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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Added Restrictions , Tell If Need More . Custom weapon: ( ランサ・デル・レランパーゴ ) - Lance of Thunder and Lightning
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40 ( - 20 per turn )
    Damage points: N/A ( - 30 to user after activating )
    Description: User will start gathering and focus own chakra into hands, creating Lance of Thunder and Lightning which has unbelievable powers and the ability to cause numbing and paralyzing into the places it hits. The user can also throw this lance creating shockwave that covers three meter radius and paralyzes anything inside that area. The Lance will stay with the user until 5 Turns Are Over .
    Note:
    - No Lightning For 6 Turns -
    - Once thrown, it reforms in the user's hand next turn
    - Stays For 5 Turns -
    - Can only be created once per battle
    - It numbs the user's fingers, slowing down handseal speed
    - It costs - 20 chakra per turn


    ~ Approved, I edited bits ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 05-07-2010 at 06:02 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Shippou taka dageki )- Silver hawk strike
    Type:attack
    Rank:B
    Range:short
    Chakra cost:25
    Damage points:40
    Description:This is a simple but deadly attack with a sword.The user inserts either wind or lightning chakra in there sword and than thrusting towards there opponent with great speed.Than when the user gets close to their opponent the user jumps and once he is decending he strikes his sword down at his opponent.
    *must have a chakra sword
    *must know atleast D-rank lightning or wind jutsu
    please edit if needed

    (Fuuton: Onjun no Kaze) – Wind release: Taming of the Wind

    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: 30
    Description: By manipulating their wind chakra the user is capable of producing a small-pressured current of wind from their hand that is capable of cutting with sharp accuracy. This technique is ideal even for close quarter combat as it can easily cut


    (Raiton:raikou enjin) - lightning element:Lightning ring
    Rank:C
    Typeffensive, Supplementary
    Range:short
    chakra cost:20
    Damage points:15 (each turn once the enemy is traped)
    Description:The user makes lightning in his hand and than makes it take shape of a circle.The user than can throw it on his enemy to demoblize them.Thus,stunning them.As the enemy is stunned and the circle of lighting is still on them it releases a shock wave that keeps stunning them.
    *The enemy can only be stunned for 2 turns
    *The user cant move while the jutsu is active
    *While the jutsu is active the user can only use a jutsu that needs one arm(like chidori,raikiri)
    *Once the enemy is caught he cant free himself.(has to wait 3 turns or the user deactivates the jutsu

    (Raiton:raikou kenpa shouheki)-Lightning detecting barrier
    Rank:B
    Type: Defensive, Supplementary
    Range:short-mid
    chakra cost:25
    Damage points:5
    Descreption:The user releases sparks of lightning around himself that stunes a enemy if he comes near and detecs enemys to mid range.The only way to get undetected by this jutsu is if the enemy goes underground where the sparks dont reach.
    *Lasts one turn
    *The user must be comletly still

    ~ All Declined. Unrealistic, repeat abilities of existing techniques and lack of differentiation into a new jutsu ~

    Please edit if needed.Dont just decline them
    Let me repeat: It's YOUR job to edit them, not mine. Got it ? YOURS.
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 05-07-2010 at 11:10 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kuchiyose: Kyuuketsuki Batto, Dracula)Summoning: Vampire Bat, Dracula
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 40 (60 if it’s daytime) (-20 per turn)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Dracula is the king of bat summons. His body is about the size of Gamabunta’s hand, but his wingspan is as long as Gamabunta’s, hand to hand. He can use
    (Ototon: Naiteki Ne no Jutsu) - Sound Release: Inner Sonar Skill
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user enhancing their hearing by utilizing chakra and enfusing their sound waves from their mouth. With their breathing sound waves emerge and bounce off of objects having them know wherever everything is around them.
    and has heat sensors on his nose to better find targets. For attack purposes, he can use wind jutsu up to B rank that fire uncontrolled blasts of wind ( not jutsus like Wind Blade and other controlled techniques ) using his wings. As bats are generally nocturnal creatures, Dracula and other bat summons will not be thrilled if you call upon them during the day. If this happens, they will require extra chakra from you as soon as you summon them.
    *Must hold the contract to summon bats*
    *Lasts 4 turns*
    *Can be summoned only once per battle
    *No other bats can be summoned while he is in play
    *As Dracula is a vampire bat, he will continually drain the users chakra while he is summoned . At the end of four turns, user loses ability to use Forbidden Rank techniques*

    (I took out him having all sound jutsu and just left the inner sonar skill as that is an ability all bats actually have. It is the same concept as the toads using oil. If there is still a problem with that then you can take that out if it'll make it approvable.)

