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    [Pseudo-Jinchuuriki Test: Sora] Elmage

    Greetings, Elmage.

    I will be administrating your test and the rules are as followed:

    Rules:
    Rules and Regulations according to Rei.
    All basic elements and techniques up to your current rank are to be used.
    Custom Jutsus and Elements are not allowed
    Terrain: open clearing with the outline of a Forest at the borders of Long range.
    You may use Sora's abilities up to your current rank
    We start Mid range from each other
    If you have any questions please ask them via vm.

    I will be using a Kage Ranked Hatake Kakashi (with MS) biography for this bio test against you. Please give a link to your bio that your testing and I will make the first move.


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    Re: [Pseudo-Jinchuuriki Test: Sora] Elmage

    Sora bio

    Thanks for proctoring my testD
     
         

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    Re: [Pseudo-Jinchuuriki Test: Sora] Elmage

    No problem. And Good Luck.
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    As Kakashi sees Sora, he begins wondering how exactly to approach him. It was then that it occurred to him. He performed 2 handseals and then placed his hands onto the ground while crouching, this causes the ground underneath Sora to spiral inwards in an attempt to sink him into the ground.

    (Doton: Retsudo Tenshō) - Earth Release: Tearing Earth Turning Palm
    Rank: C
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: After performing the required hand seals Boar → Ox → placing hand on the ground, the user causes the ground surrounding the enemy to spiral inwards on itself, burying them alive or crushing them. This technique is capable of causing quite a bit of damage to the area. This technique is much more damaging if used in rocky mountainous areas, or inside a cave.


    Kakashi then proceeds to perform a handseal and spew out three small yet fast bullets of water towards Sora. He didnt want to harm him severely, just enough to enable him to be captured.

    (Suiton: Teppoudama) - Water Style: Water Bullet
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user will do one handseal and will gather water in his mouth and then spits out a large sphere of rotating water that can blast a huge area leaving it soaked. It can also be used in quick succession to shoot up to 3 smaller but faster bullets of water.


    Kakashi then has Sora see a large Fireball in the sky that is going to rain downwards upon his location. Kakashi then began running to his left, Sora's right, hoping that he would not have to resort in using his Sharingan.

    (Genjutsu: Jigoku Gouka ) - Illusion Technique: Hell Fire
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: The user casts an illusion where the opponent sees a huge ball of fire descending from the sky and enveloping its target.
     
         

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    Re: [Pseudo-Jinchuuriki Test: Sora] Elmage

    Quote Originally Posted by Oraan View Post
    No problem. And Good Luck.
    =====================

    As Kakashi sees Sora, he begins wondering how exactly to approach him. It was then that it occurred to him. He performed 2 handseals and then placed his hands onto the ground while crouching, this causes the ground underneath Sora to spiral inwards in an attempt to sink him into the ground.

    (Doton: Retsudo Tenshō) - Earth Release: Tearing Earth Turning Palm
    Rank: C
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: After performing the required hand seals Boar → Ox → placing hand on the ground, the user causes the ground surrounding the enemy to spiral inwards on itself, burying them alive or crushing them. This technique is capable of causing quite a bit of damage to the area. This technique is much more damaging if used in rocky mountainous areas, or inside a cave.


    Kakashi then proceeds to perform a handseal and spew out three small yet fast bullets of water towards Sora. He didnt want to harm him severely, just enough to enable him to be captured.

    (Suiton: Teppoudama) - Water Style: Water Bullet
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user will do one handseal and will gather water in his mouth and then spits out a large sphere of rotating water that can blast a huge area leaving it soaked. It can also be used in quick succession to shoot up to 3 smaller but faster bullets of water.


    Kakashi then has Sora see a large Fireball in the sky that is going to rain downwards upon his location. Kakashi then began running to his left, Sora's right, hoping that he would not have to resort in using his Sharingan.

    (Genjutsu: Jigoku Gouka ) - Illusion Technique: Hell Fire
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: The user casts an illusion where the opponent sees a huge ball of fire descending from the sky and enveloping its target.
    "Go away kakashi! you people are all the same... why should I trust you?"


    *As sora sees kakashi start performing seals, he knows kakashi is going to attack, then as kakashi places his hand on the ground, sora starts to feel vibrations from the earth, and seeing earlier that kakashi placed his hands on the earth, he figures its an earth jutsu, so sora jumps backwards, as he jumps he releases a stream of wind forward, that swiftly propels him backward, evading the technique*

    (Fūton: Kaze Ogawa no Jutsu) - Wind Release: Wind Stream Technique
    Rank: D
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 10
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This technique allows the user to change direction in mid-air at high speeds by simply blowing wind out their mouth. The user can also use this technique by blowing it at the ground and causing a dust cloud to rise, concealing the users location and movement.


