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    Hokages and the Shinigami Realm

    Note: This takes place as far as the manga is.
    Shinigami Realm- A timeless dimension within the Death God itself. All souls taken by the Shinigami exist in this realm. This dimension is white and blank. All souls appear the way their physical vessels were when their souls left the Human Realm. Also, chakra exist in this world. There is no gravity in this dimension so holding one's self down by concentrating chakra to their feet is necessary.
    The story begins....

    Hashirama, Tobirama, Hiruzen and Minato, the four former Hokages, are sitting on wooden chairs that Hashirama created and having a discussion over a wooden table that was also created by Hashirama.
    Minato looks up at a floating, wooden cage containing a giant orb of orange chakra.
    Minato: Lord First, I couldn't thank you enough for suppressing the kyuubi's chakra. I would've been driven mad if the sinister chakra roamed freely.
    Hashirama: Young Minato, the pleasure is mine. You have spread on the Will of Fire to the next generation, so it's the least I can do.
    Hiruzen: Yes, I couldn't have wished for a better successor.
    Tobirama: I also couldn't have dreamed of someone better to choose to keep the Will of Fire burning brightly.
    Hashirama: Same goes for you, my dear younger brother.
    All four Hokages smile at each other
    Hashirama: Plus, through my Mokuton, I can sense that the kyuubi's chakra is becoming less sinister, thus becoming less of a nuisance to control. Minato, do you think it has anything to do with your boy, Naruto?
    Minato: Most certainly. The last time I've seen him, he was an amazing 16 year old shinobi. With his......mother's Uzumaki blood, his father's dreams and our.....master Jiraiya's teachings, he is sure to one day master the Demon Fox. After seeing what a fine shinobi he has become at such a young age, I think it's safe to say that he will soon surpass us all.
    Hiruzen: Indeed.
    Tobirama: Very reassuring.
    Hashirama: So it seems the Uzumaki clan can finally rest in peace and substain their good name.
    Minato: Definitely.
    TO BE CONTINUED.........
    part 2 here>http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...d.php?t=181078
     
         
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    Re: Hokages and the Shinigami Realm

    Tell me if you guys liked it, if so then I will continue the story on NB. This is my story and mine only so please don't copyright. If you liked it, give people the link to read it. I promise there wiill be much more epicness, you have no idea!
     
         

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    Re: Hokages and the Shinigami Realm

    Off topic: You post A LOT . Nothing wrong with that , Just something i noticed .
     
         

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    Re: Hokages and the Shinigami Realm

    reminds of this



    lol nice
     
         

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    Re: Hokages and the Shinigami Realm

    I loved it +rep
     
         

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    Re: Hokages and the Shinigami Realm

    Quote Originally Posted by Ciberr View Post
    Off topic: You post A LOT . Nothing wrong with that , Just something i noticed .
    Yeah kinda. I simply want to give NB members good discussions, is there something wrong with that? And people who use twitter and facebook post 10,000 times a day so like 3-5 post on NB a day isnt that bad imo. also, how was my story?
    Quote Originally Posted by rikerslade View Post
    reminds of this


    lol random thanks
    lol nice
     
         

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    Re: Hokages and the Shinigami Realm

    Quote Originally Posted by ItachiLeeHatake View Post
    Yeah kinda. I simply want to give NB members good discussions, is there something wrong with that? And people who use twitter and facebook post 10,000 times a day so like 3-5 post on NB a day isnt that bad imo. also, how was my story?
    I liked it . It was good .
     
         

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    Re: Hokages and the Shinigami Realm

    Quote Originally Posted by NARUTO BIJUU EMS View Post
    I loved it +rep
    thanks a bunch! much more to come, it will be an amazing story, i swear!
     
         

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    Re: Hokages and the Shinigami Realm

    Quote Originally Posted by ItachiLeeHatake View Post
    thanks a bunch! much more to come, it will be an amazing story, i swear!
    I'll be checking back every second:scorps:
     
         

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    Re: Hokages and the Shinigami Realm

    Nice job + rep
     
         

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    Re: Hokages and the Shinigami Realm

    Interesting.
     
         

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    Re: Hokages and the Shinigami Realm

    Quote Originally Posted by Wolfang714 View Post
    Interesting.
    Thanks man, that's a great compliment imo. My goal is to always be creative so saying my story is interesting great thing for me
    Quote Originally Posted by Rike Senju View Post
    Nice job + rep
    Thanks a lot, I really aprreciate it
    Quote Originally Posted by NARUTO BIJUU EMS View Post
    I'll be checking back every second:scorps:
    Thanks, you've made my day. Writing is my passion and it's great to get good feedback
     
         
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    Re: Hokages and the Shinigami Realm

    Quote Originally Posted by ItachiLeeHatake View Post
    Yeah kinda. I simply want to give NB members good discussions, is there something wrong with that? And people who use twitter and facebook post 10,000 times a day so like 3-5 post on NB a day isnt that bad imo. also, how was my story?
    He just said "nothing wrong with that" story was cool, but if ichigo exist in this world and a battle breaks out between them they are all fckd
     
         

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    Re: Hokages and the Shinigami Realm

    Quote Originally Posted by killakader1 View Post
    He just said "nothing wrong with that" story was cool, but if ichigo exist in this world and a battle breaks out between them they are all fckd
    , I so didn't see him say that. And thanks. Haha Hashirama would solo Ichigo:P
     
         

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    Re: Hokages and the Shinigami Realm

    3 / 10 stars.

    Sorry :shrug:
     
         

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    Re: Hokages and the Shinigami Realm

    Quote Originally Posted by Green Hood View Post
    3 / 10 stars.

    Sorry :shrug:
    geez, it's just the beginning
     
         

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    Re: Hokages and the Shinigami Realm

    cool story
     
         

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    Re: Hokages and the Shinigami Realm

    Quote Originally Posted by Ultimatevirus View Post
    cool story
    thanks dude, hope you enjoy the rest
     
         

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    Re: Hokages and the Shinigami Realm

    I dunno... The idea is SO awesome, but part one seems like it's going to wind up in a giant, gay, Kage orgy. Make them a little bit more manlier. The giggling and staring at eachother just doesn't seem like ANY of them.

    Unless, of course, a giant homosexual orgy is where you want to go with this. If that is the case, than this entire thing is EPIC. I will read Part 2 next, and hope.
     
         

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    Re: Hokages and the Shinigami Realm

    Quote Originally Posted by MetalDuck View Post
    I dunno... The idea is SO awesome, but part one seems like it's going to wind up in a giant, gay, Kage orgy. Make them a little bit more manlier. The giggling and staring at eachother just doesn't seem like ANY of them.

    Unless, of course, a giant homosexual orgy is where you want to go with this. If that is the case, than this entire thing is EPIC. I will read Part 2 next, and hope.
    LOL, they only smiled at each other. They've become buds, they're just enjoying themselves in part 1. But the peace will end in the coming parts
     
         

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    Re: Hokages and the Shinigami Realm

    I liked it. Keep up the good work.
     
         

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    Re: Hokages and the Shinigami Realm

    Quote Originally Posted by Netsui View Post
    I liked it. Keep up the good work.
    Thanks. Part 5 coming soon, along with EPICNESS:D
     
         

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    Re: Hokages and the Shinigami Realm

    kewl
     
         

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    Re: Hokages and the Shinigami Realm

    Quote Originally Posted by FreeMySoul View Post
    kewl
    Told you so, but to be honest I really don't even like part 1, I messed up on a few things but it gets much better. And your avatar fits the setting of my story perfectly!
     
         

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    Re: Hokages and the Shinigami Realm

    i like it
     
         

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