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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by -+Aizen+- View Post
    Sage Art:Chakra Spotter
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Chakra: 35
    Damage:-----
    Range: Short-Mid
    Description:The user while in sage mode,can release some of his senjutsu chakra around himself and also to the ground,The chakra then keeps the user alert for any foreign chakra that it senses and can pinpoint it exactly,making the user knowing ASAP and can counter attack without delay.
    -Can be use only by aizen-
    -only in sage mode-
    -only used 2x in battle-

    This jutsu is not needed, because when you enter sage mode, you sense chakra by default.
     
         

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Katon:shimekiri doragon no kuchisaki )-Fire style: Closing dragon's mouth
    Typeffensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Desciption: The user will inhale as much air as he can and quickly exale it. Externally, the air will ignite strongly. The user quickly manipulates the shape of this stream of intense fire to mimic a dragon. Then, it'll sourround the enemy open it's mouth and crash onto the opponent in a maelstorm of blazing fire.
    Notes: No katon C-rank or higher next turn.
    Notes: May only be done once per battle.

    ~ Declined, do not resubmit ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 07-10-2010 at 05:08 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦


    Custom weapon: dragon war fan


    Rank: Forrbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 50(first turn and 35 all the others.And only when in fan mode)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This fan is small.But do to its interesting nature it can expand,by using the users chakra.It only works for 1 person,it burns any other user to touch it.It can also transform to a staff when folded and when 1 seal is preformed.(The staff is indestructible)It has a few special abilities.There are only special abilities when its in fan mode.It can cancel Fire,lightning and wind jutsus.(count as a move)It can also do A-rank fire,wind and lightning.But it need 10 more chakra because its being channeled through the fan.(although this doesnt apply to wind jutsus)
    *Needs 20 chakra to transform into a staff
    *Can only be wielded by Mugen-sama


    ~ Declined, do not resubmit. ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 07-10-2010 at 05:09 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Chakra Chacha Parusa) Chakra Disruption Pulsar
    Rank:S
    Type:Supplemetary
    Range:Short
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description:The user focuses a large amount of chakra in their palms.Then User Slams His or her hands on the ground sending a large outgoing wave of the user's chakra. the wave of chakra disrupts the chakra flow of all enemies surrounding him/her which disables all jutsu instantly.
    Note: this jutsu requires no hand seals
    Note:this can only be used 1 times per battle.
    note: Can only be taught by Daemon


    ~ Declined, do not resubmit ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 07-10-2010 at 05:10 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Hyuga Hijutsu-Jishin)Hyuga Hidden Art-Earthquake
    Rank: S
    Type:Attack/Supplementary
    Range:Short to long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: The user builds chakra up into his/her palms then condenses it then the user releases it in a palm thrust movement its released in the form of a shockwave. The shockwave is so powerful that it makes a path in the earth as its moving toward its target
    Can be used only once every 3 turns, and a maximum of twice per battle
    No Hyuuga Clan techniques for 2 turns
    Can Destroy any earth jutsu of equal rank.
    After the second use, the user's palms become raw, leaving him unable to use S rank and above techniques which involve channelling chakra to or through the hands.

    ~ Approved ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 07-10-2010 at 05:12 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kousa tsurugi) Cross Sword
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40(+10 when infused w/ wind chakra)
    Attack points: 80
    Description: the cross sword is made of an unbreakable alloy that is easily infused w/ chakra. The sword is covered in bandages and straps to protect it from the environment. The blade is not exactly sharp but it acts more like a reverse blade to shield. It will not cut through rock, but it will crush it like a hammer ( can only be used to stop C rank and below Doton techniques ). The blade can be used to cut when infused w/ wind chakra.
    *note: can only be used by Toku.
    *note: the sword puts such a strain on the user that it can only be used for 2 turns and must put it away for 2 turns before it can be used again.

    ~ Approved ~

    (Doton-Kaze Chojo) Earth release- Wind Maiden
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Attack points: 80
    Description: the user manipulates the earth around the opponent and creates a sphere prison around the opponent. The user then spins wind inside almost like a rasengan making it spin rapidly cutting the opponent to shreds inside the sphere prison. The wind starts spinning as the prison is forming around the opponent.
    *note: can only be used by Toku.
    *note: can’t use any B-rank or above lightning next turn.
    *note: can’t use this jutsu again for 2 turns.
    *note: can only be used 2x per battle.

