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    Vivi Ornitier || ビビ・オルニティア


    "Oh, nothing... My face is always like this."
    ||Vivi Ornitier||
    Basic Information

    Name
    Vivi Ornitier || ビビ・オルニティア
    Nickname
    The Dark Akimichi
    Gender
    Male
    Age
    Thirteen

    Clan
    Akimichi

    Appearance
    For most of his life, Vivi's attire has been similar to that of a Magician. This obsession came about when he first saw his parents use Jutsu, being of a young age, he mistook it for Magic. As a result he wears a tall, tan coloured, pointed hat that casts a shadow over his entire face, which makes his face a mystery. Vivi's hat appears a bit too large for him and flops down his back instead of pointing straight up. He received his hat from his best friend, as a gift to help him become more confident. Vivi wore a blue jacket, green and white stripy trousers, red and white gloves, and brown boots.

    His current attire if much more colourful and elaborate (As seen in the image at top of thread).

    Personality
    For most of his life, Vivi has been quite timid and anti-social due to him being bullied by many others of his age. Vivi was shy and gullible, almost to a fault. Often stumbling over his speech and lacking in self belief, he was afraid to use his abilities to save his friends, believing himself incapable. After meeting his first friend, his attitude started to change and he slowly became more confident in his abilities and put more effort in his training. He also began to stand up to anyone that would bully him, even though he was weaker in stature and abilities.

    He strives to please the friends he has made, always listening to them or willing to fight their battles either along side of them or in their place. He will not insult his opponent or underestimate them. He has been shown to lose his temper and as a result, nearly losing all sense of reasoning and just goes on a merciless rampage. However he has begun to be able to show some level of reasoning when in this mental state as once when he attacked a friend he altered his attack pattern from something lethal to a less damaging attack.

    Village Rank and Chakra Information


    Village of Birth
    Amegakure
    Village of Affiliation
    Amegakure
    Ninja Rank
    Sannin
    Speciality
    Fire
    Earth
    Taijutsu
    Cat Summon
    Elements
    | Mastered
    | Mastered
    | Mastered
    | Mastered
    | Mastered
    | Mastered
    Your Ninjutsu
    | Mastered except Three Coloured Pills & Calorie Control
    (忍術) Ninjutsu | Mastered
    (体術) Taijutsu | Mastered
    (幻術) Genjutsu | Mastered
    (剣術) Kenjutsu | Need Training
    NB Taijutsu | Incomplete
    Customs
    Akimichi Clan Techniques
    (Bubun Baika No Jutsu) - Partial Multi-size Technique
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:15
    Damage Points: N/A (+ 7 damage to taijutsu attacks)
    Description: A practical application of the Multi-Size Technique which lets one expand their own body. The point of swelling a single part of the body is to use the weight to increase the power of one's physical attacks. Any bodily part may be augmented this way, but for ease of use the arms and legs tend to be chosen quite frequently. The speed of the expansion is exceedingly sudden, which makes it extremely difficult to avoid. Like the majority of the Akimichi clan's techniques, this one requires a considerable amount of chakra. This jutsu lasts for 2 turns.
    NOTE:Must be a member of the Akimichi Clan

    (Honebuto no Megaton Jutsu) - Big-Boned Megaton Technique
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive, Defence
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: 30
    Description: After performing the Super Expansion Technique, the user punches the ground twice before punching the ground on both their sides.
    Note: Can only be used by a member of the Akimich

    (Honebuto no Ikiwataru Jutsu) - Big-Boned Go Around Technique
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive, Defence
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: 30
    Description: After performing Super Expansion Technique the user begins to spin with thier arms out, punching the enemy repeatedly.
    Note: Can only be used by a member of the Akimichi Clan

    (Honebuto no Daibingu Jutsu) - Big-Boned Dive Technique
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: 30
    Description: After performing Super Expansion Technique the user will then jump into the air and fall on their enemy crushing them.
    Note: Can only be used by a member of the Akimichi Clan

    (Nikudan Sensha Suramu) - Human Bullet Tank Slam
    Rank: C
    Type: offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: 30
    Description:The user performs Human Bullet Tank, and then jumps in the air and bounces on the opponent.

