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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    Doton: Ro-ma Koroshiamu (Earth Style: Rome’s Coliseum)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short/Mid/Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user makes a large dome surrounding him and the opponent, creating a coliseum of sorts. The only way out of the dome is to use certain S-rank and above water jutsu (one’s that can pierce). The dome cancels out all light, leaving it completely dark inside it.
    *the dome last for the whole battle until destroyed with S-rank water and higher*
    *can only be used once*
    -Declined-
    Make it S-rank (wrong rank)...and not sure about the only weak to water thing. Shouldn't it be weak to lightning then?


    Doton: Furo-tingu Kougen (Earth Style: Levitating Plateau)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user creates a large chunk of the earth beneath him to rise into the air quickly, letting him manipulate the control of the piece of earth, causing it to be able to avoid and dodge B-rank and below jutsu. The user applies chakra to his feet to stay on the earth upside-down and, if he chooses to do so, can jump off and cause the earth to float towards what he wants it too.
    *only stays in effect for four turns at the most*
    *usable only three times a battle*
    -Declined- Limit it to once per battle

    (Fuuton: Ouranos’s Kuracchi) Wind Style: Ouranos’s Clutch
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Close - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user channels the air found around the enemy’s neck and forces it inward by closing his fist, crushing the enemy’s neck.
    -Declined- a bit OP for that rank Work on the description more and add restrictions.

    Doton: Korandamu Panteon no Kamigami (Earth Style: Corundum Pantheon of the Gods)
    Type: Defense
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user uses his Earth Chakra to extract Aluminum and create a dome around me as one of his clones uses his wind as the shield is forming to make Aluminum Oxide in a solid state known as Corundum. It is impenetrable except for A-Forbidden rank Lightning Jutsu's because of elemental combination.
    Note: Can only be used 2 times in a battle
    -Goro or Grimm please check this one

    (Suiton: atomikku shin'en) Water Style: Atomic Abyss
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Close –Mid (most effective up close)
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user creates 5 quickly condensed orbs of water from a nearby source of water. The orbs then begin to quickly orbit the user like an atomic nucleus, carving the earth as it touches the ground. The water orbs are then shot at the enemy in rapid succession with speeds like bullets.
    *entitled to any elemental variations of this jutsu*
    -Approved- I guess...
    Doton: Ro-ma Koroshiamu (Earth Style: Rome’s Coliseum)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short/Mid/Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user makes a large dome surrounding him and the opponent, creating a coliseum of sorts. The only way out of the dome is to use certain S-rank and above water or lightning jutsu (one’s that can pierce). The dome cancels out all light, leaving it completely dark inside it.
    *the dome last for the whole battle until destroyed with S-rank water or lightning*
    *can only be used once*

    ~Declined: water piercing Earth? ~


    Doton: Furo-tingu Kougen (Earth Style: Levitating Plateau)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user creates a large chunk of the earth beneath him to rise into the air quickly, letting him manipulate the control of the piece of earth, causing it to be able to avoid and dodge B-rank and below jutsu. The user applies chakra to his feet to stay on the earth upside-down and, if he chooses to do so, can jump off and cause the earth to float towards what he wants it too.
    *only stays in effect for four turns at the most*
    *usable only one time a battle*

    ~Approved~

    Sakasa Ro-Tasu (Inverted Lotus)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Close
    Chakra Cost:
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user opens the fourth gate and uppercuts the enemy in the chin, rising the a few ft from the ground. He then uppercuts the enemy with a few more powerful blows, raising him several feet into the air. The user then flips back onto his hands and jumps into the air upside down. He appears behind the enemy and wraps his legs around the enemy’s neck and smashes his head into the ground head-first in a spiraling smash.
    Requirements: 4 gate open

    ~Approved~
    Dainou Shinkyuu (Brain Buster)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Close
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: After using Leaf Dancing Shadow, the user grabs the enemy’s arms and flips over, smashing the enemy’s head into the ground with his feet.

    ~Approved~
    Impaling Roze no Mai (Dance of the Impaling Rose)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Close
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: After using Leaf Dancing Shadow, the user forces his ribcage bones outwards and wraps around the enemy, trapping him close to the user. The user then puts his hands on both sides of the enemy’s head and shoots 1 large spikes from both of his hands into the enemy’s head.
    *useable only twice*

    ||Declined||

    Aibori-Arashi (Dance of the Ivory Tempest)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Close
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user creates a long but diseased brittle bone-sword from his forearm and rushes the opponent with it. As he gets close to the enemy, he crushes the bone releasing a dense cloud of dust. When the opponent breathes in the air, he contracts osteoporosis, causing his bones to become weak and very fragile. It only last 4 turns or 2 turns if the enemy has a healing ability. If the enemy tries to move quickly or makes sudden movement, he is at risk of breaking their bones.
    *can only be used twice a battle*
    *doesn’t affect Kaguya members*
    *after using, the user can’t use any Kaguya jutsu for two turns*

    ||Declined||
     
         
    Last edited by ★ Rei ★; 12-24-2009 at 07:30 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Herushikon)- Hell fang
    Type:Attack/Defence/Supplementary
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-long
    Chakra Cost:40 (-10 for each turn vibrating, 30 for the sheild and waves)
    Damage Points:-10 to the user each turn it is on his arm and extra 5 for a elemental wave.
    Description:A longblade attached to a miniature forearm shield,The sword can be vertically folded along the forearm.Then flips out extending from to form a long, wide indestructible blade, the blade has a long, thin hollow straw inits centre. The blade Vibrates extremely fast from the users chakra which produces extreme heat burning the users arm it is attached to and allowing to cut through almost everything including kaguya bones, even if the blade misses the vibrating and heated air still burns the oppenet if there still a foot in range.
    By focusing chakra into the sheild it forms a shield a chakra shild like chiyo arm to protect them from projectiles n B rank jutsu's
    By focusing Chakra and elemental into the hollow part of the blade and slashing releasing a wave of the used element in a form of a B ranked cresent shaped wave.
    Note:
    Whilst the blade is equiped n in use the use cant use ANY genjutsu or summoning jutsu's.
    Can only be weilded by Natsu

    Looks similar when its folded n the sheild



    When flipped out and extended
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    ~ Declined: OP~


    (Resansupea)-Spiral spear
    Type:Attack
    Rank:Forbidden
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:50
    Damage Points:90 (-10 to the user and another 10 if used with a elemental varitaions)
    Description: The user first makes a resangan in there hand then changes it shape into a large spear 6ft long, the spear is made of high condensed chakra. The use then thorws this at the oppenent with great force the spiral rotate it causing it to spin and propel it self through the air. When it strikes it explode causing massive damage to the area, the user hand gains friction burns to the hand which the user gets from the spear spinning in there hand.
    Diferent elemental varitions can be made by adding elemental chakra exceot earth.
    Water:Explodes causing massive pressure damage to the area and the oppenents body shaatering there bones
    Wind: explodes causing slicing damage to the oppenent n area
    Fire:Explodes causing a gaint explosion incenrating the oppent and a large area.
    Lighting: Explodes shocking the oppenent And electric burns to the oppenents body and destorying the surrounding area and leaving a crater.
    Note:
    Can only be used 3 time, if used anymore the user cant mold there chakra
    As it spins in the users hand whilst molding it burns n damages the user hand, through friction burn.