    ~ Declined ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 07-10-2010 at 05:13 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Genso kunai)-Elemental Kunai
    Typeffensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Desciption: After making 5 handeals, a shuriken made of Water, Fire, Earth, Lightning or Wind will be created. The created kunais can either appear in the user's hand or from an element on the field (water source, the ground, thunder...etc). If created from the field, those kunais will be shot from the element to the user's desired location.
    -Can only create 10 kunai at a time
    -Can only be used 3 times per match
    -Can only be used by Izuna Uchiha


    (Gaibu koa)-Fire style: External Core
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage:N/A (Death if enemy/user falls in the lava)
    Description: The user will shoot an extremely hot fire jet on the ground around himself (360 degree). It will caused the earth to melt, turning into lava. This lava can then become a source that can be used with Earth jutsu.
    -The lava can only be used by the user
    -Can only be used by Izuna Uchiha


    (Mūnkuresento)-Lightning style: Moon Crescent
    Type: Defensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Desciption: After performing 9 handseals, half a sphere made out of lightning will form from the ground to the user's hips. The sphere does not directly touch the ground nor the user since a thin layer of chakra separates them. This jutsu is a perfect defense against underground earth jutsu.
    -Can only be used twice per match
    -The Sphere last for 3 turns unless the user stop the jutsu
    -Can only be used by Izuna Uchiha

    ~ All Declined, do not resubmit any ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 07-10-2010 at 05:13 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Hyouton: Koori Renge, torakkingu bara) Ice release: Ice Lotus, tracking thorns

    (Hyouton: Koori Renge, torakkingu bara) Ice release: Ice Lotus, tracking thorns
    Type:Attack/supplementary
    Rank:B
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost:25
    Damage Points:40
    Description:thorns of ice shoot from around the ground at the target. once stuck in the target they take root and grow a beautiful blue flower which can't be removed except by amputation, medical surgery or jutsu, and using an A rank and above offensive technique on that part. this flower emits a constant chakra signal by leeching a small amount of chakra that doesn't affect the host at all, which Hyouton users and people with any ice lotus technique affecting them can sense and work out the position of the person with these flowers on them.

    ~2 times per battle , must wait 2 turns before using again.

    *can only be taught by kawagiri to any ice user*



    ~ Approved ~

    anything needs changing just tell me

    *note* i deleted a jutsu before anyone even looked at it as such, so using this as fifth weekly submission instead
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 07-10-2010 at 05:15 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    [Raiton : Chidori Tate | Lightning Release : One Thousand Birds Shield]
    Rank : A
    Type : Deffensive
    Range : Short
    Chakra Cost : 30
    Damage Points : N/A
    The user will form a chidori and raise it right above them, the chidori will then strech out as a shield covering the user in a 360 degree angle and will shock anything that touches it outside.

    ~ Declined, do not resubmit ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 07-10-2010 at 05:15 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    (Mumyo Jinpu Ryu Satsujin Ken-Chakra Dasshu)The Sword Of The Devlish Wind-Charka Dash
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:S
    Range:Short to Mid
    Chakra:40
    Damage:
    Description:The user leans slightly forward and puts most of their weight on their front leg while doing this the user also builds charka in their into legs enhancing the muscles in their legs the user then dashes at their opponent at the same speed as the 4th gate
    Only usable 2 pair battle
    ~Pending~ Emperor check


    (Tenro-Sky Wolf)
    Type:Weapon
    Rank:S
    Range:5 feet
    Charka:40(when infusing charka if using normally none)
    Damage:80
    Description:Tenro is a nodachi blade crafted during the beginning of the first great ninja war.The blade is slightly curved and is 5 feet in length . When the tenro blade isnt being held by its master the blade will always return to its scabbard due to a seal that was placed on the blade.
    Adds One Rank to a Techniques Cutting power meaning if the move Can cut through up to B rank jutsu if used with this sword can cut through A rank(Can only be done 1 every 3 turns)
    If dropped during battle user must wait one turn before sword returns to its scabbard
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kuchiose no Jutsu: Niiro oyobi Kiiro no Kyouku ) Summoning Technique: Red and Yellow Stability

    Rank: C
    Range: Self
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Allows the user to summon either Cranberry Juice or Lemon Juice in controlled ammounts into the user's own stomach. The summon is just like any other weapon summon, and the seal is found on the user's belly.

    Note: If you don't see the point in using this, I'll pm you.

    ~ , Approved ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 07-11-2010 at 05:46 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Suiton: Omori Kirikae) Water Release: Weight Conversion
    Rank:S
    Type:Supplemetary
    Range:Short
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: the user infuses water with his or her bodies which changes the users body weight and mass. the user then can move as fast as 2rd gate speed. this jutsu can only be used in a water source and the person can only move at third gate speed if theybare on or in the water source.
    Note: this jutsu requires no hand seals
    Note:this can only be used 1 times per battle.
    note: Can only be taught by Daemon


    ~ Declined, do not resubmit ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 07-11-2010 at 05:47 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Earth Style: Advancing Crust
    (Doton: Joutatsu Koukaku)
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user preforms a short series of hand seals and then stomps their foot on the ground. This causes the earth that the opponent is standing on to grow over their body, starting at their feet. The earth stays close to the opponent's skin creating a stone statue of them when its completed. The process happens quickly and only takes a few moments. Once its complete the opponent cannot move and begins to suffocate.
    ~Can only be used four times per battle.
    ~Requires a source of earth that is in contact with the opponent.
    ~Must be taught by Bahamut.