    (Harite) - Open Hand Slap
    Rank: C
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: 30
    Description: The user funnels chakra into their hands the muscles are activated with concentrated chakra, and the thickness is also increased. The users hands become tougher and with use of their body weight behind the attack the user then thrusts their palms into the opponent sending them flying. This technique is strong enough to break through D rank and lower water and earth style techniques. This technique is a smaller version of the (Chōharite Super Open Hand Slap) that is used whilst performing the multi-size technique
    Note: Can only be used by members of the Akimichi Clan.

    (Baika No Jutsu) - Multi-size Technique
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This is a secret technique passed down in the Akimichi clan that increases the user's body size by converting their calories into chakra. The user can freely alter their size at will when using this technique and can use it for an extensive period of time. A common application of the techniques gives the user a very round appearance by mostly increasing the size of the abdominal section, which was done in order to use the Human Bullet Tank technique. Other, more common applications increase the size of the entire body, turning the user into a giant. This jutsu lasts for 4 turns.
    Note: Only Akimichi Clan members can use this jutsu.

    (Mizudan Suisha) – Ballistic Waterwheel
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage point: 40
    Description: After drinking in a lot of water - possibly from an opponent's water technique up to B rank, which also nullifies it. The Akimichi will use that water to expand their size like their Human Boulder and roll at the opponent. The water swallowed gives extra weight which does more damage.
    Note: Can only be used by Akimichi clan

    (Dai harite) – Large Open Hand Slap
    Rank: B
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: After using the Multi-Size Technique to increase their size, the user funnels chakra into their hands, which causes special markings to appear in them. The weight and power of the hands are greatly increased because of the larger size, the muscles are activated with concentrated chakra, and the thickness is also increased. With so much chakra that it becomes visible, the user's palms become like an iron hammer. This gives this attack the power to even cave in the earth, causing extensive crushing damage to anything that may be caught beneath them. This attack is also shown to have a wide range due to the increased size of his palms. This technique is strong enough to crush C rank and below water and earth techniques.
    Note: Can only be performed by a member of the Akimichi clan

    (Nibaite Su-pa Gachan) – Double Hand Super Slam
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user makes his right hand expand into a huge fist from Partial Multi-size technique and then punches their opponent into a boulder. The user then uses Partial Super Multi-size technique on their left hand and extends it to grab that boulder and slam it into the ground.
    Note: Must be a member of the Akimichi clan to use.

    (Chōdan Bakugeki) - Butterfly Bullet Bombing
    Rank: B
    Type: Attack
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: This is a life threatening technique if used in combination with the red Akimichi food pill, which burns away all of a ninja's excess fat and converts it into chakra. Because the members of the Akimichi clan tend to be overweight to support their techniques, this pill can give them 100 times their normal chakra level. The intensely concentrated chakra that is gained leaks out from the backbone and becomes visible through friction with the shoulder blade, appearing like a butterfly wing. The user then concentrates the unique chakra into their fist, and then puts all their body weight behind the punch. The massive amount of chakra concentrated is enough to change the user's body structure, reducing their overwall mass making them slender.
    Note: Must be a member of the Akimichi clan and have used the Red Secret Pill.

    (Nikudan Samazamana Sensha) - Human Bullet Various Tank
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user performs Human Bullet Tank and begins bouncing until brutally bouncing on the enemy two times while driving them into the ground on the third.
    Note: Can only be used by a member of the Akimichi Clan

    (Chou Nikudan Hari Sensha) - Spiked Human Bullet Tank
    Rank: B
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: 26(+3 if done as spiked human boulder)
    Description:With its effectiveness raised several times by using it together with weapons such as kunai connected by wire this technique is an enhanced version of the Akimichi clan's Human Bullet Tank. The user can also grow out their hair to wrap around his body, in a manner similar to Jiraiya's Needle Jizō technique, instead of using kunai. This results in far more spikes than the previous version, as well as a shorter preparation time due to not needing to wrap kunai around his body.
    Note: Must be a member of the Akimichi clan and use the Super Multi-sized technique.

    (Chou Baika No Jutsu) - Super Multi-size Tehnique
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-MId
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A (+ 16 damage to taijutsu moves)
    Description: The Super Multi-Size Technique is the height of the Multi-Size Technique, which multiplies the user’s body to a size beyond belief. The attack method depends on the situation and the user’s inventiveness, but massive punches, kicks and body slamming is common. However, the abnormally extreme physical change also places a large burden on the user’s body. The clothes of the user also expand along with the body. When Chōji first used this technique.This juts lasts for 3 turns.
    NOTEnly Akimichi Clan members can use this jutsu.

