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    Asdeiro Asda

    Basic Information
    Name:Asdeiro Asda
    Nickname:The Sage
    Gender:Man
    Age:20
    Clan:N/A

    Looks:Asdeiro wears a white and green robes a white gloves and boots and wears as a weapon a gunbai he is young and has a juvenile appearance.He also wears a hood that hides half of his face.

    Personality:Asdeiro is a nice person and likes to help everybody he is the last member of his family that died with an unknown disease.He helps people because he doesnt want anyone to feel the pain of losing something important to you.

    Village of Birth:Konoha
    Village of Alliance:Konohagakure

    Rank//Chakra Info.
    Ninja Rank:Genin
    Specialty:None
    Elements: Fire - needs training
    Your ninjutsuBunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
    Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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    (Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
    _____
    (Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
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    (Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:N/A
    The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
    _____

    (Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
    _____

    (Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
    _____

    (Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)


    Background Info.
    History:Asdeiro has born in Konoha and he lived with his family in the forests around Konoha and he was a nice student of the academy he was great with shurikens and kunais and demonstrated good ability to learn things.When he was 8 a strange green fog appeared in their family house, the children were evacuated but only Asdeiro managed to survive.Since that, Asdeiro's objective was be a great ninja and help everybody and master all ninjutsu. After becoming a genin he is now searching for a sensei who can train him in all the skills a shinobi is required to know and use.
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    Theme Song and Background Music:

    Battles

    Won:N/A
    Lost:N/A

    ~Approved~ edited stuff, there is no Asda clan.
     
         
    Last edited by Caliburn; 09-30-2012 at 08:34 AM.

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    Re: Asdeiro Asda

    someone is going to link you the basic justus you have to put in the bio's but in my opinion they are pointless to list seeing how they are all e-rank and not unique what so ever
     
         

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    Re: Asdeiro Asda

    Remove what you wrote on clan. That clan doesn't exist.
    Remove speciality, you have none.
    Chose one element that you want to learn first.
    Under ninjutsu, write this:
    (Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
    Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
    _____
    (Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
    _____
    (Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
    _____
    (Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:N/A
    The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
    _____

    (Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
    _____

    (Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
    _____

    (Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)


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    Also, add any pics if you have :3 It makes the bio look better ^^
     
         

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    Re: Asdeiro Asda

    told ya
     
         

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    Re: Asdeiro Asda

    Quote Originally Posted by Okami the butcher View Post
    told ya
    Haha
     
         

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    Re: Asdeiro Asda

    Quote Originally Posted by Okami the butcher View Post
    someone is going to link you the basic justus you have to put in the bio's but in my opinion they are pointless to list seeing how they are all e-rank and not unique what so ever
    useless? that ain't really nice to say, at least Substitution isn't useless and Transformation is useful as well

    what's with you and things being UNIQUE? how do you expect jutsus to be unique? all cannon techniques are, well, cannon (or from anime), so how can they be unique? check some CJs or CEs, most are unique
     
         

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    Re: Asdeiro Asda

    Quote Originally Posted by Miggy View Post
    useless? that ain't really nice to say, at least Substitution isn't useless and Transformation is useful as well

    what's with you and things being UNIQUE? how do you expect jutsus to be unique? all cannon techniques are, well, cannon (or from anime), so how can they be unique? check some CJs or CEs, most are unique
    you miss the point of Unique Kage bushins are unique mizu bushins are unique bushins aren't
     
         

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    Re: Asdeiro Asda

    ty for the tips
     
         

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    Re: Asdeiro Asda

    no answer of the NB saying that is aproved or not '-'
     
         
    Last edited by asdeiro; 09-22-2012 at 06:09 PM.

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    Re: Asdeiro Asda

    yuuuuhuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu approved!!!1
     
         

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    Re: Asdeiro Asda

    Loooool
     
         

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