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    Knowing my rights (unknown song that I made up in my head)

    I will not back down
    to the land I use to stand
    I will own my own true life
    one I know i can not hide
    you will not hold me back
    as I can fightback on that.

    I hold my own life
    in these hand I can mine
    I know my path I know my lines
    I can hold on to what I know
    you can not hold that for long
    I will not stand down as I will own my land.

    I have liberty and trust
    to those I know I can trust
    I can know that I am a fool
    but i know I can have two
    I will not fall on my knees
    to your demands i will not.

    You think you know me but you dont
    I know who i am to those
    I cannot hide from those I know lie
    I will not turn my back on those who need me in their
    I will own my own but can you?

    I hold my heart to you
    knowing that I risk my life
    you can hold it, you can crush it
    but i will not die that easy
    I can fight death to protect
    I know my own true life
    Can you find your own path?

    My path is my destiny
    I stand alone
    waiting
    I have to trust those
    back stab as i dont
    I know i am but who you are
    what you see, what you, do, what you hide who are you?

    I show no mercy to those
    i have no anger trust
    I befriend you to me
    though you live on thread.
     
         

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    you were so close.
     

    Re: Knowing my rights (unknown song that I made up in my head)

    Pretty good
     
         

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    Re: Knowing my rights (unknown song that I made up in my head)

    Not bad. Good job!
     
         

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    How Do You Kill The Undead?
     

    Re: Knowing my rights (unknown song that I made up in my head)

    least this one kinda rhymes
     
         

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    In death, there is peace.
     

    Re: Knowing my rights (unknown song that I made up in my head)

    these are getting really annoying
     
         

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    Re: Knowing my rights (unknown song that I made up in my head)

    Quote Originally Posted by Okami the butcher View Post
    these are getting really annoying
    look this one isnt a poem but its a random song i thought up. you keep posting on my poems its getting really annoying just ignore them please.
     
         

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