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    Lillian Uzumaki リリアンうずまき.

    Basic Information
    Name: Lillian Uzumaki リリアンうずまき
    Nickname: Lilly
    Gender: Female
    Age: 20
    Clan: Uzumaki

    Looks: Lillian has the distinctive red hair of the Uzumaki and dark eyes. She is 5 feet tall and has a lean body.

    Personality: Lillian is a very cheerful kind hearted person. She pu's others' safety before her own and sees it as her highest duty to protect her friends and loved ones. As she has developed his abilities and flown through the ranks, Lillian has demonstrated her modesty among her friends. Also, Lillian will do what she can to prevent disputes, sometimes going as far as taking the blame for actions that she did not complete. When Lillian is not on missions (or even sometimes when she is) she can be found in a library trying to satisfy her hunger for learning about the mystery of chakra.

    Village Info.
    Village of Birth: Unknown
    Village of Alliance: Konohagakure

    Rank//Chakra Info.
    Ninja Rank: Chunin
    Specialty: /
    Elements:


    Lightning Release - Natural Affinity - needs training



    Your ninjutsu:
    (Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
    Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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    (Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
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    (Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
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    (Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:N/A
    The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
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    (Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
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    (Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
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    (Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)



    Background Info.
    History:

    It was about 20 years ago, in the midst of the Third Shinobi War, when Jiraya, the Great Toad Sage, was returning from a solo mission in the Land of Wind and came across a wounded woman. This woman had long red hair similiar to that of the shinobi who lived in the village of Uzushiogakure which had been destroyed a year earlier. As Jiraya cautiously approached the woman, he realized that the woman was a shinobi and wore the uniform of the almost exstinct Uzumaki clan. Jiraya immediately abandoned all caution and rushed to help the woman. When the woman saw Jiraya, recognition flooded into her face and ran towards the sage. At this moment Jiraya saw how bad the kunoichi's wounds were and that she was carrying a baby. Just as the two met, shuriken and kunai went flying as several Amegakure Shinobi apeared. The woman shouted at Jiraya "Save my child!" as she simaltaneously shoved the baby into Jiraya's arms and charged the enemies.

    Jiraya was sucsesfully able to escape and safely return to Konha where he informed the Third Hokage of the events that had transpired. With the child was a piece of paper saying "Lillian Uzumaki daughter of Curran." Kushina Uzumaki was present at the meeting and identified Curran as her older sister who had been born ten years before Kushina. It was decided that for the remainder of the war Lillian would be placed in an orphanage and they would figure out what to do with him afterwards.

    By time the war had ended Lilian was adopted by a family of shinobi who wanted a daughter. Lillian now had a loving family...

    One peaceful night when Lillian was four years old, she was eating dinner with her parents when a loud deafening sound was heard. It sounded like a "roar." Her parents immediately checked outside and saw a huge monster, the Nine-Tailed Demon Fox. Lillian's parents immediately geared up, brought Lillian to the evacuation area for civilians and rushed off to defend Konha and their daughter from this attack. Unfortunately, Lillian's parents were among the many nameless shinobi to die that night.

    After that night, Lillian was raised in the village orphanage. When she turned six years old, she went to the acadamy to become a shinobi like her parents. At the academy Lillian excelled and graduated within a year demonstrating her natural talents.



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    Theme Song and Background Music: Live and Let Die - Paul McCartney and the Wings

    Battles

    Won: none
    Lost: none

    ~Approved~
     
         
    Last edited by Caliburn; 05-26-2012 at 12:03 PM.

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    Re: Matthew Uzumaki マシューうずまき

    I'm sorry, but you need to have 50 posts in order to post a biography.
     
         

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    Re: Matthew Uzumaki マシューうずまき

    Good job..this is clearly going to be approved :D
     
         

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    Re: Matthew Uzumaki マシューうずまき

    This is my first attempt at a character bio and I also know that I cannot play the RPG until I make 50 posts but I would appreciate it if you would evaluate my bio anyway. Feel free to make any necesary changes . I appreciate you taking the time to read it.
     
         

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    Re: Matthew Uzumaki マシューうずまき

    Awesome bio and did you make your avatar?
     
         

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    Re: Matthew Uzumaki マシューうずまき

    This is pretty good but missing pic and youtube vid other than that you need 50 post and don't think you can be in that clan
     
         

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    Re: Matthew Uzumaki マシューうずまき

    I searched Naruto character creater and it came up, then I used print screen when I was done, pasted it and saved it as a Jpeg
     
         

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    Re: Matthew Uzumaki マシューうずまき

    I appoligize, I should have said it, I wanted to see what changes I would need to make so that when I hit 50 posts, my character bio would be approved.

    Sorry, about the mix-up, it won't happen again.
     
         

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    Re: Matthew Uzumaki マシューうずまき

    Quote Originally Posted by Bedlington View Post
    I appoligize, I should have said it, I wanted to see what changes I would need to make so that when I hit 50 posts, my character bio would be approved.

    Sorry, about the mix-up, it won't happen again.
    Well, now that you posted it, there's nothing you can do, other than getting your post count up to 50. I suggest you go to the Forum Games section.
     
         

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    Re: Matthew Uzumaki マシューうずまき

    I am now up to 50, sorry about before
     
         

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    Re: Matthew Uzumaki マシューうずまき

    Quote Originally Posted by Bedlington View Post
    I searched Naruto character creater and it came up, then I used print screen when I was done, pasted it and saved it as a Jpeg
    Thanks I might go and use it :D
     
         

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    Re: Matthew Uzumaki マシューうずまき

    Quote Originally Posted by Bedlington View Post
    I am now up to 50, sorry about before
    Good. Now that you're a Genin you can have only one element, so you'll have to remove the other four. Since Lightning is your elemental affinity I suggest you leave it and remove the others.
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by ComedyDaggers View Post
    Thanks I might go and use it :D
    no prob, glad I could help

    Quote Originally Posted by McRazor View Post
    Good. Now that you're a Genin you can have only one element, so you'll have to remove the other four. Since Lightning is your elemental affinity I suggest you leave it and remove the others.
    done
     
         
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    Re: Matthew Uzumaki マシューうずまき

    Quote Originally Posted by Bedlington View Post
    done
    Excellent. Now you have to wait for someone to check it. Good luck.
     
         

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    Re: Matthew Uzumaki マシューうずまき

    Quote Originally Posted by Bedlington View Post
    no prob, glad I could help
    well now you are a Genin . you should edit you ninja rank to genin.
     
         

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    Re: Matthew Uzumaki マシューうずまき

    Quote Originally Posted by ~Anubis~ View Post
    well now you are a Genin . you should edit you ninja rank to genin.
    Thanks
     
         

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    Re: Matthew Uzumaki マシューうずまき

    Quote Originally Posted by Bedlington View Post
    Thanks
    Now than good luck . And i loved your history.
     
         

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    Re: Lillian Uzumaki リリアンうずまき.

    I changed my bio from Matthew Uzumaki to Lillian Uzumaki and now I have more pictures.

    (Thanks again to Mathias for changing the title)
     
         

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