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    Naruto 614: A brighter end. the next chapter as many wanted

    Scene starts with a look at the Sage

    Madara: activate

    the Sages eyes turn to life

    Naruto: the sage of 6 paths

    Kakashi: how.... is this possible?

    Madara: when you achieve the Rinnegan you can summon the Gedo Mazo currently the 10 tails, and upon it laid the Sage's body, he hoped to protect the world even in death by guarding the Mazo all this time... but hes really going to bring the end

    Naruto: ughhh Kurama is your Chakra back yet?

    Kurama: yea

    Naruto flashes into KM

    Obito: the sage... m seems Madara knew just about everything (whats he doing with the Sage)

    Madara: Obito, I would get out of the way if I were you I'm going to combine his attack with the Juubi's making it at full power.

    Obito slides in the ground and pops up where Madara is

    Madara throws a two finger hand sign and the Sage starts to move

    Madara: be prepared for annihilation. Juubi use a Complete Biju Bomb, Sage use almighty push to bring the shinobi army closer and hold them there

    The Juubi starts to form the Bomb and the Sage jumps near the Juubi starts to emanate his chakra

    Rikidou: this... jutsu

    Cut to Madara

    Madara: WHAT!!! (how is he talking)

    Obito: whats wrong Madara

    Cut to Rikidou

    Rikidou: this jutsu

    The Rikidou makes a 2 finger sign

    Rikidou: is nothing

    Cut to Naruto and Bee

    Kurama: Rikidou broke the Edo Tensi control Madara had

    Rikidou: the Juubi is revived, so am I... this means

    The Sage looks around seeing the devastation from the battle

    Rikidou: by the looks of it hes been here for a while

    Cut to Madara and Obito

    Madara: how did he break the control

    Obito: Madara how could you not control the Sage

    Madara: he broke the seal right away... how (shit seeing as he sees the Juubi as a threat, which means were going to be fighting him

    cut to Naruto and Bee

    Kurama: Rikidou over here its me Kurama

    Gyūki: I'm here too

    The Rikidou runs to where the are

    Kurama: uhhh dont you think we should stop the Biju Bomb

    The Rikidou throws his hand towards

    Rikidou: universal control

    The sage threw it way into the atmosphere

    Naruto: wow your on another level than Madara

    Rikidou: how are you two still sealed separate from the Juubi

    Naruto: they got portions of their power from over time

    Rikidou: m this is bad... even without it being full it can still turn full

    Naruto&Bee: WHAT!!!!!!

    Cut to Madara

    Madara: m good thing we still have the Juubi, and hes about to change

    Obito: lets hope you can control this one

    Madara walks over to Obito and places a hand on his solider

    Madara: say another word and I'll kill you, right now your just getting in the way of my world domination

    Obito: world domination.... I thought you wanted the Eye Plan

    Madara: I do... but the thing is humans cant survive without not eating, they will all die including you

    Obito: you lied to get me to exterminate the world...

    Madara: whats it matter you soon will die like the rest of them

    Obito: you know Madara, the Sage is said to take down the Juubi by himself, and your not much of a match on your own... hope you like where your going

    Obito teleports to where Kakashi is

    Kakashi: decide to change your mind

    Obito: all Madara ever said is lies, the plan, being able to be with Rin again... all of it lies

    Kakashi places a hand on Obito's sholder

    Kakashi: welcome back to the light Obito

    Cut to Rikidou and Naruto and Bee

    Rikidou: the only way to take the Juubi out is with a sealing tech.

    Naruto: same with that Madara guy

    Rikidou: we need to seal the monster away inside an alive shinobi

    Naruto: (Kurama what do you think
    Kurama: Naruto noone has held 2 tailed beasts at one time
    Naruto: its hasent been done before, well I'm trying it)

    Naruto: Ill do it grandpa Sage

    Rikidou: first you will need this to be able to hold the beast in,

    The sage walks over to Naruto and he touches Naruto's head

    Rikidou: use this to seal that Juubi inside you, after this I'll be gone forever this time, I leave this world to you

    Naruto's eyes are closed while the sage has his fingers on Narutos head, when the sage moves his hands Naruto opens his eyes and reveals a Rinnegan

    Naruto: yes Rikidou Sannin, I will save us all

    Rikidou: I know you will, this is the end of the dark times the world has seen, you will surpass me and bring about a brighter future... bye

    Naruto: an ill do it without fail

    as Naruto talked the sage vanished returning to the afterlife

    Cut to Kakashi and Obito

    Obito: Looks like the Sage even believes in Naruto, thats gotta say something huh

    Kakashi: we still have to fight the Juubi and Madara, the fight is just starting

    Naruto appears between them

    Naruto shouts: Kakashi, Bee, Guy, Obito were going to end Madara

    Naruto has a determined look on his face

    Naruto: Be-live it!!!

    Next time: The sealing of a life time!!!!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 614: A brighter end. the next chapter as many wanted

    Very nice keep it goin
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 614: A brighter end. the next chapter as many wanted

    Ehhh...not liking the Rikkudo Sage and Obito switching just like that...Naruto won't get the Rinnegan in my opinion.

    I don't feel the ASF would casually let Obito switch sides.

    Dialogue isn't bad though!!!!Nicely done there Naruto feels like Naruto
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 614: A brighter end. the next chapter as many wanted

    holy :o My jaw went collasped when I was reading >.> nice theory!!! hope that happen.. it pretty epic... if this happen about sage cut out being control.... which mean that one clear statement is that he really powerful.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 614: A brighter end. the next chapter as many wanted

    Really like he theory pleas make the next one
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 614: A brighter end. the next chapter as many wanted

    Kakashi places a hand on Obito's sholder

    Kakashi: welcome back to the light Obito

    ROFL I gave a 2 just because of this... ahahahahahahahahahaahah
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 614: A brighter end. the next chapter as many wanted

    This would not happen at all. But I still like it!
     
         

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