    Earth Style: Iron Maiden
    (Doton: Airon Shojo)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user will preform three hand seals and then stomp on the ground. This causes a sarco****us made of stone to rise up in a spot of their choosing. The inside of the sarco****us is lined with short stone spikes. Once the opponent is inside the coffin, the coffin will seal shut, crushing and impaling the opponent.
    ~Can only be used three times per battle.
    ~Requires an earth source.
    ~Must be taught by Bahamut.


    Lightning Style: Assault of the Dragon
    (Raiton: Kagai no Ryuu)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage: 100 (-20 to user)
    Description: The user will charge an electrical current into the tips of their fingers and then swipe their hand towards their opponent. Lightning will spread from the fingers and carve into the earth as it travels towards the opponent as 5 separate paths. It will tear up the earth as it travels leaving decent sized scars in the earth in its wake. Though this is merely a set up for the true nature of the attack. As the paths move they release large amounts of electricity directly into the earth below which then gathers beneath the opponent. After the paths have dispersed the ground beneath the opponent will shine a bright blue for a moment before erupting into a massive streak of lightning that consumes the opponent as it funnels out of the earth. As it streams out the lightning will take the form of a long dragon that roars once before dispersing, leaving the opponent a charred remainder of their former self.
    ~Can only be used once per battle.
    ~The user suffers 20 damage and cannot preform lightning techniques the next turn or S-rank and above the turn after.
    ~The ground glows for just a moment before erupting, giving no time for hand seals.
    ~The radius of the blast is about 10 meters.
    ~Must be taught by Bahamut.

    ~ All Declined, do not resubmit ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 07-11-2010 at 05:52 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Samurai Art: Heavenly North Wind (Samurai Gijutsu: Amatsu Hokufuu)
    Rank: S
    Type:Supplementary/Attack
    Range: Short-Medium
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 20
    Description: The Samurai will run Wind Chakra through their blade while holding it towards the sky, activating this technique. The Samurai’s blade will increase in length by 6 inches [15.2 cm], made entirely of wind, and the blade itself will receive a coating of wind, increasing the cutting power of the actual cutting edge tenfold. The power of this technique comes from the ability granted to the Samurai: the ability to create a strong burst of wind with each slash of their blade. Though the wind has little-to-no damaging power in iteself, it has enough force to blow other S rank jutsu away. The Samurai can then either create another gust of wind or control the “flight path” of any objects caught in the original gust by directing the path of the wind with their weapon. The wind itself, being wind, can move around formations in the earth. Because the wind of this jutsu is supercharged with chakra, the chaotic nature of Wind Chakra is imbedded into the gust, represented by nonfatal, slicing micro-currents within the gust of wind that can cause superficial wounds.
    *While in the elemental cycle, Fire beats Wind, this jutsu can direct the path of Fire jutsu, but cannot destroy/diffuse Fire justu of A rank and above, while it can do so to B rank and lower Fire jutsu due to it out classing them. An S rank or Forbidden Rank Fire jutsu will be totally unaffected by this technique and will receive a 10 and 20 bonus to attack strength respectively.
    *The ability to make a burst of wind lasts for five turns.
    *Usable three times per battle.


    Earth Style: Reverse Terraforming (Doton: Gyaku Tsuchi)
    Rank: A
    Range: Long
    Type: Supplementary
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 0
    Description: After making seven handseals, the user will thrust their palm into the Earth and release a pulse of chakra, and all terraforming done to the field will be reversed. Example: If someone used Earth Rampart, and summoned the large plateau, once this jutsu was activated there would be an indentation of the same dimensions as the plateau in the earth.

    Sorry if something similar to this one has been submitted; I haven't seen one though.

