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    [Bio Test -Third Raikage] Zero Kelvin

    Greetings, Zero Kelvin

    I will be administrating your test and the rules are as followed:

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    ~ Rules and Regulations according to Rei.
    ~ All basic elements and techniques up to your current rank are to be used.
    ~ Custom Jutsu's and Elements are not allowed
    ~ Terrain: wasteland, dirt and rock ground, no water source. Sunny day with extreme heat and no moisture in the air. Not a single cloud.
    ~ You may use Third Raikage's abilities up to your current rank Basic 5, Ninjutsu, Genjutsu and Taijutsu that you know
    ~ We start mid range from each other
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    I will be using a pair of Sage Ranked Onoki and Naruto (with SM and Full Bijuu abilities) biographies for this bio test against you. Please give a link to your bio that your testing and I will make the first move


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    Re: [Bio Test -Third Raikage] Zero Kelvin

    Senshō, the Third Lightning Shadow

    With a single motion, the Sandaime Raikage discards his symbolic Kage Hat and Robe, revealing a suspicious expression and a tense body.
    "Whoever you are, you will not cross this deadland before I've taken my last breath."
    The Raikage crosses his arms and cracks his neck, exuding an aura of confidence and power.

    ________
    How about making dialogue 'count' in the time-frame for once? Just for the heck of it?
    Oh, and Senshō is just a name I've given him. It felt kind of stupid to just call him 'Raikage'.
     
         

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    Re: [Bio Test -Third Raikage] Zero Kelvin

    Quote Originally Posted by Zero Kelvin View Post
    Senshō, the Third Lightning Shadow

    With a single motion, the Sandaime Raikage discards his symbolic Kage Hat and Robe, revealing a suspicious expression and a tense body.
    "Whoever you are, you will not cross this deadland before I've taken my last breath."
    The Raikage crosses his arms and cracks his neck, exuding an aura of confidence and power.

    ________
    How about making dialogue 'count' in the time-frame for once? Just for the heck of it?
    Oh, and Senshō is just a name I've given him. It felt kind of stupid to just call him 'Raikage'.
    Hum...ok.

    ______________

    YOU'RE GOING DOWN OLD LIGHTNING PERVERT!!!!!!!

    Youth these days... Naruto, calm yourself.


    Onoki and Naruto stand before the mighty hokage. Onoki on your right, Naruto on your left. An arms lenght separates them. In a burst of speed naruto jumps foward, as red chakra oozes from his skin. Engulfed in a translucid mockup of the Kyuubi with 3 tails, naruto runs on all fours at tremendous speeds towards you. Onoki took this oportunity to gain flight, getting Mid range above ground while he unleashes 2 giant fire balls up into the air above him. By the time the fireballs are airbourne, naruto has reached you and claws at you, using a downwards right handed diagonal slash directly in your chest. With his strength and power, this is more than enough to send you backwards, even if you don't take that much damage from it. The objective however, was to simply push you off your feet and not to damage you.

    (Reddo Chakra no Koromo) Red Chakra Shroud
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30 (-10 per turn)
    Damage: +10 to Taijutsu, +5 to Ninjutsu
    Description:
    The jinchūriki accesses his Bijuu's chakra and releases a portion of it into his body, triggering this initial transformation. By doing this, red chakra oozes from his skin, engulfing him in a chakra shroud that resembles a miniature, translucid version of his Bijuu (although with little detail), with a variable number of tails (depends on which Bijuu it is) and certain unique traits like the Kyuubis ears or Hachibi's horns. The jinchūriki gains a drastic increase in speed, being capable of fighting on par with almost any ninja and gets his Taijutsu damage boosted not only by the increased strength behind his chakra shroud but also by the chakra shroud itself, which damages enemies to the touch. In certain situations, the jinchūriki can also gain more animalistic abilities, such as running tremendously fast on all fours or viciously clawing on his enemies. The chakra shroud protects the jinchūriki from damage and grants him a high resistance to all C-Rank and bellow techniques and B-rank and below Taijutsu.
    Note: Can only be used 3 times and lasts for a maximum of 5 turns.
    Note: Can only be used by Jinchuriki bios

    (Furaito no Jutsu) - Flight Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30 (+15 per turn to maintain)
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This technique grants the user the ability to fly. Onoki is able to transfer this technique to others through physical contact with them for an unspecified amount of time. The Transfer of flight can only last one turn.
    Note: Can only be used by Onoki and Mu

    ( Katon: Gōryūka no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Great Dragon Fire Technique
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense/Supplementary
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user fires several large dragon-shaped fireballs at their opponent after performing one handseal. It is able to alter localized weather conditions to the point of making thunder clouds when shot into the air, enabling the user to perform Kirin.

     
         

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    Re: [Bio Test -Third Raikage] Zero Kelvin

    Quote Originally Posted by Scorps View Post
    Hum...ok.

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    YOU'RE GOING DOWN OLD LIGHTNING PERVERT!!!!!!!

    Youth these days... Naruto, calm yourself.


    Onoki and Naruto stand before the mighty hokage. Onoki on your right, Naruto on your left. An arms lenght separates them. In a burst of speed naruto jumps foward, as red chakra oozes from his skin. Engulfed in a translucid mockup of the Kyuubi with 3 tails, naruto runs on all fours at tremendous speeds towards you. Onoki took this oportunity to gain flight, getting Mid range above ground while he unleashes 2 giant fire balls up into the air above him. By the time the fireballs are airbourne, naruto has reached you and claws at you, using a downwards right handed diagonal slash directly in your chest. With his strength and power, this is more than enough to send you backwards, even if you don't take that much damage from it. The objective however, was to simply push you off your feet and not to damage you.

    (Reddo Chakra no Koromo) Red Chakra Shroud
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30 (-10 per turn)
    Damage: +10 to Taijutsu, +5 to Ninjutsu
    Description:
    The jinchūriki accesses his Bijuu's chakra and releases a portion of it into his body, triggering this initial transformation. By doing this, red chakra oozes from his skin, engulfing him in a chakra shroud that resembles a miniature, translucid version of his Bijuu (although with little detail), with a variable number of tails (depends on which Bijuu it is) and certain unique traits like the Kyuubis ears or Hachibi's horns. The jinchūriki gains a drastic increase in speed, being capable of fighting on par with almost any ninja and gets his Taijutsu damage boosted not only by the increased strength behind his chakra shroud but also by the chakra shroud itself, which damages enemies to the touch. In certain situations, the jinchūriki can also gain more animalistic abilities, such as running tremendously fast on all fours or viciously clawing on his enemies. The chakra shroud protects the jinchūriki from damage and grants him a high resistance to all C-Rank and bellow techniques and B-rank and below Taijutsu.
    Note: Can only be used 3 times and lasts for a maximum of 5 turns.
    Note: Can only be used by Jinchuriki bios

    (Furaito no Jutsu) - Flight Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30 (+15 per turn to maintain)
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This technique grants the user the ability to fly. Onoki is able to transfer this technique to others through physical contact with them for an unspecified amount of time. The Transfer of flight can only last one turn.
    Note: Can only be used by Onoki and Mu

    ( Katon: Gōryūka no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Great Dragon Fire Technique
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense/Supplementary
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user fires several large dragon-shaped fireballs at their opponent after performing one handseal. It is able to alter localized weather conditions to the point of making thunder clouds when shot into the air, enabling the user to perform Kirin.

    As the shroud envelops Naruto and the young'un makes his dash, Senshō's eyes widen in shock at the raw display of power. As the Jinchūriki nears his position, the shocked expression ripples into a deep-set frown as the Raikage makes an on-the-fly plan of attack.
    As Naruto reaches a range where 'braking' would be extremely hard due to his velocity, the Raikage's aura of confidence transforms into an actual aura of lightning that envelops him protectively. With his newfound speed and already crossed arms, Senshō moves his right foot backwards to support his weight better and roars a challenge as Naruto prepares to claw at him. As the Jinchūriki raises his hand to attack, Senshō twists his upper-body to point his left elbow towards Naruto, and, using his right foot to push him forwards, delivers a bone-crushing elbow-thrust to Naruto's nose, using enough force to turn the Jinchūriki's momentum against him and, most likely, sending him sprawling backwards with a broken face.
    By running on all fours and aiming for a 'high' spot like the giant's chest, Naruto's face should be completely unprotected, his balance off due to the change in equilibrium when he lifts a 'supportive' limb that high up and his defensive possibilities limited due to, well, him running on all fours.

    (Raiton no Yori) - Lightning Release Armour
    Rank: A
    Type: Defensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30 (-10 per turn activate)
    Damage points: N/A (+ 20 to regular taijutsu)
    Description: The user will wrap themselves with lightning chakra, which then electrically stimulates their nerves system and speed up their neural synapes to react faster to danger and push away any physical prowess to the absolute limit. allowing him to gain tremendous raw speed and monstrous power. This armour, combined with Taijutsu allows the user to utilize a Nintaijutsu. However due to being enveloped by lightning chakra, wind techniques cause more damage.
    Note: Technique lasts for 3 turns
    Note: Can only be used or taught by the 3rd Raikage or Raikage A biography


    (Erubō) - Elbow
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: After covering themselves with the lightning armour, the user thrusts his elbow at his opponent with extreme force.
    Note: Can only be used or Taught by a Raikage bio


    "Jinchūriki!"
    Senshō roar as he smashes his elbow towards the Jinchūriki. if his attack connects, he follows up by twisting his upper-body again, using his right leg as a balance-point to spin 180 degrees around clockwise, extending his right elbow halfway through the spin as to end up smashing it against Naruto's right temple. The speed granted to him by his Lightning Armor should allow Senshō to catch Naruto and hit him a second time, changing 'sprawling backwards' into 'sprawling sideways'. In the midst of the spin, however, Senshō forms a Ram handseal, causing a great, panther of Black Lightning to materialize around the Raikage. The creature immediately sets off, roaring towards Onoki's position while a single tendril extends from its body, zooming towards Naruto's broken form. Both halves of the attack aim for vital spots; specifically the neck and chest area. With his second elbow-thrust, Senshō himself makes a beeline towards Naruto's location, following the teen; wanting to ensure his death.

