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    Ludger Will Kresnik



    Basic Information:

    Name: Ludger Will Kresnik
    Nickname: Ludge
    Gender: Male
    Height: 170 cm
    race: Human
    Age: 20
    Clan: N/a

    Looks: Wears a blue shirt with folded sleeves and brown suspenders, yellow necktie, and black trousers. He has a blue feather decoration hanging on the back of the trousers, He has green eyes and yellow rings circling the pupil-(a trait shared with Elle) and has silver hair with blach ends.

    Personality:
    -Protective of Elle and Julius
    -He hesitates when he is opted to kill his own brother (Julius Will Kresnik)
    -The opposite of his brother
    -serious
    -nice

    Village Info:

    Village of Birth: Konogakure
    Village of Alliance: Konogakure

    Rank // Chakra Info:

    Ninja Rank: S-jounin

    Specialty: N/a

    Elements:
    Katon - Needs training

    Your Ninjutsu:

    Name: (Bunshin no Jutsu) - Clone Technique
    Rank: E
    Type: Supplementary
    chakra cost: 5
    Damage points: N/a
    Description: A clone made of the user that can move but (cannot use any jutsu) This clone is merely an illusionary Projection.

    Name: (Gokan Sakusou) - 5 senses Confusion Disorder
    Rank: E
    Type: Supplementary
    Chakra cost: N/a
    Damage points: N/a
    Description: The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads through the air. This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it. This effect lasts for 2 turns.

    Name: (Nawanuke no Jutsu) - Escape Skill
    Rank:E
    Type: short
    Chakra cost: N/a
    Damage points: N/a
    Description: Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down (only works with non-chakra ropes.)

    Name: (Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
    Rank: E
    Type: Short
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 5
    Damage points: N/a
    Description: This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

    Name: (Henge no jutsu) - Transformation Technique
    Rank:E
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 5
    Damage point: N/a
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponent.

    Name: (Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
    Rank:E
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: short
    Chakra cost: 5
    Damage points: N/a
    Description: Kawarimi no jutsu is a basic technique. When in danger the Ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponent's attack.

    Name: (Kakuremino no jutsu) - Magic cloak of Invisibility Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra cost: 5
    Damage point: N/a
    Description: The user will put out a cloak that is pre-designed for their use. Then by using Ninjutsu they make the cloth bend into the background. Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank C and above).

    Background Info:
    History:
    Ludger lives with his elder brother, Julius Will Kresnik, and their pet cat Lulu in an apartment in the Leaf Village. Towards the beginning and on his first day at work, Ludger fails the Jounin exams since he wanted to surpass the rank of chuunin but could not. Not only is he a shinobi of the leaf but is also a chef at a famous hotel.Ludgars brother is always busy at work presumably trying to get enough money to pay off the family's debt. Since his brother works and other than fulfilling his duty as a chuunin, Ludgar is mainly in charge of the house stuff and taking care of the cat. Ludgar is good at cooking because he's the only person in the family in the nearby restuarants in the hotel. He took job there to get his mind-off of failing the Jounin exams and wanting to become a Jounin. He meets Jude Mathis, who is lost way to the hotel, on his way to work. After he escorts Jude to the hotel, he is framed for being a Molester by a mysterious girl and caught. However, the hotel is attacked by a group of unknown bandits raiding the place, thus granting Ludger a chance to try and escape the hotel. He meets the unconscious girl named Elle Mel Mata in the hotel where he is supposed to work and is quickly attacked by one of the bandits, who mistakes him for a bystander. Along the way to punish the bandits, Ludger meets with Jude again, as well as a man named Bisley Karsci Bakur, who introduces himself as a special-Jonin of the leaf. The two go to the top floor of the hotel, where they find Julius before Bisley enters. Julius then takes two old watches, one being Elle's golden watch she recieved from her father, which begins to shine. The effect from the watch brings Ludger, Elle, and Jude into another room of the hotel. He notices julius acting strangely in the hotel and the party is forced to confront him. With his power Ludger kills the shadow Julius(an imposter Julius) and are returned to the leaf village after the fight. A medical ninja named Redau aids the team by tending to their injuries and says that the other chuunin and jounin have arrived to deal with the bandits under Tsunades orders when they recieved the report. Meanwhile, Ludger is contracted with a debt of 20 million ryo and doesn't know what to do in order to pay it.
    (note: will update bio)

    Other:
    Tools: twin swords, kunai knives.

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    Theme Song and Background Music:
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6wWHZE14hP8

    Battles:
    Wins: 0
    Losses: 0

    ~Approved~
     
         
    Last edited by Caliburn; 12-21-2012 at 03:44 PM.

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    Re: Ludger Will Kresnik

    That's a kinda good bio

    But you could develop it a little more
     
         

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    Re: Ludger Will Kresnik

    Quote Originally Posted by Merita View Post
    That's a kinda good bio

    But you could develop it a little more
    suggestions please?
     
         

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    Re: Ludger Will Kresnik

    Is this a first bio?
     
         

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    Re: Ludger Will Kresnik

    Quote Originally Posted by Necromancer4276 View Post
    Is this a first bio?
    no first one got rejected because she wasn't even human.
     
         

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    Re: Ludger Will Kresnik

    Quote Originally Posted by demon fang View Post
    no first one got rejected because she wasn't even human.
    I gotcha. I'm in the same boat... kinda. Haha. Working on patching my first bio. Looks good to me man, i might suggest more in the history, but good overall.
     
         

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    Re: Ludger Will Kresnik

    thanks..I'll try to update the history more.
     
         

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    Re: Ludger Will Kresnik

    Nice.
     
         

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    Re: Ludger Will Kresnik

    Quote Originally Posted by Death2TheUchiha View Post
    Nice.
    thanks.
     
         

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    Re: Ludger Will Kresnik

    You can't randomly make up abilities xD so you should remove anything related to the corpse shell ability thingie and also remove anything related to other worlds and what not since that's also a no-go as far as I know.

    Nice bio ^^ what anime is the character from since he looks pretty cool o_o
     
         

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    Re: Ludger Will Kresnik

    Quote Originally Posted by Tybone View Post
    You can't randomly make up abilities xD so you should remove anything related to the corpse shell ability thingie and also remove anything related to other worlds and what not since that's also a no-go as far as I know.

    Nice bio ^^ what anime is the character from since he looks pretty cool o_o
    Tales of Xillia 2 and how about now?
     
         

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    Re: Ludger Will Kresnik

    if you need help feel free to vm someone

    btw nice bio
     
         

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    Re: Ludger Will Kresnik

    Looks fine to me now o_o
     
         

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    Re: Ludger Will Kresnik

    Quote Originally Posted by Tybone View Post
    Looks fine to me now o_o
    Awesome and @The 4th raikage right...and thanks.
     
         

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