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    naruto: rise of the uzumaki dynasty Arc 2 chapter 9 pack leader

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    Arc 1


    Arc 2 chapters


    here it is

    naruto enters senin mode and feels many chakras in the forest ahead and behind. he has sweat dripping from his head. as it falls to the ground below it forms puddles that the man wolves start to smell.

    naruto (he thinks to himself) *i can't enter divine mode with so many people around they'll get hurt who ever did this did at a good time pace.* sasuke! (he yells loud enough for everyone hear him)

    sasuke (he looks towards naruto. he has the ems activated) what? (he retorts in fustration)

    naruto (he flashes behind him) take hinata and get as far away as you can. (he says in a demanding voice)

    sasuke (he looks in naruto's eyes they are begining to get skyblue in the screilla) what are you planning to do? (he yells grabbing hinata)

    naruto (he smiles and looks towards akami) im going to enter divine mode and try knock them out from our trail (he says confidently)

    sasuke (he looks at him surprise) with what? you don't know any genjutsu.... i see (he suddenly dashes and everyone else but minato and kushina follow suite)



    naruto and minato start gather chakra from the light and life forces surronding them. kushina gets in front of them and gets ready to punch one of the beasts in the face. she hits him dead on and sends him flying intoi a tree

    kushina (she looks back to her husband and son) hurry up! (she says in concern)

    naruto &minato (they keeps their eyes closed and hands clapped) we're tryin'! (they both retort with a yell)

    kushina (she launches a chain from her hand and it hits a beast) try faster! (she yells in fustration)

    naruto and minato start to have seal marks go over their skin. naruto's eyes gain a dark blue shading around the eye lids and minato's the same. kushina slams three more into the ground and drops kicks one into a tree. she has vain popping in her forehead

    kushina (she raise her right fist into the air) ninja art: gathered bindings (she yells aloud)

    wire eurpt from all over the place and many of the beasts. get entangled as minato is the first one done with senin mode. he charges and spin kicks one into the ground causing it flp up and get hit with rasangan.

    minato (he looks towards his on who starts to glow bright yellow and with blue rings around his eyes.) come on naruto hurry up (he says laughingly)

    about that time a beast appears behind him and is about to slash him when naruto flashes behind him and counters with a kick that sends the beast skywards. naruto open his eyes; his pupil are golden and his scriellas are skyblue



    minato sage art: chasm clearing (he says slamming his kunai in the ground and forming handseals)

    the earth opens up and naruto sees water under the ground start to flowing up. naruto place his hands in the water and the water forms around it. naruto then snaps his hands up and massive amounts of water flow up with it. he lets it go and the water continues to fly up. naruto starts form handseals.

    naruto (he forms the rabbit and bore handseals) earth style: mud flow (he says causing the surrounding earth to turn into mud.)

    the mud rushes into the forrest trapping many of the beasts infront of them as the water comes back down and begins to form a massive flow and drags them away. naruto exits divine mode

    minato and kushina look with amazment at their son. he begins to sense more coming toward them but later turn back to the rest of group's location

    naruto (fearing for hinata and his friends lives) we must hurry! (he shouts at minato and kushina.)

    minato (he nods at naruto) kushina grab on to naruto! i think its time for him to show me what his flying thunder god is like (he says smiling)

    kushina (she pats hard on naruto shoulder. and looks at him) well what are we waiting for? (she says confidently)

    *mean while several miles away*



    sasuke (he looks through his sharingan and sees a massive chakra force heading for them) everyone get ready this guy is no joke *once again someone rivaling naruto's chakra however i got a surprise* (he smirks while thinking this)

    sasuke and kiba run ahead leaving an injuried and knocked out kurama and a pregnant sakura behind. hinata follows suite with sasuke.

    sasuke (he looks at hinata) what are you doing!? (he yells)

    hinata (she looks at sasuke and claps her hands and begins to fall towards the ground staying perfectly still) im going to enter sage mode please stand clear (she retorts softly)

    sasuke (he activates dms and stops and looks at hinata. he's seeing another very faint chakra inside of her. he begins to clap his hands) *naruto you owe me alot on this one* DIVNE MODE! (she shouts)

    life and light chakra rushes into sasukes eyes and he begins to have a yellow aura surround him. hinata is interuppted and looks up in surprise.

    kiba (he looks towards sasuke) when did you...? (he stopped by sasuke)

    sasuke (he looks at them both and his sharingan glows a bright golden color) while watching naruto fight yamamotto i used my divine mangekyou sharingan to copy it down (he says in fustration)

    sasuke stares at the many chakra sources heading for them and he dashes at lightning speeds



    sasuke (sasuke sees one approaching fast) lions den barrage (he says kicking the first beast in the face)

    everything is moving slow around sasuke. he kicks off the other beast face and sends his right fist unto another face. he looks towards a group and uses tskuyomi to confuse them. he jumps in between them. he takes out his blade and puts it back in. suddenly many lightning streaks form around the bodies of the beasts and they collaspe.

    kiba (he looks towards hinata) our turn hinata (he says proudly)

    kiba rushes the other beasts and starts spinning in mid air. akami appears above him and does the same

    kiba (he looks at the other beasts and starts spinning faster) fang claw attack. yeah who (he screams as he barrels throught he first group)

    akami (she looks at kiba in amazment and stops spinning and transforms into her wolf form and jumps into the air) man beast style: slashing fang. (she says in her demonic voice)