    (Raiton: Kuropansa) - Lightning Release: Black Panther Technique
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: After performing a single hand seal Ram the user creates a black panther like creature composed of electricity that seems to emanate from the users body. It can be used to attack multiple targets by extending from its body tendrils of lightning to electrocute the targets.
    Note: Can only be used by the Third Raikage or Darui
     
         

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    Re: [Bio Test -Third Raikage] Zero Kelvin

    Quote Originally Posted by Zero Kelvin View Post
    As the shroud envelops Naruto and the young'un makes his dash, Senshō's eyes widen in shock at the raw display of power. As the Jinchūriki nears his position, the shocked expression ripples into a deep-set frown as the Raikage makes an on-the-fly plan of attack.
    As Naruto reaches a range where 'braking' would be extremely hard due to his velocity, the Raikage's aura of confidence transforms into an actual aura of lightning that envelops him protectively. With his newfound speed and already crossed arms, Senshō moves his right foot backwards to support his weight better and roars a challenge as Naruto prepares to claw at him. As the Jinchūriki raises his hand to attack, Senshō twists his upper-body to point his left elbow towards Naruto, and, using his right foot to push him forwards, delivers a bone-crushing elbow-thrust to Naruto's nose, using enough force to turn the Jinchūriki's momentum against him and, most likely, sending him sprawling backwards with a broken face.
    By running on all fours and aiming for a 'high' spot like the giant's chest, Naruto's face should be completely unprotected, his balance off due to the change in equilibrium when he lifts a 'supportive' limb that high up and his defensive possibilities limited due to, well, him running on all fours.

    (Raiton no Yori) - Lightning Release Armour
    Rank: A
    Type: Defensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30 (-10 per turn activate)
    Damage points: N/A (+ 20 to regular taijutsu)
    Description: The user will wrap themselves with lightning chakra, which then electrically stimulates their nerves system and speed up their neural synapes to react faster to danger and push away any physical prowess to the absolute limit. allowing him to gain tremendous raw speed and monstrous power. This armour, combined with Taijutsu allows the user to utilize a Nintaijutsu. However due to being enveloped by lightning chakra, wind techniques cause more damage.
    Note: Technique lasts for 3 turns
    Note: Can only be used or taught by the 3rd Raikage or Raikage A biography


    (Erubō) - Elbow
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: After covering themselves with the lightning armour, the user thrusts his elbow at his opponent with extreme force.
    Note: Can only be used or Taught by a Raikage bio


    "Jinchūriki!"
    Senshō roar as he smashes his elbow towards the Jinchūriki. if his attack connects, he follows up by twisting his upper-body again, using his right leg as a balance-point to spin 180 degrees around clockwise, extending his right elbow halfway through the spin as to end up smashing it against Naruto's right temple. The speed granted to him by his Lightning Armor should allow Senshō to catch Naruto and hit him a second time, changing 'sprawling backwards' into 'sprawling sideways'. In the midst of the spin, however, Senshō forms a Ram handseal, causing a great, panther of Black Lightning to materialize around the Raikage. The creature immediately sets off, roaring towards Onoki's position while a single tendril extends from its body, zooming towards Naruto's broken form. Both halves of the attack aim for vital spots; specifically the neck and chest area. With his second elbow-thrust, Senshō himself makes a beeline towards Naruto's location, following the teen; wanting to ensure his death.

    (Raiton: Kuropansa) - Lightning Release: Black Panther Technique
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: After performing a single hand seal Ram the user creates a black panther like creature composed of electricity that seems to emanate from the users body. It can be used to attack multiple targets by extending from its body tendrils of lightning to electrocute the targets.
    Note: Can only be used by the Third Raikage or Darui
    With his animalistic instincts and heightened senses and speed, Naruto sees your sudden charge of chakra only to find himself heading directly to your elbow. Its clear he can't react and avoid the impact but in his mind, its not that important. The chakra shroud makes him imune to the damage of B-Rank taijutsu and even with the enhance of the lightning armor, its not enough to be fatal. Instead he doesn't try to avoid the hit, he focuses on attacking you. Reading your movements, he focuses chakra on his left palm, creating a small wind rasengan. As your Left elbow crushes into naruto, the movement you executed exposed your right flank (check the anime to see why it is so). As Naruto's forward momentum is stopped, he focuses on his left arm propelling it forward against your exposed right flank. As the wind hits, it ravages through your body, ripping through your right chest and creating a burst of wind and chakra that separates us both. This off course, stops your use of the black panther.

    (Fūton: Rasengan) - Wind Style: Spiral sphere
    Rank: A
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60 (-20 to user if attain direct hit)
    Description: Rasengan doesn't require handseals, only molding of the chakra. The user focuses and creates a fast, rotating sphere of chakra in the palm of their hand which can cause much destructive impact. A direct Rasengan hit can be lethal but the user needs to actually physically hit the opponent for it to work.

    Onoki, on the other hand, had already shot the fire balls by the time Naruto reached you (thus, when naruto does the rasengan, the fire balls had just been shot) and takes advantage of his higher point of view to oversee the situation and time his attack properly. As the wind blasts Naruto and the Raikage apart, Onoki had already done a hand seal and, with his hand risen into the air, presented a chidori formed around it. You see, the fire sent into the sky was enough to create a localized thundercloud. Small but powerful non the less, even in the dried out conditions, it actually has more friction and static energy than one might think (see real science if needed). Using the chidori as a medium, Onoki takes control of the lightning above and pinpoints raikage's trajectory, targeting his "end location". Unleashing the lightning above, Onoki unleashes a dragon of pure lighting that obliterates the whole field around you, destroying your body to nothing more than atoms. Naruto would be saved by the wind explosion recoil that sent him backwards, near onoki and away from the lightning blast. Note that Onoki unleashes the lighting dragon as soon as possible, thus leaving only a minimum margin for maneuver before the kirin is unleashed.

    Humpf...

    (Raiton: Chidori) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user must first perform the following sequence of hand seals Ox → Rabbit → Monkey → Dragon → Rat → Bird → Ox → Snake → Dog → Tiger → Monkey and they create a lightning jutsu that is concentrated in the user's palm and thrusted toward the opponent at high speed. The lightning in the user's palm sounds like birds chirping, hence the name.
    Note: Someone who mastered lightning release can perform chidori with just the Ox hand seal.

    (Raiton: Kirin) - Lightning Release: Kirin
    Rank: S
    Type: Offense
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: After using Dragon Fireball Jutsu to create thunderclouds in the sky, the user will use Chidori to take control of the lightning above. They can then make the lightning strike an opponent in the blink of an eye.
    Can only be avoided with time/space techniques. Can only be used once per battle.
     
         

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    Re: [Bio Test -Third Raikage] Zero Kelvin

    Quote Originally Posted by Scorps View Post
    With his animalistic instincts and heightened senses and speed, Naruto sees your sudden charge of chakra only to find himself heading directly to your elbow. Its clear he can't react and avoid the impact but in his mind, its not that important. The chakra shroud makes him imune to the damage of B-Rank taijutsu and even with the enhance of the lightning armor, its not enough to be fatal. Instead he doesn't try to avoid the hit, he focuses on attacking you. Reading your movements, he focuses chakra on his left palm, creating a small wind rasengan. As your Left elbow crushes into naruto, the movement you executed exposed your right flank (check the anime to see why it is so). As Naruto's forward momentum is stopped, he focuses on his left arm propelling it forward against your exposed right flank. As the wind hits, it ravages through your body, ripping through your right chest and creating a burst of wind and chakra that separates us both. This off course, stops your use of the black panther.

    (Fūton: Rasengan) - Wind Style: Spiral sphere
    Rank: A
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60 (-20 to user if attain direct hit)
    Description: Rasengan doesn't require handseals, only molding of the chakra. The user focuses and creates a fast, rotating sphere of chakra in the palm of their hand which can cause much destructive impact. A direct Rasengan hit can be lethal but the user needs to actually physically hit the opponent for it to work.

    Onoki, on the other hand, had already shot the fire balls by the time Naruto reached you (thus, when naruto does the rasengan, the fire balls had just been shot) and takes advantage of his higher point of view to oversee the situation and time his attack properly. As the wind blasts Naruto and the Raikage apart, Onoki had already done a hand seal and, with his hand risen into the air, presented a chidori formed around it. You see, the fire sent into the sky was enough to create a localized thundercloud. Small but powerful non the less, even in the dried out conditions, it actually has more friction and static energy than one might think (see real science if needed). Using the chidori as a medium, Onoki takes control of the lightning above and pinpoints raikage's trajectory, targeting his "end location". Unleashing the lightning above, Onoki unleashes a dragon of pure lighting that obliterates the whole field around you, destroying your body to nothing more than atoms. Naruto would be saved by the wind explosion recoil that sent him backwards, near onoki and away from the lightning blast. Note that Onoki unleashes the lighting dragon as soon as possible, thus leaving only a minimum margin for maneuver before the kirin is unleashed.

    Humpf...

    (Raiton: Chidori) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user must first perform the following sequence of hand seals Ox → Rabbit → Monkey → Dragon → Rat → Bird → Ox → Snake → Dog → Tiger → Monkey and they create a lightning jutsu that is concentrated in the user's palm and thrusted toward the opponent at high speed. The lightning in the user's palm sounds like birds chirping, hence the name.
    Note: Someone who mastered lightning release can perform chidori with just the Ox hand seal.

    (Raiton: Kirin) - Lightning Release: Kirin
    Rank: S
    Type: Offense
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: After using Dragon Fireball Jutsu to create thunderclouds in the sky, the user will use Chidori to take control of the lightning above. They can then make the lightning strike an opponent in the blink of an eye.
    Can only be avoided with time/space techniques. Can only be used once per battle.
    Well, the hour of truth for my Taijutsu prowess has come.
    _______________________

    Senshō's immediate reaction to the feeling of his elbow hitting cartilage is relief, but the feeling is immediately replaced with a sense utter surprise as the Jinchūriki holds his ground instead of flying backwards. Surprise turns to amazement as a damn teenager half his size actually pushes forwards, completely ignoring an attack that by all account should've torn his head clean off!
    As Naruto creates his Rasengan, Senshō executes his own attack. In his current position, left elbow in his opponents face, Senshō's right hand is pointed right at his opponents neck.~
    As you might remember, Senshō started out with his arms crossed and his upper body twisted in an angle so that his elbow was pointed towards Naruto. Senshō went directly from that to the elbow-smash. Following that, Senshō's right hand would be pointing towards Naruto's body.
    ~With his opponent being unable to see due to having a thick elbow smashed into his face, the Raikage extends his right index finger towards his opponent, loads it with lightning chakra and punches forwards. In the blink of an eye, a thin blade of lightning suddenly finds itself pierced through the base of Naruto's neck, passing through the trachea and the spine. The attack would be over in a flash, with no warning-signs to herald its approach. Naruto's vision would be blocked by an elbow and his concentration would be focused on the very complicated Rasengan. Even with a warning, the attack would be almost impossible to block. At his best, the Raikage moves with extreme speed and the Ippon Nukite is able to precede the actual attack, reaching more than a hand length forwards. Not only that, but due to his position and proximity Senshō would hardly have to move his hand to hit Naruto with the Ippon Nukite.
    Naruto's Rasengan would most likely scrape against Senshō's Lightning Armor, but due to the aforementioned circumstances and the defensive properties of the Armor, the attack would hardly do any damage, especially considering that it took a 'Wind Style: Rasenshuriken' at point-blank range to deactivate the armor.

