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    Naruto: Shichiyo Gaiden XLI

    Chapter 41: The Chuunin Exam Finalists


    Kurama's eyes open suddenly, feeling a strong chakra. “Naruto!” the Kyuubi growls.

    “I feel it too.” Naruto says. “It's another Bijuu's chakra, Suna's Jinchuuriki must be seeping chakra out of it's seal. I'll have one of my clones—”

    “No you fool, this is not Shukaku's power.” Kurama cuts Naruto off, confusing him.

    “What are you talking about? Sunagakure is the only village that has a Jinchuuriki participating in the exams.”

    “That's impossible. We all have our own distinct chakra, it's not easily recognized to most except by us. This is the chakra of the Rokubi, but I can't place my finger on it, it's extremely weak.”

    “The Rokubi...that belongs to Kirigakure.” Naruto says. “Hey!”

    A shinobi drops down from the and appears behind Naruto. “Yes Hokage-sama.”

    “Go through the records of all the Kirigakure participants again, I want you to check every one of their files and tell me anything you find out of the ordinary.” The shinobi nods and disappears again.

    “Naruto, what are you going to do, even with this little bit of chakra, it's more then enough to kill any of these shinobi, even some of the proctors.”

    Naruto closes his eyes and quickly enters Sage Mode. “There's so many things going with the other nations right now that are so sketchy. Jomae, Iwa, and now Kiri, on top of that we have to worry about Kabuto who has already poked his nose into these exams. With this new suspicious activity arising, I can't let it go ignored...so I can't interfere until I get more information.” Naruto says with an unexpected sacrificing intent in his voice.

    “So you're going to let this happen until you find out what you need to?” Kurama says. Naruto doesn't respond, however it's all too apparent.

    “If things get too out of hand I'll step in but not now, whomever is dealing with this right now....is on their own for the time being.”
    ~Violet Territory~


    Ryoko gets a fearful chill up her spine as she senses the chakra coming from the Kiri shinobi near Koji and Hi. “That chakra...it's the same as...”

    “You're friends are as good as dead if they're not already.” The one Kiri shinobi say. Ryoko turns her head in the direction of the voice, the mist still thick on the field. She hears more projectiles heading towards her and she blocks them with great reflexes.

    “Enough!” Ryoko sheaths her blades and makes five quick seals “Futon: Daitoppa! (Wind Style: Great Breakthrough).” Ryoko releases a huge gust of wind which blows away the mist from the area and toppling some of the trees in front of her. She takes out her blades again and swings behind her releasing a huge gust of wind behind her and the mist behind her disperses as well. The two Kiri shinobi come back into full sight of Ryoko to her right atop a tree. “That other shinobi with you, is he a Jinchuuriki too?!” Ryoko asks demanding.

    “That's none of your concern. Instead of being worried about your friends, you should be worried about yourself!” The shinobi claps his hands and a vortex of water begins to form around him. “Suiton: Suishoha! (Water Style: Water Shock Wave)” The large vortex of water darts down towards Ryoko at a great speed. Ryoko looks shocked at the level of techniques the shinobi uses. Her eyes widen as the dexterity of the water. She's unable to avoid the wave of water and it collides with her hard, washing her away and into a tree. As Ryoko crashes into the tree she's immediately rendered unconscious and the water continues to flow and goes above her head.

    The water continues to spread out through the field and eventually it begins to sink into the ground and flow down hill into the river and Ryoko's unconscious body is visible to the two shinobi. “She's done.” The one shinobi says.

    “We'll take her flag and head to Ro.”

    “Jyuuken! (Gentle Fist)” Hime appears from above launching her palm downwards towards the two Kiri shinobi. They back away slightly as Hime lands in between them. Immediately after she lands she kicks out her right leg and whips around. Her palms open and she spins counterclockwise fast and hits both the shinobi with the blades of her hands on the neck knocking them off the tree. One of the shinobi lands on his feet but as he does, Ryoko shoots her eyes open and quickly slams her hands on the ground.

    Just then from beneath the ground, several meerkats shoot up spiraling looking like disk projectiles and attack the shinobi. One hits him in the face hard, causing him to stumble backwards. Another one hits the shinobi going across his legs, knocking them from under him making him air born and another hits his back sending him high into the air. The meerkats slide on the ground and then they shoot out again in their disk projectile manor and begin hitting the shinobi from every direction in a barrage of powerful rotating body slams. The last one comes down from the top and lands him in his stomach. The shinobi's mask is knocked off and wind is knocked out of him from the sheer force and he's falls to the ground unconscious.

