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    Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 10

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    Chapter 10

    The next morning Naruto was in the Office doing some paper work he then hears a knock at the door.

    Naruto: Enter

    Darui: you asked to see me and Karui before we headed off Hokage Sama.

    Naruto: yes take this and give this message to your Raikage and once again thank you for your help with the mission. Oh and one last thing I have sent a message to the Raikage saying you should be home in a few days or so.

    Karui: Hokage Sama thank you for your hospitality, we will be on our way then and that is okay we are allies now.

    After Karui & Darui had left Naruto decided it was about time he headed off to the roof to wait for everyone he had summoned. Not long after Naruto had left the office he arrived on the roof of the Hokage Mansion & a few mins later everyone else had shown up.

    Sakura: everyone is here Hokage Sama.

    Naruto: thank you Sakura, now I know it has been very busy last couple of weeks since I became the Hokage, so I decided today I would take the time to give everyone their official duties; I have them written down on this piece of paper here.

    Naruto then took a deep breath and began to read off the piece of paper.

    Sakura Apart from being my Advisor

    I have decided to make you head of the hospital, I also thought that you could train any genin that wish to learn medical ninjutsu & you are in charge of organising the medical side of the Chuunin exams. Oh & one more thing the other the other Kage have asked me to get you to teach one Shinobi & one Kunoichi from their village medical ninjutsu.

    Ino I have decided you will be second in charge of the hospital & assist Sakura with training the Genin that want to learn medical ninjutsu etc.

    Shikamaru Apart from my Advisor I would also appreciate it if you would be my right hand man & I have decided to put you in charge of organising the Chuunin exams which will be in 2-3 months.

    Temari When you are not on missions or training with your three genin could you please assist Shikamaru with the Chuunin exams.

    Sai Apart from being in charge of root & you will be my Advisor when Shikamaru is away on missions.

    Rocklee When you are not on Missions or training your genin, you will assist Iruka at the academy.

    Sasuke I have told you that you are in charge of the ANBU so I would like you to start up a new police force.

    Kakashi & Yamato You are to assist Sasuke with the ANBU & the Police force.

    Tsunade & Shizune I want you both to assist Sakura and Ino I am sure they will need your help.

    Hinata When you are not busy you will be my advisor when Sakura is on missions or busy at the hospital.

    Neji Help Shikamaru with the Chuunin exams & assist Sasuke with the Police force.

    Tenten You are in charge of the village’s ninja tools making sure we never run out.

    Konohamaru If I ever have to leave the Village I will leave you in charge I trust you..

    Kiba Help Sasuke with the maintaining the security of the Village.

    Shino Assist Kiba

    Choji You can help Shikamaru with the Chuunin exams & you also will be in charge of organising village events & celebrations.

    Moegi You will learn Medical ninjutsu from Sakura & you will assist
    Konohamaru if I ever have to leave the village.

    Udon You will report to Sasuke everyday and assist him & you will also assist Konohamaru if I ever have to leave the village.
    Everyone accepted their duties.

    Naruto: any Jounin wanting to enter in their genin into the Chuunin Exams let me know in two months, well now that is over I better get back to work
    Neji please bring Akira to my office in an hour.

    Neji: yes Hokage Sama.

    Scene Skip

    Meanwhile in the Hidden Storm Village.

    ???: WHERE ARE THE ANBU THAT I SENT OUT TO BRING BACK OUR ROUGE NINJA THEY SHOULD OF BEEN BACK WEEKS AGO!

    Souta: we have heard no word my Master, I am going to assume the worst that our Rouge Ninja managed to find help and they managed to defeat the
    ANBU. I am also going to guess they will be interrogated; and it will be too late to stop them from finding out about us.

    ???: we must send the best ninja squad you have to retrieve them and the Rouge Ninja regardless, otherwise all of our hard work will go to waste; Oh and they should not find out to much really if what I did to them before they left works.

    Souta: I will see to it Master

    ???: good do not disappoint me & don’t forget I control this village now the Arashikage is just one of my pawns, you are dismissed.

    Souta: yes Master, you over there take this piece of paper & bring the ninja listed on there to me at once.

    ANBU Member: yes sir
    Souta then left and went to his office. A half an hour later the ANBU Member had done what he was asked.

    ANBU Member: I have brought the ninja squad you requested

    Souta: thank you, you may leave now.

    ???: you wanted to see us

    Souta: Junichi Shimizu, Fumiko Kojima & Takumi Kojima I have a S-Rank Mission for you retrieve our Rouge Ninja his name is Akira, we sent ANBU after him a few weeks ago and they have not returned either your mission is to bring them all back to the village.

    Junichi Shimizu: yes sir you can count on us.

    Souta: it will not be easy but you are the best squad in this Village both your clans are well known now go, oh and avoid being seen by any one.

    Junichi, Fumiko, Takumi : Understood

    They all then left the Office

    Takumi we will meet at front of the Village tonight when it is dark

    Fumiko, yes well I am off to Prepare you two should do the same

    Scene Skip

    Back in Konoha

    Neji: I am here to take the Prisoner to the Hokage

    ANBU Member: Understood I will go get him for you.