    (Raiton: Jigokuzuki: Ippon Nukite) - Lightning Release: Hell Stab: One Finger Crossbeam Hand
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: Whilst the 3rd Raikage is cladded in the lightning Release Armor He builds up lightning chakra in the tips of one of his fingers and then uses that together with a piercing move.This Single finger concentration is the strongest variant of the 3rd Raikages technique. This technique is considerd similar in respect to the Raikiri and Chidori.
    Note: Can only be used by the 3rd raikage whilst cladded in the lightning release armor.


    The entire exchange would last the blink of an eye.
    With a sizzling sound, Senshō immediately disappears in a blur, drawing his Ippon up the length of Naruto's head with the motion, splitting it in half. Making a bee-line for Onoki, the giant man forms a single hands seal of his own, letting the chirping of a Thousand Birds fill his ears as electricity gathers in his right hand.
    At this time, Onoki should already have sent his Chidori towards the Heavens and, gritting his teeth, the Raikage mimics the action, sending a screaming surge of electricty into the Heavens where it battles Onoki's. With his superhuman speed, the Raikage would appear before aging Tsuchikage within a moment, a hulking mass of death and destruction, blurring into existence in mid-air with a right arm already pulled back in preparation for a punch. The timing would fit perfectly with the Kirin, and the vicious haymaker aimed at Onoki's face would be accompanied by the roar of the Lightning God himself, as a surge of lightning explodes between the two remaining combatants, killing one and seriously injuring the other.
    I'm actually mulling over what would happen in this situation. If your 'original' Kirin continues and is still aimed at Senshō, then this scenario would hold, same deal if my Kirin 'wins'. If, somehow, the both of us create a Kirin of our own, we simply double the destructive power of the attack (and we both die). If the Chidoris cancel each other out, then all that's left is a vicious haymaker.

    (Raiton: Chidori) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user must first perform the following sequence of hand seals Ox → Rabbit → Monkey → Dragon → Rat → Bird → Ox → Snake → Dog → Tiger → Monkey and they create a lightning jutsu that is concentrated in the user's palm and thrusted toward the opponent at high speed. The lightning in the user's palm sounds like birds chirping, hence the name.
    Note: Someone who mastered lightning release can perform chidori with just the Ox hand seal.


    (Raiton: Kirin) - Lightning Release: Kirin
    Rank: S
    Type: Offense
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: After using Dragon Fireball Jutsu to create thunderclouds in the sky, the user will use Chidori to take control of the lightning above. They can then make the lightning strike an opponent in the blink of an eye.
    Can only be avoided with time/space techniques. Can only be used once per battle.
     
         

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    Re: [Bio Test -Third Raikage] Zero Kelvin

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    Well, the hour of truth for my Taijutsu prowess has come.
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    Senshō's immediate reaction to the feeling of his elbow hitting cartilage is relief, but the feeling is immediately replaced with a sense utter surprise as the Jinchūriki holds his ground instead of flying backwards. Surprise turns to amazement as a damn teenager half his size actually pushes forwards, completely ignoring an attack that by all account should've torn his head clean off!
    As Naruto creates his Rasengan, Senshō executes his own attack. In his current position, left elbow in his opponents face, Senshō's right hand is pointed right at his opponents neck.~
    As you might remember, Senshō started out with his arms crossed and his upper body twisted in an angle so that his elbow was pointed towards Naruto. Senshō went directly from that to the elbow-smash. Following that, Senshō's right hand would be pointing towards Naruto's body.
    ~With his opponent being unable to see due to having a thick elbow smashed into his face, the Raikage extends his right index finger towards his opponent, loads it with lightning chakra and punches forwards. In the blink of an eye, a thin blade of lightning suddenly finds itself pierced through the base of Naruto's neck, passing through the trachea and the spine. The attack would be over in a flash, with no warning-signs to herald its approach. Naruto's vision would be blocked by an elbow and his concentration would be focused on the very complicated Rasengan. Even with a warning, the attack would be almost impossible to block. At his best, the Raikage moves with extreme speed and the Ippon Nukite is able to precede the actual attack, reaching more than a hand length forwards. Not only that, but due to his position and proximity Senshō would hardly have to move his hand to hit Naruto with the Ippon Nukite.
    Naruto's Rasengan would most likely scrape against Senshō's Lightning Armor, but due to the aforementioned circumstances and the defensive properties of the Armor, the attack would hardly do any damage, especially considering that it took a 'Wind Style: Rasenshuriken' at point-blank range to deactivate the armor.

    (Raiton: Jigokuzuki: Ippon Nukite) - Lightning Release: Hell Stab: One Finger Crossbeam Hand
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: Whilst the 3rd Raikage is cladded in the lightning Release Armor He builds up lightning chakra in the tips of one of his fingers and then uses that together with a piercing move.This Single finger concentration is the strongest variant of the 3rd Raikages technique. This technique is considerd similar in respect to the Raikiri and Chidori.
    Note: Can only be used by the 3rd raikage whilst cladded in the lightning release armor.


    The entire exchange would last the blink of an eye.
    With a sizzling sound, Senshō immediately disappears in a blur, drawing his Ippon up the length of Naruto's head with the motion, splitting it in half. Making a bee-line for Onoki, the giant man forms a single hands seal of his own, letting the chirping of a Thousand Birds fill his ears as electricity gathers in his right hand.
    At this time, Onoki should already have sent his Chidori towards the Heavens and, gritting his teeth, the Raikage mimics the action, sending a screaming surge of electricty into the Heavens where it battles Onoki's. With his superhuman speed, the Raikage would appear before aging Tsuchikage within a moment, a hulking mass of death and destruction, blurring into existence in mid-air with a right arm already pulled back in preparation for a punch. The timing would fit perfectly with the Kirin, and the vicious haymaker aimed at Onoki's face would be accompanied by the roar of the Lightning God himself, as a surge of lightning explodes between the two remaining combatants, killing one and seriously injuring the other.
    I'm actually mulling over what would happen in this situation. If your 'original' Kirin continues and is still aimed at Senshō, then this scenario would hold, same deal if my Kirin 'wins'. If, somehow, the both of us create a Kirin of our own, we simply double the destructive power of the attack (and we both die). If the Chidoris cancel each other out, then all that's left is a vicious haymaker.

    (Raiton: Chidori) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user must first perform the following sequence of hand seals Ox → Rabbit → Monkey → Dragon → Rat → Bird → Ox → Snake → Dog → Tiger → Monkey and they create a lightning jutsu that is concentrated in the user's palm and thrusted toward the opponent at high speed. The lightning in the user's palm sounds like birds chirping, hence the name.
    Note: Someone who mastered lightning release can perform chidori with just the Ox hand seal.


    (Raiton: Kirin) - Lightning Release: Kirin
    Rank: S
    Type: Offense
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: After using Dragon Fireball Jutsu to create thunderclouds in the sky, the user will use Chidori to take control of the lightning above. They can then make the lightning strike an opponent in the blink of an eye.
    Can only be avoided with time/space techniques. Can only be used once per battle.
    Misconceptions in your move: lightning armor doesn't bestow such a high defensive ability otherwise sasuke wouldn't have hit A with his attack nor would Amaterasu actually reach his skin. And in the manga, when he fights Madara, its clear he takes damage from physical attacks. Couple that with the wind nature of the rasengan and the attack would hit the Raikage and have the desired effect: blast both of us apart. (mentioned on my move)

    Time frame break: seeing the rasengan means its formed. Once formed, its inches away from you and hits, doing its function. But even if we take into consideration Raikage's speed, you can't move before that move as that was the first move of my turn. Doing so is breaking the time frame in a very clear manner. I've said this plenty of times and explained it in many threads and bio tests. Even if your bio has enormous reaction speed, movement speed, reading speed, etc you can't react to something before your opponent does it. Not only that but your elbow is in front of you and your other arm is supporting it for the elbow technique (check the tech in the anime and manga, when its named) thus its not such a simple movement to actually change to the one finger jab.



    Wrong counter: Ok, this is in my mind, because the one finger jab, as it can't happen before the rasengan nor was it directed at the hand that had the rasengan, doesn't block the rasengan from hitting you. The rasengan would happen on your side as you'd be about to hit me with your finger (if we assume the movement is possible), producing its effect: bursting us apart and sending us away.

    this said, time frame would correctly be the following:

    Elbow
    Rasengan
    One Finger Cross Beam Hand
    Chidori (mine)
    Chidori
    Kirin (mine)
    Kirin

    Kirin Issue: the fire technique is only enough to produce lightning charge for one Kirin. Whomever does it first, uses it. Even if you raise your hand into the air with another chidori, unless you do it before me, the lightning above is already under my control and as such you'd need to heat the atmosphere once more to use it. If, in the turn after i heated the atmophere, you prevent me from controlling the above lightning energy, then you can use it instead. That is the gamble of Kirin.


    So, the move stands like this: The rasengan touches you, triggering itself and expanding as you extend your arm to hit naruto, bursting between us (damaging naruto as well) and sending us apart while onoki prepares to trigger the kirin on your location.

    Test continues with naruto flying backwards and Onoki triggering the kirin.

    (I'm not stopping this here because there is still 4 cannon ways at your disposal to counter Kirin)

    ________________________

    As naruto's technique backfires on to him as well while hitting the Raikage, they are both separated in a burst of wind chakra and raw spinning chakra. Onoki on the other hand, while a bit concerned with Naruto's well being continues with the former plan and does a simple handseal while rising his hand in the air, taking advantage of the lightning above and controlling it, unleashing a gigantic dragon shaped lightning attack that obliterates the battle field on the Raikage's location and around it.

    (Raiton: Chidori) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user must first perform the following sequence of hand seals Ox → Rabbit → Monkey → Dragon → Rat → Bird → Ox → Snake → Dog → Tiger → Monkey and they create a lightning jutsu that is concentrated in the user's palm and thrusted toward the opponent at high speed. The lightning in the user's palm sounds like birds chirping, hence the name.
    Note: Someone who mastered lightning release can perform chidori with just the Ox hand seal.

    (Raiton: Kirin) - Lightning Release: Kirin
    Rank: S
    Type: Offense
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: After using Dragon Fireball Jutsu to create thunderclouds in the sky, the user will use Chidori to take control of the lightning above. They can then make the lightning strike an opponent in the blink of an eye.
    Can only be avoided with time/space techniques. Can only be used once per battle.