    ~ Approved, I edited bit ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 05-07-2010 at 06:04 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Raiton : Yari Sensa) Lightning Release : Spear Sensor
    Rank : A
    Type : Supplementary
    Range : Short/Long
    Chakra Cost : 30
    Damage Points : N/A
    Description : The user will infuse his spear with lightning chakra and then release the chakra throughout the battlefield that then becomes many invisible to the eye sparks that once tangeled with will alert the user of the opponent's location. The sparks cannot be felt or seen to the opponent.
    - Sparks last 4 turns.
    - Twice per battle.


    (Sanso Kuuhaku) Oxygen Vacuum
    Rank : S
    Type : Supplementary
    Range : Short
    Chakra Cost : 40
    Damage Points : N/A
    Description : The user will make a set of handseals and infuse his chakra into a regular explosive tag, upon explosion the tag will explode twice the power of a normal tag and will incinerate any oxygen in the vicinity of the explosion.
    - Once per battle


    (Suiton : Shimeri O-ba-ro-do) Water Release : Humidity Overload
    Rank : S
    Type : Supplementary
    Range : Short/Long
    Chakra Cost : 40
    Damage Points : N/A
    Description : The uses materializes an enormous ammount of water and then spreads it throughout the entire battlefield. Due to the enormous ammount of humidity in the battlefield fire cannot be created, it gets extinguished the same second it is created.
    - Twice per battle
    - Humidity lasts 3 turns


    ~ All Declined ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 05-07-2010 at 06:05 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    ( Torune-do Houmen Oite Makai ) Tornado Release In Hell

    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 90
    Description: The user will combines there fire and water chakra together to create a ultimate tornado attack witch will take less then a minute. When the user is ready the user will build up his water chakra making a tornado then by adding fire chakra on the water tornado will set a ultimate tornado a Fire/Water tornado witch can take a whole place down easily and is really dangerous. The tornado can be created in front of the user that is using the tornado.

    NOTE: Can only be teach by Obito-Uchiha.
    NOTE: No S-Rank or above the next following turn.

    ~ Only for Emperor ~

    ~ Emperor any mistake you could fix it ~

    ~ Fire + Water = extinguished ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Genjutsu:Togiretogire hansha )Illusionary Technique:Shattering Reflections
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra:30
    Damage: 60(30 if hit by the shattered mirrors)
    Description: The user forms half a dozen seals and traps the target in a genjutsu where four mirrors appear around the user, one in each of the major compass directions. The target's reflections step out and proceed to attack him. This will feel absolutely real, and if the target can bring themselves to attack their reflections, the images will shatter when struck, sending shards of the mirror they stepped from flying into the target.
    Note:Can only be used once per battle
    Note: the user cannot perform any other attack same turn this is casr
    Note: lasts one turn


    ~ Approved, I edited bits ~

    (Genjutsu:Gutai Bodi no jutsu) Illusionary technique: Temporary tangible anulation
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra:25
    Damage:N/A
    Description: This genjutsu affects the target's central nervous system, it causes the target to be unable to move or feel anything from their limbs by blocking off the synapses in the target's body from letting any information from the brain pass and thus leaves them open to and defenseless against an attack.
    Note: can only be used twice per battle
    Note: this genjutsu lasts for one turn


    (Raiton: seiteki tentou )Lightning Style:Static Counter
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra:25(+5 for each improvement in the technique)
    Damage:N/A
    Description: After you form handseals, the next thing that hits you in close range combat will be electrocuted. The user can raise the effects of this technique by using more chakra that will cause a brief stun, slightly longer one and/or paralyze the attacker.
    Note:can be used twice per battle


    (Doton:shinka-no jutsu) Earth Style:Earth Sinker
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra:30
    Damage:N/A
    Description: After performing the required hand seals the target begins to rapidly sink into the ground below them, after they have sunk the required amount then the ground immediately hardens to incredible strength, making it difficult to escape from. However the user should only sink the target to their knees as anything past this and the target will have plenty of time to react and move out of the area.
    Note: can only be used twice per battle
    Note: the opponent cannot escape this jutsu by going underground since half of his body is trapped above the surface in a solid label or rock.


