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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Doton/ Hyouton: wieghto tsuchi ( Earth style/ Ice style weighted earth)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will first focus doton chakra into his foot and will stomp on the ground sinking the ground below the surface 100 meters however this will go un noticed it causes no shaking and happens as fast as earth moving core. Then the user will make 2 hand seals and focus his water chakra on the surface of the ground and into the 100 meter drench summoning a large amount of water to appear under the ground ( filling up the drench) and a small amount above enough to raise to the users shin. The user will then use his wind chakra to freeze this water into ice all the water above and underground will freeze and expand , there will be so much ice pressing down on the earth below that the earth will be too heavy to manipulate while the ice on the surface is to fool the enemy into thinking that the ice on the surface is whats keeping the ground so heavy.
    Note: no ice jutsu above B rank next turn
    Note: can only be used twice
    Note: lasts 3 turns then ice melts and becomes a normal water source.
    Note: while jutsu is active the user and the enemy are unable to use earth ninjutsu that come from the ground.


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    100 meters is way too much. The description needs a rewording, its confusing.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 09-24-2012 at 09:05 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Naizen View Post
    Doton: Doroppu Bokkusu- Earth Release: Drop Box
    Type: Defensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user summons a square-shaped box of earth(without the bottom) that falls over him and those around him, protecting them. This box is able to stop attacks of all ranks except Forbidden rank and it's walls have a thickness of the 3ft. The box disappears after one turn (or earlier if the user wishes).
    -Usable only twice per battle.
    -User cannot perform any other Earth technique in that turn.
    -Can only be taught by Naizen.

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    All attacks up to forbidden? remove that sentence. Also, I need a size for this box. And if is Mid-Long range you can't summon it on top of yourself...
    Doton: Doroppu Bokkusu- Earth Release: Drop Box
    Type: Defensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user summons a square-shaped box of earth(without the bottom) that falls over him and those around him, protecting them. This box can protect everyone in it from attacks, S rank and below. It's walls have a thickness of the 3ft, it's length and breadth is 16ftx16ft while it's height from the ground is 8ft. The box disappears after one turn (or earlier if the user wishes).
    -Only sensors or byakugan users outside are aware of what is going on in the box and vice versa.
    -Usable only twice per battle.
    -User cannot perform any other Earth technique in that turn.
    -Can only be taught by Naizen.

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    Again...all S-Rank attacks? What about lightning? S-Rank lightning? Lava? Storm? Make it generic. Its an S-Rank earth defense...It can defend up to Forbidden rank water, S-Rank fire, wind and earth and A-Rank lightning but you don't need to mention that part. Its common sense.

    Kuchiyose no jutsu: Kagami Hiketsu- Summoning Technique: Mirror of Mysteries
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A(depends on jutsu reflected)
    Description: This mirror has the shape of the entrance of some Japanese temples. When it is summoned to the field, it is suspended 2ft above the ground, moving up and down slowly as if panting. It has following abilities and corresponding restrictions:
    Abilities
    -It is able to reflect only direct attacks up to A rank which are aimed at the user back to the opponent at a rank lower.(ie A becomes B, B becomes C,etc)
    -It can be used as a flight medium when Naizen stands on it.
    -Once summoned to the field, it reflects the rays of the sun to the opponent(s), blinding them for one turn.
    -It can be used to communicate with others if Naizen knows where the person(s) is(are). A communication portal is opened infront of the desired person(s) and the message and things happening are passed across(like a video call)
    -It can also open a transportation portal which takes Naizen wherever he wants but it must be on the battle field. Once he and anyone he desires enter it, it disappears and reappears at the exact location and it's occupants exit it.
    -Naizen can merge with it and fly at high speeds, knocking down many opponents in seconds with each suffering a +15 damage with each hit because of the speed.(normal eyes can keep up but with great difficulty as they will feel dizzy if they keep looking and their eyes will get watery)
    -If it is about to be destroyed and Naizen is able to defend it, he will form a Tiger handseal and it will disappear and shift it's position and reappear.[able in the sense that he is aware and can defend another attack(if any) and still perform the handseal without breaking the timeframe]

    Restrictions
    -It reflects only direct attacks to Naizen so it has no effect on attacks from behind, below, above or sides.
    -When used as a flight medium, it cannot reflect any attack.
    -While it is reflecting the rays of the sun, it cannot reflect any direct attacks to Naizen.
    -When the communication portal closes, the mirror is unable to do anything for 1 full turn.
    -After it opens a transportation portal, it cannot do anything for 2 full turns.
    -When merged with the mirror the user is not aware of anything going on around him, only ahead. But if he/she is a sensor, then he/she can still sense attacks and dodge them but cannot perform any attack, even throwing a kunai except knocking down opponents. If it gets hit, he takes a +15 damage. Mirror cannot reflect anything when merged with the user.
    -If Naizen makes it disappear and reappear, it cannot reflect anything for 1 full turn.