    ~Ask Grim pr Roku to also check plz~
    ~Declined~ A Jutsu just like this already exists.
     
         
    Last edited by RokuNR; 12-30-2009 at 01:09 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Ikazuchi Uesama Gigei: Raikou Shinzo) - Thunder Emperor Arts: Divine Lightning Spear
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user releases Raiton chakra and slams his palms on the ground and spears of Lightning appear on the ground impaling the opponent. This jutsu can only be used 3 times.

    (Ikazuchi Uesama Gigei: Tenrai Toraidento)- Thunder Emperor Arts: Divine Trident
    Type:Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:50
    Damage:90
    Descripton: After chakra sensing rain is made, the user concentrates Raiton chakra on the rain and makes tridents out of it. Like the frozen rain tridents, the umbrella jutsu cannot counter it but you must go underground to counter it. This can only be used 3 times.

    ~Declined: unrealistic both, lighting from raindrops?~
     
         
    Last edited by ★ Rei ★; 12-24-2009 at 07:31 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Closed untill further notice
     
         

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    ~Done~
     
         

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Katon: sanshouuo rasen) Fire Style: Salamander Spiral
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description:By Focusing Fire Chakra In The User's Gullet The User Spits Out A Powerfull Spiraling Flame With A Salamander's Head On The Front Of It. The Blast Can Thrust The Enemy Back Due To The Power Of It. It Can Also Leave Medium Burns....
    Note : Only Benazz Can Teach This Jutsu

    -Approved-

    (Kenjutsu:keigoku) Sword Art: Punishment
    Rank : B
    Type : Attack/Defence
    Range : Short
    Chakra Cost : 25
    Damage Points : 40
    Description : The User Jumps Into The Air And Spins His Dual Blades While Spinning Himself In The Air, Thus Slashing Everything Around Him In A 1-2 (short) Metre Range.
    Note : Only Benazz Can Teach This Jutsu
    Note : User Must Have Two Blades To Use This Jutsu

    -Wrong info-

    (Kuchiyose: Ikazuchi Katana) Summoning Jutsu: Thunder Blade
    Rank : B
    Type : Supplementary
    Chakra Cost : 25
    Damage Points : 40
    Description : A Katana Made Of Steel With A Black Handle, This Katana's Origins Are The Village Hidden In The Clouds, This Katana Can Be Used With Lightning Jutsu And Is Of Unique Steel Itself.It Is Almost Unbreakable.
    Effects : +10 Damage When Using A Raiton Jutsu
    Effects : Can Absorb Any C rank Or Lower Lightning Attack
    Note : Only Benazz Has This Blade


    -Declined: similar jutsu already exists-

    (Kuchyose: Mizu Katana) Summoning Jutsu : Water Blade
    Rank : C
    Type : Supplementary
    Chakra Cost : 20
    Damage Points : 30
    Description : A Katana Made Of Steel With A Blue Handle, The Katana's Origins Are The Hidden Mist Village.This Katana Has The Attribute Of Water Within It.
    Effects : +5 To Water Jutsu
    Note : Only Benazz Has This


    -Declined: similar jutsu already exists-


    Summoning Animal:Ravens
    Contract (Scroll Owner):Benazz
    Users who have signed contract:None
    Summoning Boss:

    (Kuchyose:Karasu:shunshuu) Summoning Jutsu : Raven : Prodigy
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:A
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost:30 (+5 Each Turn Summoned) (+10 Each Turn If The User Is In Direct Contact With Prodigy)
    Damage Points:N/A (unless uses jutsu)
    Description:By Putting On Some Of The Users Blood On His Tattoo Or Scroll The User Summons A Giant Raven Named Prodigy.Prodigy Can Talk And Can Use Jutsu Up To B Rank, He Can Only Use The Jutsu That The User Has Learned. Prodigy's Personality Is Calm, Intelligent, Fast Thinking. The Longer Prodigy Remains Summoned The More Chakra He Absorbs Due To His Own Chakra Abilities, If Raven Has Contact With Anything That Has Chakra, He Starts Absorbing That Chakra.

    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:

    (Kuchyose : Karasu : Chi Karasus) Summoning Jutsu : Raven : One Thousand Ravens

    Type : Supplementary
    Rank : B
    Chakra Cost : 25
    Damage Points : N/A (If attacks +20)
    Description : By Using His Blood On A Scroll Or His Summoning Tatoo, The User Can Summon One Thousand Ravens That Can Attack, Surround Or Block Opponents Attacks (ravens can block D Rank Element Jutsus, Block D Rank Tai Jutsus


    (Kuchyose : Karasu : Kuroi Manako) Summoning Jutsu : Raven : Black Eye

    Type : Supplementary
    Rank : A
    Chakra Cost : 30
    Damage Points : N/A
    Description : By Using The User's Blood The User Can Summon A Regular Adult Crow - Black Eye, Who Can Notice Any Genjutsu And Release It With It's Scream, The Scream Can Release Any Level Genjutsu Except For Doujutsu Techniques. The Raven Cannot Be Affected By Genjutsu And Can Use Any A Level Genjutsu


    -Declined: From what we have seen in the manga Ravens/Crows are Itachi's summons-
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    ( Te-no Hira no go jitsuryokus ) Palms of Five forces
    Type: Attack / Supplementary
    Rank: B/A/S
    Range: Short - Long ( Depends on rank that's used )
    Chakra Cost: 25/30/40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: User focuses one of five basic element chakras on their hands. After it he claps his hands together creating sound wave that's going in every direction and is infused with elemental chakra. The wave that's launched can trigger various effects that are:
    - Water causes small amount of water appear with wave
    - Fire causes aura of warmth appear ( Melting ice attacks )
    - Lightning causes paralyzing and Numbing appear to opponents body
    - Wind causes Lightning attacks and tools repel
    - Earth causes Avalanche ( Size depends on rank of the move )




    -Declined: there is already a CE submitted for this ability-

    ( Suiton: Kugi No Ekitai ) Water release: Nails of Liquid
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: User infuses Chakra on battle field and manipulates the water sources turning surface of them into needles that are able of piercing Hard objects. The size of Nail is up to user. Requires only water source no handseals.