    ~ Both Declined, do not resubmit ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 07-11-2010 at 05:54 AM. Reason: things got sorted out.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kuchiyose: Caterlo mizu no Kemushi) - Summoning technique: Caterlo, the water Caterpillar
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra:40
    Damage:0
    Description: The user will smear blood on his summoinng tatoo and bring Caterlo, a bright blue caterpillar with yellow stripes going along his body, about 6 feet in length. His expirience in hot, wet climates made him adapt in order to utilize water chakra in order to survive. In order to survive, it managed to sense his predators with antena in his head instead of eyes, however this does not mean he can sense them like a chakra sensor etc., his vision is also obstructed due to rain, mist, hiding etc.
    Notes: Lasts for 2 turns after summonned, may only be summonned once per battle.
    Notes: May use water attacks up to A-rank, counting towards the move count.
    Notes: It may shoot water bullets, with the strength of B-rank, doesnt' count towards move count, but it may only be done thrice per battle.
    Notes: Unlike all caterpillars, he lost the ability of shooting silk by adapting to utilize water. He has the characteristic hunger for wood jutsus up to A-rank.
    Notes: Caterlo cannot be summoned when another caterpillar is on the field, and neither can another be summoned while he is on the field.


    ~ Approved ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 07-11-2010 at 05:56 AM. Reason: seen the orther jutsu get declined.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Ototon: Onkyou Bakko) - Sound Release: Sonic Domination
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 90 (-20 to user [suffering internal damage, and little hand tremors)
    Description: The user rises their hands in the air and sends sound wave and vibrations all over the field causing a rumbling sound, then he/she grips their hands and slowly lowers them as if they are pulling the sky down. As their hands lower, the rumbling sound continues rapidly. The opponent begins to loose their sense of balance and concentration due to the sound wave tampering their brain and the earth rumbling like an earthquake. Little by little, the sound turn slightly sharper and more waves enter the brain, making their ears bleed (resulting deafness) and their vision blurred & unstable. The user finishes the jutsu by gathering all the sound waves into one point, delivering a sonic blast that sends opponent flying. Any Lightning or Earth jutsus during this technique useless because of the enormous amount of sound waves through the air and ground which is able to disperse both elemental chakra.
    Note: Damaged ears and eyes lasts 2 turns.
    Note: Usable once per battle.
    Note: No jutsu at the same turn.
    Note: No sound jutsu for 2 turns.

    ~ Approved ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 07-11-2010 at 05:58 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Nnoitra-Sama View Post
    ( Katon/Taijutsu: Nenshō ashi no Entei ) - Fire release/Taijutsu: Burning leg of Fire Emperor
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Self
    Chakra cost: 40 ( - 10 X the number of turn has passed since it was activated )
    Damage points: N/A ( + 15 to leg taijutsu and it causes burns to opponent )
    Description: By Utilizing fire element based chakra on user's leg the user is able of creating fire covering along user's leg ( It can be Right or Left leg. Doesn't matter which one ). The fire covering is mainly used to gain small speed boost ( 1/5 of 1st gate's speed on kicking - Not moving ) and create burns to opponent when landing a hit. The hit from Emperor's leg causes the place where it hits to have burn and/or to be lit up. Using this jutsu too much causes serious damage to user's leg, making it useless on moving.
    Note:
    - Can be used only once
    - Costs 10 X the number of turns that have passed since it has been activated per turn
    - Using it one turn deals 10 damage. 2nd turn doubles it and so does 3rd turn. If used more than 3 turns user is unable to use the leg on taijutsu or moving for 3 turns.
    - Must be over Kage rank to use and must have mastered fire element.


    ~ Technique exists ~

    Makes less damage and the speed is now lower.

    ( Taijutsu: Bachi o gyakutai tei kaku ) - Hand to hand combat: Rated battering punishment
    Rank: B/A/S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Close
    Chakra cost: 25/30/40
    Damage points: 50 ( - 10 to user ) / 60 ( - 20 to user ) / 80 ( - 30 to user )
    Description: User focuses chakra on legs by concentrating chakra circulation system on feet. Once that's done user must get near opponent in air and once in close range with opponent user lands furious set of kicks with both legs at opponent, battering him/her while in air. This jutsu's kicking speed and damage depends on the rank that used of this move. The speed of kicks are so fast that it looks like as if multiple legs would be kicking opponent at the same time.
    Note:
    - Each punishment rank can be used only once per battle
    - Cannot use taijutsu at the same turn
    - Requires strong legs and extremely good chakra control
    - No Genjutsu or Summoning can be used two turns afterwards
    - Must be in air to use this jutsu
    - User must remain stationary for one turn if A or S - ranked version is used.


    ~ Declined ~
    Yes, I know that alligators are made as summoning but crocodile and alligator are way different. This will replace my Blackbird summoning

    Summoning Animal: Crocodiles
    Scroll Owner: I, Nnoitra own this scroll
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Hidden crocodile hands

    ( Kuchiyose: Kakusa reta wani no te ) - Summoning: Hidden Crocodile hands
    Type: Offensive - Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 25 ( - 10 per turn )
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: User bites own thump and releases chakra from his hand, creating a cloud of smoke that reveals multiple baby crocodiles to be summoned. When the crocodiles get in contact with water they will stay there for half turn, growing into full grown adult crocodiles that'll attack opponent of user. These crocodiles don't have any special skills.
    Note:
    - Can be used only twice per battle
    - Takes two turns to recharge and they will stay only for three turns in water once summoned.
    - If the crocodiles once summoned do not immediately get into a source of water, they will die.