    *sora suddenly notices spheres of water, so he quickly performs the bird seal and releases a stream of wind combined with dusts, at the spheres, this results in the spheres being blasted away and the wind dust cloud continuing towards you, though with lesser power. This will probably stop you from going with the genjutsu*

    (Fūton: Fūjin no Jutsu) - Wind Release Dust Cloud Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: After performing the Bird hand seal the user creates a stream of high velocity wind combined with scouring dust. The completed technique is directed through overlapping hands.


    *then sora summons chakra in his hands, then he swings his hands horizontally releasing three blades of wind at kakashi, in successive motion*

    (Fūton: Jūha Shō) - Wind Release: Beast Wave Strike
    Rank: C
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: A powerful technique of wind nature chakra that can cut and slash through any material. The user activates it by summoning chakra in his right hand, and then swipes a slicing chakra wave which appears to be controlled by the users will and thoughts. They are also able to use the technique in a rapid-fire, successive motion creating up to three cresent blades of wind.
     
         

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    Re: [Pseudo-Jinchuuriki Test: Sora] Elmage

    Be mindful of of the range of your techniques. You went backwards into Long Range and your last technique was a Short Ranged Offensive technique.

    Let me help you Sora. I don't want to hurt you.

    As the streaming dust cloud takes out the water bullets and continues towards him in a weakened state. Kakashi then proceeds to stomp onto the floor and cause 3 flame geysers to raise 5 meters out of the ground and overpower the streaming dust cloud. This is done so as to block Sora's vision of him and vice versa.

    (Katon: Gōka Honoo no Hashira Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Great Fire Flame Pillars Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user will knead their fire chakra and release it into the ground by stomping down their leg and then causing three pillars of fire several meters tall spaced out evenly. The Pillars of fire can act as a defensive wall against incoming techniques or targets or used to attack low aerial targets.


    Jumping 6 meters into the air, Kakashi appears just above his fire geyser wall to see 3 blades of wind heading his way and then disperse into the air without ever reaching him. Kakashi as he raises uses his left hand to reveal his 3T Sharingan and performs a chidori within his right hand, sending it towards Sora in the form of a lightning bolt.


    (Doujutsu: Sharingan) Eye Technique: Copy Wheel Eye
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30 (-10 per turn to keep active)
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    One of the Three Great Dōjutsu (San Daidōjutsu), the Sharingan is the kekkei genkai of the Uchiha clan. Unlike the other Dōjutsu, not all members of the Uchiha Clan possess the Sharingan. This great Dōjutsu seems to awaken only on exceptional Uchiha members and only in times of great stress. Once awaken, the pupil turns red and a single tomoe (巴) seal appears around the center pupil. As the user masters and evolves their eyes, the tomoe (巴) seals increase, topping 3 per eye. The main ability of the Sharingan, like any other Dōjutsu, is to enable the user to see the flow of chakra. This ability is further improved as the Sharingan gives color to chakra, enabling the user to differentiate chakras from different people or from different sources. Although the user can see chakra through matter, he cannot see beyond dense matter or in long distances. Coupled with the ability to see chakra, Sharingan users gain acess to an incredible clarity of perception that enables them to read insanely fast movements or minor details, enabling them the ability to foresee in an easier way, traps, incoming attacks, etc. This clarity of perception is so great that a Sharingan user can sometimes start performing a counter to an attack that is still being performed, enabling the counter to be launched only a split a second after the attack. This clarity of perception leaves Sharingan users able to track high speed movement easily as well as to read through handseals. This last ability enables them to learn techniques much faster and sometimes copy them directly from the enemy, as long as the user has the necessary chakra affinities and requirements to perform it. Finally, the Sharingan is often linked to Genjutsu and mind-manipulating illusions, mostly because the user can, mostly through Eye Contact, directly and precisely use his chakra to manipulate the enemy's chakra flow. In return, the users clarity of perception gives him the ability to more easily decipher visual illusions cast upon him and see past them. The Sharingan has a great cost to the user though. The chakra consumption disables its use for long periods of time and, even when the user grows stronger, it's still hard to keep it active for long periods of time.
    Note: The user, if he hasn't gained full mastery over his Sharingan, will need to spend a move to activate it, although as long as he has chakra and enough stamina he'll be able to keep it active until the end of the match. If the user is Sannin Rank or above and has gained his 3 Tomoe Sharingan and held it for one month, he becomes able to passively activate it, meaning he'll no longer spend a move of his 3 per turn.
    Note: To avoid direct Eye Contact and be able to focus only on the body movement below the chin, the opponent needs to have mastered Taijutsu to possess the necessary skill.
    Note: Predicting the nature of a technique or what it exactly is requires the user to either know the technique or that its a cannon technique.
    Note: Danzo and Kakashi bios activate the Sharingan by removing the covers in their respective eyes and suffer a +10 chakra consumption per turn penalty
    Note: The user is bound by the abilities and limits of the stage of sharingan he possesses, stated in the rules of the KG.




