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    The Final Fight Chaper 2

    Chapter 2: No Holding Back!

    Sasuke: Amaterasu!!

    Naruto quickly dashes to to the side with Amaterasu just missing him.

    Flashback of fight alongside itachi and bee

    Naruto: if those flames even graze me im a goner.

    Naruto: Shadow clone jutsu!

    3 clones appear 2 by his side and one in front of him

    Naruto: ( there's still one clone in the forest gathering senjutsu...3 is my limit)

    Naruto dashes toward sasuke at full speed with his clones ahead of him

    Naruto: ( he cant hit what he cant see)

    Naruto and his clones each throw a smoke bomb at sasuke's Susanoo)

    Sasuke's susanoo is now covered in a smokescreen.

    Sasuke: hmph! Those silly tricks wont work against these eyes.

    Sasuke locates naruto's chakra in the smoke and instantly attacks with susanoo

    Susanoo punches through the clones knocking the original back toward the waterfall, crashing into it

    Sasuke: .....

    Naruto slowly emerges from the water.

    Naruto: (dammit, that thing is powerful.)

    Sasuke: (that punch should have taken him out)

    Naruto creates 3 more clones

    Naruto: ( my senjutsu chakra is almost depleted . I gotta do this quick)

    Naruto holds out his hand and his clones begin the form the Rasenshurken.

    Sasuke: (what is that technique..? I cant get hit with that)

    Susanoo advances to it's arrow and shield form

    Naruto: Wind style Rasenshuriken

    Naruto tosses it full force

    Sasuke: Amaterasu!

    Sasuke forms amaterasu around susanoo's shield.

    Susanoo raises it's shield to deflect naruto's attack. Once the rasenshuriken lands, the black flames begin to burn at it causing it to fade quickly

    Naruto reverts to his normal form.

    Naruto: shit!

    Sasuke: is that the extent of your power Naruto? If so, this ends now..

    Susanoo raises it's bow and arrow

    Sasuke: DIE!!!

    Susanoo shoots his arrows toward Naruto's chest

    The arrow seems to hit ,crashing into the waterfall with extreme force.

    Sasuke releases his susanoo.

    Sasuke: (hmph.... and here i thought he had caught up to me)

    In a blinding yellow flash naruto appears right in front of sasuke

    Sasuke: !!!!

    In shock, sasuke creates a chidori aiming for the chest of Naruto

    Right before the chidori makes contact, naruto vanishes.

    Sasuke: What the hell!?

    Naruto : i gotta admit..

    Sasuke:!!!

    Sasuke turns around only to see Naruto staring him dead in his eyes .

    Naruto: if it wasn't for kurama you would have killed me back there.

    Sasuke: kurama?

    Naruto: thats right...

    Sasuke: i'll assume u mean that beast

    Naruto: he's no beast, he's a comrade of the hidden leaf. Come to think of it, kurama took the exact opposite path you did... heheh..maybe he could teach you a thing or two about handling all that hate.

    Naruto cracks a smile

    Sasuke: WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU SMILING ABOUT???!!!!

    Sasuke activates his fully formed susanoo

    Sasuke: HOW DARE YOU COMPARE A BEAST TO THE LIKES OF ME?! STOP ACTING LIKE YOU UNDERSTAND MY HATE !!

    Naruto: its not an act Sasuke. We lived similar lives.. the only difference is... i chose to deal with the hate i had inside.

    Sasuke: similar lives huh...

    Naruto: yep believe it or not we represent the same thing.. we just chose different paths.

    Sasuke: You never had any parents to begin with! You didnt lose your clan! You didnt watch the ones you love die in front of your very eyes!! STOP COMPARING YOUR LIFE TO MINE !

    Naruto: You're wrong sasuke.

    Sasuke:!!

    Naruto: i've experienced all those things. And that only made me more determined to erase the hate from this world. I've been entrusted by the Fourth Hokage! .... The savior......My father!


    Next Chapter : Talk no jutsu

    LMAO JK JK JK

    Next Chapter: The Same!

    Here is chapter 1 for those who missed it http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...d.php?t=279925
     
         

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    Re: The Final Fight Chaper 2

    Grt chapter love to read it.... :D
     
         

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    Re: The Final Fight Chaper 2

    Quote Originally Posted by Paintry4 View Post
    Grt chapter love to read it.... :D
    Thank you. Expect chapter 3 within 2 days xD
     
         

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    Re: The Final Fight Chaper 2

    Good chapter
     
         

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    Re: The Final Fight Chaper 2

    once again you have done a good job let me know when you release the next one
     
         

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    Re: The Final Fight Chaper 2

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    once again you have done a good job let me know when you release the next one
    Will do...thanks for the support
     
         

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    Re: The Final Fight Chaper 2

    Haha not much I could have helped edit anyways....when Sasuke mentions not getting hit by the Rasenshuriken all I could think about was Kakuzu T.T!!!!!!!

    Great chapter! Oh and just thought of it, but Kurama probably needs to do dome talking unless it there is a flashback with Naruto asking him to stay out of it as a request!

    Oh and Sasuke's anger outlash fit his character when Naruto tried to compare him with himself and Kurama
     
         

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    Re: The Final Fight Chaper 2

    Lmao ... U can make two series .... one troll fight n another the actual fight
     
         

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    Re: The Final Fight Chaper 2

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    Lmao ... U can make two series .... one troll fight n another the actual fight
    . And make naruto the trollkage????? Lmao!
     
         

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    Re: The Final Fight Chaper 2

    That..mister..is really good !!!
     
         

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    Re: The Final Fight Chaper 2

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    That..mister..is really good !!!
    And this...ms....is just the beginning..lol. thanks
     
         

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