    -Declined: water piercing hard objects?-

    ( Genjutsu: Shitsunen no aoi Hinote ) Illusion technique: Blue flames of Oblivion
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: User can trigger this genjutsu from every part in his body. As the genjutsu is cast on opponent the world will start to slow down and Opponent will be set a blaze with Blue flames of Oblivion.




    -Declined: poor description and needs great genjutsu abilities to perform this one-

    ( Katon: Mokushi ) Fire release: Apocalypse
    Type: Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 50
    Damage points: 90
    Description: User releases Huge amount of chakra on skies and makes series of handseals. After it The sky turns into Red and it starts to Rain massive fireballs and Ash around the Battlefield. Can be used once in battle.




    -Declined: similar jutsu already exists; mine -

    ( Raiton: Kobushi no Zetsumetsu ) Lightning release: Fist of Extinction
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80 ( + 10 to user )
    Description: User focuses huge amount of lightning chakra on his fist making it Glow. After it user can hit it to earth or opponent that's nearby. If the opponent takes direct hit of this move the match will be over. If user misses opponent and the fist will hit something else it will release aura of lightning chakra that paralyzes anything it hits for one turn. Can be used once in battle.




    -Declined: OP and doesn't make sense, paralyzing aura?-
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦


    (Suiton: Dan'atsu Geyser) - Water Style: Pressure Geyser


    Type:Attack
    Rank:S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage:80
    Description: This jutsu requires a sword, and great water and chakra control. The user must stab the sword in to the ground (it can be any material). Then he flows his water chakra through it, into the ground. He causes a great volumn of hot water under pressure errupt from below the enemy. The enemy is blown in the air, he gets burned severely cuz the water is hot, and he is then left in a cloud of steam the geyser left there after it errupted.
    The user can be just leaning on the sword while he is channelling chakra into it, and it needs no seals.
    This is based on real facts:"Geyser"

    *Note:Can only be used by Nadare.*
    *Note: can only be used twice per battle.*
    *Note:Based on real facts.*



    -Declined:you need sth to heat the water first, must be a 2 attacks combo-

    (Suiton:Mizu Dangan) - Water Style: Water Bullet

    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage:60
    Description: The user shoots a water bullet from his mouth. It is a so called "fast" jutsu - the user needs no hanseals, he just focuses his water chakra in his gullet, and then shoots it out from his mouth with high pressure and speed. The bullet is a small projectile but with cannon like power. The jutsu is done quicker than a trigger is pressed.
    *Note: Can only be used by Nadare.*
    *Note: Doesn't need a water source.*



    -Declined: it takes time to actually focus all water chakra in the gullet and then shoot it out. If you edit the pink part, the jutsu is okay-


    (Fuuton:Kuuki Kouka) - Wind Style: Atmosphere Hardening

    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:Forbbidden
    Range:Long
    Chakra Cost:50
    Description:The user concentrates, and focuses his chakra in the atmosphere around him. The user uses air participles, to gather. The air becomes harder to breath, and gains on weight, and looses on volum. This means, that more air is gathered on a smaller place. The participles are so much focused on one area, that it's impossible for anybody in the area, to use any wind, storm or lightning attacks.
    *Note: Can only be teached/used by Nadare.*
    *Note: Leaves the user almost completely drained of chakra.*
    *Note: Can only be used once.*
    *Note: Lasts 4 turns.*



    -Declined: similar jutsu already exists-
     
         
    Last edited by ★ Rei ★; 01-07-2010 at 07:06 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    I am updating the following custom:

    Mud Release: Mud Hardening
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: All
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user will form a single hand sign and any mud jutsu or source will immediately harden. If the opponent has mud on them, it will harden as well. The opponent won't be able to move the part of their body that is covered in the hardened mud.
    Note: The user does not need to have physical contact with the mud he/she wishes to harden.

    Into this:

    Earth Release: Mud Hardening (Doton: Doro Katame)
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user hardens any existing mud into dense earth. This jutsu can be used on jutsus that involve mud, such as Earth Release: Great Mud River. It can also be used on mud that is on the opponent.
    Note: Contact with the mud is not necessary to use this jutsu.
    Note: Can only be used three times per battle.


    -Update approved-
     
         
    Last edited by ★ Rei ★; 01-07-2010 at 07:06 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Katon:kujo nami(Fire style:destuction wave)

    Type: Attack
    Rank:A
    Range: Mid-Long-range
    Chakra:30
    Damage points: 55
    Description: The user must concertrate thieir chakra through two parts of the body(both hands and mouth)then the is to spit out a blob of stange lava-like substance.Now the user must wait for a few minutes for the substance to start seeping in the ground then the user will let out a outburst of chakra at the substance threrfore giving it more strenght.Then finally the user takes out a double-weielded blade and slashes it into the ground threrfore shooting the incereased strenght substance at the advesary.The opponent will be severly burned by the substance
    Requirements*A double-weielded blade
    Note*Anbu578 can only train this jutsu


    || Declined: you don't have lava||
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    ( Genjutsu:Ken no Makai ) - Illusion Technigue:Blade of hell

    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    Range:Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60 (None if triggered by Sharingan)
    Description:When the Genjutsu is casted user looks to enemys eyes and enemy is surrounded by place that looks like fightning arena after enemy looks to the user.Users hand makes a white glow and the blade appears to users hand.Then user runs to the opponent.First cutting opponents other hand off then user sweeps the opponent.when opponent is slipping user makes strong kick to head.
    *NOTE:Can Be triggered by Sharingan And kai*
    *NOTE:Usable 2 times per battle*
    *NOTEnly Suffering Pain is able to Use/Teach This jutsu*



    -Approved-

    ( Raiton: Denkou Kumo ) - Lightning Style: Lightning clouds

    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    Range:Short - Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description:After making the handseals user raises his/her palms and makes lightning bolt to sky.Bolt activates 2 clouds that touches each other and make then to one big.After that they make the big one to much small ones that shoot lightning bolts to the opponent and shock him/her.
    *NOTE:Usable For 2 Times Per Battle*
    *NOTE:Suffering pain is able to use/Teach this jutsu*