    The second shinobi regains his balance only to find Hime right under him as he does. “Hakke Sanjuni Sho (Eight Trigrams: Thirty-two palms).” With admirable speed Hime begins striking the shinobi only with the tips of her fingers, hitting him thirty-two in vital chakra points. She finishes and the shinobi drops to his knees and falls over unconscious. “Ryoko, are you alright?”

    “We have to get to Koji and Hi now!” Ryoko says with a sense of urgency in her voice.

    “What's going on?” Hime asks confused.

    “I'll tell you on the way but we need to get back there quickly.” Ryoko says. Hime nods, taking the flags of the two Kiri shinobi. The two kunoichi then dart out and head towards their comrades.

    Ro rushes Koji and Hi and he lets loose four kunai. Hi, controlled by Koji's strings, takes out kunai with amazing speed and deflects the kunai. Ro then releases a large blast of chakra from his palm, much larger then his last one. Koji has Hi jump up high avoiding the blast and Koji uses Shunshin avoid the blast. Predicting the movement, Ro appears where Hi lands and he launches his fist. Hi ducks with amazing reflexes and kicks Ro backwards and leaps down from the tree. Ro flips and regains his balance and looks over at Koji.

    *As longs as the Aburame is controlled by him, his reflexes are going to be on par with that guy's and by extension mine.* Ro launches several shuriken at Koji and rushes him again. *I need to deal with the puppet master and stifle his movements if I'm going to get anywhere with them* Koji leaps to the left, avoiding the projectiles with ease *Now!* The shinobi anticipates Koji's movements and directs his path to Koji. Koji's look intensifies and he switches his fingers in an odd fashion. “Now you're done!” An inch before he reaches Koji's face he freezes in his place. The shinobi sees himself in a dark world confined in chains unable to move. Four robbed figures baring demonic faces appear before the Kiri shinobi and stab him with long katana. “What the...”

    “Magen: Temma Kariudo no Jutsu.”

    Note: Magen: Temma Kariudo no Jutsu (Demonic Illusion: Demon Hunter Technique)


    *He used the Aburame to make the seals for the medium and cast the technique himself* Koji releases Hi and takes out a kunai and heads to stab the Ro. “Not good enough.” Ro's arm bursts with chakra and it causes Koji to stumble back and Ro lifts his arm up, free from the illusion. “I'm not as stupid as you think.” He back fists Koji in his broken arm sending him flying back.

    “AHHHH!” Koji cries in excruciating pain. As Koji lay on the ground, holding his arm in pain Hi sends a barrage of bugs towards Ro. Ro blasts them with his chakra and blitzes him and hits him in the stomach knocking him back.

    “That was more difficult then it needed to be.” Ro says. Ro walks towards the hut and heads to the table with the scroll on it. He goes to grab the scroll only to have it vanish as he touches it. “*tsk* another illusion.” He walks back outside and walks to Hi. “I'll just take your flags, it makes no difference to me. You're going to die either way.” Ro picks up Hi by the scruff of the neck only to find a paper explosive strapped to him. Hi's body explodes however Ro manages to get out of the way of the blast. “Now you're starting to piss me off.” He turns to Koji.

    Ro snatches Koji flag and holds his hand out towards him.

    “Hakke Kusho! (Eight Trigrams: Vacuum Palm!)” Ro finds himself being knocked backwards. He maintains his balance and appears on the other side of the field and he sees Hime and Ryoko standing beside Koji.

    “Koji!” Ryoko yells in worry. She looks at his arm bleeding out and his face displaying unbearable pain.

    “Reinforcements aren't going to help you.” Ro says. He makes the bird seal and the screeching sound returns from the seal and his red chakra begins to spread throughout his body. “None of you have tasted a fraction of my power.”

    “That chakra is the same as Koichi-san.” Hime says. “This is...”

    Suddenly a large wall of sand appears in between the violet unit and Ro. Koichi drops down on the side where Ro resides and Jiraiya comes to his sister, Ryoko and Koji. “Are you guys alright?” Jiraiya asks.

    “Why are you guys here?” Hime asks.

    “Koichi said he heard Koji scream so we came running back. I didn't hear a thing but it's a good thing we came back. Koji's bones in that arm have been devastated again.” Jiraiya looks at Koji's injury with his Byakugan.

    Koichi stands facing Ro, his chakra now covering half his body. “You're not going to make a difference. You're still insig—”

    “I'm going to kick your ass!” Koichi yells, his aura flares red and explodes in a short burst. Koichi's sand wall falls and the sand begins to creep on his body.