    The ANBU Member then went to get the Prisoner

    ANBU Member: Hey you in the cell stand up the Hokage wishes to see you
    now.

    Akira then smiles and stands up and exits the cell

    ANBU Member: here is the prisoner Neji

    Neji: Thank you Akira come with me.
    Half an hour later Neji and Akira arrived at the Hokage’s & Neji then knocked on the door.

    Naruto: enter

    Neji: Hokage here is Akira

    Naruto: Thank you Neji, now Akira the Raikage has filled me in a little you have left your village for help, we have those Jounin that where after you they are being interrogated right now is there anything else I need to know.

    Akira: well my friend is the previously selected Arashikage & I believe he is being controlled a couple months back things were going well, until that one fate full night we were attacked, the Arashikage managed to save the village but not long after that he started acting strange I believe someone is controlling him; I don’t know how this person got in but never mind that now just before I left I stumbled across these documents. (Akira then pulls a few bits of parchment out of his pocket) I managed to get away with them I never got to read them but I don’t mind. Our village has lived in peace for ages now, & I reckon it is about time we came out of the shadows; I think the unknown person wants to take over our village & I have no idea why though don’t take my word for it read the parchment.

    Naruto: Akira thank you I will read this & we will see what we can get from these Jounin and I will see what we can do about this I hope we can help your village, I will talk with the other Kages Neji please take him back to his cell; I hope you understand Akira I have to protect my Village.

    Akira: I understand perfectly don’t worry.

    Neji: okay let’s go Akira

    Neji and Akira then left the office.

    Scene Skip

    Meanwhile in the Sand Village Garra was in his office he then heard a sudden knock on the door.

    Garra: Enter

    Kankuro: Kazekage Sama here is the list of all the Genin that have been selected for the Chuunin exams, I have recommended your son my nephew/student he is doing really well; my son is also doing well & has also been recommended.

    Garra: thank you Kunkuro I would really like to see all these Genin & there Jounin tomorrow first thing oh and the new Jinchuriki has been selected I am against this but, we can’t leave the Shukaku like that for too much longer the seal won’t last much longer after all I want you to seal it into this child but, I want to see her first this is who it will be bring her to me after I have seen the Genin.

    Kankuro: yes Kazekage Sama, & is this really the only way to protect our village.

    Garra: trust me I wish there was another way I really don’t want to make another Jinchuriki it is the last thing I want to do I have held it off as long as possible.

    Kankuro: Understood

    Garra: oh and Kunkuro can you send this to Temari please oh and how is your son going.

    Kankuro: I will send it off right now & my son is doing well he is training with your son they are both preparing for the Chuunin Exams, right now any way I will see you tomorrow.

    (Kunkuro has been married for a quite a few years now he has two sons & one daughter and he has another on the way)

    Garra: yes I will see you tomorrow at nine o’clock sharp.

    Kankuro: yes Kazekage Sama

    After Kunkuro left & Matsuri entered

    Matsuri: I am guessing you just told Kunkuro the bad news

    Garra: yeah I am not looking forward to that tomorrow.

    Matsuri: it is understandable that you would not want to put someone
    through what you went through, now let’s go out for dinner, and not talk about it till tomorrow.

    Garra: good idea I will be right with you Matsuri.

    Once Garra had finished what he was doing he & Matsuri left to go have tea

    The next day

    Garra was in his office doing some paper work and there was a knock on the door it was Kankuro and all the Genin & the Jounin teachers.

    Kankuro: Kazekage Sama I have done what you requested

    Garra: thank you Kankuro now I want you all to hear what I have to say, I was a Genin like all of you once you are, the next generation & one day one of you may become Kazekage one day just do your best. Now for the Jounin I know you will push & push your students don’t forget what these Chuunin exams are really about now you are all dismissed except for you Kankuro, Hikaru & Hotaru.

    Hikaru: Kunkuro sensei what’s going on?

    Kankuro: well I will let the Kazekage explain that.

    Garra: Hikaru what I am about to say may scare you, now everyone in this
    Village knows about the Shukaku right.

    Hikaru: yes dad did tell us a story about it once.

    Garra: well you are to be the next host don’t worry it was not a decision made lightly, and no one in this village will be told I have made strict conditions, now you and your sister will follow Kunkuro & I. Your parents did not want this but they know it is for the good of the village and you are welcome to talk to me any time do not exclude yourself from anything you are a Sand Shinobi.

    Hikaru was hesitant but she did want to protect her village and understood what she must do.

    Hikaru: let’s go Hotaru

    Hotaru: aren’t you scared sis

    Hikaru: of course I am but I have you the Kazekage & Kankuro sensei with me and I am ready for this responsibility even though I know it won’t be an easy burden to bare alone.

    Garra: as long as she has friends and family she should be fine Hotaru

    Kankuro: the Kazekage is right.

    Not long after Garra, Kankuro, Hotaru & Hikaru had left the office they saw the ANBU that where going to help along with, Matsuri they all then headed into a dim lit room, there was also a table in there.

    Garra: Hikaru please lie down on the table
    Hikaru was once again acted a little hesitant she looked at Hotaru

    Hotaru: you can do it sis this is for the good of the village.

