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    Yondaime Raikage [Update]






    Basic Information

    Name: A
    Nickname: The Raikage
    Gender: Male
    Age: Late 30's
    Clan: Yotsuki

    Looks: A shares a lot of similarities with his younger brother. He is a tall dark-skinned man with a large muscular build, slicked-back white hair, a few wrinkles, and a small mustache and beard. His top lip also has a darker hue than the bottom one, similar to his younger brother.

    Unlike other Kage, A seems to wear his Kage cloak and hat on a regular basis without a shirt underneath, which further displays his hulking physique. He has black shuriken tattooed on both shoulders. On each wrist he has gold bangle bracelets, which seem to have protrusions that can jut out when he attacks. He also has a gold belt on his waist with a boar's face engraved in the center. All of these aspects combined give him the appearance of a professional wrestler.

    Personality: He is very caring and protective towards his younger brother, despite Killer Bee's status as a jinchūriki, and wept at the idea of his younger brother being captured by Akatsuki. However, when Killer Bee's ploy to use the affair to have a vacation was discovered, A was furious, and swore to punish his little brother for it.
    He is also headstrong and easily excited, smashing a desk apart when news of his brother being captured arrived. He also burst through the wall of his office to attend the Kage Summit. His assistant implied that this wasn't the first time, suggesting that he is quite destructive while in this mental state.

    He also has a very stern and decisive personality, as seen when he was seemingly unaffected by Naruto's pleas for Sasuke's life. In his eyes, respect and strength mean everything in the ninja world, and the weak should and will be crushed. This correlates with his philosophy that a ninja should never compromise or bow down in front of another ninja. A has also been shown to be very suspicious of the other ninja villages, accusing all of them of working with Akatsuki and questioning their loyalties.

    In battle, A is shown to be physically brutal, as he uses extreme physical force to devastate his opponents, and is willing to sacrifice a limb, rather than lose a chance to defeat his opponents.

    When he learned his brother was alive, his attitude had mostly calmed down since his first appearance. He spoke with civility with the other members of the Alliance, and kept his cool during Tsunade's outburst.

    Village Info.
    Village of Birth: Kumogakure
    Village of Alliance: Kumogakure

    Rank//Chakra Info.
    Ninja Rank: Kage
    Specialty: Raiton/Taijutsu
    Elements: All Basic 5, Fuuinjutsu, Plasma, Hellfire, Rain
    Your ninjutsu:

    Raiton: Raikage Raiton no Yoroi (Thunder Shadow's Lightning Release Armor)
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary/Defense
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 50 (+10 every turn active)
    Damage: +60 to taijutsu and +40 to Lightning (-20 to user because of strain)
    Description: By instantly wrapping his body in a layer of Lightning chakra, the Fourth Raikage can electrically stimulate his nervous system and speed up his neural synapses to react faster to danger and push his physical prowess to the absolute limit, allowing him to gain tremendous raw speed and monstrous power. While using this technique, his reflexes and are comparable to that of Maito Gai in Fourth Gate Mode, making it difficult, if not impossible, even for the Sharingan to keep up with him. The armor also increases his defense, drastically reducing, if not completely negating, damage from incoming lightning attacks as even a direct Chidori was barely able to pierce his chest.
    (Usable 1 Times)
    (Last 4 Turns)
    (User Can't Use Wind Techs, Earth techs, or Water Techs that are spit from the mouth)
    (Contact with A- Rank water will electrocute the User)

    Raiga Bomu| Liger Bomb)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage: 80
    Description: After using the Raikage Armor, the Raikage grabs his opponent and lifts them high into the air. Then, using his extreme strength, he smashes them head first onto the ground in what resembles a powerbomb maneuver. This is devastating enough to shatter the ground itself on impact. Darui noted that nobody has ever survived it before, and had Sasuke Uchiha not used Susanoo, he might have been killed by it. The impact of this technique was strong enough to snap two of Susanoo's rib bones
    (Usable 2 times Per Battle)