    (Raiton: Chidori Jinrai) – Lightning Release: 1000 birds ThunderClap.
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: After Performing chidori in mid air the user releases all of the lightning chakra within the chidori to create a Giant Thunder bolt that can be shot at the opponent.


    Quickly after releasing the thunderbolt, Kakashi performs a handseal and creates a clone that forms right next to him in the air, then throws him to Mid Range of Sora.

    (Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique
    Rank:B
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed



    I don't want to hurt you.
     
         

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    Re: [Pseudo-Jinchuuriki Test: Sora] Elmage

    I'm sorry...silly mistake, I had twice the usual work at hand, I was trying to finish... it won't happen again, you'll have my full concentration from now.



    "you lie!! nobody care for me!! all they do is hate me!!"

    *As sora sees the flame pillars, he jumps forward and start dashing towards kakashis last known location he suddenly hears craclkling sound, like birds chirping, he looks up, and as kakashi sends the thunder bolt his way, sora stops and begin sucking in wind, then he raises his head and releases a powerful wind bullet towards the thunder bolt*

    ( Futon: Shinkūdama ) - Wind Release: Vacuum Bullet
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: The user will begin sucking in wind which results in drawing in opponents towards them and by kneading with their chakra in their mouth the user then releases the wind chakra in the form of a powerful bullet that blasts the opponent away.

    *As kakashi is hauled towards sora's direction, sora forms a demon-like claw of wind, that he uses to grab kakashi as he comes within reach, and slams him on the ground

    (Fūton: Jūha Reppū Shō) - Wind Style: Beast Tearing Gale Palm
    Rank: B
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: This technique is somewhat of an enhanced version of the Beast Tearing Palm. It used chakra to infused with and condense a mass amount of wind to form a massive demonic-like claw extending from the user's dominant hand to strike and grab a target, as well as deflect any weapon or attack. In addition to making it a deadly short to mid-range weapon, the extending claw also carries tremendous force that can devastate anything in its path without affecting the user, making it useful for dislodging solid and heavy objects.

    *then sora quickly breathes wind infused chakra into his palms, and forms a whirlwind like ball, and he immediately shoots it at kakashi*

    (Fūton: Rasen Kazedan) - Wind Release: Spiralling Wind Ball
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: This technique allows the user to breathe wind-infused chakra into the palm of their hand, shaping it into a small, whirlwind-like ball. Then the user will shoot it at their opponent. This technique seems to be very fast and powerful, as it is capable of smashing through thick rock. They can be launched in rapid succession.
     
         

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    Re: [Pseudo-Jinchuuriki Test: Sora] Elmage

    The move overall, not bad. Minor Detail for the last two techniques is what it lacks. For example, what hand was the wind claw formed in and what hand the Spiraling wind ball formed in. The technique states dominate hand, which after reviewing it seems that the technique comes from Sora's demon Right hand. The Spiraling Wind Ball thus being formed in your left. Still, overall not a bad move.
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    Kakashi heading towards Sora as jumps towards him (making them in short range), sees that he has an claw of wind stretching out towards him, he brings his hands together creating a larger than normal Lightning Cutter into his left hand and then separated it with his right hand (Thus separating the power respectively into 2 A Ranked Lightning Cutters, one in both hands) and stretches his hands out in front of him.

    Now with a Lightning Cutter in both of his hands, Kakashi uses the Lightning Cutter in his left hand to cancel out the Beast Tearing Wind Palm in Sora's right hand.

    As the Spiraling Wind Ball heads towards him, Kakashi uses the Lightning Cutter in his right hand to cancel out the Spiraling Wind Ball.