    ~ These three declined, do not resubmit ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 05-07-2010 at 06:07 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    ( Ōdoen'you: Shinkonanaeshita Enjin ) - Royal Domain Invocation: Emergent Seven Tongued Fire God
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    This technique is, unlike most fire-based techniques, more powerful when there is a lot of water on the field. The user releases a pulse of lightning natured chakra, which electrolyses any water present on the battlefield, turning it into Hydrogen and Oxygen. The heat of the lightning then detonates the Hydrogen and ignites the Oxygen, causing a huge, fiery explosion to spread out from every water source for over ten meters around it, which sucks in more oxygen, spreading the blaze further and further to cover the entire arena. This technique is particularly damaging when there is lots of water present, such as during rain. Furthermore, should an opponent turn himself into water for some reason, the technique is almost unavoidable, instantly blowing his water based body up and evaporating it, killing him. The aftermath of this technique is that there are extremely low levels of oxygen on the field, enough only for humans but not for larger animals like Summonings - though this obviously means the user cannot summon either. Furthermore, all Fire-based techniques lose one rank due to the lower levels of oxygen, and no special elemental fire ( such as Amaterasu, or other Fire creating Custom Elements ) can be used because they would suck in so much oxygen that they would instantly asphyxiate whoever uses it, be it the opponent or the user.
    However, the user also has to avoid the explosion unless he wishes to be caught in it. This technique can be used only once per battle, and slows the user's reaction time for one turn after. [ e.g. If he is a Kage, he will react only with the speed of an S-Class Ninja ] He also cannot use Fire element techniques for two turns after.

    ~Declined. (Do not resubmit)~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Raiton:raikou enjin) - lightning element:Lightning ring
    Rank:C
    Typeffensive, Supplementary
    Range:short
    chakra cost:20 (after the enemy is caught 15 each turn)
    Damage points:15 (each turn once the enemy is traped)
    Description:The user makes lightning in his hand and than makes it take shape of a circle.The user than can throw it on his enemy to demoblize them.Thus,stunning them.As the enemy is stunned and the circle of lighting is still on them it releases a shock wave that keeps stunning them.
    *The user cant move while the jutsu is active
    *While the jutsu is active the user can only use a jutsu that needs one arm and no handseals)
    *can only be used twice per battle(cant be used on the next turn)
    ~Pending~ Emperor, check please
    ~ Approved ~

    I edited a bit

    (Raiton:shuzoku taka) - lightning element: Racing hawk
    Rank:A
    Type:Attack
    Range:short-mid
    chakra cost:30
    Damage:60
    Descreption:The user counsintrates a big amount of lightning chakra to his mouth and than spits it out at the enemy.Than the user uses his chakra minipulation to form a hawk (only head and wings)
    that attacks the enemy at high speed.
    *can be used 2 times per battle
    ~Approved~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 05-09-2010 at 06:52 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Kaziname View Post
    ok, ok my bad. Only name is CE xD

    (Suiton: Misuto Fushoku)-Water Release: Mist Corrosion
    Rank: A
    Type: Defense
    Range: Short/Mid/Long
    Chakra Cost: 30 [+10 for Mid range (+20 for Long range)]
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: User does the correct handseals and then puts his palms on his lungs. After that user opens his mouth and blows out a stream of fine mist. The mist is extremely salty. Metal objects hit by the vapor will corrode and become enveloped by a thick coating of rust. Most metal weapons will get pits in their cutting edge and will cut poorly until resharpened. Thin items, such as senbon or ninja wire will disintegrate completely. Due to the extreme saltiness of the mist anyone blasted directly in the face will have a stinging sensation in their eyes, but no permanent damage. The mist is translucent and obscures vision slightly.

    ~ Needs restrictions ~


    ok now?
    (Suiton: Misuto Fushoku)-Water Release: Mist Corrosion
    Rank: A
    Type: Defense
    Range: Short/Mid/Long
    Chakra Cost: 30 [+10 for Mid range (+20 for Long range)]
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: User does the correct handseals and then puts his palms on his lungs. After that user opens his mouth and blows out a stream of fine mist. The mist is extremely salty. Metal objects hit by the vapor will corrode and become enveloped by a thick coating of rust. Most metal weapons will get pits in their cutting edge and will cut poorly until resharpened. Thin items, such as senbon or ninja wire will disintegrate completely. Due to the extreme saltiness of the mist anyone blasted directly in the face will have a stinging sensation in their eyes, but no permanent damage. The mist is translucent and obscures vision slightly.
    *note- can be only taught by Kaziname
    *note- can be only used 3 times in battle

    (you change restrictions if you think it's needed)
    ~Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    [Fuuton: Za Kaze ato Issen Doragon] ♦ Wind Style: The Wind of a Thousand Dragons ♦
    Rank: A/S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra: 30/40
    Damage: 60/80
    Description: The user will gather wind into their hand and condense it with chakra. creating long and thin projectiles in their hand. Then the user can aim these projectiles, launching them at a target. The projectiles do not deal a very much damage, though they are made for precision instead. for if aimed at a very vital, or severe pressure point, the user can cause their target to be unable to battle. Though this is quite hard to do and requires a great amount of focus and accuracy.
    For the second version of this jutsu, the user will infuse chakra into the air above the target on a wide area. Then condensing it the user will create a large amount of small wind projectiles. They will send it down on the enemy, covering a large area, hitting them with these small projectiles. These small wind bullets are really fast and sharp.
    ~Usable only three times per battle.
    ~No A, S rank wind techniques the next turn.
    ~Faust can only teach this.