    ~ Approved ~

    ( Taijutsu: Bachi o gyakutai tei kaku ) - Hand to hand combat: Rated battering punishment
    Rank: B/A/S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Close
    Chakra cost: 25/30/40
    Damage points: 45 ( - 10 to user ) / 55 ( - 20 to user ) / 75 ( - 30 to user )
    Description: User focuses chakra on legs by concentrating chakra circulation system on feet. Once that's done user must get near opponent in air and once in close range with opponent user lands furious set of kicks with both legs at opponent, battering him/her while in air. This jutsu's kicking speed and damage depends on the rank that used of this move. The speed of kicks are so fast that it looks like as if multiple legs would be kicking opponent at the same time.
    Note:
    - This jutsu punishments count for points - Only 3.0 points can be used per battle for the punishments. B - ranked costs 1.5 points, A - rank costs 2.0 points while S - rank costs 3.0 points. Meaning that there's only limited amount of using for these jutsus
    - Cannot use taijutsu at the same turn
    - Requires strong legs and extremely good chakra control
    - No Genjutsu or Summoning can be used two turns afterwards
    - Must be in air to use this jutsu
    - User must remain stationary for one turn if A or S - ranked version is used.


    ~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

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    Updating custom weapon:

    Old:

    Custom weapon: ( Go-ruden Kazemaru ) - Golden Wind
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive - Defensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: N/A ( - 10 per turn when activated )
    Damage points: N/A ( + 10 to user's fuuton. - 10 to opponent's raiton )
    Description: Kazemaru is a special ring that user carries with him. The weapon's origins are unknown but the known thing is that the sword's forged in country of birds from unknown wind chakra metal. The ring's indestructible and once wind chakra is guided with in it it'll take form of floating ring ( this allows it to work without distrupting handseal speed ) that has blade attached to it. The ring itself is golden but once activated the blade part is made from silver and has 5 holes on it. If user spins this ring in its activated form very fast while guiding wind chakra the user is capable of blocking any A - Ranked lightning attack once per battle. Even though there's wind chakra guided the ring it can be ignited but that wont affect to user since the weapon is floating in air. It can twice per battle send two wind shurikens at opponent which are made from pure chakra. Each one of them counts for one demon windmill shuriken
    • Costs - 10 chakra per turn
    • It's indestructible
    • It's golden from the ring part and silver on blade part
    • It can be reverted back into ring anytime
    • It doesn't have handle and floats around user's hand once it's activated by infusing wind chakra into it
    • Only Teh-Tobz is able of wielding it and it cannot be wielded by anyone else.
    • Boosts user's wind attacks by + 10 and user's raiton goes - 10.
    • If the wind surrounding the blade is ignited by an S ranked fire technique or an elemental combination, the heat will burn the user's hands since they are in such close proximity.



    New:

    Custom weapon: ( Kaze no ha o hamingu ) - Humming Wind blade
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive - Defensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: N/A ( - 10 per turn when activated )
    Damage points: N/A ( + 10 to user's fuuton based elements. )
    Description: Humming wind blade is a special sword that user carries with him. It takes form of Nodachi ( Two handed japanese sword ) and only true owner of this sword can use the sword with two hands. The weapon's origins are unknown but the known thing is that the ring's forged in country of birds from unknown wind chakra metal. The sword's indestructible and once wind chakra is guided with in it it'll reach the length of 2 meters. If user spins this sword in its wind chakra form very fast the user is capable of blocking any A - Ranked lightning attack once per battle. It can twice per battle send two wind shurikens at opponent which are made from pure chakra. Each one of them counts for one demon windmill shuriken. The scabbard of this sword is nearly indestructible too and can be used for blocking other swords.
    • Costs - 10 chakra per turn
    • It's indestructible
    • Only the true owner of this sword can use it with one hand.
    • Boosts user's wind element based attacks by + 10 and user's raiton element based attacks go down ( - 15 ). This also goes for CEs and KGs
    • If the wind surrounding the blade is ignited by an S ranked fire technique or an elemental combination, the heat will burn the user's hands since they are in such close proximity.