    *No way...is he a...I can't afford to reveal anymore, I'll risk the mission and if he looses control I'm not getting out of here.* Ro begins to inch back however a large mass of sand rushes him from behind and restrains him. *This isn't good!*

    “Rasengan!” Naruto appears between the two shinobi landing a powerful Rasengan into the ground. A huge crater is created and it knocks Koichi and the Kiri shinobi back. Koichi is on the ground however he's unable to get up as Naruto sits on his back holding a kunai to his neck. “Calm down.” Koichi's shallow breathing begins to calm down and the mass of sand that began to surround him fades back onto the ground. *Wait, he actually stopped it by himself?*

    “Shukaku has no influence over this one.” Kurama says to Naruto. “He's raw, his access of this power is still through his impulses and strongest feelings but that's the only hold on him. Even now I can feel Shukaku shutting me out because he knows he has no power over this boy.” Kurama chuckles slightly after saying this, amused at Shukaku's misery.

    *This kid is special.* Naruto thinks. Ro gets up and notices that everybody is distracted. He uses the time to mount his escape. He vanishes and Naruto shifts his attention to the shinobi and with little effort he intercepts the shinobi before he gets far. Naruto holds his hand out, his fingers tips glow with chakra and make seals. “Gogyo Fuin! (Five Elements Seal)!” The seal knocks Ro back far against a tree. His seal on his arm fades and all the chakra accessed from it disappears.

    “What did you—”

    “I don't know what's going on with that seal of yours but you won't be accessing that chakra for the rest of the exams.” Naruto says sternly. “I'm letting you leave with your prize.” Naruto points to the flag in his hand. “So don't press your luck, you're lucky I didn't knock you out.” Ro doesn't say anything, he simply nods and heads on his way.

    Naruto walks back to the Konoha and Suna genin. “You guys will be alright for now.” Naruto says.

    “Daddy, what's going on? There's something not right—”

    “Hime, you're job is to focus on passing these exams. You let me worry about all this other stuff involved, you too Jiraiya.” Naruto puts on a huge grin, his tone carefree as if nothing happened. “You guys have a little more then a day left, good luck.” Naruto disappears after that statement and leaves the six genin.

    Koji picks himself up and moves Ryoko out of his line of sight. He shoots out his chakra strings into the bushes and pulls out Hi. Hime and Jiraiya head over to their weak teammate and Koji begins healing his arm again, panting as he does so. Ryoko and Koichi look at their teammate with guilty faces. *Koji...*
    ~End of Exam~


    The exam finishes and all the genin finalists are called to the observation tower. They all enter the ground floor into a large open area. Naruto, Hinata, and Udon stand in front of a line of proctors. Of the 16 teams, the 48 shinobi that entered the last exam only 11.

    “Congratulations, the 11 of you have successfully passed this exam. From this point onward you are the chuunin candidates for your village.” Naruto announces loud. Outside the observation tower, all the loosing shinobi candidates that weren't killed or horribly injured stand.

    “Koji?!” A voice says shocked behind him. Koji turns around and sees Jo walking towards him. “No way, you got out too, I was expecting you and Koichi to take these exams by storm.”

    “Yes because I was definitely going to do it with one arm.” Koji says sarcastically.

    “Oh yeah, I forgot about that. Well better luck next time huh? Temari was the only one from our team to make, we were taken down in enemy territory against that Tenzen kid and his team. That kid is smart.”

    “Not smart enough to pass.” A chubby Konoha shinobi says.

    “Shut up Bo, if you were faster I wouldn't have had to slow down to save you but it ended up costing the both of us.” Tenzen says. “What a drag, at least I don't have to worry about another exam, that's the best part of it.”

    “Well, Koji-kun, what a surprise to see you here.” A voice says from behind him.

    Koji immediately recognizing the voice as Lee's doesn't turn around. “I'm not surprised to see you here.”

    “Yeah, we ended up getting the boot too, some Kiri shinobi and all that, but it's no big deal.”

    “Why risk showing your abilities more then you have to.” Koji says. “I wouldn't want to participate in the next exam if I were you either.” Lee cracks a smile and turns around and leaves.

    “Once again, you're right, Koji-kun. Well, better get back to Iwa, see ya.” Lee and his three comrades leave and Jo looks confused as they do.

    “They didn't loose, otherwise the other Kiri shinobi we saw go in wouldn't have been able to pass.” Koji explains to Jo.