    Raigyaku Suihei| Lightning Oppression Horizontal
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage: 80
    Description: After covering himself in his Lightning Release Armor, the Raikage performs a simple backhand chop against his opponent. The Raikage was willing to use this technique to chop at Sasuke Uchiha, despite Sasuke wrapping himself with a shield of black flames. This backhand chop was powerful enough to snap one of incomplete Susanoo's rib bones, as well as cut off one of the Eight-Tailed Giant Ox's horns.
    (Usable 2 Times)

    Erubo| Elbow
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage: 80
    Description: After covering himself in his Lightning Release Armor, the Fourth Raikage thrusts his elbow at his opponent with extreme force. The technique was strong enough to send Jūgo crashing into a wall, disabling him from battling any further.
    (Usable 2 Times)

    Girochin Doroppu| Guillotine Drop
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage: 80 (-5 to user)
    Description: After covering himself with Raikage Assault Armor the user, jumps into the air and preforms a downward kick on his opponent. The power of this attack is strong enough to break multiple bones.
    (Usable 4 times)

    Rariatto| Lariat
    Rank: S or Forbidden
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage: 80 or 120
    Description: After coating themselves with either Bijuu Chakra or Raikage Armor, Kirabi and/or A charges at his opponent, striking them with a Lariat move. This strike is powerful enough to blow away the target's entire chest but is straightforward, and can be easily seen through with the 3Tomoe Sharingan. By combining thier efforts, Kirabi and A can both using this technique at the same time to create a force powerful enough to decapitate on contact.



    Background Info.
    History: While little is known about his track record as a shinobi, it was shown that he was part of the Third Raikage's special team tasked to hunt and subdue the rampaging Eight-Tailed Giant Ox when its past jinchūriki was unable to control it. He was responsible for cutting off one of the Eight-Tails' four horns after it had impaled Motoi's father.
    The level of trust the village had for him is apparent, such as how he is shown backing the Third Raikage up to deal with the Ox during one of the rampages, standing right beside him for most of it. The fact his brother Killer Bee was chosen to be the Ox's new jinchūriki suggests he was already intended to be the next Raikage (as per the tradition of having jinchūriki with close bonds to the Kage).

    Invasion of Pain Arc
    A was first seen enraged by news of Killer Bee's capture by Akatsuki. When he learned that the culprit was Sasuke Uchiha, a missing-nin from Konoha, he complained about why the Hokage had not dealt with him, compared to how fast they had dealt with the Hyūga Affair. With Killer Bee's capture coming so soon after that of Yugito Nii, A called for a meeting of the five Kage to discuss Akatsuki. He also instructed Team Samui to inform Konoha that he will personally deal with Sasuke.

    Five Kage Summit Arc
    A departed for the Kage summit with two bodyguards: Darui and C. On their way to the Land of Iron they reunited with Team Samui, who provided them with information on Sasuke acquired in Konoha. C quickly discovered that Team Samui had been followed by Naruto Uzumaki. A kept his men from attacking Naruto and agreed to listen to what he had to say. Naruto pleaded for the Raikage to spare Sasuke, but his request was flatly refused and the Raikage berated him for sticking up for a criminal.

    The Five Kage Meeting.
    When the Kage Summit began, A quickly showed his disapproval of the other villages by smashing the table in front of him, prompting all of the bodyguards to come to their Kage's aid. After they returned to their position, A explains his suspicions of the other Kage. He said that Sunagakure used Akatsuki in order to destroy Konohagakure, that the Third Tsuchikage employed Akatsuki in the past, and states that the Fifth Mizukage and the rest of her village to be the least trustworthy. He pointed out that only Kumogakure has never had an Akatsuki representative, nor has it ever employed Akatsuki for a battle. He insinuated that the current Hokage, Danzō Shimura, used Akatsuki to dispose of the Third Hokage and the Fourth Kazekage. When Danzō was nominated to lead a joint task force to deal with Akatsuki, A was outraged. Before he could raise much of an objection, however, White Zetsu appeared and told those in attendance that Sasuke was nearby.
    After getting rid of White Zetsu, A and his bodyguards immediately mobilized to go after Sasuke, and were drawn to Taka's battle with the Land of Iron's samurai. When C told him that Sasuke's chakra was straight below them, the Raikage burst through the floor where they encountered Sasuke and his team. A easily destroyed Suigetsu's sword and caused Jūgo to transform into the second stage of his Cursed Seal in order to fight him. Although Jūgo initially appeared to have the advantage, A was able to punch a hole through his arms and into his chest and evade his attacks, before finally defeating him.

