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    Naruto Chapter 601 - 602 - Betrayal PART TWO - by SCARFEEST!

    Naruto Chapter 601 - Betrayal. - PART TWO

    Before reading this chapter i suggest you read part 1 don't worry it's nice and short and it'll make you understand what happens in this one. :

    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...d.php?t=242324

    Kakashi: YOU WILL PAY FOR THIS OBITO! * Activates Gates *

    Obito: What is this..? you still have strength left in yo-

    Kakashi: Gate of Opening (開門, Kaimon) - Release! * Charges Obito *

    Obito: You know taijutsu won't work on me kakashi..* Uses kamui to absorb the hit *

    Kakashi: ( Still not fast enough..! ) Gate of Healing (休門, Kyūmon) - Release!

    Obito: ( What is he trying to do..? )

    Kakashi: ( This pain..is killing me...! ) * Leaps to obito at full speed and punch him * ( Did i get him?? )

    Obito: You fool..* Kicks Kakashi into the ground *

    * Smoke everywhere due to the impact of Kakashi hitting the ground *

    Kakashi: OBITO!!! ( Gate of Life (生門, Seimon ) - Release!

    Obito: ( What is he thinking? he'll kill himself before i will.. )

    Kakashi: (Gate of Pain (傷門, Shōmon) - Release!

    Kakashi: (Gate of Limit (杜門, Tomon) - Release! * By this time Kakashi is coughing up blood *

    Obito: Idiot taijutsu won't hurt m- * Kakashi appears from behind him with Rairiki full speed *

    Kakashi: You're done for obito..DIE!

    Obito: Idiot. * Obito uses kamui again to dodge attack but Kakashi's in the dimension *

    * Inside the dimension Kakashi charges with rairiki *

    Obito: What..?! but when, i can't believe i fell for the same trick...!!

    Kakashi: YOU EITHER DIE IN THIS DIMENSION OR THE OTHER! * Stabs obito *

    -Outside the dimension obito falls from the sky.. * Kakashi grabs him and performs the hidden lotus *

    Kakashi: Every day of my life, i kept looking back at That day regretting i couldnt save you or Rin, i've visited you're empty grave for every day of my life since you DIED!

    Obito: Urgh..

    -Flashback to Kakashi in the rubble when he got kicked in the smoke

    ( Raiton Kage bunshin no jutsu - Lightning Element Shadow Clone )

    * Impact of the hidden lotus triggers raiton clone to disperse and electrocutes Obito *

    Obito: You...you were always one step ahead of me..heh..* Passed out *

    Kakashi: I did it...i..leave the rest to you Naruto..and Obito..sorry about Rin.. * Falls down next to Obito *

    Madara: That weakling..now Jinchuuriki where were we..?

    Next Chapter: 602 : BETRAYAL

    I hope you guys enjoy this! not ment to be realistic

    ALL FAN MADE ILY ALL

    * EDIT *

    Sorry guys this isn't as good as the last one but you know fantasy got on to me ) i hope you guys enjoy here are the explanations of what the gates do, which is why he could pull of that last kamui on his clone:


    1:The Gate of Opening (開門, Kaimon), located in the brain. This gate removes the restraints of the brain on the muscles so 100% of their strength can be used whereas normally, a person can only use 20% of their muscles' strength to keep them from disintegrating. Unlocking this gate allows the user to use the Front Lotus.

    2:The Gate of Healing (休門, Kyūmon; English TV "The Gate of Rest"), located in the brain. Forcibly increases one's physical strength and temporarily re-energises the body.

    3:The Gate of Life (生門, Seimon), located on the spinal cord. Allows the user to use the Reverse Lotus. The increased blood flow turns the skin red.

    4:The Gate of Pain (傷門, Shōmon), located on the spinal cord. Increases the user's speed and power. May cause muscle tissue to tear on use.

    5:The Gate of Limit (杜門, Tomon; English TV "The Gate of Closing"), located in the abdomen. Increases the user's speed and power.

    6:The Gate of View (景門, Keimon; English TV "The Gate of Joy"), located in the stomach. Increases the user's speed and power. Allows the user to perform the Morning Peacock. Opening of this gate releases such enormous amounts of chakra that it can cause nearby water bodies to form a vortex around the user.

    7:The Gate of Wonder (驚門, Kyōmon; English TV "The Gate of Shock"), located below the stomach. Further increases the user's speed and power. Allows the user to perform the Daytime Tiger. Those who open this gate will pour glowing green sweat from every inch of their body, blue in the anime, which immediately evaporates from their own heat energy, creating an aura which people would mistake as a chakra coating. Unfortunately, the side effects of opening the gate are that the user's muscle fibres are ripped to shreds, causing intense pain if anything or anyone touches them.

    8:The Gate of Death (死門, Shimon), located at the heart. Releasing this gate uses up all of the body's energy. It makes the heart pump at maximum power and exceeds the power of every other gate. Opening this gate gives the user power that is even beyond the five Kage, but comes at the expense of the user's death shortly after.
     
         
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    Re: Naruto Chapter 601 - 602 - Betrayal PART TWO - by SCARFEEST!

    Yeah next one will be Madara vs Naruto centered ill make it if people like this one i already got some ideas and this was Kakashi vs Obito centered :D
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 601 - 602 - Betrayal PART TWO - by SCARFEEST!

    I like it :D
    Good choice of words, and the gates, that was baws!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 601 - 602 - Betrayal PART TWO - by SCARFEEST!

    why don't you just continue the manga and we will watch and read... just **** kishi...
     
         

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