    “But why then?”

    “For the same reason I said. Lee and his team aren't interested in being chuunin, only information.”
    ~Inside Observation Tower~


    You've all fought bravely and worthy of praise from your village. Now we will explain the next exam. It's a simple 1v1 tournament between the remaining participants. As is tradition for the last round of the Chuunin exams. Due to the heavy nature of these last two exams back to back, it's been decided that the final round will take place in a month's time.” Naruto says.

    Sighs of relief go throughout the room as the genin hear that they get a break. “Don't take lightly to this matter however. This is the time for you to be training and honing new skills in order for you to fight your opponents.” Udon says. “You will all have one month to train and prepare yourselves and when the time comes, you will all fight in Konoha's arena in front of the entire village and several other important spectators.”

    “So this is basically a real tournament. Does that mean only one of us is going to pass the exam?” Koichi asks. “If we go through the ranks the winner should be the only person to come out on top.”

    “Not necessarily.” Hinata says. “As we've said from this point on you are all candidates for chuunin. This exam is to judge your individual skills as a shinobi. You've all proven your worth in the teamwork category, now we must see if you have skills enough to fight on your own. That being said you will be judged, not only by the proctors but the various important guests that will be attending.”

    “Important guests?” Masaomi asks.

    “Daimyou, wealthy patrons, people in charge of other countries, estates, people who come from noble families that hire shinobi from villages for missions. They will review your skills as well. You may end up loosing in the first match but still gaining the position of chuunin. Or you may wind the whole thing but for whatever reason that they may not see you qualified for the position. This exam is just as much a personality test as well as a skill test so demonstrate the properties of a chuunin.”

    “So...do we get to know who our opponents are?” A Konoha shinobi asks. Udon pulls out a deck of 10 orange cards.

    “Each card has a number on it. You will focus your chakra into the card and the number will appear on the blank side. They're numbered 1-5, since there are 11 of you the numbers will appear twice with the exception of 5 which will appear 3 times. The pairs of numbers will be the order of which you fight in and whom you are to fight.” Udon shuffles the deck rapidly and skillfully as if he were a card shark and then places his two fingers on the top card of the deck. The light glares off his glasses as he smiles. He swipes a card out rapidly to each of the remaining shinobi.

    Naruto looks disturbed as he looks into the crowd of genin. “What's wrong Naruto?!” Kurama asks him.

    “This doesn't add up, there should be three more shinobi...those Iwagakure genin from the Red Unit. If they were eliminated that that one over there...” Naruto looks over to Ro.

    “Weren't those three strange to begin with?” Kurama asks. “They probably fled. You needn't harp on such matters, you have much more important things to worry about you idiot.”

    “I'm not an idiot!” Naruto shouts out at Kurama, however he shouts out loud. All the proctors, genin, and Udon and Hinata look at Naruto after his outburst. “Aheheh, sorry about that.” Naruto says trying to laugh it off. Jiraiya and Hime hold their heads down in shame simultaneously and shake their heads. “Alright, now focus your chakra into the cards and reveal your numbers.”

    As the genin do so the numbers appear on their cards. “Those with card number 1, raise their hand.” Masaomi and Koichi raise their hand and the two look at each other menacingly.

    Koga and Ryoko look at their respective teammates and understand the immediate intensity the match will behold. The first round match between the hated and the vengeful.

    Note:

    Pair 1 (Masaomi Iga vs. Koichi Shichiyo)

    Pair 2 (Temari Nara vs. Hi Aburame)

    Pair 3 (Hime Hyuuga vs. Ryoko Taiyou)

    Pair 4 (Ro vs. Mika Yuhi)

    Pair 5 (Koga vs. Senten Yamanaka | Jiraiya Uzumaki)


    To Be Continued...

    ~Scroll~
    Jutsu Archive

    Ninpo: Ukio Enko (Ninja Art: Life Connection)
    Rank: A
    Developer: Kankuro
    User(s): Kankuro
    Origin: Sunagakure (After WWIV)
    Description: Developed by Kankuro of Sunagakure, this technique grants temporary animation to an puppet/inanimate object via transfering a portion of one's own chakra into the puppet. Similar in a way to the Shadow Clone Jutsu, the puppet acts and moves of it's own will, however it's mind and vision are linked to the user and the puppet itself has no base intelligence beyond instinctual fighting. The jutsu lasts for a period of time pending on the amount of chakra transfered into puppet. Chakra used up in this technique takes longer to replenish and extracts large amounts on base activation alone and more so as the jutsu is continued to be used in one single day. As a result the more times activated in one day the more chakra consumed and the less time the puppet remains active.

