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    6th Hokage Dimensional Chronicles ~ Chapter 7

    Okay, I understand that I’m posting a chapter after a long time but that’s something that was bound to occur given that it’s my last year in High School. I hope you all understand. Initially, I thought to release a double chapter to try make myself excused but due to some modifications still needed over Chapter 8, I’ll post 7 for now and Chapter 8 very soon (in the following 5 days…). Stay tuned along with my FF nevertheless and don’t forget the last movie part of the movie btw.

    CHAPTER 7 – Target - The Deathly Hallows!


    Hermione: How is this possible? Your scar hasn’t pained since…

    Harry: …19 years!

    This gut-wrenching feeling - inflicting this queasiness - and his forehead pain, for Harry, there was no more doubt that…

    Harry: Voldemort is back.

    Ron gulped while Hermione was quite startled by what Harry just said. Naruto was in complete dilemma though as he didn’t really know why everybody just freaked out.

    Naruto: Who is Voldemort?

    Harry was still stunned by his burning scar and the obvious conclusion that sprung to him. He took a deep breath.

    Harry: He was the most evil wizard to have ever lived and…

    The evil deeds of fallen Lord Voldemort were recited for a good time to Naruto till the strident sound of the gargoyle statue interrupted them.

    Harry: …

    Ron: Some people are coming to the office.

    Hermione: Let’s keep Voldemort’s return news between us for now till we are not absolutely certain. We cannot create panic for now.

    Everyone nodded as Hermione’s office door opened; making way to the 4 House masters – Neville, Flitwick, Smith and Slughorn.

    Hermione: What is it?

    Neville: Well, we’d like to know Harry’s answer.

    Flitwick: As you know, since the demise of You-Know-Who, the Defense against Dark Arts post was eradicated from Hogwarts.

    Slughorn: And keeping the student at Hogwarts is risky as they have no duel experience.

    Zacharias: So, Harry?

    Harry: Well…

    Hermione: Harry is officially the Defense against Dark Arts professor as from now.

    This proclamation by Hermione made mostly everyone relieved.

    Hermione: Also, Ron will assist the lower classes also as Harry’s aid and most importantly, Hogwarts is as from now on Level 2 alert.

    The teachers were quite astounded by this declaration of newly-Headmistress.

    Slughorn: Well, aren’t you going a bit fast with this?

    Zacharias: Yes, it’s only one enemy.

    Hermione: It’s by precaution, so that students don’t wander themselves outside Hogwarts till Kabuto is found. He may be one but his force is to be reckoned.

    They couldn’t really say word as Ron seemed utterly impressed with his wife’s authority.

    Hermione: One last thing, along with magic defense moves being taught again, I’m also appointing the ninjas to teach some of their techniques to our students.

    The vibes were mixed about this. While Neville and Flitwick accepted readily, Zacharias shrugged and Slughorn’s pride eyes were definitely against it.
    Slughorn: Well, I think we’re “satisfied” now. Let’s go now, guys.
    Sarcasm was definitely noticeable in his voice while he went outside and the other 3 professors followed him.

    Ron: Slughorn wasn’t really happy.

    Harry: Let it be.

    Hermione: Please excuse the cold reception, Naruto.

    Naruto: I’ve received so much loneliness and hate in my childhood that this is insignificant.

    Ron: Still, I don’t see you ever form part of his Slug Club one day.

    Naruto: I don’t know what it is but I doubt it.

    The room suddenly echoed with laughter and joy; disintegrating the tension and anxiety that were all around moments earlier.

    Hermione: I've heard that Albus has more chance to form part of it, Harry.

    Harry: Really, I think I’ll go meet him and James next.

    Ron: I’ll come with you too.

    Naruto: Just one thing. I accepted to help in training you, wizards, with ninjutsu but if you grant it, I’d like to ask some more “qualified” persons to come and help in that task.

    Hermione: Well, I don’t think it will be a problem…

    Ron: Apart for the accommodation factor.

    Naruto: Don’t worry; they’ll make arrangements in the outside.

    Harry: Are you sure? Winter is coming soon.

    Naruto: Yes, this will not be a problem.

    Hermione: Alright then.

    *some hours later*

    Tsunade: I see, so they are waiting to get approval by the in-charge there.

    Shizune: Do you think they will get any trouble?

    Pakkun: Kakashi seemed confident that they will be able to convince them.

    Tsunade: *sigh* Send back this to…

    As she was going to give another message to Pakkun, Sakura and Neji just appeared out of nowhere.

    Tsunade: You guys, here?

    Shizune: And the others? Any problem?

    Sakura: Well…

    Sakura and Neji began narrating the events occurring at Hogwarts; giving them Naruto’s orders.

    **10 minutes later**

    Tsunade: I see…

    Shizune: So he wants some reinforcement along with teaching jounins.

    Tsunade: …Shizune, go and contact the persons he asked for and the other necessary arrangements.

    Shizune rushed outside as Sakura looked upon Tsunade.

    Tsunade: He sure isn’t doing things half-way there, isn’t it?

    Neji: He’s still the same.

    Tsunade: *sigh* anything else?

    Sakura: Well, he asked to bring him some Ramen from Ichiraku…

    Tsunade: I should have guessed.

    Sakura: But he also said about Kabuto’s motives.

    Tsunade’s eyes showed lot more interest suddenly.

    Tsunade: Go ahead.

    Sakura: Yes, he said that Kabuto is surely after…

    ***
    Naruto: …after the Hallows.

    Kakashi: I see!

    Shikamaru: So he wants to master everything in the world with this and indeed, with those…

    Harry: …He’ll become the master of Death and with the wicked powers, he already have…

    Ron: He’ll be nearly invincible if this occurs.

    Hermione: We can’t let him!

    Naruto: I already sent back Sakura and Neji to inform Tsunade about it.

    Kakashi: I see…

    Shikamaru: We need a plan right now. A plan that will permit us to outpace Kabuto. Where are the Hallows right now?

    Ron, Hermione and Harry looked to each other.

    Harry: Come with me, Ron and Naruto.

    They went to the outside till Dumbledore’s grave. With a trembling movement of his Phoenix wand, the white tomb opened. There, among the body dust of the famous Headmaster, was the Elder Wand.

    Ron: Here’s the Elder Wand, the first Hallow.

    Naruto: You had it here all this time?

    From Hermione’s office, Kakashi, Shikamaru and Hermione were seeing the three retrieving the Elder wand.

    Hermione: The second Hallow, the Resurrection Stone is somewhere in the forest and the final Hallow…

    Harry: The 3rd Hollow is still in my prized possession.

    Harry was in deep thoughts. He was breaking the promise he made to Dumbledore by retrieving this ominous powerful wand.

    Harry: *in thoughts* Am I doing the right thing?

    Suddenly, a glittery skull along with those pearly green serpents rose in the dark sky. This constellation of green smoke was no indifferent to Harry as he disgustedly saw back this neon ill-omen.

    Ron: The Dark Mark?

    Hermione: This is bad. Everyone will know that he’s back now.

    Ron: Damn it. But why is he showing off so rapidly?

    Shikamaru: This is bad. Kabuto is really making his move at a worrying pace.

    Kakashi: Also, this is not a mere showoff. He knows that we’re here and he has just…

    Naruto: …Defied us!

    Harry’s gaze couldn’t be removed from the Dark mark; though behind those darkly illuminated bespectacled eyes, Harry knew one thing in his mind.

    Harry: Chaos will reign once more.


    ~THE END~


    Well, I hope you all liked the chapter. Don’t forget to click the Thanks You button and Rate it. xD Also, I’ll happily accept all your CnC. Btw, all the releases that are going to be done in the following 3 weeks (there’ll be a minimum of 1 atleast ) will the only one/s till early December. I’ll be writing full-steam back in end of November. It’s a long but forced hiatus. Hope you understand.

    Next Chapter: Aftermath!
     
         
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    Re: 6th Hokage Dimensional Chronicles ~ Chapter 7

    You Have one of the best crossover i have ever seen why dont you read my one My Crossover
     
         

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    Re: 6th Hokage Dimensional Chronicles ~ Chapter 7

    You actually managed to release it on schedule when you said it Even though you said a double chapter, one chapter in itself is good enough. I envy you that you manage to set a date long before your release and actually release between 15-17 of July. You probably cheated and was already done with it a week ago:P

    Anyways my reason to post here. I got some good news for you I'm 90% sure that I'll go to the cinema with some friends of mine to watch the latest HP movie or latest HP movie part 2 to be precise, so once I've done that I may read chapter 6 and this one of yours and be back on track again So if everything goes according to plan and no call offs from my friends, sold out tickets, or anything, I might actually catch up before you release 8 Thought you wanted to know

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    Now don't you go on and create another huge wall
     
         
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    Re: 6th Hokage Dimensional Chronicles ~ Chapter 7

    i love your story! keep it up
     
         

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    Re: 6th Hokage Dimensional Chronicles ~ Chapter 7

    Nice one.
     
         

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    Re: 6th Hokage Dimensional Chronicles ~ Chapter 7

    About the double chapter release I said, forget it. This is a perfect timing D My "side line job"is killing me and I really need... something -.-

    Mmm, there are many things I want to say about this chapter but due to some "typing difficulty situation" Im having right now, I'll just summarize it. Great chapter as always and good job :3
     
         

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    Re: 6th Hokage Dimensional Chronicles ~ Chapter 7

    Supposedly had I been up to date with your fanfiction from the start I could have said its been a long wait but I recently caught up to you so it hasn’t been that long where I’m concerned lol You brought it back perfectly indeed. I think for being on a hiatus you had a splendid comeback ;) So Kabuto’s agenda is gradually unfolding and his goal is very reminiscent to Orochimaru which is understandable as he had been his student for a long time. I definitely loved the part when Hermione suggested their students learn ninjutsu (very interesting as I did not think that would happen-honestly) ^.^ The ending gave you the feeling of "chaos about to reign". Again I think Kishi/J.K. Rowling would be proud of how you are able to present their characters correctly ;) It was an enjoyable read and I’m looking forward to the following chapter.
     
         

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    Re: 6th Hokage Dimensional Chronicles ~ Chapter 7

    I like how things are unfolding.
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by ElementJnr View Post
    You Have one of the best crossover i have ever seen why dont you read my one My Crossover
    O, Thank you. That's really flattering. I'll check it when I'll get some time.

    Quote Originally Posted by Michael92 View Post
    You actually managed to release it on schedule when you said it Even though you said a double chapter, one chapter in itself is good enough. I envy you that you manage to set a date long before your release and actually release between 15-17 of July. You probably cheated and was already done with it a week ago:P

    Anyways my reason to post here. I got some good news for you I'm 90% sure that I'll go to the cinema with some friends of mine to watch the latest HP movie or latest HP movie part 2 to be precise, so once I've done that I may read chapter 6 and this one of yours and be back on track again So if everything goes according to plan and no call offs from my friends, sold out tickets, or anything, I might actually catch up before you release 8 Thought you wanted to know

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    Now don't you go on and create another huge wall
    Well, I had written some parts of C7 indeed long ago which never finished due to lack of time. What made it more difficult is that I lost both brainstorming plans I had of C7 and C8. So it wasn't sure that I'll be able to respect the date. Luckily, atleast I've released something.

    Great news. I liked how I've been able to release something in the period of the last movie. Seemed like a good tribute.

    Quote Originally Posted by flyingpanda View Post
    i love your story! keep it up
    Thanks.

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    Nice one.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Kyla View Post
    About the double chapter release I said, forget it. This is a perfect timing D My "side line job"is killing me and I really need... something -.-

    Mmm, there are many things I want to say about this chapter but due to some "typing difficulty situation" Im having right now, I'll just summarize it. Great chapter as always and good job :3
    Ouch. Hope this help you indeed.
    Okay, no problem and thanks again xD

    Quote Originally Posted by Kuroi Honoo View Post
    Supposedly had I been up to date with your fanfiction from the start I could have said its been a long wait but I recently caught up to you so it hasn’t been that long where I’m concerned lol You brought it back perfectly indeed. I think for being on a hiatus you had a splendid comeback So Kabuto’s agenda is gradually unfolding and his goal is very reminiscent to Orochimaru which is understandable as he had been his student for a long time. I definitely loved the part when Hermione suggested their students learn ninjutsu (very interesting as I did not think that would happen-honestly) ^.^ The ending gave you the feeling of "chaos about to reign". Again I think Kishi/J.K. Rowling would be proud of how you are able to present their characters correctly It was an enjoyable read and I’m looking forward to the following chapter.
    Well, thanks you really. I wasn't easy to get back into the mould of writing it again. Well, Kabuto's plan will keep unfolding little by little. Won't really like to give spoilers but yes, he's gonna do bigger than in the manga.
    Well,I'm not really sure how I'll handle this thing of teaching ninjutsu. I just thought that Kabuto can't get into action that quickly and thus, I should keep something that keep up the connection between wizrds and ninjas. So, it's a way (along with another thing) to move more gradually with the real plot. I'll take it up as challenge.
    I liked his phrase though I felt a similar ending compared to C6 but perhaps, it's due to the fact that I didn't move much with this chapter plot-wise.
    That's a really great compliment. I hope your words are true Glad you liked it.

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    I like how things are unfolding.
    Wow, thanks you really very much. I know it's slow pace to unfold my story but I can't imagine a rushed plot. Glad you liked it.
     
         

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    Re: 6th Hokage Dimensional Chronicles ~ Chapter 7

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    Well, I had written some parts of C7 indeed long ago which never finished due to lack of time. What made it more difficult is that I lost both brainstorming plans I had of C7 and C8. So it wasn't sure that I'll be able to respect the date. Luckily, at least I've released something.

    Great news. I liked how I've been able to release something in the period of the last movie. Seemed like a good tribute.
    I see. Well I've had that problem as well, but luckily I had written down notes/key-notes of what will happen, so even if I forget I do have sort of a mind-map-something to check up on.Don't know how my FF would have turned out if it hadn't been for the notes. There has actually been several parts that I had completely forgot about, but remembered while reading up the notes

    Yeah, I like that too I'll read up on your two last chaps as soon as I've seen it
     
         

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    Re: 6th Hokage Dimensional Chronicles ~ Chapter 7

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    I see. Well I've had that problem as well, but luckily I had written down notes/key-notes of what will happen, so even if I forget I do have sort of a mind-map-something to check up on.Don't know how my FF would have turned out if it hadn't been for the notes. There has actually been several parts that I had completely forgot about, but remembered while reading up the notes

    Yeah, I like that too I'll read up on your two last chaps as soon as I've seen it
    Yeah, it's a pain in the ass to re-find what you've think about initially or at a given time especially when you haven't written for a while

    Yeah, sure
     
         

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    Re: 6th Hokage Dimensional Chronicles ~ Chapter 7

    +Rep. Amazing job really!
     
         

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    Thanks for the +rep.
     
         

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    Re: 6th Hokage Dimensional Chronicles ~ Chapter 7

    It sounds as if Harry is taken over by Voldemort with the last sentence he said.
    Hmm... Imma race to chapter 8 and give a better comment there, as I quickly read this to be up to date.
     
         

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    Re: 6th Hokage Dimensional Chronicles ~ Chapter 7

    i love it bro, very interesting
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by Wesobi View Post
    It sounds as if Harry is taken over by Voldemort with the last sentence he said.
    Hmm... Imma race to chapter 8 and give a better comment there, as I quickly read this to be up to date.
    Hmmm, nice idea but not really
    Go ahead....

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    i love it bro, very interesting
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    Re: 6th Hokage Dimensional Chronicles ~ Chapter 7

    Getting really interesting....took me long to read but as you have the next chapter, too then its like a bonus for me...haha!
     
         

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    Re: 6th Hokage Dimensional Chronicles ~ Chapter 7

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    Getting really interesting....took me long to read but as you have the next chapter, too then its like a bonus for me...haha!
    Yeah but atleast you did catch up.
     
         

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    Re: 6th Hokage Dimensional Chronicles ~ Chapter 7

    awesome... another great chapter
     
         

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    Re: 6th Hokage Dimensional Chronicles ~ Chapter 7

    Hmm...the content was a bit less.....(not talking about the length).....but overall was a good chapter
    N also the way you changed the scenes was awesome!!!!
     
         

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    Re: 6th Hokage Dimensional Chronicles ~ Chapter 7

    Hmm...the content was a bit less.....(not talking about the length).....but overall was a good chapter
    N also the way you changed the scenes was awesome!!!!
     
         

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