    Naruto quickly gathers himself up, his chakra cloak disabled because of the impact and his determination as high as possible. He'd be at least Mid-range from the Raikage as a result of his technique.
     
         
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    Re: [Bio Test -Third Raikage] Zero Kelvin

    Quote Originally Posted by Scorps View Post
    Misconceptions in your move: lightning armor doesn't bestow such a high defensive ability otherwise sasuke wouldn't have hit A with his attack nor would Amaterasu actually reach his skin. And in the manga, when he fights Madara, its clear he takes damage from physical attacks. Couple that with the wind nature of the rasengan and the attack would hit the Raikage and have the desired effect: blast both of us apart. (mentioned on my move)

    Time frame break: seeing the rasengan means its formed. Once formed, its inches away from you and hits, doing its function. But even if we take into consideration Raikage's speed, you can't move before that move as that was the first move of my turn. Doing so is breaking the time frame in a very clear manner. I've said this plenty of times and explained it in many threads and bio tests. Even if your bio has enormous reaction speed, movement speed, reading speed, etc you can't react to something before your opponent does it. Not only that but your elbow is in front of you and your other arm is supporting it for the elbow technique (check the tech in the anime and manga, when its named) thus its not such a simple movement to actually change to the one finger jab.



    Wrong counter: Ok, this is in my mind, because the one finger jab, as it can't happen before the rasengan nor was it directed at the hand that had the rasengan, doesn't block the rasengan from hitting you. The rasengan would happen on your side as you'd be about to hit me with your finger (if we assume the movement is possible), producing its effect: bursting us apart and sending us away.

    this said, time frame would correctly be the following:

    Elbow
    Rasengan
    One Finger Cross Beam Hand
    Chidori (mine)
    Chidori
    Kirin (mine)
    Kirin

    Kirin Issue: the fire technique is only enough to produce lightning charge for one Kirin. Whomever does it first, uses it. Even if you raise your hand into the air with another chidori, unless you do it before me, the lightning above is already under my control and as such you'd need to heat the atmosphere once more to use it. If, in the turn after i heated the atmophere, you prevent me from controlling the above lightning energy, then you can use it instead. That is the gamble of Kirin.


    So, the move stands like this: The rasengan touches you, triggering itself and expanding as you extend your arm to hit naruto, bursting between us (damaging naruto as well) and sending us apart while onoki prepares to trigger the kirin on your location.

    Test continues with naruto flying backwards and Onoki triggering the kirin.

    (I'm not stopping this here because there is still 4 cannon ways at your disposal to counter Kirin)

    ________________________

    As naruto's technique backfires on to him as well while hitting the Raikage, they are both separated in a burst of wind chakra and raw spinning chakra. Onoki on the other hand, while a bit concerned with Naruto's well being continues with the former plan and does a simple handseal while rising his hand in the air, taking advantage of the lightning above and controlling it, unleashing a gigantic dragon shaped lightning attack that obliterates the battle field on the Raikage's location and around it.

    (Raiton: Chidori) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user must first perform the following sequence of hand seals Ox → Rabbit → Monkey → Dragon → Rat → Bird → Ox → Snake → Dog → Tiger → Monkey and they create a lightning jutsu that is concentrated in the user's palm and thrusted toward the opponent at high speed. The lightning in the user's palm sounds like birds chirping, hence the name.
    Note: Someone who mastered lightning release can perform chidori with just the Ox hand seal.

    (Raiton: Kirin) - Lightning Release: Kirin
    Rank: S
    Type: Offense
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: After using Dragon Fireball Jutsu to create thunderclouds in the sky, the user will use Chidori to take control of the lightning above. They can then make the lightning strike an opponent in the blink of an eye.
    Can only be avoided with time/space techniques. Can only be used once per battle.

    Naruto quickly gathers himself up, his chakra cloak disabled because of the impact and his determination as high as possible. He'd be at least Mid-range from the Raikage as a result of his technique.
    Quote Originally Posted by Scary Yamato
    My take on this is that when naruto charges the raikage, he would activate his armor, This much we can all agree on. Since naruto is doing a downward slash to the chest of the raikage he must first raise up to reach high enough to come down, thus exposing his head. The raikage wouldn't elbow until that exposure of his head. By that time naruto is already really close to the raikage, making it extremely diffcult for naruto to

    So the timeline should look like this

    Red shroud
    Flight
    Lightning armor
    Fireballs
    Scratch
    Elbow

    This is where things get muddy.

    With the Raikage's speed it would be extremely difficult for naruto to see his elbow and form a wind rasengan before getting hit. It would probably form right after getting hit and then thrust into the raikage. He's a big target so it wouldnt be too hard to just thrust forward and hit him. the same could be said with the 1 finger 1000 years of death stab (patented yamato crossover technique). Since neither attacks need seals, it would be breaking the timeframe rule if the death finger was executed before the rasengan (both require no seals and both need to be thrust) so it would be more likely to hit first. The resultant force of the hit would impact both parties (like Scorps said) However, due to the shroud and Lighting armor (paired with the raikages natural resilance) this is not a fatal attack.

    I reccomend that Zero needs to continue and defend from kirin
    As the Rasengan shoots him backwards, the Raikage's eyes widen comically and he lets out a ragged gasp. The gaps quickly turns into a growl, however, as the hardened warrior uses the momentum of his backlash to spin his body backwards in a summersault, letting him slam his hands against the ground to halt his involuntary retreat. His hands should make contact with the ground about the same time as Onoki creates his Chidori, which allows the Raikage to clad his body in Lightning Chakra push off the ground, disappearing before his enemies in a blur of speed.

    (Raiton no Yori) - Lightning Release Armour
    Rank: A
    Type: Defensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30 (-10 per turn activate)
    Damage points: N/A (+ 20 to regular taijutsu)
    Description: The user will wrap themselves with lightning chakra, which then electrically stimulates their nerves system and speed up their neural synapes to react faster to danger and push away any physical prowess to the absolute limit. allowing him to gain tremendous raw speed and monstrous power. This armour, combined with Taijutsu allows the user to utilize a Nintaijutsu. However due to being enveloped by lightning chakra, wind techniques cause more damage.
    Note: Technique lasts for 3 turns
    Note: Can only be used or taught by the 3rd Raikage or Raikage A biography


    Making a beeline for Naruto, Senshō spreads chakra through his body and adds another level of protection to his person. The sheer speed of the Raikage's charge would make 'aiming' the Kirin a sudden difficulty. Senshō's goal isn't to avoid the attack, it's to get so close to his foes that continuing with the Kirin becomes suicide.
    Considering that A crossed a farily big distance between himself and Minato in the time it took for the Yondaime to blink, I'll bet my chips on Senshō's Armor.

    (Raiton: Purazuma Bōru) - Lightning Release: Plasma Ball
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive, Defence
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20 (+5 per turn active)
    Damage points: 40 (-15 if target comes into contact with the barrier)
    Description: The user manipulating their chakra generates a plasma barrier around them to serve as a defence which protects them from incoming attacks, even from something as wide-ranged as the Quicksand Waterfall Flow however the user cannot use other techniques besides lightning release or physical based techniques. The user can rush at their opponents even if the barrier is active. The shield can be used offensively, by discharging the electricity in the direction of their choice in a wave resulting in using the energy of the barrier and ending its effects.
    Note: Technique remains active for 3 turns.


    Entering the area short range of Naruto's position, Senshō claps his hands together and roars a challenge as a humongous beast of Black Lightning springs forth from his body, roaring a challenge of its own as it punces upon Naruto, acting as an extension of the aging Raikage and slamming into the teenager. The Raikage continues his charge, smashing into the teen a mere moment after his technique.
    Should you not have broken your Kirin off, the combined strength of an A-ranked and B-ranked Armor plus a 'B-ranked' natural defense would keep the Sandaime from getting injured. The same, however, can't be said for Naruto and Onoki, both of whom would be very, very close to the Kirin, should it be aimed at Senshō's end position.

    (Raiton: Kuropansa) - Lightning Release: Black Panther Technique
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: After performing a single hand seal Ram the user creates a black panther like creature composed of electricity that seems to emanate from the users body. It can be used to attack multiple targets by extending from its body tendrils of lightning to electrocute the targets.
    Note: Can only be used by the Third Raikage or Darui


    EDIT: the attacking Black Panther only acts as an extension for the Black Lightning surrounding Senshō. If you hold the Kirin off till then, the man will have an extra layer of S-ranked protection.
     
         

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    Re: [Bio Test -Third Raikage] Zero Kelvin

    Quote Originally Posted by Zero Kelvin View Post
    As the Rasengan shoots him backwards, the Raikage's eyes widen comically and he lets out a ragged gasp. The gaps quickly turns into a growl, however, as the hardened warrior uses the momentum of his backlash to spin his body backwards in a summersault, letting him slam his hands against the ground to halt his involuntary retreat. His hands should make contact with the ground about the same time as Onoki creates his Chidori, which allows the Raikage to clad his body in Lightning Chakra push off the ground, disappearing before his enemies in a blur of speed.

    (Raiton no Yori) - Lightning Release Armour
    Rank: A
    Type: Defensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30 (-10 per turn activate)
    Damage points: N/A (+ 20 to regular taijutsu)
    Description: The user will wrap themselves with lightning chakra, which then electrically stimulates their nerves system and speed up their neural synapes to react faster to danger and push away any physical prowess to the absolute limit. allowing him to gain tremendous raw speed and monstrous power. This armour, combined with Taijutsu allows the user to utilize a Nintaijutsu. However due to being enveloped by lightning chakra, wind techniques cause more damage.
    Note: Technique lasts for 3 turns
    Note: Can only be used or taught by the 3rd Raikage or Raikage A biography


    Making a beeline for Naruto, Senshō spreads chakra through his body and adds another level of protection to his person. The sheer speed of the Raikage's charge would make 'aiming' the Kirin a sudden difficulty. Senshō's goal isn't to avoid the attack, it's to get so close to his foes that continuing with the Kirin becomes suicide.
    Considering that A crossed a farily big distance between himself and Minato in the time it took for the Yondaime to blink, I'll bet my chips on Senshō's Armor.

    (Raiton: Purazuma Bōru) - Lightning Release: Plasma Ball
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive, Defence
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20 (+5 per turn active)
    Damage points: 40 (-15 if target comes into contact with the barrier)
    Description: The user manipulating their chakra generates a plasma barrier around them to serve as a defence which protects them from incoming attacks, even from something as wide-ranged as the Quicksand Waterfall Flow however the user cannot use other techniques besides lightning release or physical based techniques. The user can rush at their opponents even if the barrier is active. The shield can be used offensively, by discharging the electricity in the direction of their choice in a wave resulting in using the energy of the barrier and ending its effects.
    Note: Technique remains active for 3 turns.


