and smoke surrounding where Johninto and Santana where*

    Mariana: JOHNINTO!

    Next time: The Cost of Love.
     
         

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    Re: (FF) A Ninja's Love Part 2 Revenge and Love

    I liked the chapter gd job
     
         

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    Re: (FF) A Ninja's Love Part 2 Revenge and Love

    Thanks :D
     
         

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