    -Declined: similar jutsu already exists both in manga and as a custom-

    ( Fuuton: Nobiru no katana ) - Wind release: Extending katana

    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Chakra cost: 25
    Range: Short
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: User focuses wind chakra on sword to extend the length of blade and make it sharper.
    * Only suffering pain is able is able to use/Teach this jutsu *



    ||Declined: is your chakra base metal? ||

    ( Doton:Funkakou no yusarus ) - Earth Style:Crater of Rocks

    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    Range:Short - Long
    Chakra cost:30
    Damage points:60
    Description:user focuses earth chakra to his/her hands and touches earth with his/her hands and makes crater under the enemy.Crater sucks the enemy into crater and the rocks start to move while opponent is stuck at the sucking point and the rocks crush the opponent under them.
    *NOTE:Usable 3 times per battle*
    *NOTE:Suffering Pain is able to Use/Teach this jutsu*


    -Approved-

    ( Katon:Kyojin Kaen Butoukai ) - Fire Style: Giant Blaze Ball

    Rank:A
    Range:Short - Long
    Chakra cost:30
    Damage points:35 - 25 for explode
    Description:User Concetrates Fire Chakra in Their Stomach And When they are Ready user puts their hands together and Spitting out large Blaze ball that Can burn forest and cause burn wounds to enemy to enemy who gets hit of the large fireball.When the fireball hits something it explodes causing big Explode sound to air.
    *NOTEnly Suffering Pain is able to Use/Teach this jutsu*
    *NOTE:This can be used 3 Times Per Battle*



    -Declined: similar jutsu already exists-
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Kaito-sama View Post

    (Amatsuyakunan) - Heaven's Calamity

    Type: Attack/Defence/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: A powerful broadsword that carries the name Calamity. It's an overwelming sword that strikes fear in the hearts of men just be looking at it, however the aura it releases is nothing compared to what it really can do...they say it drives man mad by making their worst nightmares come true.
    Gives +10 damage for every taijutsu technique (due to its size)
    E-D rank genjutsu doesn't work on the user
    The users genjutsu becomes a lot stronger. As a result the rank of the jutsu he casts raises one rank (can only be used twice per battle)
    The user can cast a genjutsu on itself by looking to his blade when he casts it, as a result it is reflected on him. This way the user can get himself out of a genjutsu, depending on the rank of the genjutsu he casted and in wich he is in (example to free yourself from an A-rank he needs to cast an A-rank on the sword). If the user isn't under a genjutsu and he casts it, he is immune for genjutsu for one turn, depending on the rank of jutsu he casted on himself (can only be used once per battle)

    *The sword is indestructible (this doesn't mean it can destroy everything)*
    *The effects don't have effect on Tsukuyomi*
    *Can only be wielded by Kaito-sama*




    ~Declined: doesn't make sense, genjutsu over genjutsu~

    (Shiro Kiba Kaimoui) White Fang Slash Fury

    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: After Activating the Sixth sense to increase the users focus and reflexes the user will concentrate their chakra into their sword and then the user will release a burst of chakra out their feet to send them at a fast speed towards the enemy target and the sword will reflect natural light from the chakra concentration in the sword and then strike the enemy 15 times in all directions leaving a trail of white light from the speed of the attacks. The reflected light makes it hard for the enemy to accurately defend against these strikes.

    Note: Can only be used 3 times
    Note: Must Know Sixth Sense
    Note: Can only be taught by Kaito-sama

    ~Pending: define the speed plz~

    (Quezacotl Takaoushou Za Kihou Sora) - Quezacotl Hawk King of the high skies

    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Quezacotl is the King of The Hawks and Ancient ruler of old times. He has the power to bend lightning element to his will making him able to use lightning element up to the users rank. He flies around with swift speeds and at high altitudes making him a hard target and as he flies around he leaves behind a trail of golden light made from the release of natural lightning energy built up in his body which then causes a thunderstorm to decend onto the battlefield.

    Note: Can only be summoned 2 times and lasts 4 turns
    Note: Must sign the Giant Hawk contract from Kaito-sama.



    ~Pending: More details are needed~
    (Amatsuyakunan) - Heaven's Calamity

    Type: Attack/Defence/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: A powerful broadsword that carries the name Heavens Calamity. It's an overwelming sword that strikes fear in the hearts of men just be looking at it, however the aura it releases is nothing compared to what it really can do...they say it drives man mad by making their worst nightmares come true.
    Gives +10 damage for every taijutsu technique (due to its size)
    E-D rank genjutsu doesn't work on the user
    The users genjutsu becomes a lot stronger. As a result the rank of the jutsu he casts raises one rank (can only be used twice per battle)
    The user can make his sword absorb the chakra of the enemy that has been implanted into the users body from a genjutsu cast upon them.The same cost applies for the level of genjutsu cast upon him for exmple an A rank genjutsu would cost 30 chakra points to escape the genjutsu(can only be used once per battle)

    *The sword is indestructible (this doesn't mean it can destroy everything)*
    *The effects don't have effect on Tsukuyomi*
    *Can only be wielded by Kaito-sama*





    -Declined: OP-

    (Quezacotl Takaoushou Za Kihou Sora) - Quezacotl Hawk King of the high skies

    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Quezacotl is the King of The Hawks and Ancient ruler of old times. He has the power to bend lightning element to his will making him able to use lightning element up to the users rank. He flies around with swift speeds and at high altitudes making him a hard target and as he flies around he leaves behind a trail of golden light made from the release of natural lightning energy built up in his body. He is capable of using his talons and wings as weapons making him a deadly force.

    Note: Can only be summoned 2 times and lasts 4 turns
    Note: Must sign the Giant Hawk contract from Kaito-sama.



    (removed the thunderstorm ability)

    -Approved-

    (Raiton: Raikou Kahen Arashi) – Lightning Style: Lightning Petal Storm

    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 50
    Damage points: 90 (-30 damage to user)
    Description: The user after making a few hand seals will create a storm of petals made of lightning chakra which razor sharp edges decend down around the enemy target covering them in all direction and then the user makes them spin around them in a cutting storm and then compress the storm of lightning petals before scattering them to the winds.

    Note: Can only be used once
    Note: Does –30 damage to user from chakra strain
    Note: Cannot use lightning style techniques the following turn.
    Note: Can only be taught by Kaito-sama and Anbu Kakashi

    -Approved-

    (Dōjutsu: Adachigahara Nikuyakon) – Eye Technique: Demoness the butcher of souls

    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Offence
    Range: Mid
    Chakra cost: 50
    Damage points: 90 (-30 to user)
    Description: The user traps the enemy in a illusion where they then find themselves inside a temple of the underworld and standing in front of them is Adachigahara the Demoness wielding a sword of black flames that is then swung down in a stabbing motion through the enemies stomach and causes the enemy target to bleed from their nose and ears from the severe torture of their mind.
    (The user receives –30 damage from the stress from chakra control)

    Note: Can only be used once.
    Note: Can only be used with Mangekyo Sharingan and Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan.

