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    Death is natural... and to
    deflower such a natural thing
    is a sin, and those who defy
    the whims of Nature shall know
    the true pain in which none
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    gift that we all can be happy
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    naruto: rise of the uzumaki dynasty arc 2 chapter 8 part 2 akami's pledge

    the reason why this is so long i wanted add more depth into characters and also im gonna be off doing a project for my community for the next 4 days



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    temujin (he kicks the blade up and catches it) your move (he says smirking)
    akami (she dashes through some trees and appears what above temujin) ninja art: rosemarry (she says as rose pedals start to fly from her hands)

    temujin and her clash. temujin brings his sword up and she blocks it with her claws. the rose pedals fly at temujin cutting his cheek. temujin's blood hits a blade of field grass as him and her stay dead locked. he pushes her off and charges at her forming wind chakra into his blade. he slings it upwards and a massive wave of wind cuts through the field almost hitting akami. she counters by controlling her rose pedals and sending them right at temujin.

    temujin (he swings his sword cutting rose pedals) getting a little slow now are'nt we? (he asks in amuesment)

    akami (she clashs and dead locks with temujin again) not as slow as seras sir temujin you have lost your touch (she says jokingly)

    a figure jumps out of trees and lands near them both. the figure looks wild and scruffy. it is kiba inzuka and he has heard the commotion

    kiba (he charges at akami) what the hell do you think your doing? (he asks in anger)

    she easily blocks his claws with hers. kiba then jumps up and spins in the air and rushes toward

    kiba (while spinning) fang tunneling fang (he shouts as he hits where akami used to be)
    akami (she looks on in amusement) whoa now im not actually looking for a "fight" (she says laughingly)



    kiba (getting fustrated) my god shut up talking like that you so annoying (he yells in a comical fasion)
    akami (she gets red in the face) oh you little...... grrrrrr (she says in anger)
    kiba (with the same comical anger) oh you little what? (he retorts)
    temujin (he sighs and begins to walk away when naruto walks in) sorry if they woke you up (he says rubbing the back off his head and putting on a fake smile)

    naruto eyes are still closed and temujin moves up to his face and snaps his fingers. naruto eyes open and close then open again and he looks around

    naruto (shaking his back forth and then stopping to observe his surrondings) huh? o crap please tell me i did not sleep walk who ever you are (he says tired)

    temujin (he smiles) well.... you sort of did. you don't recongnize me at all.... do you? (he says in curiosity)

    naruto (puts his hand on his chin and rubs it side ways trying to figure out who the man is) nope not a clue. how do you know me? (he says he says laughing under his breath)

    before he can utter a word kiba is sent flying right into naruto. naruto easily catches kiba mid flight. naruto looks towards akami.



    akami (has a vein poping out of her head) i swear to god im going to kill you! (she yells at kiba)
    naruto (naruto puts down kiba and gets in between her and him) whoa whoa calm down who are you. (he says rubbing the back of his head)
    akami (she gets ready to run. when she looks at naruto however she stops) are you naruto uzumaki? (she says in a demanding voice)
    naruto (naruto's face turns series and he looks at kiba get up) what if i am? (he retorts in angery tone)


    akami suddenly grows a tail and her face become dog like and her ears goes into the form of a dogs. naruto gets into his frog kumite stance. he closes his eyes as akami charges.

    naruto (he suddenly open his eyes and blocks her strike) too slow. (he says confindently)
    kiba (comes spinning over naruto head) fang claw (he shouts)

    in a instant kiba hits akami in the stomach sending her flying into a tree. temujin sits back and watchs

    temujin (he takes a deep sigh) man this is boring (he says silently)

    naruto and kiba charge at akami. she charges at naruto who easily blocks her attack. kiba uses naruto's shoulder and jumps into the air. naruto then pushes her back with ease. kiba comes down and slams her in the ground with the heel of his foot. she lets out a gasp as she hits the ground


    naruto (looks at akami laying on the ground) why are you here? (he says in curious tone)
    akami (looks towards naruto with tears in her eyes as she reverts back to her human form.) to find help for my clan... i failed them now as seeing im going to be killed by the man i seek to help me free them. (she says in anger)

    naruto (naruto looks over his shoulder) im not going to kill you (he says in a calm and soothing voice as he helps akami up)

    akami (she looks up at him. she looks in his eyes his eyes for being young show a great deal of hardship) i am akami xian of the xian clan. my clan has been enslaved by a unkown force holding them in the form i was just in. (she says while getting up.)

    naruto (he looks at her in surprise) so what was that? (he asks in curiosity as he gives her a hand up)

    kiba (he looks at her human form. he suddenly knows the answer to the question) the xian clan if i heard correctly is a fellow clan that binds with natures animals. where as we inzuka bind with dogs and somtimes other wild life. the xian clan have always been known to bind them selfs with wolfs but their unique chakra allows them to go into a wolf like form. (he says while walking toward her)

    naruto, temujin and akami look at kiba surprised by the answer. akami and him lock eyes and they see somthing in common but they quickly look away from eachother. naruto hears a scream coming from the camp and he and the rest of everybody including akami run to the sorce of the scream. when they get there sasuke is fighting off four wolf like man. he goes in for the killing blow but naruto manages to divert the lightning flow with wind chakra. sasuke looks in surprise as naruto re-enters sage mode and knocks them out.