    Myaku Bushin (Pulsing Clone)
    Rank: C
    Developer: Mai Shichiyo
    User(s): Mai Shichiyo, Koichi Shichiyo
    Origin: Sunagakure (After WWIV)
    Description: This is a taijutsu technique from the style Suuxe-sensu, created by Mai Shichiyo. In this technique the user releases a full body blast of chakra from their body and it takes the shape of the user. The technique isn't an actual clone, however, the chakra takes the shape of the user, which gives the appearance of such. The jutsu has three uses: One, to distract or frighten one's opponent. Two to force one's opponent backwards as the chakra is dense enough, at its lowest chakra requriment to shatter through a tree. The third use is to make the user faster for a brief moment in time, as the release of such a great force of chakra all at once, temporarily gives one an almost weightless form, but with the same density allowing them to move faster. This jutsu takes chakra control on top of having a high level of chakra.

    Suuxe-sensu (Sway Style)
    Rank: N/A (fighting style)
    Developer: Mai Shichiyo
    Users(s): Mai Shichiyo, Koichi Shichiyo
    Origin: Sunagakure (After WWIV)
    Description: Suuxe-sensu is the taijutsu fighting style developed by Sunagakure kunoichi Mai Shichiyo. In this style of fighting the user utilizes precice chakra control to line one's body with chakra. Derrived from Konoha's Hyuuga style, and the medical-nin fighting style of Chakra enhanced strength, the most basic of the techniques involves defensive circular movements meant to block and use an opponent's force against them. However when combined with chakra, the circular patterns become sharp and a circular block and be used as a blade. The few strikes and kicks used in this style are powerful. This style requires chakra control and large storages of chakra.

    Kansai Kekkai Rasengan (Trapping Barrier Spiraling Sphere)
    Rank: S
    Developer: Naruto Uzumaki
    User(s): Naruto Uzumaki
    Origin: Konohagakure (After WWIV)
    Description: This is another advancement of the Rasengan created by Naruto Uzumaki. In order for this technique to work, several shinobi as the radius perimeter of the jutsu is large then that of a normal Rasengan. In Naruto's case, he would summon shadow clones to assist him in preforming the jutsu. The group would then surround the intended target and entrap them in a sphere of chakra. They would then begin to rotate their chakra as if a normal Rasengan and the billions of rotating chakra blades within the jutsu would come to overshadow the target and anything within the barrier would be virtually obliterated. The primary use of this jutsu is to create an inescapable trap around several shinobi or one/few large opponents.

    Oshi-eiei Kage (Push-pull shadow)
    Rank: B
    Developer: Shikamaru Nara
    User(s): Shikamaru Nara, Shikaku Nara, Nara clan (advanced)
    Origin: Konohagakure (During WWIV)
    Description: This is a varriation of the Shadow Imitation jutsu, the funadamental jutsu of the Nara clan. The user would extend his/her shadow just like in the normal technique to one or several targets. The user can then forcefully push away or attract their targets, closer to them (via extending or retracting their shadow (s)). One could also preform both tasks simultaniously. The advantages of this jutsu is that, if an one's opponent is primarily close ranged fighter while the user is not, they can repel them and keep them in their more comfortable range. However, this jutsu requires advanced chakra control as the acts of extending and/or retracting while keeping your target attached, and you stationary is a difficult feet.

    Boushi Kenhandou (Spinning Blade kick)
    Rank: C
    Developer: Mai Shichiyo
    User(s): Mai Shichiyo, Koichi Shichiyo
    Origin: Sunagakure (After WWIV)
    Description: Part of the Suuex-sensu style, the user focues their chakra into legs and feet. While in the air they spin at a rapid pace, which would cause the white chakra to appear as if spinning around them. The user would then let down a powerful ax kick which holds two possible outcomes. The first out come, is if the user lands on their opponent with their foot, they will slice through whatever part of the body aimed for as the feet will possess the highest form of chakra control in the source of the blade. The second outcome would be if the user strikes with their shin, they will demonstrate a devestating force and power rather then a cutting affect.

