Results 1 to 7 of 7
  1. #1
    Kwalker394's Avatar
    Status
    Kwalker394 is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Mar 2012
    Location
    In my room >_>
    Posts
    3,697
    Post Thanks / Like
    Is back and happy to be back
    ^_^
     

    Re approval, update: 火のケネス悪魔 Kenesu Hinokami


    When I counter, I don't let them cut me.
    When I protect someone, I don't let them come to harm.
    When I attack, I attack to kill!


    Name:
    火のケネス悪魔 Kenesu Hinokami (Kenneth the Demon of Fire)

    Nickname:
    ケン (Ken)

    Gender:
    Male

    Age:
    18

    Clan:
    N/A

    _______________________________________________

    Looks:

    Kenesu is a tall, skinny, and handsome person. He has Jet black hair that goes a little bit past his wonderful light blue eyes. He has a calm expression on his face most of the time even in tough situations. He stands 195cm in height and is very strong.

    Clothing

    He wears black shirts and either dark black or dark blue pants with chains going around his belt line and hanging down his waist. He also wears a dark and long torn cloak with a hood with the word "Demon" printed on the back. When in battle Kenesu wears a Flak Jacket under his cloak. He also has a Silver chain length armor under his shirt and cloak to protect himself during battle along with his gloves that has a thin layer of metal on the top of his hand to block enemy weapons. He has two tattoos one on each shoulder saying mother on his left shoulder and father on his right shoulder.

    Personal weapons

    Kenesu can always be found with his sword ブレードの暗い魂 (Dark soul blade) Dark Soul Blade was handed down from generations of Kenesu's family. It is a long curved blade that is Black and has a Blood stained tint to it with a Silver dragon hand guard. This sword has been in countless battles (which is why the blade is tinted red) over the long, long years since it was crafted from a very special dark metal called Desu· metaru (デス·メタル -Death Metal) which is a Osmium and Titanium Alloy which are the hardest, and strongest metals on earth. The Titanium is there to give the sword its strength, high strength:weight ratio, high ductility, resistance to corrosion and a decently high melting point. Titanium has a relatively lower ability to conduct electricity and heat and has paramagnetic properties. The Osmium gives the sword its density, color, and gives off a soft sheen even at night. Because this sword has a high melting point that reaches over 3000°F and has a low ability to conduct heat.





    _______________________________________________

    Personality:

    Kenesu, although looks tough, is a kind person to his fellow villagers and friends. He is very patriotic of his village and will help in what ever way he can to keep it safe. He is very protective over his comrades from Konohagakure and would protect them with his life in an instant. Although thats true for his friends and fellow villagers, Kenesu has a dark side to him that is very frightful. Some say he has a demon inside of him that is unstable but the one's who know him deny that opinion till the ends of the earth.

    Kenesu loves the out doors and cool places such as shade under a tree or behind a big rock. He likes to listen to music which he can often be found listening to almost all the time, and hang out with his friends at a BBQ place or just walking around the village.

    Kenesu like to play jokes, get into trouble, and have fun, but he knows when to get serious when needed. Befriend him and there is no problem, make a problem and he'll cut you open and paint the village red with your blood.

    Because of Kenesu's age he doesn't have the "Skills" in battle like the much older Jounin before him, but hes not a Special Jounin for nothing. Kenesu is a very good fighter and a very skilled ninja. He works hard to train to become even better everyday and to hone his skills. He's even working on new fighting styles and attacks to become even greater than what he already is. (coming soon)

    _______________________________________________

    Village Info.

    Village of Birth:
    Konohagakure
    Village of Alliance:
    Konohagakure

    _______________________________________________

    Rank//Chakra Info.

    Ninja Rank:
    Jounin

    Specialty:


    Elements:
    Katon - Fire Style (Needs training)

    Your ninjutsu:


    (Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
    Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
    _____
    (Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
    _____
    (Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
    _____
    (Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:N/A
    The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
    _____

    (Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
    _____

    (Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
    _____

    (Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

    _______________________________________________



    Background Info.

    History:

    Kenesu was born and raised in the village of Konohagakure. At a young age his dad taught him skills in the art of being a ninja. Sword skills, understanding chakra, hand seals, concentration, and the will of fire. Of course he couldnt do any of those right away because of his young age of 4 he still hold on to those teachings to this day. Although he would continue his training with his dad, he cant because both of his parents are dead.

    At age 6, his parents took a mission to help protect the village and didnt make it back. Kenesu was devastated by this that some say that this is where his second personality and instinct to kill comes from. From that day forth Kenesu took a vow that he will always protect Konohagakure and his loved ones even if it kills him just like his parents did. After his parents died he was forced to live in a foster home until he could take care of himself and although he fought with almost everyone in the village after his parents death people still put up with him because of what his parents did even though they dont like him and often say that he should have died instead of them. He struggles to gain their trust and acknowledgement.