    ~Declined~ Similar Jutsu Exists for version 2

    [Raiton: Denkou Ketatamashii Shikyo] ♦ Lightning Style: Lightning Piercing Death ♦
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra: 50 [+10, when used with a water jutsu]
    Damage: 90 [+20, when used with a water jutsu]
    Description: The user will charge their hand with Lightning chakra, concentrating thier pointer finger with condensed energy. Their hand will glow a faint blue from the chakra, and their finger tip will emanate sparks in bright white.
    Once the user has fully charged the attack, they will point the concentrated chakra at their target, then release concentrated projectile of lightning. This jutsu uses their own chakra network as a medium, making it more powerful then any jutsu of the same rank could posses using a weapon. This lightning projectile is designed in a small shape to contain all the piercing capability of a the stored chakra. This small bullet may seem insignificant, but it is capable of piercing through steel to reach its target. If wind jutsu is used to stop this technique then it must be and equal rank, it will disrupt the electric flow and end the jutsu. The jutsu can be used in conduction with water, thus creating a lightning, water combo which is able to paralyze the opponent too, if successful, of course it takes a little bit more chakra to do it. The user will shoot the projectile and it will spread through all the surface of the water.
    ~Usable only once per battle.
    ~No lightning techniques for the next turn.
    ~Takes about ten seconds to charge the chakra.
    ~User takes -10 shocking damage.
    ~Faust can only teach this.

    ~Declined~ Similar Jutsu Exists

    [Genjutsu: Kagami Shittsui] ♦ Illusion Technique: Mirror Fall ♦
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short/Medium
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: After the user forms the required hand seals, the user will suddenly disappear in a cloud of smoke. The smoke quickly disperses and in the user's place is now a mirror. In the reflection it shows the target, completely mimicked like a real mirror, however only after a second the reflection stops mimicking the target and instead has an evil grin. The reflection reaches out of the mirror and pushes the target backwards. The target will see just an endless pit of black going on and on forever, except for a tiny white light at the very bottom. This light is just to add to the realism of the genjutsu. The target will feel as if they are keep falling and falling, the light still there, though there back should be towards the light. If they look up they should see the reflection getting farther and farther away, waving with the same evil grin. In actuality the target will have only fallen backwards onto the ground, laying there.
    The length of this jutsu is indefinite until canceled or another way ended.
    Also this can be used on up to three people at once.
    The user cannot use chakra based attacks while it's active.
    ~Usable once per battle.
    ~Faust can only teach this.

    Approved~ Editted it to once per battle.
     
         
    Last edited by RokuNR; 05-08-2010 at 07:51 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Fuuton: Doragon no Metsubou) - Wind Release: Downfall of the Dragons
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack
    Range: Medium-Long
    Chakra Cost: 60
    Damage Points: 100 (20 to user)
    Description: The user will do a row of hand seals and clap his hands. This clap is used to send his wind chakra to the sky. Once there, the user's wind will mix with strong air currents and will shape them like multiple dragons. After that multiple dragons start to fall from the sky and hit the ground with great force, doing craters on the ground. The user can control the dragons so that they don't hit him. This jutsu isn't used in short range because the user will injure himself, but in medium-long range to avoid being harmed by his own jutsu.
    *Usable once
    *No S-rank or above wind next turn
    *User takes 20 damage

    Approved~ 20 damage to the user due to the high level of this jutsu

    (Fuuton: Kaze Gobou) - Wind Release: Slicing Pentagram
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Medium
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user will send his wind chakra through the ground and focus it on 5 points around the opponent in a pentagram shape. Suddenly he creates slicing winds that come from those points to the center (where is the opponent), merging all together in a spinning motion, ending up by making a tornado which again, cuts the opponent from all sides if he's caught inside of it.
    *Usable twice per battle

    ~Approved~
     
         
    Last edited by RokuNR; 05-08-2010 at 08:05 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    ( Kuchyose: Mei Saido Koara ) Summoning: Dark Side Koala

    Rank: A
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user focus chakra on there hands and do the necessary handseal and perform the handseal of the summoning koara in the ground. Koara can perform Earth Style complete with out doing a simple handseals just focusing chakra Koara take time when is a B Rank or more to do the focus chakra but it could not take more the 2 minutes it could take about 3 minutes. Koara have a speacial abilities that when the Koara bite the opponent the opponent could go to sleep because of Koara mouth it have that special abilities. Koara can also run really fast and climb trees really fast.

