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    Raijin

    Basic Information
    Name: Raijin
    Nickname: The Savior
    Gender:Male
    Age:19
    Clan:N/a

    Looks:Long Hair Length Something Resembling Hashirama's. Wears a jacket and Has Red and Black Hair. with pail skin. Very Tall Preferably Kakuzu's Height

    Personality:Very calm , Always Thinks Ahead , And always is looking for a fight , Never Gives Up No Matter The Situation

    Village Info.
    Village of Birth:Sunagakure
    Village of Alliance:Hidden Leaf Village

    Rank//Chakra Info.
    Ninja Rank: s-Jounin
    Specialty:N/a
    Elements:Fire (Needs Training)
    Your Ninjutsu:
    (Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
    Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

    (Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

    (Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

    (Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:N/A
    The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

    (Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

    (Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

    (Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)



    Background Info.
    History: Raijin Has Never Trusted Anyone From The Cloud Village after his parents were assassinated in front of him during the Third Ninja World War.He always says to himself he will kill everyone who was involved of his parents death.He lives alone in a house in Konohagakure and loves to eat ramen.He Wants To Master Taijutsu and other ninjutsu So that He Can Defend Those who are in need of help. Currently he is searching for a sensei who can teach him the basics of the shinobi skills.

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    Theme Song and Background Music: /

    Battles

    Won: 0
    Lost: 0

    ~Approved~ you're an S-jounin, not a jounin. Have fun RPing.
     
         
    Last edited by Artíst; 11-02-2012 at 12:55 PM.

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    Re: Raijin

    Elaborate a little bit...more colours,etc.
     
         

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    Re: Raijin

    rajin is a lightning god
     
         

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    Re: Raijin

    I Know
    Quote Originally Posted by Darksharinnegan View Post
    rajin is a lightning god
     
         

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    Re: Raijin

    Meh..I think it needs to be.....more colourful I guess? Thats the only word I can think of but it's kinda boring no offense
     
         

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    Re: Raijin

    Very bad bio. You should of lerned how to make one by now.
     
         

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    Re: Raijin

    Quote Originally Posted by Thoth View Post
    Very bad bio. You should of lerned how to make one by now.
    And how exactly is it bad? It's got all the information there, and he's followed the template. I don't see how liking to eat ramen and living alone makea a bad bio. By that standard, Naruto Uzumaki would make a bad bio.
     
         

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    Re: Raijin

    I See Just A Regular Bio , This Is Just For Training So I Wasnt Trying To Go All Out ,
     
         

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    Re: Raijin

    Quote Originally Posted by Alternative View Post
    And how exactly is it bad? It's got all the information there, and he's followed the template. I don't see how liking to eat ramen and living alone makea a bad bio. By that standard, Naruto Uzumaki would make a bad bio.
    I agree with Alternative.

    It's simple, don't like the biography don't post.
    He obviously wanted a regular biography, so he could start training.

    On topic: Nice biography, and good luck in the RP.
     
         

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    Re: Raijin

    You To There Mate
    Quote Originally Posted by Toshiro View Post
    I agree with Alternative.

    It's simple, don't like the biography don't post.
    He obviously wanted a regular biography, so he could start training.

    On topic: Nice biography, and good luck in the RP.
     
         

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