    Shisho Kekkai (Four Symbols Barrier)
    Rank: A
    Developer: Naruto Uzumaki
    User(s): Naruto Uzumaki
    Origin: Konohagakure (After WWIV)
    Description: This jutsu is activated via the Dragon-Rabit-Snake-Tiger seals. This is a defensive barrier technique designed to sheild several persons from large scale attacks. The four symbols insignia will appear underneath the area of defense and an invisible barrier of chakra will be set up around the targests. When impacted by chakra or weapons of any kind only the part being hit by the barrier will be shown via the chakra reacting to the blow. The strength of the barrier and how much it can take all depends on the user's chakra levels. Suprisingly enough the jutsu requires minimal chakra control, only to conjure up the seal and then once that's done the chakra is to be sent exited from the user's body and the seal will navigate the chakra to create the barrier, without the need for additional chakra control from the user. The main draw back to this jutsu is the fact that, while the barrier is up, the user cannot use their chakra to preform anymore techniques while inside the barrier, as the seal will have to be broken in order for the user to utilize their chakra without it going into the barrier.

    Kage Bushin Kansai (Shadow Clone Trap)
    Rank: B
    Developer: Shikamaru Nara
    User(s): Shikamaru Nara
    Origin: Konohagakure (After WWIV)
    Description: This is a combination jutsu developed by Shikamaru Nara. The user will create a shadow clone, and since the clone contains the same chakra netowrk as the user, in the case of a Nara, they have knowledge of their clan's hidden shadow jutsu. The user would then get the clone close to their opponent and have the clone gain a hold of the shinobi, long enough for the user to release the clone, but instead of disapearing in a cloud, the clone would become a shadow that engulfs one's target. That being said, the shadow clone's shadow is now a part of the target and can now be accessed by the user. The shadow surrounding the target will then extend to the origional user and give him control over the target.

    Note: Fukyuu Kage Bushin no Jutsu (Eternal Shadow Clone Technique)
    Rank: S (Forbidden)
    Developer: Naruto Uzumaki
    Users: Naruto Uzumaki
    Origin: Konohagakure (During WWIV)
    Description: This technique is perhaps the strongest form of cloning jutsu to ever exist in the world. Created by Naruto Uzumaki, this technique allows for all clones created to remain on the battle field until and sustain any amount of damage without the justu being dispelled. Being taught how to manipulate/isolate only his YinYang elements by the Kurama, Naruto learned how to create a clone which exibits heavy durrability. This jutsu is unique to Naruto as it utilizes the chakra of Kurama as well. Naruto isolates his Yin chakra and the Kyuubi's Yang chakra and fuses it together to make the clone. Essencially the clone is only made up of those two elemental chakra bases and both Yin&Yang give it specific qualities. The Yang chakra gives it the physical manifestation of a clone, while the Yin chakra makes the clone unable to be destroyed, regenerating if need be. Naruto can only sustain one clone however, and the Konoha 11 have forbidden Naruto from using the jutsu as the justu's side affects are highly dangerous. Using the jutsu keeps an active link between the user and the clone's chakra meaning the longer it is used the more chakra is being sucked away from Naruto and Kurama. Similar to how Naruto's chakra mode left him vulnerable to the Kyuubi sucking away all his chakra before their cooporation. Also, after the jutsu is released the user only gains a fraction of the chakra lost back and his natural reserves are lowered, replenishing vastly slower then before. Naruto has only used the jutsu once and only half of the chakra he expended using the jutsu has returned to him...after 20 years.

    Ninpo: Suricata Soutei Tsuchi Kansui (Ninja Art: Mongoose Binding Earth Submersion)
    Rank: B
    Developer: N/A
    Users: Kai Taiyou, Ryoko Taiyou, Shinobi Meerkat
    Origin: Sunagakure (Pre-WWIV)
    Description: This is a collaboration technique between the meerkat summoning animals and any who are signed to the contract. In this technique, the shinobi will preform a modified version of the summoning technique hand seals, and place their hands on the ground. The shinobi will simultaniously summon a mob of meerkats and several chains. The meerkats will launch the chakra enfused chains up through the earth towards the desired target and restrict them. The meerkats will then tunnle deeper into the earth, dragging their opponent down into the ground forcefully, eventually crushing them under the preassure and also suffocating them. This is a fairly skilled technique as the summoner is responsible for summoning the mob of meerkats in the desired positions for them to preform this task, as well as having the chains shoot up through the ground (which requires chakra to enhance their power allowing them to go upwards) and home in on where they need to go.