    NOTE: Can only be teach by the owner of the Summoning.

    ~ Restrictions ? ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 05-09-2010 at 12:18 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    ( Yumi no rei te ki ) - Bow of Soul and spirit
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Mid ( + long if you have doujutsu )
    Chakra cost: 40 ( - 20 per shot with the bow )
    Damage points: N/A ( + 35 per shot that hits )
    Description: User will focus chakra on own hand for half of turn, creating bow of pure chakra and during that time he cannot attack against opponent using handseal jutsus that would disturb the focusing and forming of chakra. The bow is made of pure chakra and can be only controlled by masters of chakra focusing. The ones that have mastered chakra controlling have 7 arrows made of chakra for the bow and each one of them cost - 20 chakra while each one of the arrows are capable to pierce even mountains with sheer force. After the user has performed this move the user's hands will start bleeding, preventing handseal jutsus for two or three turns depending on the rank of user ( Kage - 2 turns as Sannin - 3 turns ).
    Note:
    - Can be used only once
    - User's hands will bleed when shots are fired or bow has faded
    - Bow lasts 2 turns
    - Doujutsu can fire upto long range accurately with the bow
    - It costs - 20 chakra per arrow and only 7 arrows can be fired with bow
    - No handseals can be used for two or three turns depending on the rank of user
    - No Forbidden or S - Ranked ninjutsu ( excluding elemental ninjutsu ) for whole battle after usage.

    Emperor, check.
    ~ Declined ~

    This one isn't custom weapon since many people have shown ability to form different things from chakra ( Needles and spears etc. ) so this is just to create bow of chakra and few arrows.

    ( Kishikan juuken ) - Dj vu gentle fist
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Self
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This move is used to distract the opponent by changing the type of hyuga attack into the last one you used before. Explaining if I used Gentle fist combo last turn and now use rotation and this I would start small spin and immediately change the attack into the Gentle fist combo I used on last turn, surprising opponent with unexpected attack.

    ~Umm...Approved?~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 05-09-2010 at 12:19 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Katon : Interijento Sobou Kinmu) Fire Release : Intelligent Hard Work
    Rank : S
    Range : Short/Long
    Type : Offensive
    Chakra Cost : 40
    Damage Points : 80
    Description : The User spits out a small fireball that erupts into a giant firestorm after making contact with a surface, causing widespread destruction to the area. Since the flames travel along the ground, and from such a wide area this is a difficult technique to evade.
    - Three Times Per Battle
    - No Katon The Next Turn This Jutsu Is Used.

    ~Declined~ Stop posting jutsu that already exist in the Official Jutsu list or you will be banned from this thread.
     
         
    Last edited by RokuNR; 05-08-2010 at 08:19 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Hari Jizou Rendan) - Underworld Guardian Spikes Barrage -

    Rank: B
    Type: Defense/Attack
    Range: Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: After forming the needed hand seals, the user's hair will grow in length to surround and protect their body. In this form, it also becomes ridged and spiked, forming a layer of protection from direct strikes and blows. Inside this barrier, the user will create one more hand seal, and mold chakra. In the second he creates another hand seal, Hair spikes will be shot at all directions from this barrier. Before further attacks can be executed, the hair must be retracted.


    ~ Declined ~

    (Gamahada) - Toad Skin -

    Rank:A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: After the user has made the needed handseal, his skin turns into a pale red color, and looks similar to a skin of a toad. The skin is very flexible and slippery, as a thin layer of sticky water covers the skin. While the user has this skin activated, he can breathe under water and any B rank and below taijutsu/kenjutsu attack, will just slip off the users body, no matter where it's directed. Any katon jutsus lose one rank due to the water layer. Although, the user cannot use any Lightning and Wind techniques, during this state.
    *Note: Can only be used once per battle, and it lasts four turns.*


    ~ Approved, I edited bits ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 05-09-2010 at 12:50 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Futon: Hikinuku no Kaze) – Wind Release: Uprooting Wind

    Rank: S
    Type: Attack, Supplementary
    Range: Short – Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Description: The user stomps on the ground releasing an enormous surge of wind chakra, which is manipulated to be very sharp, and is capable of destroying all root systems found in the ground, which could be manipulated for an enemy targets jutsu.

