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    first bio: Saikokotsu Kaguya

    This is my first bio for character so don't make fun of me too much because I don't know what I'm doing exactly. I just hope this is okay or cool. And this is not the final and finished piece.

    Basic Information
    Name: Saikokotsu Kaguya
    Nickname: the black blur of Amekagure
    Gender: male
    Age: 16
    Clan: Kaguya

    Looks: blue and red hair with some braids. Thin and pasty white skin. Small black vest and white mask covering eyes. He is decently tall and really lengthy

    Personality: crazy/insane/psychotic, witty, patient, and somewhat intellectually deep. He is super protective of The ones who he calls father and mother. For who ever talks down upon God and Angel of the village would suffer. Overall he is very respectful to his higher ups and leaders and is the most loyal in the whole village.

    Village Info.
    Village of Birth: Mist
    Village of Alliance: Rain

    Rank//Chakra Info.
    Ninja Rank: Jounin
    Specialty: bones
    Elements: unknown as of right now
    Your ninjutsu: unknown


    Background Info.
    History: a baby conceived from his dead mother after the Kaguya massacre. Raised in the rain village he was trained only by the best ninja in the village. Saikokotsu was trained to be the next in line to be the God of Amekagure after Pain would die. Sadly he was unable to keep the role as Pains predecessor because he was mentally unstable, and unpredictable. Since Saikokotsu was The rain villages most loyal, and trusted ninja He was made Pains #1 hidden prodigy. Saikokotsu Was to do all of Pains dirty work so his image wouldn't be tarnished so the people of the village could keep their god's (Pain) perfect image. He mastered in torturing, manipulation, stealth, and reconnaissance. Saikokotsu saw Nagato/pain as his father, and thinks that he is the legitimate son of the God and Angel of Amekagure. After the death of the two who he called mom and dad he Has to find his purpose within the village.
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    Theme Song and Background Music: http://m.youtube.com/watch?feature=r...&v=0i3Aa9NlxCk

    Battles

    Won: 0
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    0
     
         
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    Re: first bio: Saikokotsu Kaguya

    You need images, I think.
     
         

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    Re: first bio: Saikokotsu Kaguya

    You need to expand on this bio a bit.
     
         

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    Re: first bio: Saikokotsu Kaguya

    Too short bro. You also need more pics.
     
         

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    Re: first bio: Saikokotsu Kaguya

    Quote Originally Posted by -The Light- View Post
    Too short bro. You also need more pics.
    This.
     
         

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    Re: first bio: Saikokotsu Kaguya

    Quote Originally Posted by -The Light- View Post
    Too short bro. You also need more pics.
    Alright gotcha
     
         

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    Re: first bio: Saikokotsu Kaguya

    Basically what the others are saying Needs more substance, text, pictures, color.
     
         

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    Must be out your cranium, to
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    Re: first bio: Saikokotsu Kaguya

    Quote Originally Posted by xjimbox View Post
    Alright gotcha
    You should work on the history and make it longer.

    Edit: on you're ninja rank put Jounin.
     
         

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    Re: first bio: Saikokotsu Kaguya

    The bio is short.
    Btw you need 3000 posts to make Kaguya bio+ mastery of Taijutsu up to A rank which you don't have.
     
         

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    Re: first bio: Saikokotsu Kaguya

    Here is some info on requirements for this clan

    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=74380
     
         

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