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    TOAGJ Acceptance

    Gobi (To Han): So you're taking me up on my offer, are you?
    Han (To Gobi): I'm leaving the village, and I don't want to be reconized by people if they ever find me. So, armor?
    Gobi (To Han): Go find a blacksmith and someone who has increadably special chakra.
    Han (To Gobi): Alright. I think I can do that.

    Han contacted an ANBU to get the ninja he had in mind, which the local blacksmith made for him a special chakra-armor, made specifically to the Gobi's expectations.
    Blacksmith: It should be just about finished, Mr. Han.
    Han: Thank you.
    Blacksmith: All that needs to be done now is to have your chakra enfused with the armor.
    Han: Oh, I'm not enfusing my chakra within the armor.
    ANBU 1: Tsuchikage to see you, master jinchuriki.
    Onoki: What do you want, Han?
    Han: The seal's weakening by the second! I need you to place some of your chakra into it to stop the beast from taking over!
    Onoki: WHY DIDN'T YOU JUST SAY SO!?!?!?
    Han turned around and allowed Tsuchikage Onoki to force his chakra into the seal at the back of his neck. While Onoki was doing this, Han was channeling his chakra through his own body and into the armor. When the armor had all the chakra it could take, Han stopped the Tsuchikage.
    Han: The seal should be fine now. Thanks.
    Onoki: If you ever need me, just give me a call, got it?
    Han: Got it.
    As Onoki and his ANBU left, Han took his armor from the blacksmith, and went to the outskirts of the village to don it.
    Han: From now on, I'm a rouge ninja. My village didn't care enough about me to take into account my feelings about becomming a jinchuriki, and so I'm not going to care about my village anymore!
    Han fixed the last bit of his armor gauntlet on, and then pulled his gi and gloves over the armor.
    Gobi (To Han): That gi's a bit tight, isn't it?
    The sleeves tore off, but the rest of the gi stayed in tact.
    Han (To Gobi): It's fine now.

    Narrator: Meanwhile, at the Akatsuki hideout...
    Pain: You failed to retrieve the Gobi?
    Kisame: Yes, master Pain.
    Orochimaru: We are... Deeply sorry.
    Pain: It pains you to say that, doesn't it Orochimaru?
    Orochimaru: Yes.
    Orochimaru was lifted fromt he ground by Pain's jutsu.
    Pain: That is not pain. THIS is pain!!
    Sasori (Hiruko) Pain!
    Sasori, in his Hiruko puppet, walked over to Pain.
    Sasori (H) Let me teach him what it means to be Akatsuki. I can whip him into shape.
    When Sasori said 'whip', his spikked tail twitched.
    Orochimaru: Can I not take Pain's punishment?
    Pain: My punishment is death. But I suppose it would be better for you to be partnered with Sasori as your senior member. As for you, Kisame,
    Kisame: Yes, Pain-sama?
    Pain: We have a new recruit I would like you to initiate.
    Kisame: What makes him think he's Akatsuki material?
    ???: Well, I killed off my entire clan...

    Narrator: Han wandered around away from the village, aimlessly, learning how to use the Gobi's Steam Style.
    Gobi (To Han): Okay, stop walking.
    Han did as he was told.
    Gobi (To Han): Now take in a deep breath, and release the steam.
    Han (To Gobi): Alright.
    Han drew in a deep breath and exhaled a thick mist of steam.
    Gobi (To Han): Great. You've now mastered the basics, and so it's time for you to start learning real jutsu.
    Han (To Gobi): That sounds-
    ???: Stop right there!!!
     
         

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    Re: TOAGJ Acceptance

    really nice, i liked it
     
         

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    Re: TOAGJ Acceptance

    thanks
     
         

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    Re: TOAGJ Acceptance

    Nice Dialogue
     
         

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    Re: TOAGJ Acceptance

    thanks, glad you liked it
     
         

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    Re: TOAGJ Acceptance

    Another one already, I am loving this. And I know Itachi is here now. I still like how the last one,Oro and Kisame didn't want Kakuzu as their partner!
     
         

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    Re: TOAGJ Acceptance

    yeah. i tried to make it pretty obvious it was itachi without actually saing it. and that's because kakuzu's killed all of his partners, so it's pretty much a death sentance
     
         

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