    (Daburu Nikudan Sensha) - Double Human Bullet Tank
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damage points: 50
    Descrription: The user will first use the expansion technique and then using the shadow clone and attack from both sides of an opponent with the Human Bullet Tank, crushing and grinding the enemy caught in the middle. (requires expansion technique and shadow clone)
    Note: Can only be used by a member of the Akimichi Clan.
    Background Information


    Prologue: Birth of the Akimichi of the Rain
    Vivi is the son of Akichou Akimichi and Ametora of the Village Hidden in Rain and was born in Amegakure. His father defected from Konohagakure's Akimichi Clan to go to Amegakure and his mother was an elected official that worked for Hanzō. His parents met in Amegakure, where his father had been sent on a mission to attempt to assassinate Hanzō, the leader of Amegakure. It was an unanticipated meeting simply by having a drink in the Tavern.

    It was an unexpeacted affair in which, Akichou would prolong his stay in Ame to be with Ametora. And as a result he, would fall in love and due to his love for Ametora, he defected from Konohagakure and started a life with his love.

    9 months after their wedding, Vivi was born. In his early years, from about the age of 2, his father trained him in the Akimichi Clan's Hiden Jutsu, and also in Strong Fist Taijutsu, mastering them by the age 5. He was then accepted into the Amegakure Ninja Academy where he graduated within a single year.

    Chapter One: The Sacrifice of Loving Parents
    A very traumatizing time in Vivi's life was when his parents died. It was when he had just turned 11 years old and during the time of the Third Great Shinobi War. His parents had been sent out on a mission as a scouting party. Vivi, wanting to help as much as possible, followed them.

    When he had finally caught up with his parents, he had found them severely injured whilst facing three shinobi that were from Konohagakure. He would later find that they were the Legendary Sannin; Orochimaru, Jiraiya and Tsunade. Seeing his parents in such a state made him loose control of himself and he recklessly attacked the Sannin. Upon being struck to the ground by a kick of Orochimaru's, Vivi was about to be struck by one of Jiraiya's techniques, how ever before it hit, Vivi's mother moved in front of him and took the frontal assault of the technique, whilst his father was attacking Orochimaru.

    Frozen in shock at the scene before him, Vivi was crying at seeing his mother and father, dying in front of him. Before he passed out from shock and exhaustion, he heard his father pleading with Jiraiya to let their son live, as it seemed that Vivi's father had once been a comrade of Jiraiya. Fulfilling their final wishes, the 3 Sannin walked away, leaving Vivi alone with his dead parents and on the verge of unconsciousness.

    Chapter Two: The Life of a Fat Fur-ball.
    When Vivi awoke from his unconsciousness, he found himself surrounded by Cats. Thinking that he must have died he began to ask if this was Heaven or Hell, which caused a small uproar amongst the Cat Family. Just before the smaller cats were about to attack, the queen of the Cat family called out for everyone to cease their actions of violence. The queens name was Rinsei and she was very kind to Vivi, taking him under her, metaphoric, wing. Taking him in as her own.

    For several months, Vivi was trained by Rinsei in how to summon members of the family, which of course meant that he was now a signer of their contract. By this time, the entire family had welcomed him and treated him like one of their own. However he had to return to Amegakure and was pleased to see that the home of the cats, wasn't to far away. And even though he lives in the Village, he spends all of his free time at the Cats Home, training and relaxing.

    Chapter Three: A New Friend?
    ~ Continued in next Update ~

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    Katon
    Katon was Vivi's first Elemental Affinity. From an early age, Vivi has displayed a great amount of skill in the use of Katon Techniques. Through years of training, he was able to have complete mastery over this element and is capable of using all fire based jutsu with only one handseal.

    Doton
    Doton was Vivi's second Elemental Affinity. He had also displayed great skill in its uses. As such of this skill and mastery, he is able to perform all Doton Techniques at a faster speed then that of the average shinobi.

    Taijutsu
    As a member of the Akimichi clan, Vivi has a natural talent for Taijutsu. He has displayed great skill in the use of Strong Fist Taijutsu as well as his clan's Hiden Techniques. Through years of training, Vivi has been able to increase his speed to a greater level then that of an average Akimichi clan member, despite his size.