    Entering the area short range of Naruto's position, Senshō claps his hands together and roars a challenge as a humongous beast of Black Lightning springs forth from his body, roaring a challenge of its own as it punces upon Naruto, acting as an extension of the aging Raikage and slamming into the teenager. The Raikage continues his charge, smashing into the teen a mere moment after his technique.
    Should you not have broken your Kirin off, the combined strength of an A-ranked and B-ranked Armor plus a 'B-ranked' natural defense would keep the Sandaime from getting injured. The same, however, can't be said for Naruto and Onoki, both of whom would be very, very close to the Kirin, should it be aimed at Senshō's end position.

    (Raiton: Kuropansa) - Lightning Release: Black Panther Technique
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: After performing a single hand seal Ram the user creates a black panther like creature composed of electricity that seems to emanate from the users body. It can be used to attack multiple targets by extending from its body tendrils of lightning to electrocute the targets.
    Note: Can only be used by the Third Raikage or Darui


    EDIT: the attacking Black Panther only acts as an extension for the Black Lightning surrounding Senshō. If you hold the Kirin off till then, the man will have an extra layer of S-ranked protection.
    Hum...Not quite sure about that but ok...

    Now, because you didn't actually explain what would happen, let me concise the whole deal. As the Kirin comes from the sky you burst forward in a blazing speed. Off course the kirin misses but the overal shockwave and debris create a large "flash bomb" effect behind you. Not blinding to you or the others, its enough to add drama and to actually throw your whole forward momentum a bit out of the balance.

    ___________

    As the 3rd Raikage bursts forward, Naruto is caught a bit by surprise but he doesn't let that hinder his reaction. Suddenly, he becomes engulfed into golden chakra and bursts backwards, doing 3 backflips. At the same time Onoki strings a set of handseals and puts you under a genjutsu. Blinding you completely you become a sitting duck. Naruto doesn't stop to think and as soon as he finishes the 3 flips he unleashes a miniature rasenshuriken directly at your face.

    (Kyūbi Chakura Mōdo) - Nine Tailed Fox Chakra Mode
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A (+15 to Ninjutsu and Taijutsu Techniques)
    Description: Naruto accesses the Kyubi chakra that is sealed away in his body after the seperation of the chakra from the kyubi and its will. He can access its chakra directly whenever he needs it without interacting with the beast at all. In doing so, he gains a chakra shroud that resembles the Sage of the Six Paths' silhouette. The colour of his eyes changes from blue to orange, instead of red. Also, while the demon fox shroud is red and releases chakra as burning, acidic bubbles, this form's shroud is yellow and releases chakra as flickers of flame, instead. With the Nine-Tails' power under his control, Naruto's strength is significantly increased adding +15 to his Ninjutsu and Taijutsu techniques. His speed is greatly increased to the point in which he surpasses A while in his Lightning Release Armor. Naruto Whilst in this state can create from the shroud chakra arms which can aide in the manipulation of various techniques. The chakra arms give Naruto greater range of attacks as well as greater dexterity and manoeuvrability with his fighting style without the use of shadow clones. However, using the Nine-Tails Chakra Mode is a huge risk. Naruto has to temporarily "shelve" his own chakra in order to use the Nine-Tails' chakra, which allows the Nine-Tails to automatically drain his original chakra Thus Naruto can only maintain this state for 5 turns before its deactivation.
    Note: Technique can only be used once and last 5 turns when activated.

    ( Kokuangyo no Jutsu ) - Bringer-of-Darkness Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user makes one handseal, causing the opponent to believe they have been trapped in a world of infinite darkness, where their sense of sight is useless. It is capable of affecting multiple targets within range. However, it does not negate their other senses.

    (Bijutsu: Mini-Rasenshuriken) Tailed Beast Skill: Mini Rasenshuriken
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Descrption: Naruto whilst in the Nine Tails chakra mode creates two small chakra arms on his index finger, with which he creates a miniature Rasenshuriken. Though the shuriken has less attack power than the original, it is still very effective, being capable of slicing straight through a merged White Zetsu Clone's leg.
    Note: This technique still classifies as being wind natured and is subjected to the same elemental strengths and weaknesses.

    _____

    Recap:

    Naruto bursts backwards as soon as you are reaching him. At the same time, Onoki, in the sky triggers the genjutsu. These 2 moves are done before the Plasma Ball technique and after the Lightning Armor activation.

    I assume that Naruto's backwards movement makes him become Mid Range from the Raikage as well as Onoki, who is now also in Mid Range of him, still in the air.

    If you don't agree with my assessment, ask me on vm.
     
         

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    Re: [Bio Test -Third Raikage] Zero Kelvin

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    Hum...Not quite sure about that but ok...

    Now, because you didn't actually explain what would happen, let me concise the whole deal. As the Kirin comes from the sky you burst forward in a blazing speed. Off course the kirin misses but the overal shockwave and debris create a large "flash bomb" effect behind you. Not blinding to you or the others, its enough to add drama and to actually throw your whole forward momentum a bit out of the balance.

    ___________

    As the 3rd Raikage bursts forward, Naruto is caught a bit by surprise but he doesn't let that hinder his reaction. Suddenly, he becomes engulfed into golden chakra and bursts backwards, doing 3 backflips. At the same time Onoki strings a set of handseals and puts you under a genjutsu. Blinding you completely you become a sitting duck. Naruto doesn't stop to think and as soon as he finishes the 3 flips he unleashes a miniature rasenshuriken directly at your face.

    (Kyūbi Chakura Mōdo) - Nine Tailed Fox Chakra Mode
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A (+15 to Ninjutsu and Taijutsu Techniques)
    Description: Naruto accesses the Kyubi chakra that is sealed away in his body after the seperation of the chakra from the kyubi and its will. He can access its chakra directly whenever he needs it without interacting with the beast at all. In doing so, he gains a chakra shroud that resembles the Sage of the Six Paths' silhouette. The colour of his eyes changes from blue to orange, instead of red. Also, while the demon fox shroud is red and releases chakra as burning, acidic bubbles, this form's shroud is yellow and releases chakra as flickers of flame, instead. With the Nine-Tails' power under his control, Naruto's strength is significantly increased adding +15 to his Ninjutsu and Taijutsu techniques. His speed is greatly increased to the point in which he surpasses A while in his Lightning Release Armor. Naruto Whilst in this state can create from the shroud chakra arms which can aide in the manipulation of various techniques. The chakra arms give Naruto greater range of attacks as well as greater dexterity and manoeuvrability with his fighting style without the use of shadow clones. However, using the Nine-Tails Chakra Mode is a huge risk. Naruto has to temporarily "shelve" his own chakra in order to use the Nine-Tails' chakra, which allows the Nine-Tails to automatically drain his original chakra Thus Naruto can only maintain this state for 5 turns before its deactivation.
    Note: Technique can only be used once and last 5 turns when activated.

    ( Kokuangyo no Jutsu ) - Bringer-of-Darkness Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user makes one handseal, causing the opponent to believe they have been trapped in a world of infinite darkness, where their sense of sight is useless. It is capable of affecting multiple targets within range. However, it does not negate their other senses.

    (Bijutsu: Mini-Rasenshuriken) Tailed Beast Skill: Mini Rasenshuriken
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Descrption: Naruto whilst in the Nine Tails chakra mode creates two small chakra arms on his index finger, with which he creates a miniature Rasenshuriken. Though the shuriken has less attack power than the original, it is still very effective, being capable of slicing straight through a merged White Zetsu Clone's leg.
    Note: This technique still classifies as being wind natured and is subjected to the same elemental strengths and weaknesses.

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    Recap:

    Naruto bursts backwards as soon as you are reaching him. At the same time, Onoki, in the sky triggers the genjutsu. These 2 moves are done before the Plasma Ball technique and after the Lightning Armor activation.

    I assume that Naruto's backwards movement makes him become Mid Range from the Raikage as well as Onoki, who is now also in Mid Range of him, still in the air.

    If you don't agree with my assessment, ask me on vm.
    I'm trying to keep the Raikage as in-character as possible. That means nothing but Lightning, so excuse me if fighting Wind is somewhat of a challenge ;_;
    And I didn't describe what happened because I can't describe what happens to your moves; only my reaction to 'em.
    What happened to Black Lightning, by the way? Why decrease its rank?
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    As the Genjutsu takes a hold of Senshō, he startles, continuing his approach but reacting wildly to the illusion by clapping his hands together in a handseal, spiking his spiritual energy to escape the unnatural darkness that's enveloped him. The aging Raikage doesn't miss a beat, however, despite the Genjutsu.

    ( Genjutsu: Kai ) - Illusion Technique: Release
    Rank: C-A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 15-30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user does one hand seal to focus and then proceeds to disturb his chakra flow by forcefully stopping it momentarily and then "spiking" his spiritual energy, unbalancing his chakra. This dispels any genjutsu set upon the user except MS Eye Techniques, Paralysis-like Genjutsu and Demonic Illusion: Toad Confrontation Chant. The effectiveness of this technique is dependent upon the skill of the user. A Jounin rank ninja can dispel Genjutsu up to C-rank. An S-class ninja can dispel Genjutsu up to B-rank. A Sannin rank ninja (and above) can dispel Genjutsu up to A-rank. The user may use this technique through physical contact on others to dispel them from Genjutsu.


    Blinking rapidly as he world comes back into focus, the Raikage's eyes widen in shock as he spots an extremely fast chakra-bomb coming towards him. Reaching deep within himself, Senshō breathes out and unlocks the Sixth Sense, which clears his mind and allows him to gracefully side-step the projectile with a clockwise spin combined with rapid shift to his left.

    (Sempai Oshie: Roku sacchi) Elder teachings: sixth sense
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: (-10 per turn to keep active)
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Elder teachings six senses is a skill known only to those whom achieve mastery in meditation and fighting arts. The user unlocks the six senses which is also known as a clear state of mind where the user eliminates the factors clouding the mind such as fear and regret and allows the user to be able to increase their reaction to incoming taijutsu attacks and not fear death making the user possible to react fast to the attacks.
    Note: Can only be used 2 times
    Note: lasts 4 turns.


    Still continuing his advance, Senshō disappears in a blur of motion and reappears standing sideways in front of Naruto. The Raikage's left side is 'facing' the Jinchūriki's front and his left hand is already moving towards the left (your left) side of the teenagers neck to deliver a bone-crushing, backhanded chop. Partially concealed by his left upper arm, Senshō's right hand is moving towards Naruto's abdomen, aiming to crack the teenagers ribs with a knuckle-shot.

