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    Naruto: New Generation! Chapter 3

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    Note: This chapter is also smaller than usual, because I wanted to end it with those words. Don't worry because anything you don't understand will be explained soon enough.

    Naruto: New Generation! Chapter 3

    Hanzō, the Salamander


    The two young shinobi were safe at last, but was it really over, after all, the old man's objective wasn't sucessful. Does that mean he is still coming after them?...

    Kuromo - Hey Hisaki, I know everything is alright now. But, what if he comes back?

    Hisaki - I don't know, I haven't really thought about that. I just want to forget those days, alone, in that dark room. Everyday he came to check up on me, with his creepy eyes, his evil essence, staring right into my soul. I was frightened, just wishing it to end.

    Kuromo - I'm... I'm sorry I didn't help you earlier... but, to prevent that situation, I think we should train, just a little, so we can defend ourselves if something similar to this ever happens again.

    Hisaki - You're probably right, but not now. Lets just spend sometime together...

    Kuromo - Yeah. (:
    Kuromo (Thinking) - I'm really concerned, about out safety. The world has been in peace for several years, so most of us don't get much training, just the basics. But what if... what if there really someone that has the Rinnegan? what if there is someone out there who can control people? The only thing we can do is get ourselves stronger...

    Hisaki - I think tomorrow we should talk with the Hokage before we start any type of training. He should be able to give us some advice. Because I only know some weak genjutsu techniques and you barely know any jutsus.

    Kuromo - It's not my fault I'm lazy, it's in my blood to be it, aha. Yeah, the 8th Hokage, such a fair a protective man should be able to give the help and advice we need.

    ??? - Hey guys, what are you doing there?

    Kuromo - Get away Sachimaru, we don't want any company, especially from you!

    Sashimaru- Hey! Didn't I already told you to treat me as Lord Inuzuka, master of all things?!

    Hisaki - Master of all crappy things.

    Sashimaru - I'm joking, come one, lets go for a walk near the river. You can't say no, I will drag you there.

    Kuromo - Just leave us be, we are, or at least we were enjoying the day by ourselves until you walked in, just go play with your toys, go.

    Sashimaru- Don't be so harsh, I'm your best friend. If you go for a 15 minute walk with me, I'll leave you alone for the rest of your life.

    Kuromo - Ok ok, but you have to promise.

    Sashimaru- I promise, now lets go.
    Sashimaru(Thinking) - At least I've got the chance to say goodbye to my friends, since tomorrow I'm leaving Konohagakure, for an ''adventure''. For my parents, drinking a tea is an adventure, between being careful not to burn themselves and the burps they get after drinking it, I don't know what's worst!
    Sashimaru- So guys, what's in your mind?

    Hisaki - I'm just contemplating the sunset...

    Sashimaru- I see, that is one of the reasons why I chose this place for us to be together. Observing the sunset in this zone is amazing, always brings me up on bad days.

    Kuromo - Sachimaru, since when do you come here that often? Aren't you always that kind of guy that stays home all day just sleeping and eating?

    Sashimaru- I come here a lot you know. You just don't care that much about me.

    The night came and they all went home, the next day wasn't as good as that one, because the sky was covered with a mist and it was raining all over the village. Everything was closed except the Hokage Mansion and the place where you can go on a tour through the historic places of Konoha.
    Hisaki and Kuromo went to the Hokage's office...


    Kuromo - *Knock* *Knock* Can we come in?

    8th Hokage - Who is it?

    Kuromo - It's Kuromo and Hisaki.

    8th Hokage - Together? Did your parents see you?

    Hisaki - No... No of course not, or else we wouldn't be here.

    8th Hokage - Yeah I guess. So what's the matter?

    Kuromo - Mr. Hokage, we--

    8th Hokage - Don't call me that, it makes me feel really old. Just call me Hanzō.
     
         
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    Re: Naruto: New Generation! Chapter 3

    Just finshed reading it. It was nice :D But what really bothers me is that Konoha has had two new Kages after the Fourth Shinobi War( over 200 years) or Danzo wasn't counted.
    An Hanzo being the name of the 8th Hokage is really out of the blue .
     
         

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    Re: Naruto: New Generation! Chapter 3

    Very nice once again :D
     
         

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    Re: Naruto: New Generation! Chapter 3

    Quote Originally Posted by Shodaime Swagkage View Post
    Just finshed reading it. It was nice :D But what really bothers me is that Konoha has had two new Kages after the Fourth Shinobi War( over 200 years) or Danzo wasn't counted.
    An Hanzo being the name of the 8th Hokage is really out of the blue .
    I didn't really count with Danzo, since he was Hokage for a day -.- And I know Hanzo being hokage has no sense at all, now, but it will all be explained. Because if you remember, he is supposed to be dead.

    1st Hokage - Hashirama Senju
    2nd Hokage -Tobirama Senju
    3rd Hokage - Hiruzen Sarutobi
    4st Hokage - Namikaze Minato
    5th Hokage - Tsunade
    6th Hokage - Uzumaki Naruto - Little after the 3rd Great Shinobi war, Naruto was appointed as the Hokage
    7th Hokage - Sarutobi Konohamaru - During the 4th Great Shinobi war, Naruto sacrificed himself to save the village, after that, Konohamaru became the Hokage, honoring Naruto and having people build him a statue, which is located in the center of Konoha. During Konohamaru's reign has the hokage, the world was already at peace, and he died of old age.
    8th Hokage - Hanzo - After Konahamaru's death, Hanzo, one of the best trainers was appointed has the Hokage. His reign has been on for 27 years. Because everything was peaceful he closed the Academy. Now people were normal villagers except for the Uchiha that trained their children when they turned 20.
     
         
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