    ~ Approved ~

    Changed abilities and appearance
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 07-11-2010 at 06:01 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Genjutsu: Shika-Cho tentou)-Illusionary technique: Shika-Cho inverted
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range:Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Desciption: The user will make eye contact with the opponent and this will fall on an illusion in wich both the nara and the akamichi users will be standing toghether. If this genjutsu is done by the nara clan member, this will quickly touch the hand of his partner and increment in size just as an akamichi does( of course the opponent wont be able to notice this is a genjutsu just by stating the impossible fact of it since a henge jutsu could have been previously done) and strike the opponent. If this jutsu is done by an akamichi, he will touch the hand of his partner and extend his shadow up to the opponent and strangle him and will lie unconcious on the floor.
    Note: for this genjutsu to be done a member of the nara and akamichi clan must be on fighting toghether
    Note: can only be done 2 times per battle.( each member can do it once)

    ~ Approved, I guess ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 07-11-2010 at 06:02 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Kaze.. View Post
    (Mumyo Jinpu Ryu Satsujin Ken-Chakra Dasshu)The Sword Of The Devlish Wind-Charka Dash
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:S
    Range:Short to Mid
    Chakra:40
    Damage:
    Description:The user leans slightly forward and puts most of their weight on their front leg while doing this the user also builds charka in their into legs enhancing the muscles in their legs the user then dashes at their opponent at the same speed as the 4th gate
    Only usable 2 pair battle
    ~Pending~ Emperor check
    ~ Still too fast...1st Gate is enough and restrictions must be put in...self damaging ones ~


    (Tenro-Sky Wolf)
    Type:Weapon
    Rank:S
    Range:5 feet
    Charka:40(when infusing charka if using normally none)
    Damage:80
    Description:Tenro is a nodachi blade crafted during the beginning of the first great ninja war.The blade is slightly curved and is 5 feet in length . When the tenro blade isnt being held by its master the blade will always return to its scabbard due to a seal that was placed on the blade.
    Adds One Rank to a Techniques Cutting power meaning if the move Can cut through up to B rank jutsu if used with this sword can cut through A rank(Can only be done 1 every 3 turns and only twice per battle)
    If dropped during battle user must wait one turn before sword returns to its scabbard
    ~I want Emperor's opinion on it...for me it's fine~
    ~ Approved ~
    (Mumyo Jinpu Ryu Satsujin Ken-Chakra Dasshu)The Sword Of The Devlish Wind-Charka Dash[
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:S
    Range:Short to Mid
    Chakra:40
    Damage:
    Description:The user leans slightly forward and puts most of their weight on their front leg while doing this the user also builds charka in their into legs enhancing the muscles in their legs the user then dashes at their opponent in one straight line at the same speed as the 1st gate
    Only usable 2 pair battle
    After the second use the muscles in the users legs will be highly strained and wont be able to channel current into their legs/feet for 2 turns meaning wont be able to walk on water run up trees etc or use techniques involving forcing chakra to the feet

    ~ Approved ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 07-11-2010 at 06:03 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Fuuinjutsu: en'you Izumi) - Sealing Technique: Oceanic Fountain

    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user will open the sealed scroll making a set of 5 hand seals with quick succession and then they will release from the seal a extremly large volumne of water equivilant to that of a very large lake that will sweep on that battlefield and be 5 meters deep on a flat plain. This technique can work exceptionally well with Earth style: Wheel of Fortune.
    Note: Can only be used once per battle and user cannot use B rank and above water the next turn.

    ~ Don't see why it's any different from existing Suiton techniques that create water, tbh... ~

    (Senjutsu: Cho Gekiha Zetsubou) - Sage Art: Super Crushing Despair

    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: This technique is a bigger version of crushing despair used in sage mode. the technique is mixed with sage chakra to increase the power and size of the technique to create a more devastating effect. The cube Itself is a 4 meter squared surface area double the size of the original technique and is made of a thick liquid substance released from the users mouth and then shot to crash into the target/s.
    Note: Can only be used once and will half sage modes length
    Note: Cannot use water A rank or above for next turn
    Note: Must Know Sage mode and Crushing despair.
    -----
    Technique below is already approved before and is showing the connection between the last technique and crushing despair.

    (Suiton: Gekiha Zetsubou) - Water Release: Crushing Despair

    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user will release a thick liquid substance from their mouth moulding it into a dense cube which is then released and shot at the opponent and crashing them into the ground with tremendous force.

    Note: Can only be used 3 times.
    Note: Can only be taught by Kaito-sama


    ~ Declined, do not resubmit ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 07-11-2010 at 06:08 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Doton-Kaze Chojo) Earth release- Wind Maiden
    Type: Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 50
    Attack points: 90
    Description: the user manipulates the earth around the opponent and creates a sphere prison around the opponent. The user then spins wind inside almost like a rasengan making it spin rapidly cutting the opponent to shreds inside the sphere prison. The wind starts spinning as the prison is forming around the opponent but doesn’t start cutting till it gets full force when the prison is closed.
    *note: can’t use any A-rank or above jutsu on this turn
    *note: can only use 2 jutsus when this jutsu is used.
    *note: can’t use any B-rank or above lightning next turn.
    *note: can only be used 1x per battle.
    *note: can only be used by Toku.

