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    Naruto Chapter 601 - Betrayal

    Naruto Chapter 601 - The end of the youth.

    Madara: It seems you're having fun here, obito...

    Obito: ?!

    Kakashi: Wait..is that Uchiha Madara?!!

    Gai: That's not possible the edo tensei was released right?!

    Naruto: You..what did you do with the kages!

    Madara: They're already taken care of, you should worry about yourself...

    *Madara stares at Naruto*

    Madara: So you're the kyuubi's host huh.. it seems you got full control over him, too bad i'm gonna take him back to where he belongs.

    Kurama: You will never control me again Uchiha Madara i will destroy you!

    * Naruto charges Madara at full speed *

    Madara: Silly kyuubi you haven't learned youre lesson have you?

    * Madara pulls his hand in front of Naruto right when he wants to punch *

    Madara: Shinra Tensei!

    Naruto: ( This is way more powerfull then the one Nagato used on me! )

    * Naruto tries to use his tails to absorb the force of the attack but fails *

    Kakashi: Naruto!

    * Obito appears behind him *

    Obito: Even with my eye you still have the same blindspot as back then!

    * Katon gouryoka no jutsu! *

    Kakashi: (Obito..i'm so-)

    * Gai pushes kakashi away and gets absorbed in the flames *

    Kakashi: GAI NOO!!!

    Obito: See how it feels kakashi?! that's the second comrade you've killed..

    Kakashi: No..Gai..Obito..YOU WILL PAY FOR THIS!

    -Chapter ends with Kakashi opening his gates and charging Obito.

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 601 - Betrayal

    I really love it! Best prediction till the chapter.
     
         
    Last edited by ~Dream~; 09-07-2012 at 11:36 PM.

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 601 - Betrayal

    too short
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 601 - Betrayal

    its still good anyway
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 601 - Betrayal

    Quote Originally Posted by Bijuu Kage View Post
    too short
    Sorry this was my first one i had no idea it was so short
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 601 - Betrayal

    nahhh ^-^
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 601 - Betrayal

    Pretty good
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 601 - Betrayal

    Quote Originally Posted by ~Tobi~ View Post
    I really love it! Best prediction till the chapter.
    Thanks i really apreciate it man
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 601 - Betrayal

    Who got betrayed?
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 601 - Betrayal

    Yeah i actually really like that too i just hope Gai doesnt die that easily. And i totally forgot that Kakashi could release the chakra gates as well
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 601 - Betrayal

    I like it, a tiny bit short though.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 601 - Betrayal

    Quote Originally Posted by Ninpou View Post
    Who got betrayed?
    I was originally gonna make the chapter based on Madara betraying obito but everyone already had it so i just improvised i'm sorry i don't know how to edit the title.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 601 - Betrayal

    Quote Originally Posted by ~Tobi~ View Post
    I really love it! Best prediction till the chapter.
    I agree with you and nice sig rep x 100
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 601 - Betrayal

    Thanks for all the kind comments guys maybe ill make one of 602 soon just needs some ideas and i'll make it longer without making it boring.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 601 - Betrayal

    Nice dude.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 601 - Betrayal

    Gai should only die after opening the eighth gate.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 601 - Betrayal

    mann just like kishi ch. sshort as hell but still like it. make a part 2
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 601 - Betrayal

    it was very....dull n too rushed ..try taking your time n choosing your words wisely :D

    overall, it was good
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 601 - Betrayal

    Quote Originally Posted by Uchiha Usman View Post
    it was very....dull n too rushed ..try taking your time n choosing your words wisely :D

    overall, it was good
    Yeah but also lately the chapters haven't been long at all and i wanted to make it short so people will read it cause i could write an essay about this prediction but most people wouldnt read it. ill make a part 2 though.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 601 - Betrayal

    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...23#post8287723

    This is the second part of kakashi vs obito i hope you guys enjoy!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 601 - Betrayal

    that's why i think there are many people who r better at story-telling that Kishi.
     
         

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