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    Hoteye of Oración Seis



    "I was desperate to find the younger brother I lost. I thought that if I only had the money, I would be able to find him, but now I see that was all a mistake!"


    Basic Information
    Name: Richard(Real name)
    Nickname: Hoteye(Commonly used name)
    Gender: Male
    Age: 21
    Clan: None

    Looks:The tallest member of Oración Seis, Hoteye is a large and imposing man whose appearance is peculiar in the fact that he has a body consisting of geometrical forms with sharp angles, not possessing rounded parts. He has long, wavy and flowing orange hair reaching down below his shoulders, bright blue eyes with long eyelashes, a prominent, flat nose and full, feminine lips. His large forehead tops his eyes directly, due to the seeming lack of eyebrows. His massive torso and arms look even more massive if compared to his head, relatively small in comparison, and to his thin legs.

    Personality:He seems to have an obsession with money, as well as a habit of ending his sentences with "Right?" or "Exactly!", and tends to preach out his own personal anecdotes about money and riches to anyone within his vicinity, even in circumstances where it is obviously unnecessary and annoyed others including his own comrades. He is almost always seen holding a book close to him. The book he holds has the Jewel symbol on it, a possible reference to his obsession with money

    Village Info.
    Village of Birth: Iwagakure
    Village of Alliance: Kumogakure

    Rank//Chakra Info.
    Ninja Rank: S-Class Ninja
    Specialty: N/A
    Elements:
    Lightning(Want to learn)

    Your Ninjutsu:
    (Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
    Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

    (Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

    (Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

    (Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:N/A
    The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

    (Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

    (Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

    (Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)



    Background Info.
    History:
    Richard and his brother Wally Buchanan lost their parents very young and lived on cultivating potatoes in a Iwagakure. They were presumably captured by the Rogue Iwa-ninja and forced to become slaves for them.

    After a few years he and he brother escaped and went the separate ways. Richard scared that the Iwa-ninja would find them changed his name to Hoteye. He joined a missin-nin group called Oración Seis , and spent a few years happy with them. He believed he was showing the world the pain he went through and called it Tough Justice. He came to learn that you could do anything with miney and he soon became obsessed with it. Claiming that money could help you get away with anything even plain murder in front of a crowd.

    Him and Oracion Seis raided a small settlement on the border of the Leaf Village. They burned their houses and stole their money. Hoteye broke into a hut which hadn't been looted yet. He saw hidden in the corner of the room a father cuddling his two kids close to him. Hoteye shouted at the man asking where was the valuables and the man said that he had none. He started begging to let his kids go and that they were just a poor family with only little to live on. Hoteye got out a knife and threatened to attack unless the man told him. He would never really stab a innocent man and his kids, he wasn't that evil, and merely done it to scare him into telling him where the valuables where.

    The man ran at Hoteye in a last-ditch attempt for his kids to escape and both of the kids ran out of the door. Hoteye brought his hands up in defense as the man tried to barge him. Forgetting that he had the knife still in his hands it pierced the mans head and he started coughing blood and then fell to the floor. The man gestured to Hoteye too come closer and Hoteye did. As the man struggled for breath he whispered a sentence that shook Hoteye's world.
    "Brother its me, Wally"

    Hoteye left the settlement and the Oracion Seis behind and ran into the forest confused an terrified. Months later atfer living in total isolation he had realized that he didn't need money at all and that his brother had managed to live in poverty. And even with all the money Hoteye had his brother was still more happy then him. Later when he resurfaced he let the 5 great nations take their punishment out on him an he claimed responsibility for all of Oracion Seis's sins. He still had strong feelings for them and when he was in Oracion Seis was the happiest time in his life but he would no longer be like them.

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    Battles

    Won: None
    Lost: None


    (Note: This is my first bio)

    ~Approved~
     
         
    Last edited by Caliburn; 10-08-2012 at 10:11 AM.

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    Re: Hoteye of Oración Seis

    Wow better than my first one.
     
         

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    Re: Hoteye of Oración Seis

    You shouldda chose Midnight or The snake guy.

    But nevertheless, it's a pretty decent Bio.
     
         

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    Re: Hoteye of Oración Seis

    Not bad man.
     
         

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    Re: Hoteye of Oración Seis

    Desune! Or something like that. Hoteye's pretty cool
     
         

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    Re: Hoteye of Oración Seis

    Nice Bio. ^^
     
         

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    Re: Hoteye of Oración Seis

    Doesn't the history have to be in narutoverse..
     
         

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    Re: Hoteye of Oración Seis

    Quote Originally Posted by -Cerberus- View Post
    Doesn't the history have to be in narutoverse..
    I agree here, the history have to be related to the narutoverse, not FT
     
         

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    Re: Hoteye of Oración Seis

    Since this is your first bio, I do believe that for elements erase everything except for one. As this is only your first.
     
         

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    Re: Hoteye of Oración Seis

    This is Naruto, you just copy pasted the Fairy Tail history =/ Remove the entire history and write something that actually fits the Narutoverse.

    Also only state the first element you want to learn.
     
         

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    Re: Hoteye of Oración Seis

    Quote Originally Posted by Caliburn View Post
    This is Naruto, you just copy pasted the Fairy Tail history =/ Remove the entire history and write something that actually fits the Narutoverse.

    Also only state the first element you want to learn.
    Done. Did you like the story I made ? wease:
     
         

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    Re: Hoteye of Oración Seis

    Awesome background song! :D
     
         

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    Re: Hoteye of Oración Seis

    Quote Originally Posted by -Cerberus- View Post
    Doesn't the history have to be in narutoverse..
    Fixed it.
     
         

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