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    Unknown Tales of the Senju Brothers: Losing Control

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    “Madara, I do have a question if you don't mind.” says Hashirama as he stares down at his Uchiha opponent from the head of the One Tail wearing a stoic expression on his face.

    “What is it?” asked Madara, a bit startled by Hashirama's sudden curiousity. His eyes narrow into a glare as if attempting to read Hashirama's mind through the gaze alone. He casually places one hand on his waist with the other clutching his Gunbai tightly while his Kama is hanging on his neck by a chain.

    “The constant battle...the loss of lives...the sadness that follows. Won't you agree that the world will be better off without it?” Hashirama asks as his gaze turns towards the floating clouds. “Madara, you and I are both powerful men yet in many instances we have not been able to protect those who are dear to us. What does it profit us if the use of our power against each other only brings pain?”

    “Hashirama, the world is engulfed in war, we are merely players on this field we were born into. To be against battle is to be against existence. The only solution is an entirely new existence with different rules. Not that such is possible.” retorts Madara as he becomes shrouded by chakra. The chakra shroud magnifies in size to form a Susanoo having feet. “In this world, lives are but a small price to pay for the glory of victory in battle. So prepare yourself, Senju Hashirama!” The Uchiha takes a battle stance and his face loses all expression.

    “With all the power we have gained, it seems the opponent far greater than the two of us combined...is war.” says Hashirama with his eyes closed. The One Tail immediately lifts its right arm and a large volume of sand erupts in front of it and moves towards Madara to swallow up the Uchiha. Hashirama claps his hands and several massive wood branches erupt and are weaved into the Sand, combining both attacks.

    Madara sees the incoming attack and has his Susanoo attempt to leap over it. The transparent humanoid is nearly successful however, its feet are caught in the incoming wave of sand while moving through the air. “Damn!” Madara thinks to himself as the Susanoo is slowly being pulled into the attack by the sand. The Uchiha immediately deactivates the technique and forms a single hand seal. "Katon: Gouka Messhitsu" He spews a large amount of fire downwards and uses it to propel himself higher like a rocket, allowing him to bypass the sand-wood combo.

    Ascending to a greater height, the Uchiha reactivates his Susanoo and fires a number of tomoe shaped projectiles at the bijuu. They tear through its sandy flesh but the beast has no reaction.

    “Impressive that you were able to evade that attack.” says Hashirama with a grin. “Let's see you deal with the next one.” The One Tail immediately slams its palm on its belly and bellows out a large blast of wind from its mouth. The attack proceeds towards its target with great might, leaving a trail of destruction in its wake.

    “Katon: Gouka Messhitsu” Madara spews out a large amount of fire to counter the Wind technique but the flames simply merge with the wind and are turned into a powerful fire technique headed towards the Uchiha. Madara deactivates his Susanoo and prepares to shield with his Gunbai while flashing a confident smile. On clashing with the large war fan, the flames halt. “Uchiha Gaeshi!” Madara cries out and the attack is turned back towards the One Tail, pushing it back a bit. Hashirama loses balance while positioned on its head and is a bit distracted. Madara does not waste time in taking advantage of this opening as his legged Susanoo charges towards the bijuu while firing multiple tomoe shaped projectiles at it which tear through it with ease but no significant damage is observed as the weapons are far too small. The Susanoo leaps upwards, allowing Madara reach eye height with the Bijuu. The large racoon reacts by attacking with its tail, Madara forms half the tiger seal, looks straight into the beast's eyes and suddenly the tail stops attacking. Madara grins widely as he lands on the ground.

    “What happened?” Hashirama asks, confused as his face turns pale. The Senju leader watches the One Tail's tail swing at him instead of Madara, aiming to crush him much to his shock. He tries to leap off the bijuu's head to evade the attack but his feet suddenly begin to sink into the sandy mass of the One Tail's head, pinning him down. Hashirama forms a hand seal invoking Mokuton on the surface of the bijuu's head, the branches manage to capture the tail before it hits Hashirama. Mokuton branches also spring forth from Hashirama's own body and pull him out of the One Tail's head. The Senju jumps off the One Tail immediately. “There's no mistaking it. Madara has control over the One Tail now.”

    “What's wrong Hashirama?” Madara asks as he takes Hashirama's place atop the One Tail's head. “A bit scared?”



    Elsewhere, Tobirama moves to cut down the team of enemy Uchiha one by one while shrouded in a very thick mist of his own creation alongside with his summoned Edo Tensei.

    “Arrgh!” another Uchiha cries out as he is cut down by the white haired Senju. A thud is heard as his lifeless body falls to the ground.

    “That sounded like Ichiru...Damn it! We can't see him and his zombies. Using the Sharingan is meaningless since his chakra is in the mist. ” one Uchiha complains while clutching the sword his hand and trembling fiercely.