    ~ Declined, do not resubmit ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 07-11-2010 at 06:09 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Misuto no buki) - Ninjutsu: Four Arms of the Mist

    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: As the user attack with his sword, he will use a variation of "Bunshin No Jutsu" to create the Illusion that he possess 4 arms, each holding the same sword. This is not a genjutsu, but merely an "illusionary projection of the user". Those 4 arms will strike different point on the enemy's body, making it extremely hard to guard against this attack since the opponent is doesn't know which arm is holding the real sword.
    -Can only be used 3 times per battle
    -Can only be used by Izuna Uchiha



    Note: the quoted part comes from this jutsu

    (Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
    Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)


    ~ Cali has something like this already ~

    (Honoo) - Lightning release: Blaze

    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 50 (-25 each turns)
    Damage points: 90 (30 to user from burns)
    Description: The user will channel lightning chakra in one or both hands, like a regular chidori. However, unlike the chidori, this lightning jutsu was meant to release tremendous amount of heat. A regular lightning bolt rapidly heats the air in its immediate vicinity to about 20,000 C. This jutsu is no where near this level since the metric volume of air that is covered is greater (close around the user's hands). Nonetheless, the temperature is great enough to melt any regular ice the user touch. In order to prevent any severe damage, the user will cover his hand(s) in a thick layer of chakra protecting him from both the lightning and the heat.
    -Can only be used once per match
    -No Lightning jutsu the turn before or after the jutsu ends
    -Last 3 turns
    -Can only be used by Izuna Uchiha

    Note: source from wiki:http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lightning

    ~ Declined, do not resubmit ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Samewaza:Chiago) Shark Arts: Thousand Jaws
    Rank:S
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short/Long
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: while the user is underwater,he or she infuses his or her chakra into the water to make large sharks made out of water. when the sharks reach the opponent they viciously bite the opponents limbs.
    Note:this can only be used 2 times per battle.
    note: Can only be taught by Daemon

    (Samewaza:Era Jinsei) Shark Arts: Gills Of Life
    Rank:A
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short/Long
    Chakra cost:30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: the user grows gills on the side of his or her neck which allows him or her to breath underwater.
    Note:this can only be used 1 times per battle.
    Note: This Jutsu lasts 3 Turns
    note: Can only be taught by Daemon

    (Samewaza:Suiton:Same Haipa Bakuha) Shark Arts: Water Release: Shark Hyper Blast
    Rank:B
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short/Long
    Chakra cost:20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: the user focuses water chakra into their mouth. They then spit out a highly compressed water jet that is shaped like a Shark out of their mouth.
    Note:this can only be used 1 times per battle.
    Note: This Jutsu lasts 3 Turns
    note: Can only be taught by Daemon

    ~ All Declined, do not resubmit ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 07-11-2010 at 06:10 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Nnoitra-Sama View Post
    Yes, I know that alligators are made as summoning but crocodile and alligator are way different. This will replace my Blackbird summoning

    Summoning Animal: Crocodiles
    Scroll Owner: I, Nnoitra own this scroll
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Hidden crocodile hands

    ( Kuchiyose: Kakusa reta wani no te ) - Summoning: Hidden Crocodile hands
    Type: Offensive - Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 25 ( - 10 per turn )
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: User bites own thump and releases chakra from his hand, creating a cloud of smoke that reveals multiple baby crocodiles to be summoned. When the crocodiles get in contact with water they will stay there for half turn, growing into full grown adult crocodiles that'll attack opponent of user. These crocodiles don't have any special skills.
    Note:
    - Can be used only twice per battle
    - Takes two turns to recharge and they will stay only for three turns in water once summoned.
    - If the crocodiles once summoned do not immediately get into a source of water, they will die.


    ~ Approved ~

    ( Taijutsu: Bachi o gyakutai tei kaku ) - Hand to hand combat: Rated battering punishment
    Rank: B/A/S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Close
    Chakra cost: 25/30/40
    Damage points: 45 ( - 10 to user ) / 55 ( - 20 to user ) / 75 ( - 30 to user )
    Description: User focuses chakra on legs by concentrating chakra circulation system on feet. Once that's done user must get near opponent in air and once in close range with opponent user lands furious set of kicks with both legs at opponent, battering him/her while in air. This jutsu's kicking speed and damage depends on the rank that used of this move. The speed of kicks are so fast that it looks like as if multiple legs would be kicking opponent at the same time.
    Note:
    - This jutsu punishments count for points - Only 3.0 points can be used per battle for the punishments. B - ranked costs 1.5 points, A - rank costs 2.0 points while S - rank costs 3.0 points. Meaning that there's only limited amount of using for these jutsus
    - Cannot use taijutsu at the same turn
    - Requires strong legs and extremely good chakra control
    - No Genjutsu or Summoning can be used two turns afterwards
    - Must be in air to use this jutsu
    - User must remain stationary for one turn if A or S - ranked version is used.