    Note: Can only be used 2 times and user cant perform S rank/ above wind jutsu next turn.
    Co-created by Zenryoku

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    [Fuuton: Za Hyoujin Kaze] ♦ Wind Style: The Sharp Wind ♦
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user will gather wind into their hand and condense it with chakra. creating long and thin projectiles in their hand. Then the user can aim these projectiles, launching them at a target. The projectiles do not deal a very much damage, though they are made for precision instead. for if aimed at a very vital, or severe pressure point, the user can cause their target to be unable to battle. Though this is quite hard to do and requires a great amount of focus and accuracy. They are really sharp and fast and could pierce through steel.
    ~Usable only one times per battle.
    ~Their as fast as Rock Lee without weights
    ~Five projectiles are made from the users fingers.
    ~No wind techniques the next turn.
    ~Faust can only teach this.


    ~ Approved, I edited bits ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    ( Ōdogen: Kurieitā no zen Shintō Gijutsu ) - Royal Domain Illusion: The Creator's All-Pervading Knowledge
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    This illusory technique is a rather unique form of Genjutsu, surprising in its efficacy.
    When the user has a clear view of the opponent ( or at least his upper torso ) the user casts an illusion where the opponent believes the user's body has dissolved into a flock of pure white swans. This is not the main function of the illusion. The actual function is that the opponents brain has a large amount of knowledge forced into it, as if it learned them automatically. This knowledge covers various and diverse subjects thoroughly unrelated to battling. The Genjutsu then automatically cancels itself.
    As a result, whenever the opponent henceforth seeks to attack or defend, his thoughts are swarmed with completely unrelated knowledge, making him have to focus for a while to perform his battling functions. This results in a lag of about four to five seconds in the opponent before he focuses enough to begin performing his techniques.
    Even if the illusion is broken, the knowledge is still retained within the opponent's mind. Therefore, unless the opponent uses a mind-wiping jutsu on himself, he will continue to feel these effects. The downside to this is that most mind-wiping techniques are not subtle enough and will also remove a good portion of his actual battle knowledge.
    However, the user can utilise this Illusion only once per battle. The user also has the ability to cast Genjutsu stopped for the same turn this is used, and the next two turns. The user's Taijutsu plummets drastically, falling to the level of a mere Jounin for five turns after.


    ( Ōdogen: Yūetsu Mugen ) - Royal Domain Illusion: Superiority of the Infinite
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    This illusory technique is a psyche-damaging form of Genjutsu, surprising in its efficacy.
    When the user has a clear view of the opponent ( or at least his upper torso ) the user casts an illusion where the opponent sees their relation in comparison with the entire universe, where they see and observe that they are less than even a speck of dust when compared to the vastness of the world. The opponent then sees their lack of power when compared to God.
    As a result, completely demoralised, the opponent makes no move to activate techniques that grant him a power up, such as any "Modes" or the Eight Gates and so on. The opponent can still use techniques to change his form, attack, defend and so on- only he will not be psychologically sound to try giving himself power-ups.
    Even if the illusion is broken, the relation is still retained within the opponent's mind. Therefore, the effects will continue henceforth.
    However, there is a major flaw within this technique. If the user begins using "Modes" or Eight Gates and self power-ups, the opponent loses his sense of psychological defeat, and shakes off the effects of the illusion. As a result the user is also effectively cut off from using such things unless he wants the effects of the illusion to be stopped. The illusion may be used only once per battle.


    ~Both Approved~
     
         
    Last edited by ★ Rei ★; 06-04-2010 at 08:14 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Katana: Nenshou Kousaka) Burning Crossfire
    Rank: S
    Type: Weapon
    Range: Short
    Chakra: N/A -40 for summoning it, and 40 for any chakra uses-
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Yugito will take a small part of her bijuu chakra, upon taking the small part of bijuu power, she will make a seal appear on her hand then placing her hand out showing the seal she will shout Kousaka! The seal will instantly explode with chakra creating a small smokeshield hidding Yugito while the seal creates a special sword known as Kousaka.
    Kousaka, is formed by two spirits, one is Kousaka, himself, the other is the spirit of Yugito's old sword Kaisari, both combined there powers, to form 高坂 Kousaka. Kousaka takes the form of a legendery sword. Kousaka has the ability to destroy/defend from a-rank fire jutsus and below. Kousaka can use Kaisari's jutsus as he is part of Kaisari.
    Kousaka is very different from both swords, as Kousaka has small wooden branches attached but are cut off as Kousaka is not old but very new.
    Kousaka's powers are unknown, but Kousaka has a special form, usable only when Yugito goes into bijuu mode, Kousaka changes as the bijuu chakra rages through Kousaka turning Kousaka into a large hammer that can be charged with bijuu chakra able to smash through nearly anything, including steel or iron.
    Kousaka:

    -Wielded by Only Sin-
    -This is basically a revamp of Kaisari my old sword, so any jutsus for my old sword will work with this sword-
    -Bijuu chakra will make this sword very strong-
    -When using the sword, User's attack is minus by -5
    -When using sword attacks including water element, attack is minus by -10[/QUOTE]



    I'm changing bits in bold

    (Katana: Nenshou Kousaka) Burning Crossfire
    Rank: S
    Type: Weapon
    Range: Short
    Chakra: N/A -40 for summoning it, and 40 for any chakra uses-
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Masumi will form a seal of blood on to the back of her hand then quickly focusing chakra through it, she will make a seal appear on her palm of her hand then placing her hand out showing the seal she will shout Kousaka! The seal will instantly explode with chakra creating a small smokeshield hidding Masumi while the seal creates a special sword known as Kousaka.
    Kousaka, is formed by two spirits, one is Kousaka, himself, the other is the spirit of Masumi's old sword Kaisari, both combined there powers, to form 高坂 Kousaka. Kousaka takes the form of a legendery sword. Kousaka has the ability to destroy/defend from a-rank fire jutsus and below. Kousaka can use Kaisari's jutsus as he is part of Kaisari.
    Kousaka is very different from both swords, as Kousaka has small wooden branches attached but are cut off as Kousaka is not old but very new.
    Kousaka's powers are unknown, but Kousaka has a special form, usable only when the most desperate time of need, Kousaka changes when needed and rages through Kousaka turning Kousaka into a large hammer that can be charged with perfect chakra and become able to smash through nearly anything, including steel or iron.
    Kousaka:

    -Wielded by Only Sin-
    -This is basically a revamp of Kaisari my old sword, so any jutsus for my old sword will work with this sword-
    -When using the sword, User's attack is minus by -5
    -When using sword attacks including water element, attack is minus by -10

    This sword has been approved before.. so it shouldn't be too hard to approve

    ~ Approved, I edited bits ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 05-09-2010 at 12:53 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Heika No Sono Kirigakure) Arms Of The Hidden Mist
    Rank : S
    Type : Offensive/Deffensive
    Range : Short/Long
    Chakra Cost : 40
    Damage Points : 80
    Description : The User Concentrates Chakra In Two Locations Within The Mist And Will Form Two Hands Out Of The Mist That Are Hard Enough To Defend From A Rank And Lower Attacks, Or Can Be Created To Attack The Opponent. The Mist Hands Are Linked To The User's Arms By Chakra And Whatever The User's Arms Do, The Mist Hands Do The Same.
    - Only Members Of Kirigakure Can Use This Jutsu
    - Twice Per Battle
    - No Mist Or Suiton Techniques The Present And Next Turn This Jutsu Is Used.


    ~ Approved ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 05-10-2010 at 04:13 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦


    (Genjutsu:Kuroi Shin'en) - Illusion technique: Black Abyss

    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user will cause the target to fall into an illusion where black shadows envelop the target from their feet and encase in complete darkness but then they fall into a endless pitt. this technique is primarily used for the user to distract the opponent from the reality of the situation setting them up for a suprise attack on the target.
    ~ Only twice per battle

    (Banrai Itoguruma)- Heavy Thunder Spinning Wheel

    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user concentrates their lightning chakra into their limbs and strikes the opponent with a upper cut and then sending the opponent into a roll within the air. then by thrusting themselfs up above the target the user grabs hold the targets limbs face down dropping them to the ground and as they are about to strike the ground the user surges their lightning chakra into their right ankle and releasing the energy on point of contact smashing the opponent into the ground and causing a giant crater to appear from the release of the immense energy.
    Note: Can only be performed twice per battle.


    ~ Both Approved ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Samurai Art: Torrent Beyond the Heavens (Samurai Gijutsu: Se Tengai)
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Range: Long(for rain) - Short- Medium (for attack)
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Cost: 80
    Description: Holding their blade sideways, the Samurai will run Water Chakra through their blade, activating the technique. A great downpour will come over the terrain, providing water for this technique, as well as dropping all Fire Justu down one rank, and reducing their damage by 10. A ring of water will form around the Samurai with a radius equal to that of the complete wingspan of the Samurai (meaning it would be roughly 10-11 feet [roughly 3.2 meters] in diameter). This ring has a single tentacle for each of the eight points of the Compass Rose: North, South, West, East, Northeast, Northwest, Southeast, and Southwest. The tentacles will strike at anything within range as the Samurai commands them, but they do not attack on their own; they are approximately 5 feet [1.5 meters] long, and the Samurai must know the general vicinity of the opponent(s) to strike them if they are behind him/her.
    *As long as the rain continues to fall, or if there is an ample water source nearby, this technique remains in effect. The maximum however is four turns
    *Only once per battle


