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    Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 7

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    Life in Konoha after the War

    Chapter 7

    It had been awhile since they had left the cloud village Yamato then decided it was time to get some rest for a while he then made a some hand signs.

    Yamato:
    (Wood Style Four Pillar House Jutsu) okay who wants to take the first watch?

    Sakura: Karui & I will


    Yamato:
    Okay then but I will have Sai join you as well and I will have Shino, Omoi & Neji take the Next watch now the rest of us will get some sleep, Sakura wake up the others if they have not come to relieve you.

    Sakura: okay Captain Yamato; let’s go Karui & Sai I would like you to patrol from the sky.

    Karui: understood

    Sai: okay I will take off and look around I will come back soon.
    Meanwhile Back in Konoha Naruto was in his Office talking to Hinata when they were suddenly interrupted by Shikamaru.

    Shikamaru: Hokage Sama a message has arrived from the Hidden Cloud Village & Hidden Sand Village.

    Naruto: thank you Shikamaru, I was actually hoping you would come by could you go get my Son & Daughter I wish to speak with them since they will both going on his first missions tomorrow.

    Shikamaru: Yes Hokage Sama I will return with them shortly

    Hinata: Naruto I will catch up with you later on we will talk more then.

    Naruto: okay Hinata I will see you at home Hinata

    Naruto then started to read the Raikage’s message

    To The Hokage

    Thank you for your help with the Unknown Ninja he has told us that there is another village his name is Akira he is from the Hidden Storm Village. You will find out more when he arrives the team you sent is on their way back they should arrive in a few days or so with Akira Keep me informed.

    From the Raikage


    Once Naruto had finished reading the Raikage’s message he then started to read the Kazkage’s message

    To The Hokage

    Sorry for the delayed reply

    Thank you for informing me about what happened in the cloud Village keep me informed

    As for the Chuunin Exams I will send someone over in about three months time so we can we can start the preparations, let me know if this is okay.

    From The Kazekage

    Ps
    Congratulations Naruto on Becoming the Hokage


    Shikamaru then Returned with Minato & Kushina just as Naruto had just finished writing his reply to the Kazekage.

    Minato & Kushina: you wanted to see us dad

    Naruto: yes I would like to talk to you both about tomorrow, oh Shikamaru can you take this reply and send it to the Kazekage.

    Shikamaru: yes Hokage Sama

    Shikamaru then left Naruto, Minato & Kushina alone

    Naruto: now Minato & Kushina I know you are both looking forward to tomorrow don’t forget to listen to your sensei’s both of you and when the time I is right I will teach you an A Rank Technique Minato.

    Minato: yes dad I will listen to my Sensei and I look forward to learning something from you.

    Kushina: Dont worry i will also listen to my Sesei, Dad and do I get to learn the same thing as Minato.

    Naruto: Minato I may teach it to you if your Sensei does what mine did, & Kushina I don’t know if I will be able to teach it to you we will have to wait and see. If we can’t I am sure your mum will have an awesome technique to teach you, Your Brother is more like me and you are more like your Mother.

    Minato: what did your Sensei do Dad?

    Kushina: Okay dad I understand

    Naruto: you will find out soon enough Minato now we all should go home for tea your mum is probably waiting for us, I hope all goes well for you both tomorrow.

    Minato & Kushina: Okay dad

    A few hours later Shino was just waking up it had been quite awhile since Sakura and the others went to keep watch so he decided to go and wake up Darui & Neji.

    Shino: Hey you guys wake up it’s been a while since the girls & Sai had started the first watch I think we better go relieve them.

    Darui: (sigh) is it our turn already

    Neji: yes let’s go relieve the girls

    A few minutes later they had got to where Sakura and the others where

    Neji: Sakura we will take over here

    Sakura: okay let me contact Sai on the communicator, Sai its time to Return Neji and others are here to relieve us.

    Sai: understood

    A few mins later Sai returned

    Sakura: okay then let’s go and get some rest

    Karui & Sai: okay

    Meanwhile in the Mist Village the letter from the sand’s Kazekage, had arrived and Ao was walking past where the Messenger birds are and one of the Ninja that had received the message called out to him.

    Mist Village Ninja: Ao wait

    Ao: yes

    Mist Village Ninja: There is a Message for the Mizukage from the Kazekage

    Ao: thank you I will take it to the Mizukage

    A few minutes or so later Ao arrived at the Mizukage Mansion Ao then.
    “knock knock”

    Mei: Enter, ah Ao what brings you here

    Ao: I have a message here from the Kazekage

    Mei: thank you I will read it now, come back in a few mins I may need you again

    Ao: okay Mizukage Sama i will return soon

    Ao then left the Mizukage alone to read the message

    The Mizukage then started to read the Message


    Dear Mizukage

    Just letting you know that there could possibly be a new threat the Hokage has informed me that one of the Hidden Cloud Villages ANBU Members came across a ninja with a lightning Bolt on his forehead protector. He also said that none of the villages on record have a symbol like that on their forehead protector, he was found unconscious & the Hokage has sent a team to the cloud to help out.

    Ps
    Can you inform Tsuchikage about the situation, even though the Konoha team may have returned to Konoha I sure both the Raikage and the Hokage will keep us informed.


    Then Mizukage then wrote to the Tsuchikage a few mins later and she was done then Ao returned.

    Mei: thank you for coming back here Ao send this to the Tsuchikage.

    Ao: yes Mizukage Sama

    Ao then headed straight back to where the messenger birds are once again.

    The next day Yamato & the others were all getting ready to continue heading back to Konoha.


    Yamato:
    okay everyone we are not far from Konoha but, that does not mean we can relax we don’t know if anyone will try to ambush us just to force Akira here to go back, so be on your guard.

