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    The Life of a Ninja: The Meeting

    The life of a Ninja: The Beginning


    Insai walked out of the village gates and went by the the rocks surrounding the village, luckily for him the mist was around and he was limping out onto the lake. All he did was staying continuously focused on his chakra to keep his mind off dangerous thoughts and to keep walking on the water. He walked for hours and hours, he was exhausted and could hardly manage another step. His whole body ached he kept walking trying to bear the pain, he managed to make it a few kilometres from his village over a long period of time.

    Why haven't they come after me? He thought.

    While thinking this he realized he finally made it to dry land. It was a small island with big rocks near the far side. It had a very dense forest on the surface and looked extremely wild. He didn't want to have to stop here but Insai's strength gave out. He dropped to the ground like a rock collapsing completely. With what strength he had left he reached for a energy bar in his backpack and pushed it into his mouth. He then rolled over a little until he was at a base of a tree welly concealed.

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    Caly was walking through the woods, she hated the island she currently lived on. It was too big which made it interesting however her master never let her outside their compound. She walked around looking for something to do bored out of her mind.

    I don't get it. I am not anything special. Their are plenty of better and stronger Uchihas to go after, I miss my parents. When will I be allowed back? When will they pick me up? Caly was constantly pondering over these kind of thoughts while walking.

    She was strolling through the woods right by the for something to do. Until she hear the snapping of twigs, she had an extremely acute hearing due to being in complete silence for such long periods of time. She had all her senses extremely welly developed, and most importantly of all she has awakened her First Tomoe within her Sharingan. She never dared to tell he master but knew that one day he would figure it out. As soon as she heard the twig snap she moved towards the fence to try and see what was going on. She couldn't see much however she heard something hit a tree.

    I better call master or a superior... Caly thought.

    She immediately ran inside her temporary home. She currently was living within a massive underground “Prison” is what she called it. She hated it, being away from family which she hasn't heard from within months. She was only fourteen and living with a creepy man and a few other people who were around to “experiment” on random subjects. She heard their screams at night and hated it from the depth of her heart. She got inside and saw a hooded figure inside.

    “Master, there is a...”

    “We know sweetheart, go grab some sleep we will go pick him up.”

    With that the hooded figure she called master left for the door. She walked inside thinking of who it might be and if she might get company. She walked through the door seeing this underground hell hole and looking at the walls that had odd patterns on them. This place gave her the creeps and she hated it from within the depths of her heart. Nothing in the world made this place livable, experiment tools and working liquids all over the place bothered her. She made it down the hall, two lefts and one right and she walked into her room and lay on her bed imagining whom the poor boy outside might be...

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    Insai woke up, a light was in his face and was quite annoying. He had no clue where he was all he knew was that he was lying in a bed in an odd place. It smelled horrible and he couldn't see due to the light blinding him. He tried to move but realized his body wouldn't allow him to.

    “What the?”

    “Don't worry young Senju. You are finally home” The voice whispered to his left. Insai tried to tilt his head and managed slightly but he had to use his peripheral vision to see who it was. He saw a figure standing there with long hair and pale skin the light made it hard to see. The man reminded him of a snake...

    No way! Thought Insai realizing the peril he was in. The figure moved towards him swiftly and Insai felt slithering across his body. Snakes were all moving on top of him and suddenly binding him in place. Insai suddenly realized where he was. Against all the odds he ended up the island with the hideout of an S-Class ninja.

    “Orochimaru...”

    To be continued....


    I tired taking the advice I got previously I hope you liked it ^_^
     
         
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    Re: The Life of a Ninja: The Meeting

    ~reserved~
     
         

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    Re: The Life of a Ninja: The Meeting

    Decent.
     
         

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    Re: The Life of a Ninja: The Meeting

    Nice bro and this is ur second time?
     
         

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    Re: The Life of a Ninja: The Meeting

    Hmm, nice one.
     
         

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    Re: The Life of a Ninja: The Meeting

    Quote Originally Posted by Theleader View Post
    Nice bro and this is ur second time?
    Yeah
    And thanks ^_^
    Quote Originally Posted by Gingka Uzumaki View Post
    Decent.
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    Quote Originally Posted by RikudoMadara View Post
    Hmm, nice one.
    Thanks ^_^
     
         

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    Re: The Life of a Ninja: The Meeting

    Awesome

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    Re: The Life of a Ninja: The Meeting

    interesting keep up the good work
     
         

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    Re: The Life of a Ninja: The Meeting

    Thank you ^_^
     
         

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    Re: The Life of a Ninja: The Meeting

    O__________________________________________O
    it's okay, it was confusing because i read the entire story backwards O____________O
     
         

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