    akami (she looks at naruto and the rest in fear) they know your here. we need to hurry now if we wait the entire clan might come down upon us (she says quickly grabbing some kunais out of her pouch.)

    sakura (she looks toward temujin) wait where lady shizune and kurama (she says in concern)

    naruto runs to the tent at high speeds and find the wolf people beseiging it. naruto and sasuke begin their rush over to the tent when a massive plume of purple colored comes out of it causing the beasts to flee. they rush over to see what happened they see shizune cut up and brusied but alive huddling over kurama's unconcious body. he had taken medicine earlier and had fell into a deep sleep

    naruto(he looks at her and turns to beasts running away and he snaps back around and helps her up) shizune nii chan (he says in concern)

    shizune (she reaches for naruto's hand and she gets up) im fine and so is kurama who or what we're they? (she says in curiosity)

    naruto (suddenly get ready to run out of the tent) im going to get hinata. sasuke help shizune and kurama get ready to go now! (he barks orders)

    sasuke (looks at him in anger) yeah yeah whatever here comes some more (he yells)

    naruto feels one coming up behind him and jumps. he turns mid air and delivers a devestating kick sending the one trying to kill him flying. into a tree he immediatley runs to his and hinata's area and finds her holding her own easily. she uses 8 trigrams rotation and desimates most of the ones attacking her. she then drop kicks the last one and sends scuttering across the ground. naruto looks on but suddenly hinata drops to her knees and vomits on the ground and a beast is about to strike her when naruto comes from behind it and knocks it out cold.

    naruto (he looks at hinata concerned) are you ok? where you poisoned (he says trying to get an answer)

    hinata (looks at naruto and gets back whiping her mouth) no im fine... im fine we need to go (she says in concern over the rest of the group)

    hinata tries to run but she again vomits a little on the ground. naruto comes up behind her and picks her up and runs with her to the rest of groups location. they are soon running on road inside the forrest and trees whistle by as naruto runs to meet the others

    naruto (he looks at hinata) *what was that just now?* dad, mom where are you? (he says inside the ear piece in his ear)

    minato (he appears right beside naruto with kushina) whats wrong? did everyone get out? (he says in concern)

    hinata (she activates byuakugan and sees no one but the wolfs in the camp) yes sasuke and shizune got kurama out and also everyone else but we are scattered (she says in sigh of relief)

    naruto (he cradles hinata and smiles) im sure everyone else is fine (he smiles)

    kushina (she looks at her son and hinata kiss) * their love reminds me of us minato* minato i want to check somthing when we stop (she whispers in his ear)

    minato (he looks towards kushina and nods his head* i know what you want to do (he says in a sigh)


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    "we are just ordinary
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    Re: naruto: rise of the uzumaki dynasty arc 2 chapter 8 part 2 akami's pledge

    thanks wease:
     
         

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    Re: naruto: rise of the uzumaki dynasty arc 2 chapter 8 part 2 akami's pledge

    +rep
     
         

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    Death is natural... and to
    deflower such a natural thing
    is a sin, and those who defy
    the whims of Nature shall know
    the true pain in which none
    can shelter and shudder. s
    gift that we all can be happy
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    Re: naruto: rise of the uzumaki dynasty arc 2 chapter 8 part 2 akami's pledge

    well thank you nb
    you have broken a personal record in views twice this week
    last and todays chapter
    have made over 90 views in less then 24 hours continue to support it and i'll crank out when i can which sadly may only happen one day next week
     
         

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    Re: naruto: rise of the uzumaki dynasty arc 2 chapter 8 part 2 akami's pledge

    i wonder what kind of kid they wud have.. byakugan..plus uzumaki,pretty powerful! Nice 1 chris! pls keep it up! +rep for ya!
     
         

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    Re: naruto: rise of the uzumaki dynasty arc 2 chapter 8 part 2 akami's pledge

    good job dude, you did a really amazing work with this chapter
     
         

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    very nice +rep (if i can)
     
         

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    Re: naruto: rise of the uzumaki dynasty arc 2 chapter 8 part 2 akami's pledge

    nice chappy, wow seems this wont end soon huh
     
         

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    Death is natural... and to
    deflower such a natural thing
    is a sin, and those who defy
    the whims of Nature shall know
    the true pain in which none
    can shelter and shudder. s
    gift that we all can be happy
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    Re: naruto: rise of the uzumaki dynasty arc 2 chapter 8 part 2 akami's pledge

    hey guys thanks this chapter is by far the most popular chapter i've made but i do this because i love to write and i love the base
     
         

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