    Also,
    -Any direction Naizen faces, it faces also.
    -Anyone except Naizen that tries to touch it or look into it immediately sees him/herself as a skeleton and is frightened(no matter the rank). Those of a lower rank are immediately paralyzed until after 1 move(not turn) by Naizen and any technique used by those of a higher rank suffers a -10 decrease in damage points for 2 turns.
    -Stays throughout battle once summoned except destroyed.
    -No other summon can be used through out the battle once Naizen summons this weapon.
    -Can only be summoned and used by Naizen
    Mirror:


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    Tons of things here that can't be approved. Make this overall simpler and more reasonable.

    Fuuton: Kaze Shinchintaisha- Wind Release: Wind Replacement
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: All
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will form the bird handseal and then his/her body will disintegrate like dust and flow silently with the wind, evading attacks and moving to another location where the user reforms. The user can start reforming from any part of their body they desire. This technique is perfect for slipping through defenses and attacks and spying but the user cannot perform any attack.
    -User can still be sensed with his/her chakra.
    -User can sense anyone mid range from him/her due to being part of the wind and having his/her chakra in it.
    -Can only be used by Naizen.

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    Similar to existing techniques.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 09-24-2012 at 09:28 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Juho Kuma no kōhai) Gentle Step Bear's Devastation
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user forms giant sized bear head-shaped shrouds of chakra around their arms. Once the chakra shrouds covered his arms the user is able to thrust his arms out, exerting his shroud of chakra onto mid-range. Once it made contact with the opponent, it will leave the opponent with great internal injuries and damages on his body.
    Note:
    ~Can be used 3x
    ~Must be taught by Dr. House
    ~No S-ranked or higher Jyuuken after this turn.

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    Similar to Cannon technique.

    (Hakke Takai shāpu) 8 Trigrams Higher Sharp
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description:The user focuses on all the tenketsu on his palm releasing a think beam of chakra towards. After travelling a short distance the beam divides itself to two, then four, eight, sixteen, thirty-two and eventually reaching 64 where the beam is diverged enough to make an escape extremely difficult. The more these beams diverge the sharper they get at a mature state the beams are able to pierce through
    metals. This takes great chakra control and renders the user exhausted after usage.
    Note:
    ~Can be used 3x
    ~Must be taught by Dr. House
    ~No S-ranked or higher Jyuuken after this turn.

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    How is this Jyuken? Whats the point of this? Also, "think beam of chakra towards." Think? Towards what?

    (Hakke Chakura o kumitateru) 8 Trigrams Chakra Assemblance
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Himself
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Using the principles of Gentle Step Twin Lion Fist where user applies advanced shape manipulation on their raw chakra, members of hyuuga had thought about applying the same principle onto their chakra burst where they'll apply advanced shape manipulation onto their burst of chakra, making it higher in density.
    Note:
    ~Lasts 2 turns.
    ~Can be used 2x

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    Don't resubmit.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 09-24-2012 at 09:30 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Suiton: Kayou Iten) Water Style: Oceanic Demise
    Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50 (+50 for each turn active)
    Damage Points: 100
    Description: The user will perform six hand seals and summon an immense amount of water that covers the entire battlefield. The water rises about one meter directly from the ground. The user can control any of the water from any point. It can be used in any way, shape or form. For example; it can create a large wall to defend against an attack, form a bullet of water to attack the opponent, or create a wave under the user that can carry them large distances in a short amount of time, along with anything else you can think of. Every ounce of water is infused with the users chakra, so if the opponent tries to use the water as a source for a jutsu, the user can control the water to redirect it.
    This jutsu also has a single, deadly move that is only used as a last resort. The user will gather all of the water at once and create an extremely large vortex out of it. The vortex is so large and spins with such great speed that it is nearly impossible to escape. It will kill any and all things if they are trapped in it, meaning teammates, enemies, etc. The user cannot move when they are performing this because of the concentration required, so they have no choice but to be caught in it, which will kill them afterwards. Because of this, the vortex does not stay long, but the impact is substantial. The walls of the vortex first form at long range with the user at the center and quickly retract until the walls are centimeters away from the user, obviously meaning that it is in short range now. As the walls are retracting, they destroy everything in its path. It takes about ten seconds for the vortex to form and then retract, which will leave the user open for attacks for that amount of time.
    Note: This jutsu stays active for up to six turns
    Note: Due to the large amount of chakra required to create and maintain this jutsu, the user will be nearly drained of their chakra after the six turns it is active, so they cannot use any C-rank or higher jutsu for the remainder of the battle.
    Note: Since the user must be constantly concentrating their water chakra into this jutsu, they cannot use any other elements while it is active.
    Note: Every time the user controls the water, it counts as a move for their turn.
    Note: Each use of the water is equivalent to an S-rank jutsu, but after every two turns, they will decrease in rank since the user will begin losing a lot of chakra. So, on the third and fourth turn, they will be A-rank and on the fifth and sixth turn, they will be B-rank.
    Note: The user must wait until the second turn this jutsu is active and before the fifth if they wish to create the massive vortex.