    -Approved-

    (Dōjutsu: Fudo Nenshou Gekido) – Eye Technique: Fire Gods burning Rage

    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Offence
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 50
    Damage points: 90 (-30 to user)
    Description: The user will cast an illusion over the enemy trapping them in a realm where they see a torrent of red-hot flames burn and surround them and covering them in fire. The fire then feels like the victims souls is being punished by the fire god himself thus causing severe mental scaring and leaving the victims in a wrecked state with their body engulfed in sweat from the intensity of the illusion.
    (The user receives –30 damage to themselves from the strain of using the technique and causes their eyes to bleed)

    Note: Can only be used once per battle
    Note: Can only be used with Mangekyo Sharingan or Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan


    -Declined: OP and the whole soul thing better be removed completely-
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    ice release: floating island (Hyouton: fuwatto Shima)
    ice release: floating island (Hyouton: fuwatto Shima)
    Rank:A
    Type: Supplementary/Defence
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The User creates an icy platform in the air which floats, this can be stood on and is about 10 metres in diameter.

    *resists physical eart attacks from below up to A rank and any ground based jutsus as i am floating*
    *can be melted with S rank fire*
    *can be used and taught by Kawagiri and any Hyouton user he or they teach it to*


    -Approved-

    ice release: Hall of The Ice King (Hyouton: Ho-ru no koori kokushu)
    ice release: Hall of The Ice King (Hyouton: Ho-ru no koori kokushu)
    Rank:Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: short-long
    Chakra Cost:50
    Damage: N/A (40 to user)
    Description: A huge throne room is formed around everyone with thick walls ceiling and floor all made of ice. The ice king sits at one side of the room on his throne to watch the fight. the throne room is an indestructable jutsu which vanishes after there is only one left alive inside. The ice king is also indestructable.

    *the User must win the fight within 4 of his turns after using or the ice king takes his life force (kills him)*
    *stops jutsus which use the earth or other non ice-based ground attacks (e.g. wood shooting from the ground) or rain as you are shielded from the outside (jutsus that require ice bases and normal jutus can be used as normal)*
    *can be taught by kawagiri only to Hyouton users, they may not teach or swap to anyone else.*


    -Approved-

    Ice Release: Tendril bind (Hyouton: makihige shibaru)

    Ice Release: Tendril bind (Hyouton: makihige shibaru)
    Rank:A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: short-long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Tendrils shoot out from an existing frozen object or mass of ice to bind the opponents whole body (including hands seperate from one another so they can't use handseals).

    *binds until after my attacks hit or are defended against*
    *if done from a frozen floor the opponent is standing on they can't react quick enough to stop it (anywhere else they can defend from it)*
    *if successfully bound the opponent may perform jutsus as soon as my attack has finished hitting them (so they dont miss a turn because of it binding)*
    *usable 3 times in battle*
    *can only be taught by kawagiri to hyouton users*


    -Declined: wrong chakra info, this is a S rank-


    Ice Release: Deep Sleep Hibernation (Hyouton: shunmin chippuku)
    Ice Release: Deep Sleep Hibernation (Hyouton: shunmin chippuku)
    Rank:S
    Type: Defence
    Range: short
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The ultimate defence for ice users. the user freezes his entire body and isn't affected by any attack. even amaterasu can't stay on the slippery surface and simply slides off.

    *the user is frozen and cannot attack this turn*
    *no jutsu can harm the user this turn (excl. hall of ice king effect)*
    *can be used twice but not 2 turns in a row*
    *can only be taught by kawagiri*


    || Declined ||
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Doton: Metsubou Za Tsuchi Tenshu) – Earth Release: Alters of the Earth Gods

    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user creates 6 pillars of earth rise around the opponent and then after making a few hand seals the user makes the earth below the enemy target collapses and sending them into a pit where then the earth will be made to explode and crush the enemy in a exploding fury of bombarding earth.

    Note: Can only be used 3 times

    -Declined: you need sth to make the earth explode-



    (Doton: Shouwakusei Arashi) – Earth Release: Asteroid Storm

    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user manipulates their chakra causing rocks and pieces of earth to rise into the air and with manipulation of wind chakra to increase the rocks velocity when they are sent at the enemy in a storm as them bombard the enemy and converging on a large area. (This can be used in collaboration with Nova Flame Bullets)

    Note: Can only be used 3 times

    -Declined: Manipulating your chakra won't make rocks move-

    (Katon: Shinsei Kaen Dangan) – Fire Style: Nova Flame Bullets

    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user shoots out large molten nova bullets of fire from their mouth that then are shot at the enemy covering a large area and bombarding them in a fury of fire bullets. (This jutsu can be used in collaboration with Asteroid Storm)

    Note: Can only be used 3 times

    -Declined: poor description; what is the speed of the nova bullets? how many of them can you shoot out?-

    (Dōjutsu: Akuma Kuroi Heika) – Eye Technique: Demon Black Swords

    Rank: S
    Type: Offence
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user will create and manipulate the Black flames into swords of black fire that spiral around the wielder who acts as an axis and then the swords would be controlled by the Mangekyo Sharingan Left eye and shot at the enemy hitting them in several places piercing their legs arms and shoulders and then burns them.

    Note: Can only be used 3 times

    -Declined: MS and EMS are OP enough, they don't need customs to become even more OP-
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦


    Type: Attack/Defence/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: A broad and strong sword made out entirely of Black Stone and beautifully decorated with gold. Though it's looks like a heavy sword, it's as light as a feather. As a result its speed is immense and can easily counter incoming attacks.
    It has a number of effects:
    • Gives +20 damage to each wind jutsu of the user
    • The opponents wind jutsu's loose -10 damage
    • The sword can be infused with wind-chakra. As a result it becomes sharper, but it can also double the length of the sword, making its reach greater.
    • By swinging the sword the user can send multiple shuriken at the opponent made out of slicing winds. These shuriken can easily be stopped by jutsu's, however they are a lot stronger than normal shuriken. In contact with normal ones, they just slice them apart without slowing down. Also their speed is a lot faster than that of normal ones.
    • The sword can also release wind currents that rapidly circle around the blade. These currents are strong enough to slice swords.These currents increase the damage drastically when the opponent is cut. A small cut in the arm can be enough to actually sever it to the bone.