    Sakura: I am sure Sai & Neji can take care of that Captain Yamato.

    Sai & Neji: Understood

    Sai then got out one of his scrolls and started drawing something on it and then he made a hand sign.

    Sai: (Ninpou, Chojuu Giga!)
    (A bunch of mice then started coming off the scroll and went off in every direction.)

    Neji: we should continue we should arrive in Konoha tomorrow sometime.


    Yamato:
    okay let’s go.

    As Captain Yamato and the others started to head back to Konoha.

    An ANBU member from the Hidden Storm Village had spotted them and he then noticed that Akira was with them he then went straight to see the ANBU Captain.

    ANBU Member: Captain I have spotted Akira he is being escorted by a group of Ninja.

    ANBU Captain: ok then lead the way

    ANBU Member: Understood they can’t of gotten too far ahead we a catch them in no time.


    Sorry for the late release i have been real busy i hope you enjoy this chapter i hope to release chapter 8 sooner than i did this chapter

    here is the link to Chapter 6, Chapter 6 Has the link to chapters 1- 5
    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...d.php?t=147549
     
         
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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 7

    If you answered me this I will read your full story.. Is this story naruhina?
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 7

    Ah, finally! I've been waiting.

    Brilliant. Brilliant chapter. ^^
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 7

    Awesome!!
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 7

    Quote Originally Posted by Braveknight View Post
    If you answered me this I will read your full story.. Is this story naruhina?
    lol, I wont be against it if you only prefer NaruHina
    Anyway, nice chapter..keep it up
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 7

    Quote Originally Posted by Braveknight View Post
    If you answered me this I will read your full story.. Is this story naruhina?
    yes this is a NaruXHina

    thanks for the nice compliments so far everyone.
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 7

    Nicely written, thanks for sending me here.
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 7

    nice chapter :D
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 7

    nice work
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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 7

    COOOOl , awesome as always i've been waiting for it :overjoy:
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 7

    Quote Originally Posted by Memoria View Post
    Nicely written, thanks for sending me here.
    thats ok i happy you enjoyed it

    Quote Originally Posted by yahiko24 View Post
    nice chapter :D
    Quote Originally Posted by Zawar View Post
    nice work
    nice chapter :D
    thank you

    Quote Originally Posted by marvinkid View Post
    COOOOl , awesome as always i've been waiting for it :overjoy:
    Thank you Mavin Kid i know it was a long wait but i was busy and i also decided to go over and over it to make sure i was happy with it i am happy you enjoyed it again tho. :overjoy:
     
         
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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 7

    been a long loooooong time!!
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 7

    finally nice chapter pm me gain if tha next chapter is out
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 7

    Yay! Nice chapter :D
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 7

    Now that's a long wait.....but it was worth it!!
    Great chapter
    Keep up the gud work!
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 7

    This chapter was nice as it invoked the plot to begin thickening ^.^ It was interesting to see that you depicted most of the Kages receiving/reacting to the news about the Arashi dilemma rather than simply writing it into narration. I liked Sai in this chapter and hopefully he and Neji (nice airing by the way) seem to be at the front line when it comes to fighting-I hope to see epic things from him I really liked the ending and I cannot wait to see what will occur next!
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 7

    Quote Originally Posted by Kuroi Honoo View Post
    This chapter was nice as it invoked the plot to begin thickening ^.^ It was interesting to see that you depicted most of the Kages receiving/reacting to the news about the Arashi dilemma rather than simply writing it into narration. I liked Sai in this chapter and hopefully he and Neji (nice airing by the way) seem to be at the front line when it comes to fighting-I hope to see epic things from him I really liked the ending and I cannot wait to see what will occur next!
    Thank you for your compliment it seems taking my time is a good thing.

    also thank you to everyone else for there nice comments as well
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 7

    Quote Originally Posted by serenaandrosie View Post
    Thank you for your compliment it seems taking my time is a good thing.
    Your welcome and I can say that fanfiction writers who take a break then come back to write have the potential to lack that luster they possessed when initially writing and that fortunately did not happen to you
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 7

    Quote Originally Posted by Kuroi Honoo View Post
    Your welcome and I can say that fanfiction writers who take a break then come back to write have the potential to lack that luster they possessed when initially writing and that fortunately did not happen to you
    yes it is good that it did not happen to me
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 7

    cool
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 7

    Very Good!! keep it up!!
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 7

    Again, great work!
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 7

    i loved it as always!!! wease:
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 7

    that's pretty good!
    I like the plot, it seems interesting. Your writings is quite good, but their is a few mistakes but that's not a big problem If possible, it would be better if you change how you do the dialogues. example:

    “Knock Knock”

    ''Enter'' Shouted Naruto to the person behind the door. Sakura came in with a smile and greeted Naruto. She sat down to talk when Naruto cut her off.

    ''Sakura, once the Academy graduation is over I will have the list of Shinobi that are going to the cloud Village.'' Naruto didn't budge his eyes from the paper in front of him. He barely looked at Sakura when she came. But This was a serious matter and he wanted every details to solve this fast.

    That lack of attention that she received from annoyed her but now that he is Hokage she will have to get use to it.

    ''Yeah sure.'' answered Sakura//////////////////

    Okay, so that was from the second chapter. This is just an example of how it could be You should explain more their emotions and the actions they do. Oh and write some funny stuff for it to go smoothly (but that is just my personal opinion )
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Chapter 7

    Wow, very nice chapter, I see that you most likely have experienced writing ffs, aside from the grammar issue, it's very nicely done. The dialogue is how I'd expect a naruto ff to be, and the flow of it all is great. Overall, awesome chapter.
     
         

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