    Sasuke and A then began to fight. With his Lightning Release Armor, A avoided most of Sasuke's attacks, deflecting his lightning charged sword, and was barely wounded by his Chidori. He then proceeded to counter Sasuke but the assault was negated through Sasuke's use of an incomplete Susanoo to protect himself. Sasuke attacked A with Amaterasu, which he dodged. Sasuke then coated his Susanoo with Amaterasu's flames to deter additional physical attacks. In his growing rage, A ignored this and attacked through the flames, causing his left arm to ignite, but still managed to smash through the defense and hit Sasuke. When A prepares another "final blow", Sasuke began to stage a counterattack. Before A could be further wounded, the Fifth Kazekage, intervened, using his sand to block the attacks. A was angered by the interruption, but Gaara stated that continuing his attack would only cause additional injury. Gaara then began to speak to Sasuke. While waiting for Gaara to finish, A severed his arm and instructed C to stop the bleeding with his medical ninjutsu so that he could rejoin the battle. Sasuke then collapsed the roof with Susanoo. While the Kage and their bodyguards dodged the rubble, Sasuke escaped from the hall to find and kill Danzō. After catching up with Sasuke, A learned from the Tsuchikage that Sasuke is dead, which angered him. Later Madara Uchiha appears and says that his brother was still alive, which both shocked and angered him. He realized what Bee's plan actually was and said he will punish him with his "Iron Claw".

    After Madara revealed his "Eye of the Moon Plan", the Kage refused to surrender Killer Bee and Naruto to the Akatsuki. Madara then declared the start of the Fourth Great Shinobi World War and disappeared. The need of an alliance between the Five Great Nations was then brought up again. Mifune nominated A to be the leader due to how well he had already dealt with the enemy, and because he could better control Killer Bee than anyone. After asking the other Kage, it was agreed to make him leader of the Shinobi Alliance.

    A's first decision was to locate his younger brother before he would fall into the hands of Akatsuki. He and his men managed to find Killer Bee in time fighting Kisame Hoshigaki, thanks to Kisame's reckless tactics. Together, the Raikage and his younger brother decapitated Kisame with a Double Lariat, later revealed that this was not Kisame rather one of Zetsu's clones. After their victory, A angrily scolded Bee for his antics. After arriving back in Kumogakure he and the others are greeted at the gate by the villagers. His assistant said that they needed to be briefed on what happened at the Five Kage Summit.

    Confining the Jinchūriki Arc
    After a war planning session with Kumogakure's military forces, A ordered that the other villages be notified about a new Kage meeting in three days. At the meeting, he begins questioning their early arrival, but discussion soon begins. After a heated debate regarding whether or not the Alliance should be relocating the jinchūriki ends in the approval of such a matter, A decides that Naruto Uzumaki and Killer Bee will be sent to a refuge that he has kept in reserve. He mentions that it is appropriate that it be in Kumogakure, seeing as the village has not given rise to any Akatsuki members. The place turns out to be an isolated island where he and his younger brother used to train together intensely.
    After learning that information on the jinchūriki was leaked to Akatsuki, and the Fifth Hokage still wasn't sure, as for the island, A refuses to have Killer Bee and Naruto to be moved from the island, since he already plotted a route for the island to move if the Akatsuki were to discover its current location. When Ōnoki offered to go to the island as reinforcement, A agreed on it.

    While the Tsuchikage is returning from the island, the last meeting is held in order to fully prepare for the war. A orders Samui to form a Surprise Attack Division then split the rest of the forces into multiple divisions and get them in formation.

    Shinobi World War Arc
    Later, as the army departs for war, he stands beside the Hokage and Tsuchikage assuring themselves they shall win the Fourth Great Shinobi World War. After the Alliance found out that the White Zetsu Army moves underground, A tells them to use earth release techniques in order to dig them up.

