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    Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 8

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    Chapter 8

    A few mins later the hidden storm ninja had caught to the group of ninjas escorting their Rouge Ninja.

    Sai then realised they were being followed & he quietly told Neji.

    Neji: (Byakugan) we know you are there show your selves

    ANBU Captain: we have come for Akira the one you are escorting he has to come back with us to the village immediately; No matter what he has told you it is a lie.

    Arkira: it is not a lie & I refuse to go back without help because that is what I believe our village needs. Our Kage my friend is being controlled & no one believes me.

    Yamato: Akira we will protect you. Sakura, Shizune, Karui & Omoi go ahead & take Akira with you. Neji, Sai and Shino we will hold them off.

    Neji, Sai, Shino: understood

    Shizune: okay let’s go good luck you guys
    The others then went ahead like Yamato had ordered.

    ANBU Captain: I guess we will have no choice but to fight Akira does not realise what he is doing; Why do you protect a stranger.

    Yamato: Akira left your village and has asked us for help it is a mission.

    ANBU Captain: our mission is to bring him back to the village no matter what it takes.

    Yamato: well there is no way we will just hand him over, Akira is only looking out for a friend & what he can do for his village. That is why he decided to leave your village; I am sure we could resolve this without fighting but it seem nothing I say will change your mind.

    Before Yamato could attack the storm village ninja had made a few hand signs

    ANBU Captain: (Hijutsu Sensatsu Suishou) Flying Water Needles

    Yamato just avoided his technique and had managed to make a few hand signs just in time.
    Yamato: (Wood Locking Wall)

    While the ANBU Captain was distracted Sai & Neji prepared to attack.

    Sai: (Ninpou Chojuu Giga)

    Neji: (Hakke Rokujuuyonshou) Eight Trigram Sixty Four Palm Strike

    Neji and Sai managed to catch him off guard & injure him; while Shino was biding his time to make his move.

    Yamato: good Strategy you two.

    ANBU Captain: Good try but you will have to do better than that I am one of the best Ninja in our village.

    Shino had been waiting for the right moment without having to speak a whole lot of Kikaichu bugs managed to preoccupy the storm ninja; While he and Yamato and the others tried to come up with a strategy.

    A bit of time had passed & the battle between the Hidden Storm Ninja and Hidden leaf ninja had been going on for about an hour now; both sides where low on chakra.

    A few mins later Kakashi was walking back from a mission when he had spotted Yamato, Sai, Neji & Shino fighting; he then took the storm ninja by surprise and managed to put them under a gen Jutsu.

    Kakashi: it seemed they put up quite a fight if you all are this low on chakra Yamato.

    Yamato: great timing Kakashi

    The others agreed

    Neji: who knows what would have happened if you had not shown up Kakashi, we should catch up with Shizune and the others.

    Everyone agreed with Neji, Kakashi & Yamato then picked up the unconscious Strom Ninja. A half an hour later they then caught up with Shizune and the others.

    Shizune: well I by the looks you won

    Yamato: yeah thanks to Kakashi here if it was not for him who knows what would have happen.

    Kakashi: well I just happen to be passing by I was just in the right place at the right time that is all.

    They then continued heading back to Konoha.

    Scene skip

    In the Hidden Stone village the Tsuchikage Onoki, was talking to the Elders, They were discussing who the new Tsuchikage should be and who he would recommended; since he had decided it was time to retire.

    Onoki: I will be recommending Kurotsuchi

    Elder: your granddaughter do you really think she is ready.

    Onoki: yes I do and so does her Father. She has learnt everything we had to teach; & she has shown that she is ready to protect this village she has the right Attitude.

    An hour later after alot of discussion the Elders agreed with Onoki’s recommendation.

    The Elder then told the ANBU member that was there to start the preparations immediately.

    ANBU Member: understood

    Elder: Tomorrow the new Tsuchikage will be announced to the village, Onoki I think you should go tell your family the good news.

    Onoki: I will as soon as the preparations are complete.

    Not long after the meeting Akatsuchi ran into Onoki on the way to his office

    Akatsuchi: Tsuchikage Sama a Message has arrived from the Hidden mist village for you.

    Onoki: thank you, once I get back to my office I shall read it

    Once Onoki had gotten back to his office he began to read the letter from the Mizukage.

    Dear Tsuchikage

    Just letting you know that there could possibly be a new threat the Kazekage has informed me that one of the Hidden Cloud Villages ANBU Members came across a ninja with a lightning Bolt on his forehead protector. He also said that none of the villages on record have a symbol like that on their forehead protector, he was found unconscious & the Hokage has sent a team to the cloud to help out.

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    all kages now know about the situation even though the Konoha team may have returned to Konoha by now I am sure both the Raikage and the Hokage will keep us informed.


    A few minutes later Onoki had finished reading the message

    Onoki: (in thought) I will have to inform Kurotsuchi about this after the announcement tomorrow.

    He then started the preparations for tomorrow.

    Back in Konoha Konohamaru was with team two at the training field he then said to his team.

    Konohamaru: we will introduce our selves and then we will get down to our first Mission.

    Itachi, Inori & Minato: yes Sensei

    Minato: My Name is Uzumaki Minato I like Ramen and also like having Ramen with my dad, & my Dream is to Become Hokage like my father one day.

    Inori: My Name is Akimichi Inori I like Dumplings & my Dream is to become a Medical Ninja like my mum.

    Itachi My Name is Uchiha Itachi I like Ramen & I like training with my father, and I don’t have a dream right now.

