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    Zeen Kawagaki

    Basic Information:
    Name: Zeen Kawagaki
    Nickname: Poison Dart
    Gender: Male
    Age: 12
    Birth: April 7
    Clan: /


    Appearance : Zeen has a rock, punk-ish sort of fashion style. He has kind of long light grey hair that does not make him look old at all, he loves to wear hats, punk bracelets & wristbands. Most people notice his 3 scratches on the right side of his lower cheek, similar to the red painting on the Inuzuka clan. He has a silver necklace similar to his punk bracelet. The necklace had some sort of connection to the Inuzuka clan. Zeen was 5'1 and was 105 lbs.



    Personality : Zeen is a calm, out-going guy who loves to play sports. He always seemed like he had no emotion what so ever, like his mood was always content. On a few certain occasions like during missions, he would give a evil grin to the enemies like he was going to destroy them badly.


    Village Information

    Village of Birth: Sunagakure

    Village of Alliance: N/A



    Rank//Chakra Information

    Rank: Chunin

    Specialty: N/A

    Elements: Lightning (Needs training)

    My ninjutsu

    (Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
    Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

    (Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

    (Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

    (Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:N/A
    The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

    (Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

    (Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

    (Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)




    History : He and his family members attacked the Uchiha clan, and everyone but Zeen and his Younger Sister, Zeri were killed. Zeen & Zeri were found by an elder lady of Kirigakure who had been spying on Sunagakure, she took them with her and brung them to a nearby forest in Sunagakure, leaving them all alone. Up until now, No one knows how Zeen & Zeri survived alone... But they say the siblings were raised by someone who also had scratch marks on their lower cheek, which is how Zeen got his scratch marks on his cheeks, Although Zeen does not remember who it was that raised him and his younger sister, but he has a fate memory of a lady with red markings like scratches. Zeen & Zeri both are training to become a Chunin, although Zeen is becoming too enraged, he cannot control his power. When he was young before his family attacked the Uchiha's, he was always punished when he did something he thought was good. Although he always forgave his parents for that, he had some very deep anger hiding inside of him that released during his training with Zeri. His mother and father before they died, apologized to Zeen for punishing him to good things he did, Zeen eventually enraged in so much anger after that, he killed his own father. He had left his mother because he pitied her, And so she tried running back to her home, but was killed by Itachi before she could escape.

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    Theme Song and Background Music: /


    Battles:

    Won - N/A
    Lose - N/A


    ~Approved~ edited a lot of stuff, there is no Kawagaki clan, so removed everything about it and you can't use poison darts, only med shinobi and puppet users can use poison.
     
         
    Last edited by Sasori No Danna; 10-01-2012 at 05:14 AM.

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    Re: Zeen Kawagaki

    Nice..
    But
    # Bold the titles / use color to make it look good
    # Can use use spoiler for your ninjutsu
    # More background info and history as it is required to approve your bio..
     
         

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    Re: Zeen Kawagaki

    Done & done, but how do I put "spoiler" ? I'm still kind of new to this :P
     
         

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    Re: Zeen Kawagaki

    Quote Originally Posted by Sasori No Danna View Post
    Done & done, but how do I put "spoiler" ? I'm still kind of new to this :P
    Go advanced reply and select your text and click on the spoiler button on last row 5th from left..
    Add more history to your bio..
     
         

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    Re: Zeen Kawagaki

    Ok, thanks! And do I have enough history now? or do I need more? :o
     
         

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    Re: Zeen Kawagaki

    its a pretty good Bio
     
         

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    Re: Zeen Kawagaki

    Quote Originally Posted by Yuka View Post
    its a pretty good Bio

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