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    Akatsuki Chronicles [Chapter 2]

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    Akatsuki Chronicles

    Chapter Two: It's Time


    [12 Years and 5 Months Later]

    [Jacob sits at his Older Sisters Anniversary Memorial Burial. After a few minutes have passed his Team mates Duece, Mel, and Sling arrive]

    Jacob: Thank you for showing up guys

    Duece: [*laughs*] You know we wouldn't miss this for anything

    Mel: [*Looking at Duece with one eye brow raised*] Why must you laugh for everything, you don't know how Jacob feels.

    Sling: [*Stale face*] Why must you talk for everything, you don't know how i feel. [*starts to laugh*]

    Jacob: [*smiling* appreciating that no matter what his Team, His Friends, His Family is there for him]

    [5 Hours Later]

    [Jacob and his Team eat at Sisi's[Jacobs Older Sister] favorite restaurant in honor of her]

    Duece: Pass the BBQ ribs!

    Mel: [*with an evil smile*] Ask nicely.

    Duece: [*with a carefree smile*] I'll cut you

    Mel: [appearing to be getting serious]

    Jacob: [seeing Mel's face *laughs* with fear] I'll just pass it, it's ok.

    Sling: They should just kiss already [*he says with a dumb look on his face*]

    [Mel turning her head slowly towards Sling, Starring him down]

    Mel: What.. did..you just say? [Pupils getting larger]

    Sling: [not realizing anything] Ki…

    [POP! *Echoes throughout the Restaurant* Mel punching him out of his seat before he's able to finish what he was saying]

    [*Sling laying motionless on the floor with drool dripping out of his mouth*]

    Duece: [*surprised*] So that's how you feel?

    Jacob: I think it's time to go

    [Jacob and his Team now leaving the Restaurant, Duece having to carry Sling out]

    [Next Day]

    [Jacob packs a bag awaiting to go off on a mission, with his Team, when Duece arrives at his door]

    Duece: [*knocks on door*]

    Jacob: [*opens door*] Duece? [*surprised to see him*] what are you doing here so early, we don't leave until Noon.

    Duece: [*looking at the floor where Jacob stands*] I know, but i want to make sure your ready for this mission

    Jacob: [*noticing that look on Duece's face as bad news*] Tell me the problem..

    Duece: [*taking a deep breathe before speaking*] The person we're ordered to capture…[*looks up towards Jacob*]…is the guy who killed your sister

    Jacob: [*shocked at first, then suddenly serious*] Good, I've been waiting for this

    Duece: [*surprised* at Jacobs reaction] You don't find it weird that your the one assigned this mission? And most of all, how all of a sudden the village leaders know who killed your sister?

    Jacob: No…[*turning around and back to packing his bag for the mission while thinking to himself 'Thank You Sensei' *]

    [As Noon arrives and Jacob and his Team walk towards the Gates of their Village to leave on their mission, The Sensei that once trained Jacob, Mel, and Duece awaits them]

    Jacob: Sensei

    Mel and Duece: [*Puzzled*] Sensei?

    Sensei: [*with a concerned look on his face*] I want to make sure you guys know exactly what your getting into.

    Jacob: We do.

    Mel: Wait, tell us what you have to say anyway Sensei.

    Sensei: This person your hunting, is part of an Organization that goes by the name 'Akatsuki'. They wear black robes with red clouds on them, they also travel in pairs and are S-Rank Criminals so don't ever take your eyes off them and always keep your guard up. Their Ruthless, especially the one's you'll be tracking. You only have information on one am i correct?

    Jacob: Yes, Hidan

    Sensei: He's New to the Akatsuki and was paired with a ninja known as Kakuzu, from Takigakure. That's all that i know of him.

    Jacob: Thank you Sensei

    Sensei: [*Looking at his students and then looking up at the sky*] Be careful, and whatever you do. Make sure you make it back [Then walking away, leaving Jacob and his Team to go about their mission]

    [Jacob, Mel, and Duece watch their Sensei walk and fade into the distance(thinking about the memories they've shared together)]

    Sling: [*looking at Jacob, Mel, and Duece Gazing at nothing*] Umm, Hello? Shouldn't we leave..

    [Jacob, Mel, and Duece then snapping out of it, while simultaneously looking at Sling. Then carry on leaving their Village and beginning their Mission to Capture Hidan (or in Jacobs mind, to Kill him)

    Jacob: [*Thinking to himself* with a serious look on his face] I've been waiting for this.


    To Be Continued..

    Hope the readers enjoy'd it and i felt like making this Chapter a little more up-tempo since last chapter was-emotional-

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    Next Chapter will have Fighting/Battles
     
         
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    Re: Akatsuki Chronicles [Chapter 2]

    This is very nice
     
         

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    Re: Akatsuki Chronicles [Chapter 2]

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    This is very nice
    Thanx:D
     
         
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    Re: Akatsuki Chronicles [Chapter 2]

    Ah man right when it gets to the good part and it say to be continued but this keeps getting better tho great story so far
     
         

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    Re: Akatsuki Chronicles [Chapter 2]

    Quote Originally Posted by KiDxJIGGLY View Post
    Ah man right when it gets to the good part and it say to be continued but this keeps getting better tho great story so far
    Lmao, thanks bro
     
         

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    Re: Akatsuki Chronicles [Chapter 2]

    Great chapter once again, looking forward to the battles
     
         

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    Re: Akatsuki Chronicles [Chapter 2]

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    Great chapter once again, looking forward to the battles
    lol, thanx bro :D and just uploaded Chapter 3
     
         

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