    Konohamaru: I am your Sensei Konohamaru and the mission involves you getting these bells from me; but I will not just hand them to you. You will have to come at me like you want to kill me, if you wish to get these bells from me; let’s begin.

    Itachi, Inori & Minato then scattered and hid

    Konohamaru: (in thought) well they have got that right they have hidden themselves very well; now let’s see what they can do.

    Back in the Hidden stone Village Onoki was heading back home tomorrow is his last day as the Tsuchikage. A few mins later he arrived home, he then heard a knock at his door he was wondering who it could be so he went to see who it was. It was his Akatsuchi & Kurotsuchi with their daughter Masumi & Son Taichi.

    (Kurotsuchi & Akatsuchi have been together for about six months now)

    Onoki: ah I was just gonna come around to see you all I have some very big news for you Kurotsuchi.

    Kurotsuchi: what your big news grandfather

    Onoki: I was with the Elders today we had alot to discuss the preparations are complete. I have recommended you Kurotsuchi to take over from me.

    Kurotsuchi: WHAT are you sure that I am ready

    Onoki: I believe in you I am sure you will be fine if you need any more advice ask me or your dad any time.

    Akatsuchi: congrats dear

    Masumi & Taichi: we are happy for you mummy.

    Kurotsuchi: thank you everyone well we should go soon we have a big day tomorrow; I happily accept the role as Tsuchikage grandfather.

    Onoki: I am glad you accept now if you have not had tea I will cook up something Akatsuchi come with me.

    An hour later Kurotsuchi & Akatsuchi and the kids went home

    Onoki: seeya tomorrow everyone

    Kurotsuchi & Akatsuchi: bye

    Masumi & Taichi: bye grandfather


    another chapter done i tried to release it as soon as i could i hope you enjoy it and please let me know what you think.

    Previous Chapters
    Chapter 1-5 http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...d.php?t=100566
    Chapter 6 http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...d.php?t=147549
    Chapter 7 http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...d.php?t=180207
     
         
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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 8

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 8

    nice!!!!keep it up
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 8

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 8

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 8

    those fighting scenes at the beginning were awesome !
    i love that Konohamaru is doing the bell test, nice touch.....nice to see that heritage going on !

    love it!!
    keep it up...
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 8

    Quote Originally Posted by yahiko24 View Post
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    Quote Originally Posted by marvinkid View Post
    cool as always :D
    Quote Originally Posted by Maina Deah View Post
    Really good, keep it up
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    Quote Originally Posted by basegirl View Post
    those fighting scenes at the beginning were awesome !
    i love that Konohamaru is doing the bell test, nice touch.....nice to see that heritage going on !

    love it!!
    keep it up...
    thank you for your comment it ment alot and i am happy you liked the fight scene & yeah as for the bell test i thought it would be a good thing to add so it can be passed on to the next gen.
     
         
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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 8

    wow that was epic +rep sis
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 8

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    wow that was epic +rep sis
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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 8

    My Name is Uchiha Itachi I like Ramen & I like training with my father, and I don’t have a dream right now...LOL!!!
    U got quite an imagination running in ur brain
    +rep for ur lovely work and keep it up! :D
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 8

    I liked the brief fighting between Konoha/Storm and it was humorous to see that Kakashi randomly entered the scene and ended it all lol I liked the part with Iwagakure. It was cool to see that Kurotsuchi would be appointed next Tsuchikage and the love interest you choose for her was quite shocking to say the least Well, her taste is questionable lol Looking forward to the following chapter and good work!
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 8

    Quote Originally Posted by shelma View Post
    My Name is Uchiha Itachi I like Ramen & I like training with my father, and I don’t have a dream right now...LOL!!!
    U got quite an imagination running in ur brain
    +rep for ur lovely work and keep it up! :D
    i am happy you enjoyed it & Thank you for the rep

    Quote Originally Posted by Kuroi Honoo View Post
    I liked the brief fighting between Konoha/Storm and it was humorous to see that Kakashi randomly entered the scene and ended it all lol I liked the part with Iwagakure. It was cool to see that Kurotsuchi would be appointed next Tsuchikage and the love interest you choose for her was quite shocking to say the least Well, her taste is questionable lol Looking forward to the following chapter and good work!
    thank you i am happy you liked it i was mostly worried about the fight scene in this chapter and i thought it would be a good thing if Kakshi entered the fight like that & yeah as for my decision with Kurotsuchi becoming the next Tsuchikage i thought i would do something diffrent and i also thought it should be a girl tsuchikage this time and she is the only girl from the hidden stone village we know the name of so that was my reason for chosing her and as for the love intrestest i thought i would make it interesting. thanks for the rep
     
         
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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 8

    Quote Originally Posted by serenaandrosie View Post
    thank you i am happy you liked it i was mostly worried about the fight scene in this chapter and i thought it would be a good thing if Kakshi entered the fight like that & yeah as for my decision with Kurotsuchi becoming the next Tsuchikage i thought i would do something diffrent and i also thought it should be a girl tsuchikage this time and she is the only girl from the hidden stone village we know the name of so that was my reason for chosing her and as for the love intrestest i thought i would make it interesting. thanks for the rep
    Your welcome You can do pretty good fight scenes which I'm happy about since fight scenes are personally my favorite in any type of story lol Thank you for elaborating on all the points I made ^.^ Nice reasoning for choosing Kurotsuchi and Kishimoto needs to give more screentime to all the females in his story as that is where he lacks but you are doing what he should have been doing for some time
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 8

    nice. the training with konohamaru brings back memories!
     
         

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