    “Calm down. I'll sense their chakra.” says another in a soft voice as he closes his eyes. “2 o'clock!” he suddenly shouts and his fellow Uchiha companions all move in that direction with their weapons at the ready, the image of one of the ninjas that emerged from the coffins Tobirama summoned earlier becomes clearer and clear as they approach him.

    “There! Its one of them!” says one of the Uchiha as he throws several shuriken at the enemy but they harmlessly pass through him. “What!” suddenly the attacking Uchiha starts bleeding from the side of his head and drops dead before his comrades.

    “An instant kill attack to the head. That's the Houzuki's Water Gun technique.” the Uchiha sensor comments., the calmness in his voice is absent this time.

    “What the hell! The shuriken went straight through him!” says one Uchiha. “It must be genjutsu! The one he revived can use genjutsu.”

    “I'm familiar with this one. Its the Yin Release technique that can only be used by a clam in conjunction with its summoner. It creates mirages that can even decieve chakra sensing.” says yet another elderly Uchiha. He is dressed differently from the others, sporting a long sleeved robes and armed with two swords on his back while the rest wear short sleeved high collared shirts of various colours. In the midst of the death that surrounds them, he remains completely calm. “I see....he uses mist to decieve our eyes and this genjutsu to inhibit chakra sensors...we have no way to find him.”

    “I tried to sense Tobirama's chakra but he used a large number of Water clones, his chakra is everywhere.” says the earlier Uchiha sensor., trepidation still present in his voice though he tried to hide it this time. “This genjutsu inhibits me from finding the Houzuki.”

    “Arrrgh!” another Uchiha cries out as he is cut down and his corpse is heard landing on the ground.

    “This was one tool I picked up when I battled a Houzuki clan user who was a skilled user of Yin Release along with his clam summon. Needless to say, it wasn't easy adding him to my collection.” Tobirama's voice echoes boastfully through the mist in a casual relaxed tone. “You guys are having trouble with only one of my pawns? I haven't even gotten started.” Tobirama taunts as the cry of another fallen Uchiha is heard.

    “Its true, we haven't even been attacked by the other ones he summoned. Is he holding back?” asks the Uchiha sensor.

    “Miroku,” the elderly Uchiha addresses the sensor, “locate the other Edo Tensei, we'll deal with Tobirama and the Houzuki later since we can't find them.” The Sharingan eyes of the elderly Uchiha undertakes a change; the three tomoe merging to form a distinct pattern. “I'll end it with my Mangekyo Sharingan.”

    “Alright. Shinji-san.”

    “Shinji....Uchiha Shinji?” Tobirama asks curiously. “So you're Uchiha Shinji, one of those who perfected the Mangekyo Sharingan along with Uchiha Madara.”

    “While my doujutsu doesn't hold a candle to the prowess of our clan head, don't underestimate the eye powers of an Uchiha!” Shinji retorts as he takes out the two swords on his back and gets into a battle stance. His eyes, though dimmed with age, give off an intense glare as he shifts his head in all directions trying to locate his enemy.

    “To heartlessly slaughter your kin to gain power and even go as far as stealing their eyes...sickening ” Tobirama says with a hint of anger in his voice, losing the tone he had earlier. “Prepare to die Uchiha Shinji.”

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    Re: Unknown Tales of the Senju Brothers: Losing Control

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    Re: Unknown Tales of the Senju Brothers: Losing Control

    Quote Originally Posted by Hipster Madara View Post
    I liked it a lot.
    Thanks man.

    Quote Originally Posted by Corbin12 View Post
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    Re: Unknown Tales of the Senju Brothers: Losing Control

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    Re: Unknown Tales of the Senju Brothers: Losing Control

    thats another good one from the best anime writer i have ever seen
    it was interesting but i think u missed 1 or 2 spots which i know you can fill
     
         

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    well i could have given you rep but it says to start spreading some more rep first lol hahahah
     
         

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    Re: Unknown Tales of the Senju Brothers: Losing Control

    Awsome chapter!

    Im waiting for part three. :D
     
         

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    Re: Unknown Tales of the Senju Brothers: Losing Control

    Quote Originally Posted by ~Madara Uchiha~ View Post
    great job as usual man :D wis i could give u rep better start spreading more rep around lol
    Me too Thanks for reading ^_^

    Quote Originally Posted by Kyuubi Uzumaki View Post
    thats another good one from the best anime writer i have ever seen
    it was interesting but i think u missed 1 or 2 spots which i know you can fill
    Mistakes? Blunders? Errors? I'm all ears.

    Quote Originally Posted by Kyuubi Uzumaki View Post
    well i could have given you rep but it says to start spreading some more rep first lol hahahah
    Me too. Tried to rep you. All of you for reading but I was told to 'spread some' -_- thanks for reading. Seriously, its awesome that you're following all three.
    Quote Originally Posted by Go0Go0 View Post
    Awsome chapter!

    Im waiting for part three. :D
    Thanks man. Will let you know when the next one's out.
     
         

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