    Both kiba and her go through next few groups easily. they then stop beside each other and look up at the sky and see the lightning starts to become more ferocious. hinata engages 5 of the beasts at once. the first one charge only to be knocked to the ground by a kick from her heel. she the jumps up and does a split kick sending the two more flying in opposite direction. she then starts spinning sending the rest flying in opposite directions.

    kiba (keep leaps down at hinata and he sees a beast about to strike from behind) hinata! (he shouts but suddenly a lightly colored figure appears behind her and counters sending the beast flying)

    naruto (he looks at hinata and she flys in his arms) are you ok.... hinata? (he says softly as minato and kushina appear behind him)

    hinata (she starts to get sick and begins faint) naruto...... (she moans silently)

    naruto (he begins to hold her tight and he looks towards his mother) mom take her away from here now somthing is coming near here that equals me (he says sternly)

    kushina nods her head and begins to run with hinata cradel in her arms. just then a hooded man appears before them and his about to stab kushina with a blade when naruto drop kicks him into the ground. sasuke jumps besides naruto.



    naruto (he looks at sasuke and back at the hooded figure) they have simular chakra. (he says)

    sasuke (he looks at naruto strangley) who? (he retorts)

    ??? if you are refering to my bother yamamotto then i guess your the one that finnaly killed him.... (he jumps down in front of sasuke and naruto. akami eyes widen)

    akami (she gets angry and is about to charge when kiba holds her back) you're the damn bastard that enslaved my clan (she shouts)



    sazuto (he begins to transform into a wolf) i am sazuto, i am the king of the wolves and akami. lord kazumo will be pleased when the armies of the wolf descend upon your precious race, uzumaki. but now i'll start with the traitor (he points a claw at akami)

    kiba (he begins to form handseals) like hell i'll let you! (he yells begining to go into man beast transformation)

    naruto (kiba flies past his face and naruto reaches to grabs him but misses) kiba wait don't! (he yells)

    he and sazuto clash kiba slices at his face only to be side kicked into a tree. naruto and sasuke get ready to fight him when akami jumps down by kiba's side

    kiba & akami (she helps him get off the ground and both get on all fours) this is our fight! (they both yell toward sasuke and naruto)

    sasuke (he puts his sword away and nods his head and looks toward naruto doing the same) let them fight him (he says toward naruto)

    naruto (he looks on and looks back at sasuke) ok but i'll jump in if things go bad (he retorts with a growl)


    kiba and akami charge at sazuto. he blocks both of them with ease but feels a sharp pain in his stomach. both kiba's and akami's clawed hands are in his belly. he pushes them and begins to bleed heavily but the wound seals up fast. kiba and akami start spinning faster and faster. naruto and sasuke smirk and charge sazuto in their base forms.

    end of chapter

    next time:


    naruto next time on naruto: rise of uzumaki dynasty

    kiba man this guy is tough. he's taking all four us on at once and naruto looks like he is enjoying it. will we be able to withstand it all against the brother of naruto's main foe and why is naruto enjoying himself. find out next time

    credits
    main editor: hinata020
    writer and producer: izinagi54
    partners in crime: killer vison, hinatao20
    next chapter 6/2/12 at 7:30 est (US) time.


    and ummm one question if you like to help out we are looking for some people who can do flashes or animations i'll explain why later

    have a nice day and god bless
     
         
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    Death is natural... and to
    deflower such a natural thing
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    the whims of Nature shall know
    the true pain in which none
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    gift that we all can be happy
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    Re: naruto: rise of the uzumaki dynasty Arc 2 chapter 9 pack leader

    yeah i know extremely long but i got into the creative mood i promiss this weekends will be shorter but im just trying get more character time for the side characters
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    kiba
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    kurama (nine tails)
    the new character akami
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    shizune, minato and kushina you know im tryin my best but im trying to not only focus on naruto's development
     
         

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    nice ending nice everything!!! great job chris you were blessed with an amazing imagination
     
         

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    Re: naruto: rise of the uzumaki dynasty Arc 2 chapter 9 pack leader

    that was epic but who is akami
     
         

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    wait never mind i missed a chapter
     
         

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    awwwwww ..

    ending >.<..

    Good job man ..

    i hope u make more :D
     
         

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    very well plotted. keep it up chris.. *thumbs up*
     
         

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    Good going
     
         

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    Re: naruto: rise of the uzumaki dynasty Arc 2 chapter 9 pack leader

    well wow for some reason i really love this the most (+rep)
     
         

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    Another great chapter Izi you get 5 stars for that buddy
     
         

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    yeah its really long but its nice
     
         

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    yeah im sorry about the length but as they say just roll with it
     
         

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    Why did Sasuke get Naruto's Divine Mode? Not fair.
     
         

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    Death is natural... and to
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    Re: naruto: rise of the uzumaki dynasty Arc 2 chapter 9 pack leader

    yeah about the chapter release it will be sunday instead of saturday i have a birthday to go to of my cousin so ill be clocking out early
     
         

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    Hey when will the next one be up is there some timeline xx
     
         

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    Great jod again hinata020 and izinagi54
     
         

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    good chapter keep up the good job
     
         

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    You are gr8
     
         

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    i have really enjoy this chapter and the others i have read also plus rep
     
         

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