      *Can only be wielded by Ingwer Hatake*
      *The sword is indestructible, though this doesn't mean it can destroy everything*






    -Pending: remove or edit the pink parts and re submit-
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Seishou Nenshou Baria)-Energy Combustion Barrier
    Type:Attack
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description:User creates a barrier of immense chakra energy. The barrier com-busts to send out a strong wave of energy around the surrounding Short-Mid range area that can level out anything in its path.This Jutsu Isn't controllable meaning if the user gets caught in this jutsu they can harm themselves also.
    Restrictions:
    -Can only Be used once per battle
    -May only be used by ~Minato~

    -Declined: what kind of barrier is this? Bleach type?-

    (Raiton:Zeus' Gekido)-Lightning Release: Zeus' Rage
    Type:Attack
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description:User creates a barrier of immense lightning chakra around the opponent. The barrier generates a large amount of electrical energy that severely shocks the opponent.The Barrier Of Lightning Chakra closes under the opponents feet meaning that if the user tries to use underground fish projection they will get severely shocked.Te Barrier also sends great electrical charges through the ground.Since there is an electrical shock going through the ground it intensifies the shock to the opponent in the barrier.
    Restrictions:
    -Can only Be used twice per battle
    -May only be used by ~Minato~


    -Declined: what kind of barrier is this? Bleach type?-
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    katon genjutsu oni yakedo shinkirou: fire style illusion demonic mirage incenerations
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: All
    Chakra: 40
    Damge Points: 80
    Description: the user manipulates fire chakra causing the immediate area around the opponent to intensly heat up, as they feel the increase in heat they are entranced into an illusion where they see nothing in the environment change only the user making seals in a fast manner. they then see he ground below them erupt into flames. the flames then take the form of a demon which blasts them with blue fire.

    Note: if this attack is used from long range the user can only use two moves this turn
    Note: can only be taught by Iseris...
    Note: this jutsu can only be used twice per battle
    Note: can only be used while in demonic mirage state is active.



    -Declined: cause of heating they see illusions?-

    suiton genjutsu oni shinkirou se hakyoku) water illusion demonic mirage torrential cataclysm
    type: Attack
    rank: S
    range: Short
    chakra: 40
    damage points: 80
    description: after making the required seals the user sprays the opponent with a torrent of water from their mouth. the torrent is not powerful and will only wet the opponent, upon feeling the water the opponent is ensnared in an illusion. in the illusion they are blastd backwards by the torrent of water.the water then gathers together above them and takes the form of a moon, which then crushes them.

    Note: can only be taught by Iseris...
    Note: this jutsu can only be used three times per battle
    Note: can only be used while in demonic mirage state is active.


    -Declined: the whole idea is wrong again, cause they are wet they get illusions?-



    (oni shinkirou sute-to) demonic mirage state
    type: supplementary
    rank: S
    range: N/A
    chakra: 40 +10(every turn it remains active)
    damage points: + 20 to genjutsu, excludes demonic illusions
    description: the user completes a series of seals and then they cast an illusion where they turn into a demon.
    while in this state all illusions they cast gain additional damage and require intense amounts of pain to cancel. this illusion does not affect the opponent in any way.

    Note: lasts 5 turns
    Note: can only be used Twice per battle
    Note: can only be taught by Iseris...


    -Declined: no angels and demons allowed, and similar jutsu already exists-
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Name: (Katon :kasai uindo metsubou)-Fiery wind of destruction
    Rank: S
    Damage:80
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Range: Long
    Type: Attack
    Discription: In this attack Kakuzu makes Fire elemental combines with his Wind elemental to form an even more devastating attack. The two elementals will combine their bodies and each will emit their own jutsu blast from their mouth. The two attacks then combine in the air to form an even more powerful jutsu. Because the attack also includes Wind, a mere Water or earth attack will not be able to stop the whole blast.
    *This can only be used by Kakuzu*
    *This attack can be used two times in a battle*
    *The turn after this is used the elements wind and fire can only use B-Rank jutsus*

    -I have no clue what this jutsu does, please xplain better and re submit. I hope you don't mean you are spitting fire and wind from your mouth at the same time-

    I was given permission by Wrath to resubmit these custom
    (Satetsu soushi)- Iron Sand Creation
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Charka Cost: 25
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: the user pulls iron from the ground to make a large volume of iron sand which my be used in battle


    (Satetsu doragon) - Iron Sand Dragon
    Rank:A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short/Medium/Long
    Charka Cost: 30 (+10 for each turn this is active)
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: the user forms the iron sand into a large dragon which crashes down on the opponent or can shoot 100's of iron needles from its mouth.

    (Satetsu Soujuu)- Iron Sand Manipulation
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short/Medium/Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: the user controlls the iron to into any form which may be needed.

    (Satetsu Bun'ya) - Iron Sand Field
    Rank: S
    Range: Short/Medium/Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user will use his iron sand to break minerals into the ground turning them into sand, he then will add his magnetic powers to transform that sand into iron sand. The user will make this in a great schale turning the field into iron sand.
    Note: 1 per battle

    __________________________
    -Above 3 jutsus Approved-


    Custom Weapon: (waga sukai ringu) Mare sky ring
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost:50
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The Mare Sky ring is one of the six strongest rings in the world. After the user has equipped himself with the X-Glovers he can then active the Mare sky ring .When the user infuses the rings with chakra the ring will then fusion with the gloves doubling the gloves power. So now if the user was to do battle with a fire jutsu of the same rank the X-gloves would easily overpower the other fire jutus. The ring has lots of other powers but this is the only one known at the moment .
    notes:
    The rings can only stay fusion with the X-gloves for 3 turns
    Only can be used with X-gloves
    Once the three turns are up the X-gloves will be unable to use any fire jutsu for 2 turns
    Only can but used by Mato~kun

    || Declined || Keep it to Naruto RP plz
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Custom Weapon: ( Waga sukai ringu kujo) Vangola Sky Ring Blasters

    Type: Supplementary
    Rank:Forbidden
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user makes a controllable non-heatable fire appear from his ring on his finger, then the user puts the flame of his ring in a miniature box with a small oppening just fit for the ring, after doing this, two blasters (guns) appear in the users hands, these guns can fire S-rank fire blasts at the users will, or the guns can be aimed toward the ground gaining the user the ability of flight
    Note: Rules of Firing
    (D-rank Fire blasts 6 second releases)
    (C-rank Fire blasts 10 second releases)
    (B-rank Fire blasts 16 second releases)
    (A-rank Fire blasts 20 second releases)
    (S-rank Fire blasts 30 second releases)
    (Forbidden Fire blasts 1 minute releases)
    Note: when blasters appear, the user can only use fire element attacks
    Note: can only be used by Axle
    Note: only lasts 3 turns


    ||Declined|| Keep it to Naruto RP plz

    (kasai auto heki) Fire Out Burst

    Rank: S-rank
    Type: Offensive
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points : 80
    Description: the user builds up fire chakra in their body then exhales in through any opening in their body
    Note: can only be taught by Axle


