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    600 Prediction

    Title: Hatake Kakashi; A Ninja From The Village, Hidden In The Leafs

    ***Flashback to Obito's famous line, "Ninja who don't follow the rules may be considered scum, but ninja who abandon their friends are worse than scum. If that's what the ninja world is all about, then I'll destroy it!"

    *Kakashi: "Obito?!?! Impossible!

    *Obito: "Kakashi, I asked you of two things the day I made the mistake of giving you that eye. You failed in both."

    ***Flashback to Obito asking Kakashi to protect Rin and to let him see the future for Kakashi.

    *Kakashi (tear rolling down his face): You're right..

    *Naruto/Gai: !!!!!!!

    *Kakashi: "I let my comrades die. I let my comrades turn to evil. Every damn time when I realized I was wrong it was too late. I never got the chance to tell my dad he did the right thing until I died. I regretted every day when I thought you were dead. I was all Rin had and I let her die too! I thought I could redeem myself with the next generation and instead I've let Sasuke turn to evil and Naruto and Sakura just keep following after him. I have no right to li.."

    *Naruto: "LEAF VILLAGE SECRET JUTSU; 1,000 YEARS OF DEATH! (on Kakashi)

    *Gai/Obito/Kakashi: !!!

    *Naruto: "Idiot! I don't know what's going on but NEVER say anything like that! I've always looked up to you, and me looking down on you just doesn't feel right."

    *Kakashi: "Naru-"

    *Obito: "Naruto Uzamaki; The boy who changed Nagato?"

    *Naruto: "That's right. He taught me Pain! Pervy Sage taught me the way of a ninja. And Kakashi sensai taught me the importance of comrades!!!"

    *Obito: "Oh, Kakashi Hatake taught you the importance of comrades? **laughs** Did he teach you after he let me almost die? Or maybe after he let Rin die? Maybe it was after Sasuke left his comrades for power?"

    *Naruto: "It doesn't matter to you!"

    *Obito: "Allow me to explain my Ninja Way, Naruto Uzamaki."

    *Kakashi: "NO! It doesn't matter anymore Obito. I will accept my faults and responsibilities by ending this here. Naruto, thank you for being the best student a broken ninja like me could ask for. Gai, thank you for being not only my eternal rival but my best friend! Now step back, both of you, NOW! This is my fight. I don't have much chakra so it looks like this is a one way ticket. Obito, we can work out our problems in the next life!"

    *Gai: "No kakashi, we're in this together 'til the end!"

    *Kakashi "Stay back Gai, and live. Do what I couldn't and pass the will of fire for future generations! This is my final wish. This technique I'm about to use will end all this!"

    *Naruto/Gai/Killer B/Obito: !!!!!!!

    ****Kakashi: "Multi Clone Jutsu" **forms 2 rasengans** **adds lightning to both** ****

    ***Lightning starts breaking the ground and flying rocks everywhere, it's almost like a lightning storm in his hand***

    *Naruto: "M-My Wind-Style RasenShuriken but with lightning?"

    ***Naruto flashbacks to his Sage training***

    *Naruto: "Stop Sensai! You can't throw that unless you have Sage Mode! Your chakra network will shutdown and you'll die!"

    *Gai: !

    *Kakashi: "My name is Hatake Kakashi and I'm from the Village, Hidden In The Leafs! I've lived a life of regret, but now I will take responsibility."

    *Kakashi: " DOUBLE LIGHTNING-STYLE RASENSHURIKEN!"

    *Obito: "Damn him! He plans on transporting one to the other dimension and keeping one in this dimension while he simultaneously hits me and we both die, doesn't he?

    ******************END OF CHAPTER 600*************************
     
         
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    Re: 600 Prediction

    Not bad, I like it. :D +rep
     
         

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    Re: 600 Prediction

    +Rep
     
         

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    Re: 600 Prediction

    Thanks for the +Rep guys.
     
         

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    Re: 600 Prediction

    I like it. Its probably not exact but I think you are on the right track. And I don't think it will all happen in one chapter
     
         

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    Re: 600 Prediction

    i like the idea of kakashi adding lighting to his rasengan!
     
         

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    Re: 600 Prediction

    damn bravo bravo bravo that was a good read
     
         

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    Re: 600 Prediction

    Cool :D
     
         

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    Re: 600 Prediction

    Thanks guys. I edited it a little
     
         

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    Re: 600 Prediction

    Quote Originally Posted by Calbackshoot3r View Post
    Title: Hatake Kakashi; A Ninja From The Village Hidden In The Leafs

    ***Flashback to Obito's famous line, "Ninja who don't follow the rules may be considered scum, but ninja who abandon their friends are worse than scum. If that's what the ninja world is all about, then I'll destroy it!"

    *Kakashi: "Obito?!?! Impossible!

    *Obito: "Kakashi, I asked you of two things the day I made the mistake of giving you that eye. You failed in both."