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    During the last couple of years, E has been in many battles. During his time within Amegakure, there was much turmoil after Captain Kenpachi left and never returned. Immediately, the Sage of Sharingan - Akiza took up the mantel as the Amekage, recruting those such as Emperor, and Gatsndshanks to the village. She being the possesor of the Dog Contract taught the summoning to both Kirabi and A and left them the scroll. Everything in the village seemed to be looking up, but on one night Gats left and formed his own village of Namigakure - the Village Hidden in the Waves, and waged war on Amegakure. Soon after, the Amekage left Amegakure to join up with Gats, and left the poistion of Amekage in the A's hands. Distraught, A, had only vengence in his eyes, to kill the traitors. After so much the village was finally falling apart. Emperor, left Amegakure behind leaving Amegakure filled with no one to stand in Nami's way as they wrecked havoc on the battle field. the War-Torn Amegakure fell, the only choice was for A and Kirabi to flee, nowhere to go but back to Kumogakure. The war was intense, A fighting those such as Goro Kaguya, a man who's power is much greater then the Raikage's. After the fight, which the Raikage lost, he was on a path from then on to conqueror such a fighter. Along this path he has encountered many other whom he is on a conquest to defeat. Nero a man who once had eyes that made the Raikage's speed look like nothing and Ragnaroc, a true heir to the Uchiha name. After finally returning home, Kumo had replaced him with a new Kage, Mugiwara , he serves a one of the villages leading Raiton jutsu creator. and is currently working on his own form of Taijutsu, having been taught by the ancient taijutsu master Kaito-Sama. He is also currently training one personal student by the name of ~+Raiden+~, a promising young shinobi with a inquisitive mind.

    Battle For the God of Lightning
    E searched long and hard for the weilder of such a powerful weapon only rumored to have been once in the hands of the Shodaime Raikage. After a few months of searching his work payed off and encountered the famed Akasuki member, Kazuku. Kazuku having killed the previous owner of the weapon took his heart which in turn also allowed him to weikd the famed Spear. after a long and tedious battle, the Raikage prevailed and now wields the weapon becoming the strongest Raiton user of this day and age.
    Soon after, ~Hasashi~ stole the spear from the Raikage, stripping him of its power, but he got it back soon enough, but lost it soon after too. The spear is now in the hands of his Personal Student: ~+Raiden+~

    Obtaining the Curse Mark of Heaven
    After his battle with Kazuku, E was approched by and elder ninja with a simple task: Finding three famed scientist. After doing so the Raikage returned quickly to give the info the the shinobi and was granted the famed Curse Mark of Heaven, remembering his battle with Taka, he has made use of the way Jugo used his curse seal to create Booster Jets and Pistons that drastically increase the power of his taijutsu.

    Other

    As the Raikage of Kumogakure and Supreme Leader of the Allied Shinobi Forces, A is undoubtedly a powerful shinobi. His younger brother Killer Bee also mentioned in his fight with Sasuke that, before him, only A was able to deflect the Eight-Tails. Karin notes that his chakra level is comparable to that of a tailed beast. A's signature fighting style is to combine his taijutsu and ninjutsu to form the powerful nintaijutsu, which was able to break through Sasuke's Amaterasu coated Susanoo bones.

    Taijutsu
    A uses a 'power' type fighting style. He possesses a great deal of physical strength, as he first appeared lifting a large amount of weight with just one hand, and broke his desk with a single punch. His strength is further displayed at the Five Kage summit when he punched through a wall, the floor, and even snapped Suigetsu's sword in two (although the sword already had a partial crack in it from Suigetsu's duel with Killer Bee). A was also able to punch a hole in Jūgo's arm and chest with ease, despite the latter being armored with his Level 2 Cursed Seal form. He was also able to cut through one of the four horns of Eight-Tailed Giant Ox when it was being subdued thirty years prior with his physical strength and Lightning Release Armor.
    Despite his large physique, the Raikage is noted for being very fast, grabbing Zetsu by the throat before he had a chance to react. Befitting his appearance, the Raikage seems to prefer taijutsu combat, in which he has shown tremendous prowess. In addition to powerful punches, he is able to use equally impressive throws and take-downs. He prefers using wrestling techniques to more traditional forms of taijutsu.

    He is shown to have an immense tolerance for pain, as he was able to withstand having his arm set on fire by Amaterasu and cutting it off without flinching.