    (Raigyaku Suihei) - Lightning Oppression Horizontal
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: After the user covers their selves with the lightning armour, they perform a simple backhand chop against the enemy target. This backhand chop was powerful enough to snap one of Susanoo's ribcage bones, as well as cut off one of the Eight - Tailed Giant Ox's horns.
    Note: Can only be used or Taught by a Raikage bio.


    The Raikage's position is not directly in front of Naruto; it's to-the-right-of (your right), but still in-front-of. I suck at describing positions. My bad.
     
         
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    Re: [Bio Test -Third Raikage] Zero Kelvin

    Quote Originally Posted by Zero Kelvin View Post
    I'm trying to keep the Raikage as in-character as possible. That means nothing but Lightning, so excuse me if fighting Wind is somewhat of a challenge ;_;
    And I didn't describe what happened because I can't describe what happens to your moves; only my reaction to 'em.
    What happened to Black Lightning, by the way? Why decrease its rank?
    __________________________________________________ _____________________

    As the Genjutsu takes a hold of Senshō, he startles, continuing his approach but reacting wildly to the illusion by clapping his hands together in a handseal, spiking his spiritual energy to escape the unnatural darkness that's enveloped him. The aging Raikage doesn't miss a beat, however, despite the Genjutsu.

    ( Genjutsu: Kai ) - Illusion Technique: Release
    Rank: C-A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 15-30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user does one hand seal to focus and then proceeds to disturb his chakra flow by forcefully stopping it momentarily and then "spiking" his spiritual energy, unbalancing his chakra. This dispels any genjutsu set upon the user except MS Eye Techniques, Paralysis-like Genjutsu and Demonic Illusion: Toad Confrontation Chant. The effectiveness of this technique is dependent upon the skill of the user. A Jounin rank ninja can dispel Genjutsu up to C-rank. An S-class ninja can dispel Genjutsu up to B-rank. A Sannin rank ninja (and above) can dispel Genjutsu up to A-rank. The user may use this technique through physical contact on others to dispel them from Genjutsu.


    Blinking rapidly as he world comes back into focus, the Raikage's eyes widen in shock as he spots an extremely fast chakra-bomb coming towards him. Reaching deep within himself, Senshō breathes out and unlocks the Sixth Sense, which clears his mind and allows him to gracefully side-step the projectile with a clockwise spin combined with rapid shift to his left.

    (Sempai Oshie: Roku sacchi) Elder teachings: sixth sense
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: (-10 per turn to keep active)
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Elder teachings six senses is a skill known only to those whom achieve mastery in meditation and fighting arts. The user unlocks the six senses which is also known as a clear state of mind where the user eliminates the factors clouding the mind such as fear and regret and allows the user to be able to increase their reaction to incoming taijutsu attacks and not fear death making the user possible to react fast to the attacks.
    Note: Can only be used 2 times
    Note: lasts 4 turns.


    Still continuing his advance, Senshō disappears in a blur of motion and reappears standing sideways in front of Naruto. The Raikage's left side is 'facing' the Jinchūriki's front and his left hand is already moving towards the left (your left) side of the teenagers neck to deliver a bone-crushing, backhanded chop. Partially concealed by his left upper arm, Senshō's right hand is moving towards Naruto's abdomen, aiming to crack the teenagers ribs with a knuckle-shot.

    (Raigyaku Suihei) - Lightning Oppression Horizontal
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: After the user covers their selves with the lightning armour, they perform a simple backhand chop against the enemy target. This backhand chop was powerful enough to snap one of Susanoo's ribcage bones, as well as cut off one of the Eight - Tailed Giant Ox's horns.
    Note: Can only be used or Taught by a Raikage bio.


    The Raikage's position is not directly in front of Naruto; it's to-the-right-of (your right), but still in-front-of. I suck at describing positions. My bad.
    Perfect. And good job in keeping the "character" in play!

    As for the black panther, it has to do with the double black panther technique that is soon to be added to the RP. It can't be the same rank as the black panther thus it will be S-Rank while the original one will be A-Rank. And A-Rank is more fitting for it after we've seen it in the anime.
    ___________

    As the Raikage side steps naruto's miniature attack, Naruto crosses his fingers into the Clone seal and makes 4 clones, all in 9 tails chakra mode. They all burst, the 5 of them into a mayhem of caotic patterns towards the old man as he himself bursts towards him. While facing one on one the Raikage might have had the ability to play in equal terms with Naruto's speeds, facing 5 narutos is virtually way above his abilities. After surrounding the old man from all sides, naruto's clones cart-slide into him and kick him high into the air. Naruto, having jumped in combo with his clones is already above the old raikage and delivers a powerfull kick into the raikages body. However, instead of sending him crushing into the ground, Naruto does the kick in an ascending pattern, sending the Raikage even further upwards. You see, Naruto hasn't forgotten that crushing the raikage into the ground will do little to nothing to him and that Naruto has the support of one of the most powerful ninjas to have ever lived: Onoki. You see while naruto was fighting head on, Onoki positioned himself in the most advantageous way and as the raikage is propelled upwards, Onoki is waiting for him mid air. having done a set of handseals, Onoki surrounds the Raikage into a Cube 5 meters X 5meters x 5 meters. The cube has a small sphere inside that explodes, obliterating whats inside into nothing and leaving the Raikage reduced to molecules.

    (Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique
    Rank:B
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.

    (Naruto Rendan) - Naruto Barrage
    Rank: C
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:15
    Description:After making 4 clones they attack with kicks that launch the foe into the sky and the original hits the enemy on the shoulder sending them flying back to the ground.

    (Jinton: Genkai Hakuri no Jutsu) - Dust Release: Destruction of the Primitive world technique
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user after performing a single hand seal to create a cube with a sphere at its center that expands in size when dropped on the target and crushes them due to the density.
    Note: Can only be used by Onoki or Muu
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by Scorps View Post
    Perfect. And good job in keeping the "character" in play!

    As for the black panther, it has to do with the double black panther technique that is soon to be added to the RP. It can't be the same rank as the black panther thus it will be S-Rank while the original one will be A-Rank. And A-Rank is more fitting for it after we've seen it in the anime.
    ___________

    As the Raikage side steps naruto's miniature attack, Naruto crosses his fingers into the Clone seal and makes 4 clones, all in 9 tails chakra mode. They all burst, the 5 of them into a mayhem of caotic patterns towards the old man as he himself bursts towards him. While facing one on one the Raikage might have had the ability to play in equal terms with Naruto's speeds, facing 5 narutos is virtually way above his abilities. After surrounding the old man from all sides, naruto's clones cart-slide into him and kick him high into the air. Naruto, having jumped in combo with his clones is already above the old raikage and delivers a powerfull kick into the raikages body. However, instead of sending him crushing into the ground, Naruto does the kick in an ascending pattern, sending the Raikage even further upwards. You see, Naruto hasn't forgotten that crushing the raikage into the ground will do little to nothing to him and that Naruto has the support of one of the most powerful ninjas to have ever lived: Onoki. You see while naruto was fighting head on, Onoki positioned himself in the most advantageous way and as the raikage is propelled upwards, Onoki is waiting for him mid air. having done a set of handseals, Onoki surrounds the Raikage into a Cube 5 meters X 5meters x 5 meters. The cube has a small sphere inside that explodes, obliterating whats inside into nothing and leaving the Raikage reduced to molecules.

    (Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique
    Rank:B
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.

    (Naruto Rendan) - Naruto Barrage
    Rank: C
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:15
    Description:After making 4 clones they attack with kicks that launch the foe into the sky and the original hits the enemy on the shoulder sending them flying back to the ground.

    (Jinton: Genkai Hakuri no Jutsu) - Dust Release: Destruction of the Primitive world technique
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user after performing a single hand seal to create a cube with a sphere at its center that expands in size when dropped on the target and crushes them due to the density.
    Note: Can only be used by Onoki or Muu
    As the five clones burst towards him, closing in to surround him, Senshō halts his advance and slams his hands together in a single seal. With a huff, the Raikage envelops himself in a black aura of electricity that immediately springs into action, seperating itself into four parts that each tramples over the ground to attack an advancing Shadow Clone. With their incredible speed, the clones would be hard-pressed to brake before the destructive wave of electricity washes over them.

    ( Raiton: Kuropansa ) - Lightning Release: Black Panther Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: After performing a single hand seal Ram the user creates a black panther like creature composed of electricity that seems to emanate from the users body. It can be used to attack multiple targets by extending from its body tendrils of lightning to electrocute the targets.
    Note: Can only be used by the Third Raikage or Darui


    Immediately looking up, Senshō forms a half-meter long spear of lightning around his left hand and prepares to set off into the air. Knowing that Naruto is hopelessly immobile in mid-air, the aging Raikage focuses lightning chakra into his arms and legs, setting off with enormous speed and appearing in front of Naruto before the teen can blink. Not giving the Jinchuuriki a chance to react, Senshō thrusts his left hand into Naruto's abdomen, following up with a flurry of numbing and piercing punches that sends the teenager crahsing upwards with the same speed as Senshō, allowing the Raikage to use him as a human shield to discourage the Tsuchikage from firing his deadly attack.

    (Raiton: Jigokuzuki: Ippon Nukite) - Lightning Release: Hell Stab: One Finger Crossbeam Hand
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: Whilst the 3rd Raikage is cladded in the lightning Release Armor He builds up lightning chakra in the tips of one of his fingers and then uses that together with a piercing move.This Single finger concentration is the strongest variant of the 3rd Raikages technique. This technique is considerd similar in respect to the Raikiri and Chidori.
    Note: Can only be used by the 3rd raikage whilst cladded in the lightning release armor.


    (Gosai Ryuu Yajuu Sora Tsuppari) – Yellow Dragon Beast Sky Thrusts
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: the user will charge his arms with lightning chakra and then appear below the enemy and strike up at the upper body of the target and hitting them a total of 12 times with the final strike hitting them in the chin and each strike discharges the lightning chakra into the enemies body and induces electrical burns and numbing of the areas of contact. The numbing makes the enemy unable to perform hand seals or concentrate chakra properly for a short period of time.
    Note: Numbing Lasts for 1 turn.
     
         

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    Re: [Bio Test -Third Raikage] Zero Kelvin

    Quote Originally Posted by Zero Kelvin View Post
    As the five clones burst towards him, closing in to surround him, Senshō halts his advance and slams his hands together in a single seal. With a huff, the Raikage envelops himself in a black aura of electricity that immediately springs into action, seperating itself into four parts that each tramples over the ground to attack an advancing Shadow Clone. With their incredible speed, the clones would be hard-pressed to brake before the destructive wave of electricity washes over them.