    ~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

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    Updating custom weapon:

    Old:

    Custom weapon: ( Go-ruden Kazemaru ) - Golden Wind
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive - Defensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: N/A ( - 10 per turn when activated )
    Damage points: N/A ( + 10 to user's fuuton. - 10 to opponent's raiton )
    Description: Kazemaru is a special ring that user carries with him. The weapon's origins are unknown but the known thing is that the sword's forged in country of birds from unknown wind chakra metal. The ring's indestructible and once wind chakra is guided with in it it'll take form of floating ring ( this allows it to work without distrupting handseal speed ) that has blade attached to it. The ring itself is golden but once activated the blade part is made from silver and has 5 holes on it. If user spins this ring in its activated form very fast while guiding wind chakra the user is capable of blocking any A - Ranked lightning attack once per battle. Even though there's wind chakra guided the ring it can be ignited but that wont affect to user since the weapon is floating in air. It can twice per battle send two wind shurikens at opponent which are made from pure chakra. Each one of them counts for one demon windmill shuriken
    • Costs - 10 chakra per turn
    • It's indestructible
    • It's golden from the ring part and silver on blade part
    • It can be reverted back into ring anytime
    • It doesn't have handle and floats around user's hand once it's activated by infusing wind chakra into it
    • Only Teh-Tobz is able of wielding it and it cannot be wielded by anyone else.
    • Boosts user's wind attacks by + 10 and user's raiton goes - 10.
    • If the wind surrounding the blade is ignited by an S ranked fire technique or an elemental combination, the heat will burn the user's hands since they are in such close proximity.



    New:

    Custom weapon: ( Kaze no ha o hamingu ) - Humming Wind blade
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive - Defensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: N/A ( - 10 per turn when activated )
    Damage points: N/A ( + 10 to user's fuuton based elements. )
    Description: Humming wind blade is a special sword that user carries with him. It takes form of Nodachi ( Two handed japanese sword ) and only true owner of this sword can use the sword with two hands. The weapon's origins are unknown but the known thing is that the ring's forged in country of birds from unknown wind chakra metal. The sword's indestructible and once wind chakra is guided with in it it'll reach the length of 2 meters. If user spins this sword in its wind chakra form very fast the user is capable of blocking any A - Ranked lightning attack once per battle. It can twice per battle send two wind shurikens at opponent which are made from pure chakra. Each one of them counts for one demon windmill shuriken. The scabbard of this sword is nearly indestructible too and can be used for blocking other swords.
    • Costs - 10 chakra per turn
    • It's indestructible
    • Only the true owner of this sword can use it with one hand.
    • Boosts user's wind element based attacks by + 10 and user's raiton element based attacks go down ( - 15 ). This also goes for CEs and KGs
    • If the wind surrounding the blade is ignited by an S ranked fire technique or an elemental combination, the heat will burn the user's hands since they are in such close proximity.



    ~ Approved ~

    Changed abilities and appearance
    Updating old jutsu ( 4th submission of this week ):

    Old:

    ( Suiton: Kugi No Ekitai ) Water release: Nails of Liquid
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: User infuses Chakra on battle field and manipulates the water sources turning surface of them into needles that are able of pierce skin, Feet ( Not bones ) and Soft clay/soil. The size of Nail is up to user. Requires only water source no handseals.


    New:

    ( Suiton: Kugi No Ekitai ) - Water release: Nails of Liquid
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 25 ( + 15 if the whole water source is turned into nails )
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: User infuses Chakra on waters of the area and manipulates the water sources turning surface ( and water below surface if user uses 40 chakra for jutsu ) of them into needles that are able of pierce skin, muscles, soft ground like soil and clay. This jutsu is unable to pierce bones and the sizes of nail(s) is/are up to user but a maximum of two feet
    Note:
    - Requires no handseals - only short amount of time
    - Can be used only twice. Once if whole water source is turned into water source
    - No water jutsus at the same turn.


    ~ Approved ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 07-13-2010 at 11:14 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Painamikku Entori - Pienamic Entry
    Rank: C
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage: 30
    Description: A taijutsu attack that involves throwing a pie in the opposition's face and then following up with a vicious flying kick.


    ~ Approved LOL ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 07-13-2010 at 10:37 AM.

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