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    Death is natural... and to
    deflower such a natural thing
    is a sin, and those who defy
    the whims of Nature shall know
    the true pain in which none
    can shelter and shudder. s
    gift that we all can be happy
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    naruto:rise of the uzumaki dynasty chapter 8 part 2 the uzumaki clan

    previous chapters
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    chapter 1
    chapter 2 betrayel
    chapter 3 part 1 awakenchapter 3 part 2 sasuke's and sakura's
    chapter 3 part 3 awaken uzumaki naruto
    chapter 4 part 1 a god falls (death of so6p)
    chapter 4 part 2 a belief in love (naruhina)
    chapter 5 departure
    chapter 6 a promiss to keep (3 months later)
    chapter 6 part 2 a unbreakable will
    chapter 6 part 3 naruto unleashed( juubi mode naruto)
    chapter 6 part 4 sasuke's wrath
    chapter 7 bonds stronger then gods
    chapter 8 childern of gods (sasusaku)

    in this chapter we will discover kikyo's back story

    remember i like feedback on chapters because ACT 2 is coming up in about 4 chapters
    but until then im thinking about adding music.... to the next chapter i want know your oppion on this

    chapter begins now

    *naruto's room at midnight a few hours later*

    naruto picks up the scroll that kikyo gave him

    naruto * so lady kikyo legacy is this scroll?*

    naruto opens it to reveal a long history

    naruto* what the*

    he reads the title

    naruto the uzumaki clan? WAIT WHAT!

    naruto is taken back

    naruto no way the scroll is hundreds of years worth of logs and detailed reports.

    naruto begins to read kikyo's section

    naruto so she was uzumaki like me?

    naruto begins to form tears in his eyes as he reads, he sees a plam placement on the scroll, he reads the text below it

    naruto *naruto if you want to know what happened place your plam on the seal* so she wrote that part for me huh?

    he place his plam on the seal a flood of memories floods his brains

    naruto AWWWW!

    he lets go of the scroll, his eyes glow gold like the rest of the divines. he sees through kikyo's eyes now

    *800 years ago kikyo's perspective*

    kikyo(child) master what do we do

    kikyo looks at him with fear

    ginkaku don't worry child for we will be in yumi soon

    three horrible looking things barge right through the door.

    jashin the demons.... there here

    he tries to move but the demon launch kunai at him he is pinned to the wall

    jashin HELP SOMEONE HELP

    the demons drag him toward, them

    demon 1 BLOOD, BLOOD
    demon 2 LORD BAKURAMA DEMANDS BLOOD

    they stab him with swords and take his soul

    demon 3 WE NEED 3 MORE

    they point at a mother and a child, the first 2 demons quickly seize them

    mother let go of him. LET GO OF HIM

    they point to kikyo, her master shoves her toward them

    ginkaku take them and leave

    the demons that have the mother and child oblige, they pick them up and head out the door.

    demon 3 come along girl *he smiles* would not want to keep bakurama waiting

    she stand her ground, she gets ready to fight

    kikyo (child) TO HELL WITH YOU

    she forms hand seals and sends water tendrils at him

    demon 3 fine then

    he jumps out of their way the tendrils rip the door of the dojo open. the scene of carnage floods her eyes

    kikyo (child) no.... no, NOO!

    the village is burning demons slaughtering hundreds of people.

    kikyo(child) ILL KILL YOU!

    she grabs one of the swords hanging on the wall and begins to run and slash at the demon

    demon 3 how dare you

    he is cut by the sword, she smiles when she sees his blood flow. but he demon forms hand signs

    demon 3 demonic art: terrible binds

    chains eurpt from the floor and encircle kikyo and trap her

    demon 3 now come along

    she fights to get out of chains but to know avail

    kikyo (child) no please stop

    the demon grabs her and picks her, but as they head toward the door, a mysterious figure steps from the door. the figure has blonde hair and clairvoyent eyes with 3 wings starting from the pupil to the outter eye

    ??? put them all down now

    the demon looks on in amazement

    demon 3 who the hell do you think you are....

    the figure draws his sword, and points right at the demon

    izanagi I AM IZANAGI UZUMAKI

    they all stare in shock

    demon 3 good killing you will be so much easier

    the demon charges, izanagi stand still

    izanagi shinra tensei

    the demon is repeled backwards into the wall

    izanagi ill ask you one more time call off the attack

    the demon forms hand seals

    demon 3 demonic art: hell fire

    several streams of flame heads straight at izanagi. he holds his hand up and the fire begins to be asorbed, everyone looks at him with amazement

    demon you little BAST.....

    izanagi warps to him and slice his stomach open.

    izanagi begone demon of bakurama

    the demon falls to the ground dead.

    izanagi EVERYONE UP WERE LEAVING NOW!

    *5 days later*

    the remainder of the village walks away as the ashes falls from their village about thridty miles away

    villager 1 were do we go now? *in dispaired voice*
    villager 2 what are we going to do?

    they stare at izanagi a young men no more than 16 years old, as he suddenly turns around

    izanagi WE FIGHT FOR A CHANCE TO LIVE

    10 more figures jump from trees, they land behind izanagi

    kikyo its impossible..... no one can hope to get near bakurama or even defeat him he is a god a demon god

    izanagi levitates him self into the air, he stares at her and turns to the crowd

    izanagi DO NOT DISPAIR, YOU HAVE WON A VICTORY

    they stare at each other

    guardsman THAT IS A LIE!

    izanagi stares at them all he sees the distrust

    izanagi YOU ARE ALL ALIVE NOW ARE'NT YOU

    they look at him now

    kikyo SO!

    he looks into her eyes and stares back at them

    izanagi THAT IS YOUR VICTORY TO LIVE AND FIGHT ANOTHER DAY AND HOPE FOR A BRIGHTER FUTURE!, *he takes a breath* BAKURAMA POWER IS WAINING CAN'T YOU SEE THAT HE NEEDS MORE AND MORE SOULS TO STAY IN THE REALM THE MORE YOU LIVE, THE MORE THE VICTORY. NOW WHO WILL STAND WITH US!!!

    several young men and women step forward

    izanagi this rebellion begins now

    they all continue to walk

    *back in naruto's time*

    naruto what the hell

    minato and kushina walk

    minato what happened

    they see the scroll

    kushina so you can read our language

    they all stare at eachother

    end of part 1 part 2 will be released in this thread in about 3 hours
     
         

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    Death is natural... and to
    deflower such a natural thing
    is a sin, and those who defy
    the whims of Nature shall know
    the true pain in which none
    can shelter and shudder. s
    gift that we all can be happy
    for
     



    Re: naruto:rise of the uzumaki dynasty chapter 8 part 2 the uzumaki clan

    my bad it will be released in a new part on another thread since it would make this one too long ill see you all in about 3 or 4 hours again
     
         

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    Re: naruto:rise of the uzumaki dynasty chapter 8 part 2 the uzumaki clan

    Good :D
     
         

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    Death is natural... and to
    deflower such a natural thing
    is a sin, and those who defy
    the whims of Nature shall know
    the true pain in which none
    can shelter and shudder. s
    gift that we all can be happy
    for
     



    Re: naruto:rise of the uzumaki dynasty chapter 8 part 2 the uzumaki clan

    the next chapter is at 9:30pm est
     
         

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    Re: naruto:rise of the uzumaki dynasty chapter 8 part 2 the uzumaki clan

    you even brought in jashin! nice!
     
         

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    Re: naruto:rise of the uzumaki dynasty chapter 8 part 2 the uzumaki clan

    great fan fiction keep it up
     
         

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