    Hikaru: yes Kazekage Sama, thank you sister I know what I must do now.

    Hikaru then went to lie on the table she was then followed by Kunkuro all preparations where then made, & then Kunkuro then started to perform the sealing technique as this was going on Garra had tears running down his face Matsuri walked up to him.

    Matsuri: you have to be strong she will be loved she will never be alone don’t you worry my dear.

    Garra: your are right it will be different for her

    An hour later it was all over

    Garra: don’t forget know one is to know about this everyone is sworn to secrecy.

    Everyone: (In unison) Understood Kazekage Sama

    Everyone then left the dim lit room.

    Garra: Kunkuro I wrote this letter last night can you please send this to the
    Hokage please, oh & you will be going to Konoha with your four Genin next week to help organise the Chuunin Exams.

    Kankuro: yes Kazekage Sama.

    i hope you enjoy this chapter sorry if it is a bit long i got a bit carried away please let me know what you think.

    here is the link to chapter 9
    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...d.php?t=191515
     
         
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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 10

    Wow, o_o
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 10

    You made Naruto waaaaaaay to serious
     
         

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    Kunkuro lmfao sir you deserve +rep just for that
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 10

    Nice
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 10

    it was a Very Nice Fanfic,
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 10

    Quote Originally Posted by Aura View Post
    Wow, o_o
    thank you

    Quote Originally Posted by The Uzamaki View Post
    You made Naruto waaaaaaay to serious
    he wont be serious all the time

    Quote Originally Posted by Bisma View Post
    Nice
    Thank you

    Quote Originally Posted by ItachiSan03 View Post
    Kunkuro lmfao sir you deserve +rep just for that
    lol thanks for picking that up i just corrected that its to late to correct it in my other chapters tho

    Quote Originally Posted by Yuka View Post
    it was a Very Nice Fanfic,
    thank you

    thank you for the nice comments so far everyone
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 10

    awesome chapter well worth the wait
    + rep
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 10

    •_• awesome chapter !!
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 10

    Quote Originally Posted by ONE TIME ONE PLACE View Post
    awesome chapter well worth the wait
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    thank you i am glad you liked it & thanks for the rep

    Quote Originally Posted by Braveknight View Post
    •_• awesome chapter !!
    thank you i am glad you enjoyed it
     
         
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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 10

    its very goooood !!!....but u didn't send me the link
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 10

    awesome D
    i was waiting for it to come out
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 10

    Really enjoyed reading it , it was great , lots of effort! But that piece makes me wanna read more
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 10

    it's awesome

    can't wait for the next chap.....
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 10

    This chapter furthered even more character development which is always welcomed and I liked how Naruto issued out Konoha 10 duties lol I thought you did a good job assigning duties accurately. I liked how you issued Udon to assist Sasuke as he had admired him in the past I was happy to read about the Storm Village again ^.^ I liked how introduced several new characters no matter how small their roles may have been. The jinchuuriki implantation was unexpected but I liked it! Good job, looking forward to the next chapter and hopefully I’ll be able to read the following chapters as soon as you release them
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 10

    Quote Originally Posted by Kuroi Honoo View Post
    This chapter furthered even more character development which is always welcomed and I liked how Naruto issued out Konoha 10 duties lol I thought you did a good job assigning duties accurately. I liked how you issued Udon to assist Sasuke as he had admired him in the past I was happy to read about the Storm Village again ^.^ I liked how introduced several new characters no matter how small their roles may have been. The jinchuuriki implantation was unexpected but I liked it! Good job, looking forward to the next chapter and hopefully I’ll be able to read the following chapters as soon as you release them

    i am glad you enjoyed this chapter, yeah i thought it was time that i issued them & it was alittle hard assigning them but i eventually got it right before i posted this chapter, yeah i thought it was a good thing what i decided to do for both Udon & Moegi even, i am happy you also enjoyed the storm village part it took awhile but it was also fun & as for the jinchuuriki i thought that would be a surprise & its ok i understand i can give you a reminder if you want .
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 10

    Quote Originally Posted by serenaandrosie View Post
    i am glad you enjoyed this chapter, yeah i thought it was time that i issued them & it was alittle hard assigning them but i eventually got it right before i posted this chapter, yeah i thought it was a good thing what i decided to do for both Udon & Moegi even, i am happy you also enjoyed the storm village part it took awhile but it was also fun & as for the jinchuuriki i thought that would be a surprise & its ok i understand i can give you a reminder if you want .
    Yes, this chapter was as good as these many :ice: flavors I thought you did a really good job with this one and the jinchuuriki was a nice addition. I would actually appreciate you linking me to future chapters as I have so much to do when I log in plus a bad memory -_-
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 10

    I really enjoyed reading your Fanfiction! It's an awesome read.
    The characters act the same like in the original manga and your own characters are really appealing and interesting. The story is very gripping and brilliantly told, and your grammar improves in every chapter. (though I don't mind the grammar, don't worry)
    I hope you continue this fabulous FF and in the future, I hope you release your own book one day! It's wonderful, well done! :D
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 10

    nice!!!! good job on this one!
     
         

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