    ( Raiton: Kuropansa ) - Lightning Release: Black Panther Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: After performing a single hand seal Ram the user creates a black panther like creature composed of electricity that seems to emanate from the users body. It can be used to attack multiple targets by extending from its body tendrils of lightning to electrocute the targets.
    Note: Can only be used by the Third Raikage or Darui


    Immediately looking up, Senshō forms a half-meter long spear of lightning around his left hand and prepares to set off into the air. Knowing that Naruto is hopelessly immobile in mid-air, the aging Raikage focuses lightning chakra into his arms and legs, setting off with enormous speed and appearing in front of Naruto before the teen can blink. Not giving the Jinchuuriki a chance to react, Senshō thrusts his left hand into Naruto's abdomen, following up with a flurry of numbing and piercing punches that sends the teenager crahsing upwards with the same speed as Senshō, allowing the Raikage to use him as a human shield to discourage the Tsuchikage from firing his deadly attack.

    (Raiton: Jigokuzuki: Ippon Nukite) - Lightning Release: Hell Stab: One Finger Crossbeam Hand
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: Whilst the 3rd Raikage is cladded in the lightning Release Armor He builds up lightning chakra in the tips of one of his fingers and then uses that together with a piercing move.This Single finger concentration is the strongest variant of the 3rd Raikages technique. This technique is considerd similar in respect to the Raikiri and Chidori.
    Note: Can only be used by the 3rd raikage whilst cladded in the lightning release armor.


    (Gosai Ryuu Yajuu Sora Tsuppari) – Yellow Dragon Beast Sky Thrusts
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: the user will charge his arms with lightning chakra and then appear below the enemy and strike up at the upper body of the target and hitting them a total of 12 times with the final strike hitting them in the chin and each strike discharges the lightning chakra into the enemies body and induces electrical burns and numbing of the areas of contact. The numbing makes the enemy unable to perform hand seals or concentrate chakra properly for a short period of time.
    Note: Numbing Lasts for 1 turn.
    Noticing you doing the handseal and suddenly black lighting oozing from you (in a sense), Onoki, Naruto and his clones change strategy. Knowing that your armor is soon to deplete itself, leaving you without the boost of speed known to you, Naruto, who was left somewhat a bit behind in the essence of the combo, slams his hand on the ground. The area where you are and about 3 meters around you sinks 20 meters, leaving you in a 3x3x20 meter cubicle. Two of the clones, using their amazing speed, jump towards you from above, with a mayhem of rasengans around in chakra arms. The Rasengans and chakra arms easily overpower your lightning technique and protect the clone as it funels out of the cubicle towards them and they continue on to crush into you.

    (Doton: Chidōkaku) - Earth Release: Moving Earth Core
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user lowers or raises the ground in the surrounding area at high speeds, allowing them to create giant holes in the ground or avoid attacks. The size of the affected area as well as the depths that it is lowered to is up to the user and rasing earth can be done up to 20 meters tall creating a small cliff or they can create trenches that can be as deep as 20 meters. Other than being moved below ground relative to the surrounding surface the terrain is not altered, plant life and people retaining their same positions.

    (Bijutsu: Rasenrangan) - Tailed Beast Skill: Sprialling Strife Spheres x2
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: Naruto whilst in the Nine Tailed Chakra mode by uses chakra arms to form multiple Rasengan a maximum of 4. He can then hit multiple opponents while holding the Rasengan with the chakra arms.
    Note: Can only be used twice per match.

    Leaving his 2 clones above ground, short range from it, one at each side and backing up a bit, Naruto gathers himself with Onoki, to prepare the next move.

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    Sorry for the latest set of techniques not being that imaginative.
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by Scorps View Post
    Noticing you doing the handseal and suddenly black lighting oozing from you (in a sense), Onoki, Naruto and his clones change strategy. Knowing that your armor is soon to deplete itself, leaving you without the boost of speed known to you, Naruto, who was left somewhat a bit behind in the essence of the combo, slams his hand on the ground. The area where you are and about 3 meters around you sinks 20 meters, leaving you in a 3x3x20 meter cubicle. Two of the clones, using their amazing speed, jump towards you from above, with a mayhem of rasengans around in chakra arms. The Rasengans and chakra arms easily overpower your lightning technique and protect the clone as it funels out of the cubicle towards them and they continue on to crush into you.

    (Doton: Chidōkaku) - Earth Release: Moving Earth Core
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user lowers or raises the ground in the surrounding area at high speeds, allowing them to create giant holes in the ground or avoid attacks. The size of the affected area as well as the depths that it is lowered to is up to the user and rasing earth can be done up to 20 meters tall creating a small cliff or they can create trenches that can be as deep as 20 meters. Other than being moved below ground relative to the surrounding surface the terrain is not altered, plant life and people retaining their same positions.

    (Bijutsu: Rasenrangan) - Tailed Beast Skill: Sprialling Strife Spheres x2
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: Naruto whilst in the Nine Tailed Chakra mode by uses chakra arms to form multiple Rasengan a maximum of 4. He can then hit multiple opponents while holding the Rasengan with the chakra arms.
    Note: Can only be used twice per match.

    Leaving his 2 clones above ground, short range from it, one at each side and backing up a bit, Naruto gathers himself with Onoki, to prepare the next move.

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    Sorry for the latest set of techniques not being that imaginative.
    I'm not totally sure, but I pressume you stopped my Black Lightning from reaching any of your clone? Since Naruto is still on the ground and not in mid-air in your move.
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    As the ground he stands on 'sinks', Senshō grits his teeth in anger and reactivates his Lightning Armor, letting the blue coat of electricity bust alive anew.

    (Raiton no Yori) - Lightning Release Armour
    Rank: A
    Type: Defensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30 (-10 per turn activate)
    Damage points: N/A (+ 20 to regular taijutsu)
    Description: The user will wrap themselves with lightning chakra, which then electrically stimulates their nerves system and speed up their neural synapes to react faster to danger and push away any physical prowess to the absolute limit. allowing him to gain tremendous raw speed and monstrous power. This armour, combined with Taijutsu allows the user to utilize a Nintaijutsu. However due to being enveloped by lightning chakra, wind techniques cause more damage.
    Note: Technique lasts for 3 turns
    Note: Can only be used or taught by the 3rd Raikage or Raikage A biography


    Quickly looking up, the Raikage's empowered neural synapses allows him to follow the movements of the clones as they begin their attack. Reacting as fast as he can, Senshō forms a Chidori in his hand and reshapes it. With a broad swipe of his hand, the aging Raikage sends countless microscopic senbons flying towards the two clones in a great volley that fills the entire space of the relatively small hole. Behind their Rasengans, the clones should be powerless against the small senbons, as the sheer amount of them should allow the attack cover every inch of both clones.
    The attack isn't aimed at the Rasengans; it's intended to disperse the clones before they reach the Senshō.

    (Raiton: Chidori Senbon) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Needle
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user reshapes the Chidori in their hand into the form of countless senbon. It has more specialized speed than the normal Chidori and can cause damage throughout multiple places on the body. Although it’s not stated, this technique probably takes on Chidori's characteristics such as its ability to cut through almost anything and numb parts of the body.


    As he sends the senbons flying, Senshō pushes chakra into his feet and sets off directly into the air. Before he exits the hole, however, the Raikage extends a leg towards one of the walls, setting off again to change his trajectory from a vertical ascent to a beeline going directly towards Onoki. Using his superior speed to his advantage, the Raikage moves too fast for the tsuchikage to follow and appears right in front of the old man, quickly smashing both his fists into the Tsuchikages chest, utterly chrushing his ribs.

    (Kobushi Gachan) - Fist Slam
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: After covering themselves with the lightning armour, the user slams both his fists on the opponent.
    Note: Can only be used or Taught by a Raikage Bio.
     
         

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    Re: [Bio Test -Third Raikage] Zero Kelvin

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    I'm not totally sure, but I pressume you stopped my Black Lightning from reaching any of your clone? Since Naruto is still on the ground and not in mid-air in your move.
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    As the ground he stands on 'sinks', Senshō grits his teeth in anger and reactivates his Lightning Armor, letting the blue coat of electricity bust alive anew.

    (Raiton no Yori) - Lightning Release Armour
    Rank: A
    Type: Defensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30 (-10 per turn activate)
    Damage points: N/A (+ 20 to regular taijutsu)
    Description: The user will wrap themselves with lightning chakra, which then electrically stimulates their nerves system and speed up their neural synapes to react faster to danger and push away any physical prowess to the absolute limit. allowing him to gain tremendous raw speed and monstrous power. This armour, combined with Taijutsu allows the user to utilize a Nintaijutsu. However due to being enveloped by lightning chakra, wind techniques cause more damage.
    Note: Technique lasts for 3 turns
    Note: Can only be used or taught by the 3rd Raikage or Raikage A biography


    Quickly looking up, the Raikage's empowered neural synapses allows him to follow the movements of the clones as they begin their attack. Reacting as fast as he can, Senshō forms a Chidori in his hand and reshapes it. With a broad swipe of his hand, the aging Raikage sends countless microscopic senbons flying towards the two clones in a great volley that fills the entire space of the relatively small hole. Behind their Rasengans, the clones should be powerless against the small senbons, as the sheer amount of them should allow the attack cover every inch of both clones.
    The attack isn't aimed at the Rasengans; it's intended to disperse the clones before they reach the Senshō.

    (Raiton: Chidori Senbon) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Needle
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user reshapes the Chidori in their hand into the form of countless senbon. It has more specialized speed than the normal Chidori and can cause damage throughout multiple places on the body. Although it’s not stated, this technique probably takes on Chidori's characteristics such as its ability to cut through almost anything and numb parts of the body.


    As he sends the senbons flying, Senshō pushes chakra into his feet and sets off directly into the air. Before he exits the hole, however, the Raikage extends a leg towards one of the walls, setting off again to change his trajectory from a vertical ascent to a beeline going directly towards Onoki. Using his superior speed to his advantage, the Raikage moves too fast for the tsuchikage to follow and appears right in front of the old man, quickly smashing both his fists into the Tsuchikages chest, utterly chrushing his ribs.

    (Kobushi Gachan) - Fist Slam
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: After covering themselves with the lightning armour, the user slams both his fists on the opponent.
    Note: Can only be used or Taught by a Raikage Bio.
    Yeah. As I lowered you before the black lightning spews all around, the clones are left above its range, decending upon you after it.