    Iku Sabaku Kyu (Several Sand Coffins)
    Rank: B
    Developer: Gaara
    Users: Gaara, Koichi Shichiyo
    Origin: Sunagakure (Pre-WWIV)
    Description: This is a simple improvement on the origional Sand Coffin technique used by Gaara, however, instead of trapping a single opponent within the sand, he can trap several individuals in different sand caskets. Although the technique is simple in it's execution, those without a history of manipulating sand must utilize Gaara's Sand manipulation secrets to preform this technique, which requires seveal seals to unlock the chakra and manipulate it in a way to preform the jutsu. As Koichi is the only other person versed in Gaara's sand manipulation, he is the only exception account of needing seals to preform this technique. In theory, the jutsu should be just the same as the Sand Coffin, capturing your opponent in sand and increasing the preassure to crush the bones and organs of your opponent, however Koichi has not yet fully mastered the technique and can only summon up the sand to restrict the movements of the shinobi and isn't able to yet crush them.

    Ninpo: Magen Bara Keikyoku (Ninja Art: Demonic Rose Thorns)
    Rank: B
    Developer: Maiyuri Tazuko
    Users: Maiyuri Tazuko
    Origin: Sunagakure (After WWIV)
    Description: This technique is activated through the use of four hand seals, the shinobi creates several spiked, rose stem vines rise up from the ground underneath their opponent. The shinobi caster, channles their chakra into the ground underneath their opponents, affecting the vines beneath the earth sprouting them upwards sharpening them and the pricks beneath having them shoot up and impale or constrict their opponent.

    Niyubi Genkotsu (Two Finger Fist)
    Rank: C-B
    Developer: Udon
    Users: Udon
    Origin: Konohagakure (After WWIV)
    Description: This is a fighting style that was developed by Tokubetsu Jounin Udon (Special Jounin) after the war. This is a taijutsu fighting style that consists of the basic principle of using the users two fingers (the index and middle finger). The user will channle precise and sharp chakra into their finger or knuckles and they'll strike in a series of rapid jabs that possess both; bone shattering force and muscle tearing and paralysis. The style is fast and precise, one technique consists of four or five different strikes in various locations of the body essentially breaking and numbing areas of the body rendering your opponent unable to move certian areas. Strikes are either done with the knuckles or the finger tips. Blocks are done with the knuckes and even the blocks serve to shut down systems in the opponent's body. This style has no form of kicks yet it has various stances used to get into the most vulnerable of positions of one's opponent.
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    Magen: Temma Kariudo no Jutsu (Demonic Illusion: Demon Hunter Technique)
    Rank: A
    Developer: Koji Shichiyo
    Users: Koji Shichiyo
    Origin: Sunagakure (After WWIV)
    Description: Koji's Shichiyo's own designed illusion. His mastery of the genjutsu has allowed him to create an advanced Genjutsu such as this. This is a highly advanced Jounin level technique not because of the affects but because of the way it's cast. Koji preforms this technique without actually utilizing hand seals himself. Through the use of a puppet or controlled body, Koji manipulates the body to cast the required seals for him. With precise chakra control, Koji utilizes his will make the connection from the hand seals through his chakra strings attached to the body, which translates back to him as if he, himself casted the hand seals and all that is required of Koji is to direct the chakra for the illusion into his opponent's mind. This unique style of casting genjutsu created by Koji initiates almost instantly after the final seal is created, allowing him to cast the jutsu even if the body using the seals is far from his body. Koji can activate the jutsu quickly and swiftly. The feat of casting the illusion itself requires the chakra control of a master, and the affects that come with are strong as well. Once the illusion is cast, the user of the illusion creates the image of several chains restricting the victim and four demons peircing through their body with sharp blade. This jutsu effectively immobilizes one's opponent and causes them a great deal of pain, which will quickly render them unconscious if the justu isn't released quickly.

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    It's technically Sunday Morning here (1:20ish am to be exact) so I missed my Friday deadline and my follow up Saturday make up deadline lol. However that only means you get two Fanfictions today. Friday it was me being lazy after Great Escape, Saturday it was a family cookout and me getting pissed and taking a nap so I didn't have to deal with anything and I ran a little late. Anyway, I added a new technique, hope you all appriciate it. Please comment on what you liked/disliked about this and go in depth if you can, etc. To those of you who read/comment/rep this post, I thank you. Enjoy


     
         
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    Quote Originally Posted by Mante View Post
    *reads*
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    Naruto should undo Ro's Gogyou fuinn, he won't have access to Rokubi awesomeness in the future if Naruto doesn't, Koji's out, huh? Too bad....But JIRAIYA PASSED!! I'm a Jiraiya fanboy. Lee should've passed...I get this feeling that he's working for Kabuto.
     