    (Raiton: Raikiri Nirentotsu) - Lightning Cutter Two Sequential Crashes
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user first creates a slightly larger Lightning Cutter than usual with both hands, but then quickly grasps the lighning and pulls it apart into two hands. They then charge at the enemy with one Lightning Cutter, uppercutting the enemy into the air. Then the user appears above the enemy and releases all the lighting into the enemy, charging down with them in a giant cyclone of lightning.


    The Clone (Lets call him Obito), after the Spiraling Wind Ball is shot towards the original Kakashi casts Sora within a genjutsu that takes away his eyesight. Kakashi and Obito then land on the ground. Kakashi takes out 2 kunai.

    (Kokuangyo no Jutsu ) - Bringer-of-Darkness Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user makes one handseal, causing the opponent to believe they have been trapped in a world of infinite darkness, where their sense of sight is useless. It is capable of affecting multiple targets within range. However, it does not negate their other senses.


    Kakashi then crosses the 2 kunai in front of him, taking away half of Sora's chakra.

    (Fūinjutsu: Seikatsu Kekkai) – Sealing Technique: Living Barrier
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30 (-15 per turn active)
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user takes out two bladed objects and crosses them. This creates a seal that seals away 50% of the chakra of any opponents within short-range of the user, allowing them to use only upto A-rank techniques.
    Note: Sealing Method lasts 2 turns maximum.
    Note: If the opponent moves out of short range, he regains his original abilities


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    Re: [Pseudo-Jinchuuriki Test: Sora] Elmage

    Quote Originally Posted by Oraan View Post
    The move overall, not bad. Minor Detail for the last two techniques is what it lacks. For example, what hand was the wind claw formed in and what hand the Spiraling wind ball formed in. The technique states dominate hand, which after reviewing it seems that the technique comes from Sora's demon Right hand. The Spiraling Wind Ball thus being formed in your left. Still, overall not a bad move.
    ======

    Kakashi heading towards Sora as jumps towards him (making them in short range), sees that he has an claw of wind stretching out towards him, he brings his hands together creating a larger than normal Lightning Cutter into his left hand and then separated it with his right hand (Thus separating the power respectively into 2 A Ranked Lightning Cutters, one in both hands) and stretches his hands out in front of him.

    Now with a Lightning Cutter in both of his hands, Kakashi uses the Lightning Cutter in his left hand to cancel out the Beast Tearing Wind Palm in Sora's right hand.

    As the Spiraling Wind Ball heads towards him, Kakashi uses the Lightning Cutter in his right hand to cancel out the Spiraling Wind Ball.

    (Raiton: Raikiri Nirentotsu) - Lightning Cutter Two Sequential Crashes
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user first creates a slightly larger Lightning Cutter than usual with both hands, but then quickly grasps the lighning and pulls it apart into two hands. They then charge at the enemy with one Lightning Cutter, uppercutting the enemy into the air. Then the user appears above the enemy and releases all the lighting into the enemy, charging down with them in a giant cyclone of lightning.


    The Clone (Lets call him Obito), after the Spiraling Wind Ball is shot towards the original Kakashi casts Sora within a genjutsu that takes away his eyesight. Kakashi and Obito then land on the ground. Kakashi takes out 2 kunai.

    (Kokuangyo no Jutsu ) - Bringer-of-Darkness Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user makes one handseal, causing the opponent to believe they have been trapped in a world of infinite darkness, where their sense of sight is useless. It is capable of affecting multiple targets within range. However, it does not negate their other senses.


    Kakashi then crosses the 2 kunai in front of him, taking away half of Sora's chakra.

    (Fūinjutsu: Seikatsu Kekkai) – Sealing Technique: Living Barrier
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30 (-15 per turn active)
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user takes out two bladed objects and crosses them. This creates a seal that seals away 50% of the chakra of any opponents within short-range of the user, allowing them to use only upto A-rank techniques.
    Note: Sealing Method lasts 2 turns maximum.
    Note: If the opponent moves out of short range, he regains his original abilities


    You need to realize that you are a danger to yourself and others. Only with help can that be changed. So let me help you.
    Okay thats a problem>.> I am not very good with english, and my opponents often misunderstand when I write much description, but I'll try...xD and your assumptions about the hands were right!