    Kenesu trains everyday harder and harder than the next to become a great ninja like his father and mother. Although he has no one to teach him he still try's. Once he was old enough to enter the academy he did. And even though he mostly failed all of his subjects he still tried and never gave up on them. He often studied all night and dont get much sleep just to pass one test. Other students tried to help him with his study's but would get into fights with them sometimes for no reason at all.

    Until ユキ (Yuki) decided to help him and he fell in love with her. He was absolutely stunned by her even at a young age. He became friends with her and they became best friends even today they hang out, have fun, and get into trouble together. He passed the academy (but barley) and began to live by himself in his own apartment. No longer at the foster home. He also slowly began to quick playing jokes on the villagers because of Yuki. She always got onto him about it and pretty much scared him into stopping.

    One day Yuki was in trouble with three local bullies hanging around the bath's. They were pushing her around and touching her wrongly. Kenesu heard her screams and knew it was her and rushed to her aid. The bully was actually one of the guys who used to pick on him and get into fights with. The three bullies came at Kenesu fist raised and swinging. Kenesu took care of them no problem with ease in order to save his friend. Since then they have been avoiding Kenesu because they said that when he counter attacked them he ''was'' a demon with fire in his eyes (hence his name). Not long after Kenesu asked Yuki out and they've been together since.

    Now at the age of 18 Kenesu trains even harder, as a Special Jounin he needs to hone his skills to become stronger and faster to protect the ones he love. He is still together with Yuki although they still fight like they used to she knows he will always be there for her and that they love each other.

    _______________________________________________


    Other

    Picture[s]:

    Kenesu



    Yuki



    Tattoos

    Father



    Mother


    _______________________________________________


    Theme Song and Background Music:


    Theme Song: Blow Me Away by Breaking Benjamin
    The song is amazing but I chose it because of the lyrics


    Background music: Shinnigami Theme by unknown
    Again song is really cool but I chose it because it feels right as a background type music and it has a really good beat thats really catchy. I can picture this song being played as Kenesu walks around the village or something.


    _______________________________________________


    Battles


    Won: 0
    Lost:
    0

    ~Approved~ removed infused katon chakra in the sword, also there's really no need to start explaining all the aspects of titanium, if you want that, just read the titanium CE description or wikipedia
     
         
    Last edited by Caliburn; 04-15-2012 at 10:21 AM.

  2. #2
    Lysander's Avatar
    Status
    Lysander is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Aug 2011
    Posts
    6,540
    Post Thanks / Like
    #hashtag
     



    Re: Re approval, update: 火のケネス悪魔 Kenesu Hinokami

    What exactly has been updated?
     
         

  3. #3
    Senior Member Gutsy Jiraiya's Avatar
    Status
    Gutsy Jiraiya is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Nov 2011
    Location
    Unknown
    Posts
    9,965
    Post Thanks / Like
    The Will of me U_U
     



    Re: Re approval, update: 火のケネス悪魔 Kenesu Hinokami

    probably just the story, and stuff...

    but it looks good :D
     
         

  4. #4
    Senior Member Toshiro's Avatar
    Status
    Toshiro is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Nov 2011
    Posts
    10,721
    Post Thanks / Like
    Graphic Designer
     



    Re: Re approval, update: 火のケネス悪魔 Kenesu Hinokami

    If you don't have anything mastered, you can't have it as a specialty unless it's a cannon bio, and well this is a custom bio.
     
         

  5. #5
    Senior Member asad70ful's Avatar
    Status
    asad70ful is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Jul 2011
    Location
    do u care about that?
    Posts
    2,249
    Post Thanks / Like
    :P
     

    Re: Re approval, update: 火のケネス悪魔 Kenesu Hinokami

    what is tis
     
         

  6. #6
    Senior Member Toshiro's Avatar
    Status
    Toshiro is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Nov 2011
    Posts
    10,721
    Post Thanks / Like
    Graphic Designer
     



    Re: Re approval, update: 火のケネス悪魔 Kenesu Hinokami

    Quote Originally Posted by asad70ful View Post
    what is tis
    It's called a bio, for our RP system.
     
         

  7. #7
    Kwalker394's Avatar
    Status
    Kwalker394 is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Mar 2012
    Location
    In my room >_>
    Posts
    3,697
    Post Thanks / Like
    Is back and happy to be back
    ^_^
     

    Re: Re approval, update: 火のケネス悪魔 Kenesu Hinokami

    Quote Originally Posted by Foxnaruto View Post
    What exactly has been updated?
    Deeper detail and story, and better page layout. If you compare my old bio to this. (in my sig) then you can tell this new updated bio is better.


    Quote Originally Posted by JiraiyaEroSennin View Post
    probably just the story, and stuff...

    but it looks good :D
    Yes. and thanks :D

    Quote Originally Posted by Toshiro View Post
    If you don't have anything mastered, you can't have it as a specialty unless it's a cannon bio, and well this is a custom bio.
    K thanks for the input i'll change it then :/

    Quote Originally Posted by asad70ful View Post
    what is tis
    Custom Character Biography
     
         
    Last edited by Kwalker394; 04-08-2012 at 03:54 PM.

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •