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    The Great Konoha Confrontation part 2

    for this thread to make any sense, you must first read the first part "the great konoha confrontation".

    *demon peins missles are about to wipe out kakashi, shino, kiba and hinata*
    *explosive kunais deflect missles*
    ino: we've come to back you up!
    *shizune/ino/ino's father/ibiki drop to the scene*
    god pein: wheres the kyuubi?
    kiba: are you stupid or somethin? we're never going to tell you!!!
    god pein: so unwise....
    *kakashi stands to his feet*
    kakashi: tch, these guys are too dangerous. i have to use it.
    *activates mangekyou sharingan*
    god pein: oh?....that is the ability that caused deidara so much trouble huh?
    kakashi: thats right. you'll end up in the same demension he's in.
    god pein: sorry to burst your bubble. but you didn't kill deidara.
    *everyone looks shocked*
    god pein: just not too long ago deidara saught out sasuke to finish him off, so he could rid himself of his hatred towards the uchiha. he blew himself up to try and finish sasuke for good. but he failed. even though deidara passed away, sasuke lived.
    kakashi: sasuke...., well lets see if you can escape it like deidara! Mangekyou Sharingan!!

    [MEANWHILE]
    *animal pein summons the cameleon*
    *cameleon and animal pein disappear*
    sakura: they vanished!
    shikamaru: no, she just turned invisible.
    *tenten whips out scroll, kunai go shooting out in all directions*
    tenten: if she's still in this area that should have taken her out of stealth mode....
    shikamaru: something doesn't feel right.
    *the cameleon pops out of a building*
    tenten: there!!
    shikamaru: wait wheres the summoner?
    *a giant blade shoots out of the ground piercing gai*
    gai: guhh!!
    *gai falls to the ground*
    *everyone looks shocked*
    *flames start shooting out from lee*
    lee: you bastard...
    hungry ghost/animal pein: !!
    lee: THIS IS FOR GAI SENSEI!!! seventh gate....RELEASE!!

    [MEANWHILE]
    karin: this place is all busted up. did someone already attack here?
    suigetsu: uhh, DUH!
    sasuke: stop you two. it doesn't matter what the situation is, our goals must be achieved. we go for the elders first. karin!
    karin: right!
    *karin performs handsign*
    karin: the elders are in the hokage building!
    suigetsu: wow, i knew that without searching for their chakra.....
    karin: shutup!
    sasuke: lets go!

    [MEANWHILE]
    male elder: danzou? why are you here?
    danzou: you don't need to know.
    female elder: leave now!
    danzou: you must come with me. someone is here and he intends to kill us three.
    *elders look shocked*
    *danzou thinking*: if itachi had fulfilled his duty and killed sasuke with the rest of the uchiha. i wouldn't be in this mess.

    [MEANWHILE]
    *god pein deflects kakashi's demension hole*
    kakashi: h..how??
    god pein: because we are god!
    *hell realm pein drops down*
    *hell realm perform jutsu*
    *everyone appeares in genjutsu similar to tsukuyomi*
    *multiple peins appear about to stab everyone*
    *genjutsu ends*
    kakashi/shino/kiba/hinata/shizune/ino/ino's father/ibiki: !!!
    *hell pein is on the ground dead*
    god pein: we've been looking for you, naruto. i'm surprised you manaed to kill hell realm. but then again, you killed kakuzu with ease.
    kakashi: naruto run, if he captures you---
    naruto: ha!, just leave these two guys to me. you guys go help out the rest of the village.
    kakashi/hinata: naruto....
    kakashi: you heard him, fan out and help out any shinobi in need of aid.
    shino/kiba/hinata/shizune/ino/ino's father/ibiki: yes sir!
    *everyone scatters*
    naruto: why do you want to kill me?
    god pein: to end all wars, but i'll explain in full detail if you just come with me.
    *naruto with an intent look on his face*
    naruto: you killed pervy sage. and now your trying to kill more of my friends. and now you wanna kill me too. i will protect everyone.
    *fukasaku appears on naruto's shoulder*
    *naruto enters sage mode*
    naruto: shadow clone jutsu!!

    [MEANWHILE]
    karin: i feel a strong chakra coming towards us. and fast.
    sasuke: !
    neji: sasuke uchiha.....naruto has been looking for you.
    sasuke: why should i care?
    neji: if you entend on harming konoha, i'll put my life on the line to stop you.
    sasuke: i didn't come here intending on killing you. but your in our way. suigetsu, karin, juugo....stay back. i'll handle him.
    *sasuke activates sharingan*
    *neji activates byakugan*

    [MEANWHILE]
    *hungry ghost pein on the ground dead*
    shikamaru: sakura, tend to gai and lee's wounds. everyone spread out and search for more akatsuki. if you find them, send out a signal to your location.
    chouji/tenten/iruka: got it!
    *everyone scatters*

    [MEANWHILE]
    sai: reporting.
    danzou: good, keep these two old fools imprisoned.
    sai: yes sir.
    danzou: reporting to all ROOT members. attack now.
    *danzou smiles*
    danzou: konoha will be reborn.
     
         
    Last edited by Steinbiz; 10-19-2008 at 05:20 PM.

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    really nice - reps
     
         

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    sweeet!
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by Steinbiz View Post
    for this thread to make any sense, you must first read the first part "the great konoha confrontation".

    *demon peins missles are about to wipe out kakashi, shino, kiba and hinata*
    *explosive kunais deflect missles*
    ino: we've come to back you up!
    *shizune/ino/ino's father/ibiki drop to the scene*
    god pein: wheres the kyuubi?
    kiba: are you stupid or somethin? we're never going to tell you!!!
    god pein: so unwise....
    *kakashi stands to his feet*
    kakashi: tch, these guys are too dangerous. i have to use it.
    *activates mangekyou sharingan*
    god pein: oh?....that is the ability that caused deidara so much trouble huh?
    kakashi: thats right. you'll end up in the same demension he's in.
    god pein: sorry to burst your bubble. but you didn't kill deidara.
    *everyone looks shocked*
    god pein: just not too long ago deidara saught out sasuke to finish him off, so he could rid himself of his hatred towards the uchiha. he blew himself up to try and finish sasuke for good. but he failed. even though deidara passed away, sasuke lived.
    kakashi: sasuke...., well lets see if you can escape it like deidara! Mangekyou Sharingan!!

    [MEANWHILE]
    *animal pein summons the cameleon*
    *cameleon and animal pein disappear*
    sakura: they vanished!
    shikamaru: no, she just turned invisible.
    *tenten whips out scroll, kunai go shooting out in all directions*
    tenten: if she's still in this area that should have taken her out of stealth mode....
    shikamaru: something doesn't feel right.
    *the cameleon pops out of a building*
    tenten: there!!
    shikamaru: wait wheres the summoner?
    *a giant blade shoots out of the ground piercing gai*
    gai: guhh!!
    *gai falls to the ground*
    *everyone looks shocked*
    *flames start shooting out from lee*
    lee: you bastard...
    hungry ghost/animal pein: !!
    lee: THIS IS FOR GAI SENSEI!!! seventh gate....RELEASE!!

    [MEANWHILE]
    karin: this place is all busted up. did someone already attack here?
    suigetsu: uhh, DUH!
    sasuke: stop you two. it doesn't matter what the situation is, our goals must be achieved. we go for the elders first. karin!
    karin: right!
    *karin performs handsign*
    karin: the elders are in the hokage building!
    suigetsu: wow, i knew that without searching for their chakra.....
    karin: shutup!
    sasuke: lets go!

    [MEANWHILE]
    male elder: danzou? why are you here?
    danzou: you don't need to know.
    female elder: leave now!
    danzou: you must come with me. someone is here and he intends to kill us three.
    *elders look shocked*
    *danzou thinking*: if itachi had fulfilled his duty and killed sasuke with the rest of the uchiha. i wouldn't be in this mess.

    [MEANWHILE]
    *god pein deflects kakashi's demension hole*
    kakashi: h..how??
    god pein: because we are god!
    *hell realm pein drops down*
    *hell realm perform jutsu*
    *everyone appeares in genjutsu similar to tsukuyomi*
    *multiple peins appear about to stab everyone*
    *genjutsu ends*
    kakashi/shino/kiba/hinata/shizune/ino/ino's father/ibiki: !!!
    *hell pein is on the ground dead*
    god pein: we've been looking for you, naruto. i'm surprised you manaed to kill hell realm. but then again, you killed kakuzu with ease.
    kakashi: naruto run, if he captures you---
    naruto: ha!, just leave these two guys to me. you guys go help out the rest of the village.
    kakashi/hinata: naruto....
    kakashi: you heard him, fan out and help out any shinobi in need of aid.
    shino/kiba/hinata/shizune/ino/ino's father/ibiki: yes sir!
    *everyone scatters*
    naruto: why do you want to kill me?
    god pein: to end all wars, but i'll explain in full detail if you just come with me.
    *naruto with an intent look on his face*
    naruto: you killed pervy sage. and now your trying to kill more of my friends. and now you wanna kill me too. i will protect everyone.
    *fukasaku appears on naruto's shoulder*
    *naruto enters sage mode*
    naruto: shadow clone jutsu!!

    [MEANWHILE]
    karin: i feel a strong chakra coming towards us. and fast.
    sasuke: !
    neji: sasuke uchiha.....naruto has been looking for you.
    sasuke: why should i care?
    neji: if you entend on harming konoha, i'll put my life on the line to stop you.
    sasuke: i didn't come here intending on killing you. but your in our way. suigetsu, karin, juugo....stay back. i'll handle him.
    *sasuke activates sharingan*
    *neji activates byakugan*

    [MEANWHILE]
    *hungry ghost pein on the ground dead*
    shikamaru: sakura, tend to gai and lee's wounds. everyone spread out and search for more akatsuki. if you find them, send out a signal to your location.
    chouji/tenten/iruka: got it!
    *everyone scatters*

    [MEANWHILE]
    sai: reporting.
    danzou: good, keep these two old fools imprisoned.
    sai: yes sir.
    danzou: reporting to all ROOT members. attack now.
    *danzou smiles*
    danzou: konoha will be reborn.
    haha cool but i dont think kakashi wouldn't say hes to dangerous....that means that naruto went to the mountain without a reason..
     
         
    Last edited by Ady; 10-19-2008 at 08:52 PM.

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    Don't ever let anyone tell you
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    i'm glad you guys like it.
    part 3 either tonight or tomarrow.
    :D:D:D:D:D:D:D
     
         

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    if you guys have any suggestions. i mgiht try and put them in, to enrich the story
     
         

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