    *Just after shooting the wind spiral at kakashi, sora notices that...well he can't see anything, because he is covered in darkness but his other senses are working, he analyses the situation, that he didn't see any bright light, that might've caused his blindness, so he assumed it is a genjutsu, and knowing kakashi could attack from any angle as he is blind sora makes a single seal(wind masteryxD) and quickly spin from left to right, starting from my front, in a somewhat 360 deg. while releasing several blades of wind, in case of an attack he do not know of*

    (Fūton: Shinkū Renpa) – Wind Release: Serial Waves
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: After performing a the required hand seals Rat → Snake → Horse → Dog theuser takes a deep breath and exhales several blades of wind at different angles, by rapidly moving their head in various directions. The power of this technique can be dramatically enhanced when utilised in conjunction with the effects of extreme suction, such as that generated by the Baku, where the augmented attack proved effective enough to even slice through the defences of a complete Susanoo.


    *then sora jumps backward and takes his tri-bladed claw and slicing his left biceps, though not too deep, the pain releases sora from genjutsu, then sora, who is now in sight of kakashi and obito dashes towards both of you(enters mid range), then makes a seal and shoots a blast of wind, aimed at the two of you(assuming you two are together, if not it is directed at the real kakashi, I'm assuming the one in front would be the real one)*

    (Fūton: Atsugai) - Wind Style: Pressure Damage
    Rank: A
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: A Huge blast of wind that levels anything in its path; Can cause major damage and requires a sufficient chakra level to perform. This large wind blast moves in tremendous speed and cannot be controlled. If the user gets caught in it, it will harm him also.

    *sora then wears the claw in his left hand and exhale infused wind chakra into it and start dashing towards kakashi and obito in an arc through my left*

    (Fūton: Shinkūjin) - Wind Release: Vacuum Blade
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user exhales wind-infused chakra onto a weapon in order to increase its sharpness, range and lethality. For example, the user can infuse a kunai to resemble a makeshift scimitar or infuse shuriken to increase their range and cutting power.


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    Re: [Pseudo-Jinchuuriki Test: Sora] Elmage

    Kakashi sees the handseal Sora performs and then kneads fire chakra in his mouth just as Sora spits out the first wind blade. Kakashi quickly spews a powerful stream of fire towards the wind attack that would overcome it and continue towards Sora. At the same time Kakashi spews the stream of fire, Obito goes underground traveling quickly to try to get behind Sora as he tracks him from underground. With Sora still blinded by the Genjutsu cast by Obito, he would not know what was going on.

    (Katon: Gōka Messhitsu) - Fire Release: Great Fire Destruction
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: A technique where chakra kneaded inside the body is converted into fire, and then expelled from the mouth in a massive stream of intense flames.


    (Doton: Moguragakure no Jutsu) – Earth Release: Hiding like a mole technique
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user changes earth into fine sand by channeling chakra into it, allowing the user to dig through it like a mole. While underground one can sense what is happening on the surface and use the information to launch a surprise attack on the enemy. Once can also hide deep in the ground, escaping to a depth where the enemy cant reach. It also appears that after digging, the ground can be returned to its original state, leaving no trace of where the user entered the earth.


    Kakashi then activates his MS technique. Enough was enough. It seemed that the only way to keep Sora safe was to put him somewhere where he couldnt hurt himself or others.

    (Doujutsu: Mangekyou Sharingan) Eye Technique: Kaleidoscope Copy Wheel Eye

    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 50 (-25 per turn to keep active)
    Damage: N/A (-10 per turn)
    Description:
    The Mangekyo Sharingan, literally meaning "Kaleidoscope Copy Wheel Eye", is the highest known form of Sharingan, said to be feared as the strongest form of Sharingan. Awakening MS requires the user to have possession of 3 Tomoe Sharingan and to witness or simply go through some extremely dramatic emotional event. Upon this event, the user awakens MS. The most noticeable MS users gained it by witnessing the death of someone important to them, sometimes by their own hand. Once activated the appearance of the pupil drastically changes, differing from the tomoe seals, and gains a shape unique to each user. When active the user can track speeds even further beyond that of the third stage sharingan. The timing of the users counters, the chaining speed of multiple techniques and the ability to see through the enemy's moves greatly increases. Not only that but the user gains the ability to see through visual illusions A-rank and below. The link to Genjutsu is further increased and, if the user has gained full mastery over Genjutsu, he gains the ability to cast any and every genjutsu without the need for Handseals as long as he has a line of sight to the target. Also, the Mangekyo Sharingan gives the user access to powerful and forbidden techniques, unique to each user. Extended use of the Mangekyo Sharingan after some time, deteriorates the user's eyesight to the point of blindness. The chakra cost is so high that it drains the users stamina and chakra at increasingly high speeds. Once the side effects of it's use take place, the user is left blind and unable to activate his sharingan. While keeping it active is already quite hard, the user will drain the time he can keep it active at each MS technique he uses. While some can decrease one turn, others can decrease even more.

