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    A Ninja's Love

    *As the rain pours on Amegakure Johninto Uchiha is laying down on a building. The rain continues to rain on him as he remembers his younger brother Zero Uchiha dying. As the memory of his brother starts to go away he also remembers his love Mariana Uzumaki before she left for another guy to Iwagakure. As he lays down 2 Anbu members appear out of nowhere next to him.*

    Ame Anbu 1: Johninto you can't stay in the rain this long.

    Johninto: Don't tell me what to do.

    Ame Anbu 2: This isn't the time for this. Johninto come with us we have important news.

    Johninto: What's it about?

    Ame Anbu 1: You'll see.

    *The Anbu members and Johninto quickly leave the top of the building and quickly enter a hidden building in Amegakure. When Johninto arrives he sees the kage Pervy Sage in a chair with members of the Amegakure high ops standing around. Johninto looks at Pervy seeing that he looks troubled.*

    Johninto: What's going on here Pervy?

    Pervy: We called you here because we have found out new on your brother Zero Uchiha. *Johninto looks shocked as Pervy starts talking again.) We found out that a Iwagakure ninja name Santana Hyuuga was the one responsible for the death of your brother.

    *As soon as Johninto hears this he is overwhelmed in hate and shocked. He has flashbacks of holding his brother in his arms seconds before his brother death. Overwhelmed in hatred Johninto's 3 tomoe sharingan is activated and his tail beast 3 tail cloak appears quickly.*

    Pervy: Someone stop him before he gets away!!!!

    *Anbu members rush ti try and seal away Johninto cloak but Johninto quickly breaks through the wall. In hatred he heads toward Iwagakure to find Santana. While he quickly going towards Iwagakure the 8 tails starts talking to Johninto in his head.*

    (In Johninto's head)
    8 Tails: John I know you are mad and shocked but why are we heading to Iwagakure?

    Johninto: I can't forgive him for the death of my brother. And that guy is the one who took Mariana away from me so this is personal.

    *As Johninto says that the 8 tails looks at him knowing he can't stop him from going. As the days go by Mariana is at home watering flowers. She closes her eyes remembering the last time she saw Johninto. When she opens her eyes she turns around seeing Santana walking in her house having no idea what is coming.*

    Santana: Hey baby how are you?

    Mariana: Good just water flowers.

    Santana: That's good. This week has been good for us.

    Mariana: You're right. I don't think anything can make this worse for us.

    *As mariana finishes her sentence a black figure quickly appears near them. When Santana sees the figure he gets punched in his face sending him through the wall. As he crashes against the wall Mariana looks the figure seeing Johninto's face with his 3 tomoe Sharingan activated. In shocked seeing him she looks at both Johninto and Santana to see what's everything is about.*

    Mariana: John! What are you doing here and what's all this about?

    Johninto: This doesn't concerned you. Santana Hyuuga is it true you are responsible for the death of my younger brother Zero Uchiha?

    *As Johninto is looking straight at Santana Mariana is shocked to hear about the news that Johninto announced. As Santana starts coming out of the wall he starts laughing evilly.*

    Santana: That weakling didn't even deserve the name Uchiha and deserves to be dead. *Santana activates his Byakugan while looking at John* And if he is your brother then you must be weak too.

    *As soon as Santana says this Johninto quickly does Chidori and runs up to Santana at high speeds.*

    Johninto: DIE!

    *As Johninto is running up while sticking out the Chidori, Mariana is still in shocked and unable to move as she sees Johninto trying to kill Santana. As the Chidori is coming at him Santana looks shocked to see Chidori.*

    Next time: Revenge and Love

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    Re: A Ninja's Love

    woooooow really good one :D
     
         

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    Re: A Ninja's Love

    Quote Originally Posted by aro View Post
    woooooow really good one :D
    Thanks :D
     
         

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    Re: A Ninja's Love

    Quote Originally Posted by aro View Post
    woooooow really good one :D
    ^^ I cant believe u have sharingan and is the 8 tailed jinchuuriki
     
         

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    Re: A Ninja's Love

    Wow. Really awesome.
     
         

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    Re: A Ninja's Love

    Briliant
     
         

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    Re: A Ninja's Love

    Quote Originally Posted by Taiketsu Yagami View Post
    ^^ I cant believe u have sharingan and is the 8 tailed jinchuuriki
    Just had to do it
    Quote Originally Posted by Colour View Post
    Wow. Really awesome.
    Thanks :D
    Quote Originally Posted by naruto kyuubi View Post
    Briliant
    Thanks :D
     
         

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    Re: A Ninja's Love

    wow, thats genius
    i enjoyed reading it..thanks for the thread
     
         

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    Re: A Ninja's Love

    Quote Originally Posted by phoenixforcexD View Post
    wow, thats genius
    i enjoyed reading it..thanks for the thread
    Thanks :D part 2 is out
     
         

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    Re: A Ninja's Love

    very beautiful Fanfic The best I have seen all day
     
         

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    Re: A Ninja's Love

    Quote Originally Posted by SandFreak View Post
    very beautiful Fanfic The best I have seen all day
    Thanks :D
     
         

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    Re: A Ninja's Love

    Great Job
     
         

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    Re: A Ninja's Love

    Thanks part 2 and part 3 are out :D
     
         

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