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    Death is natural... and to
    deflower such a natural thing
    is a sin, and those who defy
    the whims of Nature shall know
    the true pain in which none
    can shelter and shudder. s
    gift that we all can be happy
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    Naruto rise of the Uzumaki dynasty chapter 3 Sasuke's new technique

    hello and welcome back

    all credit goes to two steps from hell, the makers of the naruto's NUNS 2 game music (Naruto ultimate ninja storm 2)

    now let it begin



    Sasuke you dare draw a sword against an Uchiha! ( he yells with much a anger in his voice"

    * Pluck PLuck Pluck Splash*

    ???? *Holds his katana* Damn right.... (He said with confidence)

    tehy near each other and Sasuke brings his sword thundering down, iot clashes with the man's blade but the lightning chakra is begiining to be absorbed by the man's sword. Sasuke breaks the clash and uses his sword to increase his momentum in his kick that he sends into the mans stomach. he forms a tiger and monkey seal

    ???? (So he is serious eh. well... one thing i hate bout his breed is that tend to copy... but can his eyes track my hands and blade at the same time)

    Sasuke FIRE STYLE: priest's flowers

    Sasuke spits fire from his mouth in rapid volleys, all them in a spherical shape. burning white hot and are heading for the man. however the man throws his Katana at sasuke and sasuke is forced to move out its oncoming path. the man begins to form hand seals of his.


    ???? Water style: severing stream! *water forms in tendrils and compress at the ends of tips)

    *they head for sasuke*

    Sasuke (****!) Lightning style: chidori spear

    sasuke sends the spear straight out into one of the tendrils heading for him, however the lightning does not flow and Sasuke barely in the nick of time dodges the three tendirls as they slice the ground open where he stood.

    Sasuke (Too close)
    ???? Behind you! (the man yells from behind sasuke)

    Sasuke turns and begins to slash at the man mid air, however the man hits a solid surface first and jumps in the opposite direction. sasuke's feet hit the same surface after he contorts his body to where he could and sling shots off the wall of building.

    Sasuke Amatarasu!
    ???? Amatarasu!

    (they both say it at the same time)

    Their black flames collide and kill each other off Sasuke looks at the man stunned, lightning flashes and reveals the mans face. but it is too quick to notice it all.

    ???? Surprised? you should'nt be. your breed is not exactly the ones to only use the higher levels of sharingan... the leaf village also not the only sanctuarary for Uchiha. (he said with a small amount of laughter escaping his lips.)

    Sasuke SHOUT THE HELL UP!!! *eyes turn into EMS*
    ??? very well young one, let it begin



    Sasuke and the man charge at each other Katanas in hand and Sasuke's rage boiling over. Sasuke holds the blade pointed down and the man holds it pointing up. as they near they bring it to the opposite and clash. sasuke and him spin in the opposite direction and clash their swords again and again. Sasuke launches himself over the man and tries to hit him but the man blocks it without even looking. sasuke goes low and tries to hit him at the legs however the man sends a side kick straight into sasuke's face. sasuke coats his sword in lightning.

    ???? that won't work fool
    sasuke NIN KEN JUTSU: reapers flame

    the sword becomes coates with Amatarasru and Sasuke launchs it off his Blade with the lightnign with it. the man brings his blade up to block it and it fails against the amatasaru as it climbs it towards the hilt forcing the man to abandon it. before he could do another action sasuke was standing right in front of him. his sword at his throat. another lightning flash reveals the mans face yet again... however in full view it is none other than Itachi Uchiha sasuke's dead brother. his eyes are red and and purple with slitted pupils


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    itachi is back... or is he really itachi. m
    thats ok because i know what your gonna say before you can say it strange isin't it (refernce)
    never gets old hahaha


    anyway sorry for the wait been working on my book. im in at excatly 22,000 words right now. lololol
    if you would like a spoiler to it PM me

    if not well hope you like the story i just wrote here.

    next chapter will be released in exactly 7 days

    have a great night
     
         

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    Re: Naruto rise of the Uzumaki dynasty chapter 3 Sasuke's new technique

    Kinda good...inspired from the Naruto vs evil naruto and Sasuke vs Itachi fights?
     
         

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    Death is natural... and to
    deflower such a natural thing
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    the whims of Nature shall know
    the true pain in which none
    can shelter and shudder. s
    gift that we all can be happy
    for
     



    Re: Naruto rise of the Uzumaki dynasty chapter 3 Sasuke's new technique

    yep
     
         

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    Re: Naruto rise of the Uzumaki dynasty chapter 3 Sasuke's new technique

    Dialouge and action flow well together. Good job
     
         

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