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    As the two attacking clones dispel, me and the other clones immediately get the knowledge of what happened. The two clones left above the hole on either side throw at each other, above the whole a kunai with a wire. As they catch each others kunai, the wire is noted to have several explosive tags (4 each wire) and is placed in a way that makes you get tangled in them as you push out of the hole. As you unavoidably get tangled on the wires, you become tangled in the explosive tags. So before you actually get to burst out towards the rest of your goal, the tags explode, bursting Naruto's clones in the process and delaying you approach and actually making you come crushing down uncontrolled into the ground due to the explosion itself. Off course it doesn't hurt your body but the kinetics of the explosion is unavoidable. As this is happening, while onoki, who was floating slightly rises himself higher into the air as Naruto warns him of what he wants to do, Naruto accesses the Kurama's chakra but transforming from the normal 9 tails chakra mode to biju mode. And by the time you regain yourself, Naruto unleashes a massive sphere of bijuu chakra, ravaging the space between you and him. Onoki, on his upper advantage, does a handseal and unleashes a jinton blast, in a cylindrical beam form, targeting you directly and making sure to follow you around in case you move and making it sure to obliterate such a large area that you're left without much to escape option.

    (Bijū Mōdo) Tailed Beast Mode
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short (Long on abilities)
    Chakra: 100 (-20 per turn)
    Damage: +40 to Bijuu techniques, +20 to Wind and Fire
    Description:
    Once Naruto and Kurama start working together, Naruto gains access to Kurama's full abilities through this mode. By melding Kurama's unrestrained chakra together with his own, Naruto is able to enter Tailed Beast Mode with his shroud undergoing a drastic change. The shroud itself parts down the middle and opens into a large full-length coat, revealing a black undergarment with magatama near his neck, whilst his seal's numerous swirl-patterns that were located all over his body, open out into complete, dark circles. Naruto also gains slit pupils and his whisker-markings become much thicker. The colour of the cloak turns orange, having mixed Naruto's yellow chakra and Kurama's red. The cloak also has nine tail-like appendages formed from the cloak and flowing from it with lines running down the middle of each. While in this form, his speed and strength is dramatically enhanced, even beyond the level of the 9 Tails Chakra Mode. However, rather than becoming a true flesh-replica of the fox, the chakra shroud from the enhanced Nine-Tails Chakra Mode instead enlarges and recreates Kurama's overall form, while retaining the exact same seal that was previously present on Naruto's body. Not only is the chakra cloak translucent, not hindering Naruto's vision from inside, but it can also be manifested partially, according to Naruto's needs. While Naruto can perform techniques while on this mode, he cannot enter Sage Mode once he activates it. His use of clones is also limited, and while on this mode, Naruto can only make 2 clones.
    Note: Lasts a maximum of 4 turns and can only be used once per battle.
    Note: While on this form, Naruto can only wield Bijuu techniques, basic Ninjutsu, Wind and Fire.

    (Bijutsu: Bijudama) - Tailed Beast Skill: Tailed Beast Menacing Ball
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80 (+40)
    Description: The Tailed Beast Menacing Ball is the ultimate attack of the tailed beasts. To use the attack they gather positive black chakra and negative white chakra and shape it into a ball and compress it in their mouth and then release it. The technique is capable of destroying the three Rashomon gates with losing any of its momentum.
    Note: Can only be used once and must be in complete form.

    (Jinton: Genkai Hakuri no Jutsu) - Dust Release: Destruction of the Primitive world technique
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user after performing a single hand seal to create a cube with a sphere at its center that expands in size when dropped on the target and crushes them due to the density.
    Note: Can only be used by Onoki or Muu

    Synopsis: I simply used my clones to delay you a bit while to block your speed I simply obliterated the field in front of Naruto and Onoki, using Onoki from an above angle and Naruto from a direct angle.
     
         

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    Re: [Bio Test -Third Raikage] Zero Kelvin

    Quote Originally Posted by Scorps View Post
    Yeah. As I lowered you before the black lightning spews all around, the clones are left above its range, decending upon you after it.

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    As the two attacking clones dispel, me and the other clones immediately get the knowledge of what happened. The two clones left above the hole on either side throw at each other, above the whole a kunai with a wire. As they catch each others kunai, the wire is noted to have several explosive tags (4 each wire) and is placed in a way that makes you get tangled in them as you push out of the hole. As you unavoidably get tangled on the wires, you become tangled in the explosive tags. So before you actually get to burst out towards the rest of your goal, the tags explode, bursting Naruto's clones in the process and delaying you approach and actually making you come crushing down uncontrolled into the ground due to the explosion itself. Off course it doesn't hurt your body but the kinetics of the explosion is unavoidable. As this is happening, while onoki, who was floating slightly rises himself higher into the air as Naruto warns him of what he wants to do, Naruto accesses the Kurama's chakra but transforming from the normal 9 tails chakra mode to biju mode. And by the time you regain yourself, Naruto unleashes a massive sphere of bijuu chakra, ravaging the space between you and him. Onoki, on his upper advantage, does a handseal and unleashes a jinton blast, in a cylindrical beam form, targeting you directly and making sure to follow you around in case you move and making it sure to obliterate such a large area that you're left without much to escape option.

    (Bijū Mōdo) Tailed Beast Mode
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short (Long on abilities)
    Chakra: 100 (-20 per turn)
    Damage: +40 to Bijuu techniques, +20 to Wind and Fire
    Description:
    Once Naruto and Kurama start working together, Naruto gains access to Kurama's full abilities through this mode. By melding Kurama's unrestrained chakra together with his own, Naruto is able to enter Tailed Beast Mode with his shroud undergoing a drastic change. The shroud itself parts down the middle and opens into a large full-length coat, revealing a black undergarment with magatama near his neck, whilst his seal's numerous swirl-patterns that were located all over his body, open out into complete, dark circles. Naruto also gains slit pupils and his whisker-markings become much thicker. The colour of the cloak turns orange, having mixed Naruto's yellow chakra and Kurama's red. The cloak also has nine tail-like appendages formed from the cloak and flowing from it with lines running down the middle of each. While in this form, his speed and strength is dramatically enhanced, even beyond the level of the 9 Tails Chakra Mode. However, rather than becoming a true flesh-replica of the fox, the chakra shroud from the enhanced Nine-Tails Chakra Mode instead enlarges and recreates Kurama's overall form, while retaining the exact same seal that was previously present on Naruto's body. Not only is the chakra cloak translucent, not hindering Naruto's vision from inside, but it can also be manifested partially, according to Naruto's needs. While Naruto can perform techniques while on this mode, he cannot enter Sage Mode once he activates it. His use of clones is also limited, and while on this mode, Naruto can only make 2 clones.
    Note: Lasts a maximum of 4 turns and can only be used once per battle.
    Note: While on this form, Naruto can only wield Bijuu techniques, basic Ninjutsu, Wind and Fire.

    (Bijutsu: Bijudama) - Tailed Beast Skill: Tailed Beast Menacing Ball
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80 (+40)
    Description: The Tailed Beast Menacing Ball is the ultimate attack of the tailed beasts. To use the attack they gather positive black chakra and negative white chakra and shape it into a ball and compress it in their mouth and then release it. The technique is capable of destroying the three Rashomon gates with losing any of its momentum.
    Note: Can only be used once and must be in complete form.

    (Jinton: Genkai Hakuri no Jutsu) - Dust Release: Destruction of the Primitive world technique
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user after performing a single hand seal to create a cube with a sphere at its center that expands in size when dropped on the target and crushes them due to the density.
    Note: Can only be used by Onoki or Muu

    Synopsis: I simply used my clones to delay you a bit while to block your speed I simply obliterated the field in front of Naruto and Onoki, using Onoki from an above angle and Naruto from a direct angle.
    Honestly, if this wasn't a test and dying didn't mean a failed one, I'd have thrown everything I had into a counter-attack and gotten killed in the explosion.
    Last round of my Sixth Sense, FYI.
    Damnit, the Sandaime just isn't made to fight several opponents at once. His techniques are precise and focused, not wide-spread.
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    Senshō's grits his teeth in frustration as he feels the sensation of Ninja Wire biting into his skin. Frustration quickly becomes surprise several explosive tags activate, sending the aging Raikage tumbling towards the ground uncontrollably. With the clear focus of his Sixth Sense, however, the Raikage regains control before he even touches the ground. Using his amazing speed, Senshō forms four handseals and emits a blinding shroud of electricity and light from his body. The blinding light should force both Naruto and Onoki to close their eyes and would happen about the time Naruto goes into Biju Modo, albeit a moment after.

    (Raigen Raikochu) – Lightning Illusion Flash of Lightning Pillar
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementaty
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: After performing the following handseals Ram → Horse → Snake → Tiger the user will then create a blinding light that appears to emanate from the users body and blind the target/s.


    Taking advantage of his distraction, the Raikage twists his body in mid-air, readying himself for a jump. The second Senshō touches the ground he sets off again, racing directly towards Onoki with the speed and force of a freight-train. Appearing besides the old Tsuchikage, Senshō grabs the man with both hands and lifts him above his head, crushing the older man's body all the while to prevent him from performing techniques. As his momentum declines, Senshō begins a fast descent and lifts his legs into a high horizontal position while placing the Tsuchikage below his body, much like a pile-driver.
    "Raigā Bomu!" Senshō screams as he zooms towards the ground using the Tsuchikage as a human shield. To make matters even worse for his enemies, Senshō adjusts his trajectory, allowing him to land right on top of Naruto. This should cause complete chaos as the enormous force of the Liger Bomb crashes with the ground and another Shinobi.
    I don't defend against your Bijudama since I'm essentially using Onoki as a human shield. I don't suppose Naruto would suddenly see reason in sacrificing his comrades, eh?

    (Raigā Bomu) - Liger Bomb
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: After covering themselves with the lightning amour, the user grabs his opponent and lifts them high into the air. Then, using his extreme strength, he smashes them head first onto the ground in what resembles a power bomb manoeuvre. This is devastating enough to shatter a large area of the ground itself on impact.
    Note: Can only be used of Taught by a Raikage bio
     
         

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    Re: [Bio Test -Third Raikage] Zero Kelvin

    Closed for grading.

    I've seen enough. I'll grade it today in a bit. ^^
     
         

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    Re: [Bio Test -Third Raikage] Zero Kelvin


    Congratulations! I wasn't easy on you and kept pressuring you as much as possible without actually killing you and you kept in character and used only taijutsu, close combat and lighting. Even when faced with moves that your instinct might have lead you to use fire or earth or other elements, you stook with lightning. Excellent job! Some minor tweaks here and there existed yes, but nothing that would deem this a fail mostly because the fact that you kept using and countering with only lightning and the bios own taijutsu abilities made it so that such minor details don't place a part. I'll check your bio and if everything is ok, i'll approve it today. Again, congratulations.

    PS- in my next move i'd make Naruto do a shadow clone and him and the clone would use Fire Great destruction directly at you. Or I'd go into close combat using his higher speed in bijuu mode to stop you and actually kill you. Just so you know. LOL And I hope you had as much fun as I did. ^^
     
         

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