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    (heishi mune houmen) - Dying Will Release
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: after saying "I activate the Vangola Sky Ring" The user releases 90% of their remaining chakra into a force known as the user's "Dying Will", the user's 5 senses are pushed to the Max, also it greatly increases the users reaction time and their speed and strength are dramatically improved ten fold, but this jutsu takes alot of pressure on the user's body
    Note: can only be used once per battle
    Note: can only be taught by Axle
    Note: only lasts 3 turns
    Note: after using this jutsu is cancelled, the user can only used C and below ranked jutsu


    || Declined ||
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Animal: Wyverns
    Contract (Scroll Owner): Iseris...
    Users who have signed contract: n/A
    Summoning Boss:

    Amphisbaena (amphisbyna): Queen of the wyverns

    (Kuchiyose: hachuu kouhi Amphisbaena)- Summoning: wyvern queen Amphisbaena
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range:All
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage: N/A
    Description: the user makes the required seals for summoning and then presses a palm to the ground summoning the queen of wyverns. amphisbaena considerably smaller than katsuyu. Amphisbaena like typical wyverns has one set of wings and one set of legs, and is incapable of elemental releases. her strength lies in her ability to cast illusions, through sigt and through the sense of touch. her blinding speed and immense physical power make up for her slightly smaller size. and her name means two headed, as she has a head at both ends of her body

    Note: can only be summoned once per battle


    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:

    cloud of darkness


    (Kuchiyose: hachuu cloud of darkness) summoning: Wyvern cloud of darkness
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range:All
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage: N/A
    Description: the user makes the required seals for summoning and then presses a palm to the ground summoning cloud of darkness.n he stands about 8 feet tall and his body length is about 12 feet in total. he has an aditional set of wings for increased agility. he is not built for endurance but is a speed demon. his areo dynamic shape allows him to cut through most wind attacks
    (up to B rank, unless they are cutting)


    -Declined: No mythical creatures are allowed not to mention that Grim holds the dragon contract-
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Raiton: Raikage Yougeki Gusoku (Lightning Style: Thunder Shadow's Assault Armor)
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40 (+10 every turn active)
    Damage: +60 to taijutsu and +40 to Raiton (-5 To User Per Turn)
    Description:
    By instantly releasing and wrapping his body in a layer of Lightning chakra, the User can electrically stimulate his nervous system and speed up his neural synapses to react faster to danger and push his physical prowess to the absolute limit, allowing him to gain tremendous raw speed and power comparable to Maito Gai in EG Mode. making it difficult, if not impossible, even for the Sharingan to keep up with him. The armor also increases his defense against Raiton and Doton Techniques. Drastically Reducing a Attack Even as Direct As Chidori. Due To The Constant Strain Of This Jutsu on The Nervous System the User Takes Damage Each Turn It Is Activate. He is Also able to sharpen the focus of this jutsu to aid in its piercing effects. Direct Taijutsu Would Be Foolish.
    (Allows Use Of Raikage Armor Techniques)
    (Last 3 Turns)
    (Usable 2 Times )
    After use no movement a turn afterwards.

    -Declined: OP-

    Rariatto (Lightning Plough Hot Sword)
    Rank: S / Forbidden
    Type:Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40 / 60
    Damage: 80 / 120
    Description: The user charges at his opponent, striking them with a Lariat move. This strike is powerful enough to blow away the target's entire chest. The attack is straightforward, though, and can be easily seen through with the Sharingan. Kirabi and The Raikage Can Combine Their Efforts Both Using This Technique at the Same Time to Create a Force Powerful Enough To Decapitate On Contact.

    -Approved: but this jutsu is not to be taught to anyone else-

    Raigyaku Suihei (Lightning Oppression Horizontal)
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: After Covering Themselves With The Raikage Assault Armor, The User Preforms a Backhand Chop. Stunning The Opponent. And Greatly Damaging Their Neck.
    (Effects Last 1 Turn)

    -Declined: Poor description-

    Girochin Doroppu ( Righteous Lightning Sinking Anger Lightning Axe )
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80 (-5 to user)
    Description: After Covering Themselves With Raikage Assault Armor the User, jumps into the air and preforms a downward kick on his opponent. The Power Of This attack is Strong Enough To Break Multiple Bones.
    (Usable 4 times)

    -Approved-
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Fuuton:Hisan Hitonomi)-Wind Element:Flying Swallow
    Type:Attack
    Rank:B
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:25
    Damage Points:40
    Description:Asuma's trademark move. Flying swallow requires great chakra channeling, for Asuma infuses his chakra into the blades of his tench knives. While doing this, Asuma charges towards his opponent at immense speeds. When the two shinobi meet, Asuma seemingly misses his opponent, but the chakra extending his blades slice through the opponent's chest, a very fatal wound. Asuma uses this technique a lot, leaving most of his opponents fatal wounds to cope with.
    *Note Can Only Be Used 5 Times*
    *Only Nemexis Can Use/Teach*

    -You don't need to submit jutsus shown to be used by cannon characters of the manga-

    (Katon:Kaijin Sanbutsu Nenshou)-Fire Element:Ash Product Burning
    Type:Attack
    Rank:B
    Range:Short-Medium
    Chakara Cost:25
    Damage Points:40
    Description:This is another formidable attack in Asuma's arsenal. Asuma can create cloud of lingering, super heated ash that covers the surrounding area. To do this, Asuma gathers chakra into his mouth. He then infuses fire based chakra within the chakra already in his mouth. To make a sort of ash type mist, he finally infuses wind based chakra to make it airborne. Finally, he shoots it out of his mouth, spewing it, and covering the entire area. This attack is very helpful, because once you are caught inside, you are immediately burned by the ash. Also, if the opponent is caught inside and takes a breath, his lungs are filled with the burning ash, causing them to choke. Only if they are immediately taken out of the cloud will they survive. Asuma can also click his teeth once the cloud engulfs his enemy, and the entire cloud ignites in an explosion.
    *Note Can Only Be Used 2 Times*
    *Only Members Of The Sarutobi Clan Can Use/Teach*

    -You don't need to submit jutsus shown to be used by cannon characters of the manga-

    Fūton: Ryū Kiba (Wind Style: Dragon Fangs)
    Type:Attack/Defense
    Rank:C
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakara:20
    Damage Points:30
    Description:This is an extension of (Earth Style: Earth Dragon Bomb), by accelerating the masses of mud to subsonic speed to the point they harden and become shaped like fangs. This jutsu is devastating since it can break some lightning based jutsu without problems.
    *Can Only Be Used 3 Times*

    -Declined: how on earth are you able to accelerate the masses of mud to subsonic speed?-
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kūsa Bōheki) Sky Sand Protective Wall
    Rank: S-rank
    Type: Attack-Defense
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Attack points: 80
    Description: the user summons a large amount of sand that takes the form of a shield in order to protect the area from an incoming aerial attack. The sand can then be used to attack by just releasing it and letting it fall down upon the area.
    *Note: can only be used by a sand user.
    *Note: can only be used 3x per battle.
    *Note: can only be taught by Toku.