    Note: The user needs to have activated his 3T Sharingan beforehand
    Note: Can only be activated twice, requiring a 2 turn coldown to activate again
    Note: Lasts a maximum of 8 turns for the first activation and 4 turns for the second
    Note: After the first activation wears down, his eyes revert to their normal appearance and the user can't activate his sharingan for 1 turn
    Note: The first activation drains the users stamina and leaves him tired, while the second activation leaves the user blinded and almost unable to move if he doesn't deactivate it before the time ends
    Note: To avoid direct Eye Contact and be able to focus only on the body movement below the chin, the opponent needs to have mastered Taijutsu to possess the necessary skill.
    Note: Predicting the nature of a technique or what it exactly is requires the user to either know the technique or that its a cannon technique
     
         

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    The beginning of the end~_~

    Quote Originally Posted by Oraan View Post
    Kakashi sees the handseal Sora performs and then kneads fire chakra in his mouth just as Sora spits out the first wind blade. Kakashi quickly spews a powerful stream of fire towards the wind attack that would overcome it and continue towards Sora. At the same time Kakashi spews the stream of fire, Obito goes underground traveling quickly to try to get behind Sora as he tracks him from underground. With Sora still blinded by the Genjutsu cast by Obito, he would not know what was going on.

    (Katon: Gōka Messhitsu) - Fire Release: Great Fire Destruction
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: A technique where chakra kneaded inside the body is converted into fire, and then expelled from the mouth in a massive stream of intense flames.


    (Doton: Moguragakure no Jutsu) – Earth Release: Hiding like a mole technique
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user changes earth into fine sand by channeling chakra into it, allowing the user to dig through it like a mole. While underground one can sense what is happening on the surface and use the information to launch a surprise attack on the enemy. Once can also hide deep in the ground, escaping to a depth where the enemy cant reach. It also appears that after digging, the ground can be returned to its original state, leaving no trace of where the user entered the earth.


    Kakashi then activates his MS technique. Enough was enough. It seemed that the only way to keep Sora safe was to put him somewhere where he couldnt hurt himself or others.

    (Doujutsu: Mangekyou Sharingan) Eye Technique: Kaleidoscope Copy Wheel Eye

    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 50 (-25 per turn to keep active)
    Damage: N/A (-10 per turn)
    Description:
    The Mangekyo Sharingan, literally meaning "Kaleidoscope Copy Wheel Eye", is the highest known form of Sharingan, said to be feared as the strongest form of Sharingan. Awakening MS requires the user to have possession of 3 Tomoe Sharingan and to witness or simply go through some extremely dramatic emotional event. Upon this event, the user awakens MS. The most noticeable MS users gained it by witnessing the death of someone important to them, sometimes by their own hand. Once activated the appearance of the pupil drastically changes, differing from the tomoe seals, and gains a shape unique to each user. When active the user can track speeds even further beyond that of the third stage sharingan. The timing of the users counters, the chaining speed of multiple techniques and the ability to see through the enemy's moves greatly increases. Not only that but the user gains the ability to see through visual illusions A-rank and below. The link to Genjutsu is further increased and, if the user has gained full mastery over Genjutsu, he gains the ability to cast any and every genjutsu without the need for Handseals as long as he has a line of sight to the target. Also, the Mangekyo Sharingan gives the user access to powerful and forbidden techniques, unique to each user. Extended use of the Mangekyo Sharingan after some time, deteriorates the user's eyesight to the point of blindness. The chakra cost is so high that it drains the users stamina and chakra at increasingly high speeds. Once the side effects of it's use take place, the user is left blind and unable to activate his sharingan. While keeping it active is already quite hard, the user will drain the time he can keep it active at each MS technique he uses. While some can decrease one turn, others can decrease even more.