    ~ Approved ~

    Samurai Art: Heavenly Winds of Change (Samurai Gijutsu: Amatsu No Kae)
    Rank: S
    Type:Supplementary/Attack
    Range: Short-Medium
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80 (The Walls and the Sphere)
    Description: The Samurai will run Wind Chakra through their blade while holding it towards the sky, activating this technique. A sphere of wind surrounds the Samurai, protecting them by flinging attacks off of the sphere due to its high speed rotations. Just outside of the sphere a cube is formed of high speed wind that further deflects incoming attacks. Also, the user’s blade is infused with wind, increasing any damage done by a strike from their sword by 20.
    *Earth Jutsu are shredded to bits do to the slicing nature of wind, and the two “layered” protection.
    *Water Jutsu are simply flung out wide, due to the high speed wind.
    *Lightning Jutsu have their energy scattered by the wind, further improved by Wind beating Lightning on the Elemental Cycle.
    *Wind Jutsu are negated. (This jutsu can withstand two Wind Jutsu due to the double layers.)
    *Fire jutsu do half damage with the first strike, but once the first layer of wind is destroyed, do three times normal damage if they strike the second “layer”. The exception to this is Amaterasu, which strikes as it normally would, totally bypassing this jutsu.


    ~ Declined, do not resubmit ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 05-10-2010 at 04:16 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Custom Item: Rorschach's Face
    (Korei Kajou: Rorschach's Kao)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: None (-5 per turn)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: During one of Rorschach's first missions he was assigned to find a missing girl. Evidence led him to a run down area of Amegakure. Inside the building he found the remnants of a small girl's dress inside a recently used furnace. This mission deeply impacted Rorschach and helped shaped him into who he is now. Using the remnants of the girl's dress he created a mask to which he now considers his true face. The mask is dirty white with black ink blots that are made of a special ink. By using his chakra Rorschach can manipulate this ink so that it is constantly shifting and changing shape. These shifting ink blots can be manipulated to cast advanced genjutsu techniques that are unique to the mask ( submitted as separate techniques ) and Rorschach or it can be used as the activation point for already existing genjutsu that require eye contact. This mask is worn at almost all times by Rorschach but because nobody knows what he truly looks like under the mask even if someone did see him they wouldn't know who they were looking at. This makes it so the mask doesn't have to be summoned or put on at the start of a battle, as it would already be on.
    ~Can only be worn by Rorschach.
    ~Requires -5 chakra per turn to shift the ink blots.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kuchyose:kane airon mamori) Summoning Jutsu: Kanes iron defense
    Type: Defense
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will quicly perform the handseal required to summon Kane the iron Swallow but instead of summoning kane in his full form, the user will only summon kanes iron wings from the users back as the form of a cape. This wings will serve as a protective barrier for the user which will use to cover his front.This iron wings can only be used as a defensive system since they are too heavy to fly with.
    Note: Must have signed contract with the Swallows.
    Note: the iron defense is able to resist taijutsu attacks up to b rank ( only those that are directed towards the front of the user) and fire(B-rank or lower) since the iron defense
    isnt strong enough to endure more power and water attacks(B-rank or lower) which will be diverted to the sides.
    Note: can only be used twice and it may endure up to two attacks before it dissipates
    Note: the user is able to see from openings between the feathers and small enough things can enter through these holes.
    Note: User cannot move with even the slightest speed and has to walk.

    ~ Approved, I edited bits ~

    side note: this is similar to how sasuke used to grow snakes from his sleeves, plz tell me if more restrictions need to be added or if i should change something ,tyvm.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦ :neji:

    1)kuchiose no jutsu: koara (koala)
    rank:A
    type:supplementary
    chakra:30
    scroll owner: me
    other people:N/A yet
    description:after a series of handseals,i tap the ground and a human-size koala called shikon apears with a bamboo katana he helps me at the fight.
    last:5 turns
    only once per battle

    2)ninpo: sura koara no sendo (fighting koala of death) (its also a custom weapon)
    rank:c
    chakra:20
    type:supplementary
    description: after i've summoned my koala once per battle and last 10 turns the koala transforms in a katana which only i can wield bonus +20 taijutsu -5 ninjutsu and genjutsu

    ~ Both Declined. Follow the template -___-" ~
     
         
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