    -Declined: similar jutsu already exists-

    (Kyousei suna mori)Great sand lances
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 50
    Attack points: 90
    Description: the user summons several lances made out of sand that are hardened at extreme pressure out of the strongest minerals in the earth, just like shukaku’s shield, and uses them to impale the opponent. The lances come out of wherever the sand is whether it be the earth or the sky, but they are not launched from the sand unless one is picked up by the user. This jutsu puts a great strain on the user from the amount of chakra needed to manipulate each individual lance.
    *Note: can only be used by a sand user.
    *Note: can only be used 1x per battle.
    *Note: can only be used by Toku.

    -Declined: similar jutsu already exists-
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (za genzou hyaku kobushi)- The Vision of a hundred Fists
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost:25
    Damage Points: n/a
    Description: The user will perform the needed handseals. They will then attempt to grab or punch the enemy with their bare hands; which will activate the Genjutsu. The victim will have blurred vision for about 5 seconds, and then everything will seem normal to them. Once in play if the user uses any ninjutsu or taijutsu, the victim will think that the technique was sent in their direction 100 times at once, making it hard for them to react due to shock, and difficult to avoid.
    Note: Effects last for 2 turns.

    -Declined: wrong chakra info-

    (Doton:Tsume satsugai ishi)- Earth style:Claw of killing stone.
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid(Short-Long if infused with a wind jutsu like Fuuton:Juuha Reppou Shou)
    Chakra Cost:25
    Damage Points:40(+10 if infused with a jutsu such as Fuuton: Juuha Reppou Shou)
    Description: The user will perform the needed handseals and will smash their hands into the ground, creating cracks that carve out 5 claws made of earth. They will then use their chakra to hurl these claws towards their opponent, but because of the weight and density of these stone claws and wind jutsu must be used to make it go farther distances, and to have more velocity.

    -Approved-

    (Doton:Mashin jiraigen)- Earth style:Devil’s Minefeild
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 25(explosion uses 5 chakra)
    Damage Points:40
    Description: The user will perform the needed handseals and push their hands into the ground below them. They will then send their chakra through the ground in a medium sized circular web. The user may overload a section of the web with chakra to cause an explosion to happen. Releasing an explosion of violent chakra and shrapnel from debris within the earth, that happens directly under the opponent to cause maximum damage. The explosion is the size equal to that of a hand grenade allowing it to remove limbs and the shrapnel to still cause damage to an enemy escaping from the explosion.
    Note: The user must keep their hands planted under the ground to use this technique. Amount of chakra put into the blast can be manipulated so that the user can attack targets close to them.

    -Declined: similar jutsu already exists/OP/ wrong chakra info-

    (Katon:Kabe enkou)-Fire style:Wall of Flame
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40(+10 each turn if oil is spat on opponent)
    Description: The user will spit out a thick liquid that was used once by the ancient Romans, that can burn on water. They will hold out a match in front of them as they do this process to create a type of flamethrower. They may spit this oil on the ground, on water, or on a person for it burn it's entire life. The fire burns so hot it can cancel out water jutsu of the rank of C and below. It cannot cancel those of B+ but neither can it be put out by them, but only spread around, pushing the oil.
    Note:Fire may only be put out by being smothered.
    Note:Fire burns for 6 turns.

    -Declined: I am missing the connection between Romans and Masashi Kishimoto. And btw this liquid was used by Byzantines and is called "liquid/Greek fire" -
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    lightning style: devils mask (raiton: mashin fukumen)
    rank: forbidden
    type: supplementary
    range: short
    chakra: 50
    damage: n/a (50 to the user)
    description: the user will put his hand over his head and focus his chakra and bring the lightning particles around the air into one forming a mask which the user then pulls over his head (causes a lot of damage to the users face) once the mask is on the user gains an insane amount of speed equivalent to the 6th gate and all the users lightning jutsu +40 furthermore the user gains the ability to create lightning out of nothing but takes 10+ damage each time he does this
    NOTES
    once per battle
    lasts for 4 turns after that each time the user keeps it on it is +25 damage per turn maximum of 6 turns
    wind jutsu go down in power -20 and it takes more chakra
    lightning jutsu take less chakra
    the user cant use lightning 4 turns after this is used and S rank lightning for the rest of the battle
    the user cant use S rank elemental jutsu the next turn

    -Declined: OP-

    lightning/water style: destructive vortex (raiton/suiton: gekiha kachuu)
    rank: S
    type: attack
    range: short-long
    chakra: 40
    damage: 80
    description: the user will put both his hands out in one hand he will focus raiton chakra and gather the lightning particles around the air to form a small orb (about the size of a rasengan) in his hand while in the other hand the user will focus water chakra and gather the water particles around the air into a small orb (same size) once done (process is very fast) the user will let his chakra go causing the raiton orb and the suiton orb to shoot forward and form into a vortex of water/lightning that is extremely powerful and can rip holes through things the size of the great pyramids and still continue
    NOTES
    three times per battle
    no S ranks the next turn

    -Declined: You need to know Yin and Yang for this-

    fire style: lava mine (katon: kazangan bakudan)
    rank: S
    type: attack
    range: short-long
    chakra: 40
    damage: 80
    description: the user will stomp his foot creating an underground tunnel which goes right under the opponent then he will focus his fire chakra and send it through the tunnel heating the ground under the opponent to lava the lava works very much like a land mine if the opponent moves at all the lava will erupt burning him to death however if he chooses to stay he will be burned alive by the lava
    NOTE
    once per battle

    -Declined: similar jutsu already exists and OP-
     
         
    Last edited by ★ Rei ★; 01-07-2010 at 07:50 AM.

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