    Note: The user needs to have activated his 3T Sharingan beforehand
    Note: Can only be activated twice, requiring a 2 turn coldown to activate again
    Note: Lasts a maximum of 8 turns for the first activation and 4 turns for the second
    Note: After the first activation wears down, his eyes revert to their normal appearance and the user can't activate his sharingan for 1 turn
    Note: The first activation drains the users stamina and leaves him tired, while the second activation leaves the user blinded and almost unable to move if he doesn't deactivate it before the time ends
    Note: To avoid direct Eye Contact and be able to focus only on the body movement below the chin, the opponent needs to have mastered Taijutsu to possess the necessary skill.
    Note: Predicting the nature of a technique or what it exactly is requires the user to either know the technique or that its a cannon technique
    ...and then comes the fire>_> as expected...I expected wall of flames though...I smell the end._.



    *Sora hasn't finished shooting his wind in 360 degrees(about 180?) when he starts to feel heat/warmth coming from where he assumes to be kakashi's location, so he stops the serial waves, then he quickly jumps back, while he does that, he quickly takes his tri-blade and gives himself three cuts(from each blade) the pain he felt from the cut forced him out of the genjutsu...it then became clear to him that kakashi means to kill him, he then generates five tall tornadoes and send it towards the fire...this will effectively stop it, since the initial power of the technique has been reduced, however sora was no longer the same, for he was starting get more and more angry, for kakashi had proven to him once more that he was no longer needed in this world, his very existence seems to be a torn in peoples flesh...he started to change, and the kyuubis chakra took control of him, and he becomes envelope in the kyuubis chakra*

    ( Futon: Tatsumaki Heki ) - Wind Release: Tordado Wall
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user generates a large wall of 5 Tall tornadoes that are sent towards the opponent. A flying summoning can create this technique by simply flapping their wings to generate the wind for the technique.


    (Pseudo Kyubi Fukanzen modo) - Simulated Nine Tails Inital mode

    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A (+10 to Wind Techniques, +5 to Taijutsu)
    Description: Sora when entering this mode begins releasing red chakra and his right arm turns into a demonic claw due to the nine tails chakra not properly being combined with sora's own unlike naruto. He is then enveloped in a red aura cloak with three tails and long ears. He also Gets red Oval pupils and fangs aswell as his nails on the remaining hand and feet growing into small claws. The chakra cloak is capable of intensly burning the opponent on touch. Whilst in this form Sora gets a bonus to wind and taijutsu techniques.
    Note: The transformation only lasts for 5 turns.

    *sora who is now influenced by the kyuubis chakra dashes towards kakashi, in an arc form, with kakashi at its center with an incredible speed that would be difficult for the normal eye to detect, while running, he faces his hands in kakashi's location, and extends a chakra arm, towards his head, aiming to crush it, also seeing that kakashis clone is no longer with him, sora(kyuubis will) takes note of his environment, and keep that in mind while attacking*

    (Bijutsu: Chakra Ude) - Tailed Beast Skill: Chakra Arm
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: Whilst in their incomplete transformation form the user can extend from any part their body a chakra arm that can grab hold of an object or enemy and crush or hold them from great distances.
    Note: Can only be used by all jinchuuriki in incomplete form.


    Sora: Rarrrrgh!

    NOTE: I figured I should tell you how I know which is clone and which is real...the truth is that I don't know, its just a hunch, and here is my reason; since I suddenly didn't see you/your clone, it is assumed that you're trying to attack me when I'm open, and since I didn't see your clone go into the ground, and can't tell which is you, and which is your clone, and your clone would probably be above or below and he can't hang on the air~__~ so my best bet would be below...or you dispersed it._. but no ninja would disperse his clone in a battle like this, now I don't think you would go underground, knowing that I know you have a clone, and since the best bet is below, I doubt you would go underground yourself because you would be at risk of getting hurt, so you send your clone instead, and even if its a camouflage technique like the one muu uses, I probably would be able to tell if I monitor acute distortions right?xD I hope you don't misunderstand what I wrote
     
         
    Last edited by elmage; 01-05-2013 at 11:19 AM. Reason: Added detail to my last description, added a note...sorryxD

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    Re: The beginning of the end~_~

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    ...and then comes the fire>_> as expected...I expected wall of flames though...I smell the end._.



    *Sora hasn't finished shooting his wind in 360 degrees(about 180?) when he starts to feel heat/warmth coming from where he assumes to be kakashi's location, so he stops the serial waves, then he quickly jumps back, while he does that, he quickly takes his tri-blade and gives himself three cuts(from each blade) the pain he felt from the cut forced him out of the genjutsu...it then became clear to him that kakashi means to kill him, he then generates five tall tornadoes and send it towards the fire...this will effectively stop it, since the initial power of the technique has been reduced, however sora was no longer the same, for he was starting get more and more angry, for kakashi had proven to him once more that he was no longer needed in this world, his very existence seems to be a torn in peoples flesh...he started to change, and the kyuubis chakra took control of him, and he becomes envelope in the kyuubis chakra*

    ( Futon: Tatsumaki Heki ) - Wind Release: Tordado Wall
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user generates a large wall of 5 Tall tornadoes that are sent towards the opponent. A flying summoning can create this technique by simply flapping their wings to generate the wind for the technique.