    Nature Transformation
    On top of his physical capabilities, A is also skilled in lightning-based jutsu, releasing a continuous surge of electricity from his body when confronting Sasuke. This electricity acts as a compliment to A's natural physical strength and speed to the point where he claims not even the Sharingan should be able to keep up with his movements. This is due to electricity stimulating his nervous system and speeding up his neural synapses, amplifying his reflexes. Because of this, he is considered a master of nintaijutsu. While using this ability, he is able to dodge Jūgo's multiple chakra blast and Amaterasu, both at point blank range. His speed in this state is greatly increased, to the point that it was mentioned by C that the Raikage's nervous system and reaction speed are comparable to that of the Fourth Hokage, Minato Namikaze.
    The electricity can also work as a powerful defense. By momentarily increasing the electrical surge, A was able to deflect a strike from Sasuke's Sword of Kusanagi: Chidori Katana from behind and receive only a minor wound on his chest from a direct Chidori strike. While combining his lightning power with the full force of his chakra, just its sheer energy is strong enough to demolish all matter around him.

    He has also shown the ability to focus lightning chakra into a point sharp enough to neatly cut through human limbs.

    Cursed Seal of Heaven
    The seal has two different levels, and the types of transformations differ from seal to seal. When inactive, the seal is simply a black tattoo on the user's body. Orochimaru has a wide array of cursed seals, so the appearance and power of the seal will usually vary from user to user. Each seal always has three identical marks arranged in a circular pattern. When first activated, the marks on the seal glow and replicate, spreading over the user's body. This is known as the first level (状態1, Jōtai Ichi; Literally meaning "State 1") of the seal. The degree to which this occurs is dependent on the user, and the degree to which it spreads is proportionate to the overall effect it has. Normally, the wearer of the seal will also experience slight pains during the activation of this level.

    The second level (状態2, Jōtai Ni; Literally meaning "State 2") of the seal causes the black marks to completely envelop the user. This is followed by an unnatural alteration of the user's body, with the only common features being yellow eyes with a black sclera, skin changing color, and longer hair. When in this level, the seal eats away at the user's mind and personality, driving them to madness if used for too long. It also takes quite a toll on their body, since they are being mutated by the seal. Aside from the first and second levels of the seal, skilled users of the seal are able to perform partial transformations in which the aforementioned mutation caused to the user's body in the level two state can be used without altering the entire body. The power of the cursed seal can even synchronize with the user's regular body with extended use, increasing the stats of their normal state for a short time

    While in the first level of the Curse Mark, The Raikage has multiple flame like patterns flowing across his body. During his second level, The Raikage's body turns completely pitch black the tattoos on his arms becoming a vibrant yellow as the seal reacts with his primary element of Raiton. His muscles then grow to giving him a hulk-like physique providing a significant boost in Taijutsu and Speed and of course he utilizes the Cursed Seal Raiton as used by Sasuke Uchiha when he preformed Chidori in CS Level 2. All the features from his face seem to have disappeared except for his eyes which have a glowing yellow tone without pupils. On his back, 6 funnels appear, that have a small crackling ball of black electricity floating above them. Much like Jugo, the Raikage has learned to master the curse seal enough to where he can transform any part of his body at will, creating Booster Jets or Pistons, that make him unrivaled in close combat and speed.

    Picture[s]: See Above

    Theme Song and Background Music:LL-Cool J (Mama Said Knock You Out)

    Battles

    Won:Many
    Lost: Few

    Approved
     
         
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    Re: Yondaime Raikage [Update]

    cool bio great ninjutsu too O.O
     
         

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    Re: Yondaime Raikage [Update]

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    Re: Yondaime Raikage [Update]

    Best Bio layout
     
         

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    Re: Yondaime Raikage [Update]

    Quote Originally Posted by ~Nemesis~ View Post
    Best Bio layout
    thanks. but ive seen better. <_< I wanted to make mine like those but. eh. ..
     
         

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    Re: Yondaime Raikage [Update]

    Nice Bio,

    Raikage OP'ed -__-

    I want MS
     
         

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    Re: Yondaime Raikage [Update]

    Quote Originally Posted by ~ Stein ~ View Post
    Nice Bio,

    Raikage OP'ed -__-

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    you're a Sensei. all you have to do is test for it.
     
         

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