    ***Flashback to Obito asking Kakashi to protect Rin and to let him see the future for Kakashi.

    *Kakashi (tear rolling down his face): You're right..

    *Naruto/Gai: !!!!!!!

    *Kakashi: "I let my comrades die. I let my comrades turn to evil. Every damn time when I realized I was wrong it was too late. I never got the chance to tell my dad he did the right thing until I died. I regretted every day when I thought you were dead. I was all Rin had and I let her die too! I thought I could redeem myself with the next generation and instead I've let Sasuke turn to evil and Naruto and Sakura just keep following after him. I have no right to li.."

    *Naruto: "LEAF VILLAGE SECRET JUTSU; 1,000 YEARS OF DEATH! (on Kakashi)

    *Gai/Obito/Kakashi: !!!

    *Naruto: "Idiot! I don't know what's going on but NEVER say anything like that! I've always looked up to you, and me looking down on you just doesn't feel right."

    *Kakashi: "Naru-"

    *Obito: "Naruto Uzamaki; The boy who changed Nagato?"

    *Naruto: "That's right. He taught me Pain! Pervy Sage taught me the way of a ninja. And Kakashi sensai taught me the importance of comrades!!!"

    *Obito: "Oh, Kakashi Hatake taught you the importance of comrades? **laughs** Did he teach you after he let me almost die? Or maybe after he let Rin die? Maybe it was after Sasuke left his comrades for power?"

    *Naruto: "It doesn't matter to you!"

    *Obito: "Allow me to explain my Ninja Way, Naruto Uzamaki."

    *Kakashi: "NO! It doesn't matter anymore Obito. I will accept my faults and responsibilities by ending this here. Naruto, thank you for being the best student a broken ninja like me could ask for. Gai, thank you for being not only my eternal rival but my best friend! Now step back, both of you, NOW! This is my fight. I don't have much chakra so it looks like this is a one way ticket. Obito, we can work out our problems in the next life!"

    *Gai: "No kakashi, we're in this together 'til the end!"

    *Kakashi "Stay back Gai, and live. Do what I couldn't and pass the will of fire for future generations! This is my final wish. This technique I'm about to use will end all this!"

    *Naruto/Gai/Killer B/Obito: !!!!!!!

    ****Kakashi: "Multi Clone Jutsu" **forms 2 rasengans** **adds lightning to both** ****

    ***Lightning starts breaking the ground and flying rocks everywhere, it's almost like a lightning storm in his hand***

    *Naruto: "M-My Wind-Style RasenShuriken but with lightning?"

    ***Naruto flashbacks to his Sage training***

    *Naruto: "Stop Sensai! You can't throw that unless you have Sage Mode! Your chakra network will shutdown and you'll die!"

    *Gai: !

    ****************Goes To Madara and Kages; Sky turns black, small lightning sparks fly around********************

    *Madara: "What is this lightning chakra I sense?!? Kakashi! He must of found out it's Obito!"

    *Tsunade: "No! Kakashi isn't going to do that?! ***Flashback to when he first attempted it and Tsunade found him almost died*** He'll die!"

    *Madara: "I've got to go help that useless man."

    ***Madara attempts to flee***

    *Gaara: "SAND TSUNAME!" **Title wave of sand goes toward Madara**

    *Garra: "Your interest is with me. Come!"

    *****All Kages get behind Gaara and face Madara******


    ***************Back to Obito/Kakashi/Naruto/Gai*********************


    *Kakashi: "My name is Hatake Kakashi and I'm from the Village, Hidden In The Leafs! I've lived a life of regret, but now I will take responsibility."

    *Kakashi: " DOUBLE LIGHTNING-STYLE RASENSHURIKEN!"

    *Obito: "Damn him! He plans on transporting one to the other dimension and keeping one in this dimension while he simultaneously hits me and we both die, doesn't he?

    ******************END OF CHAPTER 600*************************
    I like though I think kakashi might be a bit low on chakra to try something like that
     
         

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    Re: 600 Prediction

    ^ I think he would do it knowing he would die no matter what.

    Plot no jutsu for a hoorah Kakashi jutsu.
     
         

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    Re: 600 Prediction

    Nice +rep :D
     
         

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    Re: 600 Prediction

    ^Thank you.
     
         

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    Re: 600 Prediction

    gr8 +rep
    awesome
     
         

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    Re: 600 Prediction

    Awesome plus reps
     
         

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    Re: 600 Prediction

    Thanks guys.
     
         

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    Re: 600 Prediction

    Like it :D +rep
     
         

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    Re: 600 Prediction

    me like very much ahaha

    nah but i really like the idea of rasen-shuriken with lightniing = lightining chakra+ wind chakra = awesome strong attack!!!
     
         

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    Re: 600 Prediction

    ^Much appreciated guys.
     
         

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