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    Fire to the Kage- Chapter lll

    Fire to the Kage Chapter 3

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    The blade is on my back. Touching my skin, ripping my soul apart. My heart pounding against the wind. Eyes looking down, where my head will be in thirty seconds. The past is now in front of me, Sakura, Ino, Shikamaru, Kiba, everyone. Exept Naruto, he obviously didn’t come.

    Sasuke: “I’m coming Aruko” I wink at the sky. I might accually see him up there, now that I think of it, living a hard life is harder than seeing my friend again.

    20, 19, 18…

    I hear a sound to the right, like a fast wind, kind of painful one too.

    15, 14, 13…

    I manage to find my chakra pulse, somewhere beyond where it was disabled.

    10, 9, 8…

    I try to activate mangekyo, but I can’t take the pressure of the crowd and the sense of the blade.

    5, 4..

    I open my eyes, I will die with my clan’s dignity.

    3, 2, 1…

    Shikamaru: “ I can’t do it! He is last! Last Uchiha! We can’t let him go that quick!” I hear a voice from behind, I quickly spin off the chains on my hands, grabing a kunai from the crack in the floor (it was for decoration, to mark that I was a traitor)

    Sasuke:“I am Sasuke Uchiha, many of you hate me, many of you want my head on the floor, but remember, that the Uchiha served the nations with pride and my brother…!” I cry out loud, making sure everyone can hear. “I might deserve to die, but at least let the Uchiha live” this time, I said it quieter “And I, am the only one alive”

    I feel liquid flowing threw my body, the last thing I see is the Elder with a blowgun.

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    I feel that painful wind again, the one before my execution. Then I see a flick of a Konoha vest right in front of me.

    Naruto:“ Glad you woke up” said a familiar voice.

    Sasuke: “ Egh, let me go!” I whisper aggressively.

    Then I see two people putting me down near a puddle, on the soft ground. Naruto and Shikamaru. “Ey there guys… why are we here, I thought I would be on Konoha execution block this morning.”

    Shikamaru: “Let me explain” said Shikamaru, in his passive voice. “The Elders knocked you out, afraid of you giving information about Itachi’s mission. They called the AMBU, but unfortunately, all of them were on another mission in Tobi’s hideout. So I volunteered to take you away from everyone, so you wouldn’t cause problems, and one day they will trial you again, but before I had the time to pack, Naruto came and asked to come with me, to the elders he said ‘in case of an attack’ so they accepted. We are going to Otagakure, the sound village, which you know by heart” He takes a breath and goes silence for a moment.

    It is a awful lot to take in, after what I just went through, so I have to break the silence, “Naruto, after I was gone, was did Sakura do”

    Naruto:“She did everything to get to you one day”

    Sasuke: “So did you” I reply

    Naruto: “But I wanted you back because you were a friend, and she wanted you back for a different reason”

    Sasuke: “That’s what I care about anyway. So, Otagakure” I quickly fix my shirt, I have to be polite, in case they will want me beheaded again. “Orochimaru had an extra hideout which was where we stayed for about a week, but it is a wonderful place, so please, follow me when we cross the border”

    Shika and Naruto “Alright”

    And so, we head off.

    Hello hello. <<< Dem author here, and I have some news.This will be put to the next competition, so I would be grateful if you could support me in that... :D... So yeah, sorry for the late issue, I have been waiting till July to put it out there, but I am too impatient for that Thanks for all the support! Im going to go to each chapter and make edits, to improve, not to change the story or anything
     
         
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    Re: Fire to the Kage- Chapter lll

    *fixed the formatting ._.*
     
         

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    Re: Fire to the Kage- Chapter lll

    Wow nice fanfic now i must just read chapters 1 and 2 but great job
     
         

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    Re: Fire to the Kage- Chapter lll

    Hey, like this! Keep it flown
     
         

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    Re: Fire to the Kage- Chapter lll

    Announcement (asked for from my best friend )

    The next chapter will be released in the first week of July, the 5th one will be on the second week and 6th one and the 7th one will be on the third, meaning in July I will have three to five chapters, because in August I'll be busy ^^
     
         

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    Re: Fire to the Kage- Chapter lll

    Thanks, wiede and mizu. :D
    Yeah read the other chapters aswell
     
         

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    Re: Fire to the Kage- Chapter lll

    nice fanfic trully original
     
         

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    Re: Fire to the Kage- Chapter lll

    Quote Originally Posted by nickuchiha25 View Post
    nice fanfic trully original
    Thanks! Btw, new chapter out, http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...d.php?t=209530

    Chapter 4! July special, new chapter every week or even more ^^
     
         

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    Re: Fire to the Kage- Chapter lll

    Ooh amazed!!
     
         

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