    Cat Summon

    Summoning Animal: Cats
    Scroll Owner: Genryūsai
    Other Users who have signed contract: -S-
    Summoning Boss if existing: Rinsei
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:
    Bite and Nibble
    Chisoku
    Bubble
    Ninja Cat Element Squad
    Ninja Cat Restraints

    Miyamoto and Hattori
    Miyamoto and Hattori are blades that can be joined together or kept apart. Miyamoto has got a white colored blade that is 23 inches long and has got the name 'Miyamoto' engraved along the blade. The hilt guard is that of the black half (Yang) of the Yin and Yang symbol. Hattori's appearance is identical to that of Miyamoto, however instead of white the blade is black with 'Hattori' engraved along the blade and the hilt guard is that of the white half (Yin) of the Yin and Yang symbol. This is so that when they are connected together the hilt guards combine to form a complete Ying and Yang.

    Ninja Tools
    Wire
    Kunai
    War Fan
    Shuriken
    Flash Bombs
    Explosive Tags
    Smoke Grenades
    Demon Wind Shuriken

    Music


    Battles

    Won
    Many
    Lost
    More

    Notes
    Dropping Tsunade

     
         
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    Yes I realise that, but for the time being I am going back to my original clans, Uchiha and Akimichi, Also I am going to aim for a Custom Ink bio which will be William
    Ah, custom ink. That would indeed fit in with him xD Nice bio nonetheless. ^_^
     
         

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    Doesn't look like Williams... ~_~
    Yes I realise that, but for the time being I am going back to my original clans, Uchiha and Akimichi, Also I am going to aim for a Custom Ink bio which will be William
     
         

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    Yes I realise that, but for the time being I am going back to my original clans, Uchiha and Akimichi, Also I am going to aim for a Custom Ink bio which will be William
    Ah, custom ink. That would indeed fit in with him xD Nice bio nonetheless.
     
         

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    I hate to see Tsunade go, she is one of my favorite bios to rp against but it's a nice bio all around. I love the font and the purple @__@ they both go well with the pictures. The history is a bit short but that is to be expected from a newly created custom bio. A very aesthetically pleasing bio colors go well pictures fit not much criticism I can give beyond the short history.
     
         

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    Depends on what else would be in that bio.
     
         

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    Ah, custom ink. That would indeed fit in with him xD Nice bio nonetheless.
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    I hate to see Tsunade go, she is one of my favorite bios to rp against but it's a nice bio all around. I love the font and the purple @__@ they both go well with the pictures. The history is a bit short but that is to be expected from a newly created custom bio. A very aesthetically pleasing bio colors go well pictures fit not much criticism I can give beyond the short history.
    Yes well it is difficult to write a long history for someone who originally was 9 and not 13 Thank you very much for the comment!!
     
         

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    Nice bio man. Like i said, it seems that this character is more dark release oriented. Nice none the less.
     
         

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    Depends on what else would be in that bio.
    Just Ink....probably :\ Sensory would be awesome too

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    Nice bio man. Like i said, it seems that this character is more dark release oriented. Nice none the less.
    and Like I told you I like him more as an Akimichi and thank you very much for the comment
     
         

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    Looks great! Though since the AACT list got merged with the main list I don't think you need to put it in
     
         

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    so good i'm blushing!! I will never battle you! The background too is awesome! Nice bio
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by Shinta View Post
    Looks great! Though since the AACT list got merged with the main list I don't think you need to put it in
    Now I am told! *edits*
     
         

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    Good Job. One small problem. Change Village of Birth to Konoha as its an Akimichi bio.
     
         

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    Ohoho~ Vivi :D
    I'd recomend a more detailed history, just to give a bit more character But its nice as it is..never seen a Vivi bio
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by Hazama View Post
    Good Job. One small problem. Change Village of Birth to Konoha as its an Akimichi bio.
    His father defected before the child's birth. He was born in Amegakure. I thought that part was actually clever
     
         

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    so good i'm blushing!! I will never battle you! The background too is awesome! Nice bio
    Thanks and you never know! We might have to face each other in the future

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    Good Job. One small problem. Change Village of Birth to Konoha as its an Akimichi bio.
    I figured that since an Uchiha can be born in another village as long as it is explained in the History that an Akimichi can as well as long as it is explained in the history
     
         

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    great bio ^_^
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by Shin Kaito View Post
    great bio ^_^
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    Weldone , 9ce bio
     
         

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    Expanded history is awesome good job
     
         

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