         

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    Great chapter, I tried to +rep you but I cannot I owe you big time, you entertain me with your fanfic as well as teaching me my Roman numerals! :D
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by Uzumaki16 View Post
    Naruto should undo Ro's Gogyou fuinn, he won't have access to Rokubi awesomeness in the future if Naruto doesn't, Koji's out, huh? Too bad....But JIRAIYA PASSED!! I'm a Jiraiya fanboy. Lee should've passed...I get this feeling that he's working for Kabuto.
    Shhhhh!
    Yeah because Naruto's the only person who knows how to do seals in order to release that right Shhh, spoiler


    Yeah, no Chuunin for Koji

    Yes Jiraiya Passed possible chuunin for him

    Idk if you got it or not but Lee did pass, he lied and he ducked out. If he and his entire team flunked, that would've left only Ro and as the rules stated at least 4 of your unit has to pass

    , did I make that impression with Lee? I never would've guessed. We'll find out in later entries. Lee will be seen again (I made his Character based on Durarara's Izaya)
     
         

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    Great chapter, I tried to +rep you but I cannot I owe you big time, you entertain me with your fanfic as well as teaching me my Roman numerals! :D
    , I love Roman Numerals and don't worry about the reps
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by Reborn View Post
    Shhhhh!
    Yeah because Naruto's the only person who knows how to do seals in order to release that right Shhh, spoiler


    Yeah, no Chuunin for Koji

    Yes Jiraiya Passed possible chuunin for him

    Idk if you got it or not but Lee did pass, he lied and he ducked out. If he and his entire team flunked, that would've left only Ro and as the rules stated at least 4 of your unit has to pass

    , did I make that impression with Lee? I never would've guessed. We'll find out in later entries. Lee will be seen again (I made his Character based on Durarara's Izaya)
    He acting like Kabuto did when he was spying the Chunnin Exam for Orochimaru, beung nice to main characters and giving them tips from experience, hiding his power which is obviously way more than he lets on.
    U think he might be Kabuto's kid?
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by Uzumaki16 View Post
    He acting like Kabuto did when he was spying the Chunnin Exam for Orochimaru, beung nice to main characters and giving them tips from experience, hiding his power which is obviously way more than he lets on.
    U think he might be Kabuto's kid?
    -_- you think Kabuto's still fertile after all the shit he's injected into him?

    1. Idk what girl would want to go out with him looking the way he does and he probably got some STDs or something from injecting everybody and their' mother's blood into him.

    2. He ugly.
     
         

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    brilliant as ever mate but i think kurama should have used rokubi's name after all in the canon naruto knows them
     
         

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    -_- you think Kabuto's still fertile after all the shit he's injected into him?

    1. Idk what girl would want to go out with him looking the way he does and he probably got some STDs or something from injecting everybody and their' mother's blood into him.

    2. He ugly.
    may be in vitro fertilization it is possible
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by naruto kyuubi View Post
    brilliant as ever mate but i think kurama should have used rokubi's name after all in the canon naruto knows them
    I had forgotten about their names being mentioned when I was writing this and I just remembered when I looked at the Wikia for jutsu names and I saw the Bijuu names.

    Quote Originally Posted by naruto kyuubi View Post
    may be in vitro fertilization it is possible
    Meh, Kabuto's not looking to be a daddy right now lol.
     
         

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    -_- you think Kabuto's still fertile after all the shit he's injected into him?

    1. Idk what girl would want to go out with him looking the way he does and he probably got some STDs or something from injecting everybody and their' mother's blood into him.

    2. He ugly.
    there's always kidnap and rape or simply extract her ova and merge it with his sperm to make a test tube baby...

    There's also foolling the ladies with the henge no jutsu. Or doing it with an Edo Tensei.
     
         
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    there's always kidnap and rape or simply extract her ova and merge it with his sperm to make a test tube baby...

    There's also foolling the ladies with the henge no jutsu. Or doing it with an Edo Tensei.
    Jesus you guys are some sick bastards 0_o Kabuto doesn't have a kid and he's not interested in looking for one
     
         

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    Jesus you guys are some sick bastards 0_o Kabuto doesn't have a kid and he's not interested in looking for one
    I'm just thinking of the possibilities...Kabuto's the sick bastard who possibly can do this.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto: Shichiyo Gaiden XLI

    Reads very well! I feel like I'm watching the original series all over again. Like at any moment Hinata-sama will come waltzing by with her huge bouncing... :zonder: ... ahem.

    Great job!
     
         

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