    (Pseudo Kyubi Fukanzen modo) - Simulated Nine Tails Inital mode

    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A (+10 to Wind Techniques, +5 to Taijutsu)
    Description: Sora when entering this mode begins releasing red chakra and his right arm turns into a demonic claw due to the nine tails chakra not properly being combined with sora's own unlike naruto. He is then enveloped in a red aura cloak with three tails and long ears. He also Gets red Oval pupils and fangs aswell as his nails on the remaining hand and feet growing into small claws. The chakra cloak is capable of intensly burning the opponent on touch. Whilst in this form Sora gets a bonus to wind and taijutsu techniques.
    Note: The transformation only lasts for 5 turns.

    *sora who is now influenced by the kyuubis chakra dashes towards kakashi, in an arc form, with kakashi at its center with an incredible speed that would be difficult for the normal eye to detect, while running, he faces his hands in kakashi's location, and extends a chakra arm, towards his head, aiming to crush it, also seeing that kakashis clone is no longer with him, sora(kyuubis will) takes note of his environment, and keep that in mind while attacking*

    (Bijutsu: Chakra Ude) - Tailed Beast Skill: Chakra Arm
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: Whilst in their incomplete transformation form the user can extend from any part their body a chakra arm that can grab hold of an object or enemy and crush or hold them from great distances.
    Note: Can only be used by all jinchuuriki in incomplete form.


    Sora: Rarrrrgh!

    NOTE: I figured I should tell you how I know which is clone and which is real...the truth is that I don't know, its just a hunch, and here is my reason; since I suddenly didn't see you/your clone, it is assumed that you're trying to attack me when I'm open, and since I didn't see your clone go into the ground, and can't tell which is you, and which is your clone, and your clone would probably be above or below and he can't hang on the air~__~ so my best bet would be below...or you dispersed it._. but no ninja would disperse his clone in a battle like this, now I don't think you would go underground, knowing that I know you have a clone, and since the best bet is below, I doubt you would go underground yourself because you would be at risk of getting hurt, so you send your clone instead, and even if its a camouflage technique like the one muu uses, I probably would be able to tell if I monitor acute distortions right?xD I hope you don't misunderstand what I wrote
    Getting this Checked out before I continue.
     
         

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    Re: [Pseudo-Jinchuuriki Test: Sora] Elmage

    ♠ Test Failed ♠

    I am quite sure you know what mistakes you made in the beginning as Oraan pointed them out, but I'll offer a few more tips here. Firstly, I know English isn't your mother language, and that is fine, you did well for the most part, however, your inconsistent switching between first and third person made your descriptions extremely hard to read and rather confusing as well.
    Secondly, your moves felt to me a bit...rather not thought through. You didn't seek to pressure Kakashi at all. I'll take your first move as an example. Oraan used a simple combo. Earth->Water->Genjutsu.
    With the first move, which causes the Earth to spin beneath you, you could have sought to destroy both the Earth and Water at once. Think of Wind. Wind is around us at all times and can easily help us control our momentum and power if used right. A lot of the Wind techniques, as you know, come from the mouth. You could have sought to use the initial power of releasing a Wind jutsu from your mouth at a certain degree towards the ground to escape from the Earth move (as you don't seek to stop it, but simply escape from the ground) and then use that same move to defend against the simple B-Rank Water bullet, or overpower it to continue towards Oraan.
    That right there is a defense and attack in one, which is extremely viable with many of the Wind techniques. After you do that, you have two more jutsu slots to pressure Oraan. Seek to be creative and use creative combos that impress the judge of the battle...such as, I remember reading Zero Kelvin's Third Raikage test. He knew the Kirin was unavoidable, so he dashed TOWARDS his enemy as a rather suicidal, yet perfectly risky move. Now that's something I don't see every day.
    Anyways, overall, you picked up the pace, but it turned into a somewhat of a boring, non-strategized battle. Remember to think through every move you use next time and never waste a jutsu slot.
     
         

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