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    before I even check this, use proper template. Incorrect damage info.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 09-24-2012 at 09:31 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Serpent View Post
    (Fuuton/Katon: Kaen Bure-Do) Fire/Wind Art: Blades of The Blaze
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 100
    Description: The user will focus a large amount of Chakra in their gut making the fallowing handseals (Tiger-Ram-Monkey-Dragon) and then shoot several blades of wind that can't be seen due to the winds intangibility. In flight the user will make one more handseal (Tiger) causing the Katon chakra inside these blades to ignite and burst out in Blazing flames. This Jutsu is extremely dangerous to the user as it causes major harm to it's users chakra levels making it so they can't use powerful Jutsu's for a short period of time as well can causing them to feel pain in there gut making them less efficient during battle. If the user is caught in the attack, They will suffer the same damage as an opponent.
    Note:
    -No A-Ranked or Higher Fuuton next turn.
    -No A-Ranked or Higher Katon next turn.
    -Can only be used once per battle.
    -Can only be taught by Serpent

    (Suiton: Unagi Jiten) Water Release: Eel Spout
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user will focus a large amount of Chakra in their gut making the fallowing handseals (Monkey-Dragon-Serpent) and then release a powerful surge of water from there mouth. This water will take the shape of an Eel and will quickly engulf an opponent. Once caught the Eel will dissipate into a water spout, spinning at fast speed, this will not only slice an opponent but also make them become dizzy in the process.
    Note:
    -Must sign Eel Contract.
    -Can only be used Twice per battle.
    -Can only be taught by Serpent

    (Suiton/Fuuton: Suraisugogyou) Water/Wind Art: Slicing Spout
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 100
    Description: The user will make the fallowing hand seals (Serpent-Boar-Tiger-Monkey) while focusing their chakra around them. This will create a slicing water spout around the user that stretches out to a Mid-Range area. This water spout is massive in size reaching high into the sky, only taking seconds to form it will suck anything within close range into it like an F5 tornado. While inside the spout an opponent will be majorly sliced and suffocated because of the massive amounts of water. Because of the user’s location, being in the middle of the spout where the intensity of the attack is at its lowest point, they will only slightly be damage, only taking minor cuts.
    Note:
    -Can only be used once per battle.
    -Requires a Water Source.
    -No S-Ranked or above Suiton next turn.
    -No A-Ranked or above Fuuton next 2 turns.
    -Can only be taught by Serpent.

    ~ Declined. In your last post, I specifically told you not to resubmit what you were then calling 'Blades of Kagutsuchi'. Just resubmitting it with a different name and removing one ability does not make it a new technique.
    As a result, you are banned from the CJ thread for the next cycle, and all these techniques are declined. ~

    (Suiton/Fuuton: Suraisugogyou) Water/Wind Art: Slicing Spout
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 100
    Description: The user will make the fallowing hand seals (Serpent-Boar-Tiger-Monkey) while focusing their chakra around them. This will create a slicing water spout around the user that stretches out to a Mid-Range area. This water spout is massive in size reaching high into the sky, only taking seconds to form it will suck anything within close range into it like an F5 tornado. While inside the spout an opponent will be majorly sliced and suffocated because of the massive amounts of water. Because of the user’s location, being in the middle of the spout where the intensity of the attack is at its lowest point, they will only slightly be damage, only taking minor cuts leaving them in pain and feeling drained of Chakra
    Note:
    -Can only be used once per battle.
    -Requires a Water Source.
    -No S-Ranked or above Suiton next turn.
    -No A-Ranked or above Fuuton next 2 turns.
    -Can only be taught by Serpent.

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    incorrect damage info
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 09-24-2012 at 09:33 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Tsukuyomi... View Post


    Taifuu Hidai - Typhoon Swell
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Found at a secret cave in the land of mountains, Amaterasu...grew connected to the sword and it didn´t take long for him to realize that this wasn´t any average sword. From the style guard, to the fang shaped doubled edge blade with center blood groove. A very tight sword with unique styles. Tightly wrapped white cord gives the handle texture. Gold finished all cast metal guard and fittings bring out all the rich color on this piece. Possessing Red scabbard with shoulder strap, blades length being 28. Handle being 10 and overall length is 40. This weapon weights 1,4ibs.
    Blade is made of special material that absorbs the users water chakra and amplifies it. Water techniques can be used through the weapon as medium without the need for handseals.
    Abilties:
    - Almost Indestructible
    - Wielder can use water techniques through the blade without handseals
    - Absorbs opponents water techniques into the blade
    - Water techniques increased +10
    Restrictions:
    - Can´t use techniques that require handseals while wielding the sword
    - Only Amaterasu...can use this
    - Can only Absorb 2 Water Techniques Per match
    - Can only absorb B - ranked or Below Water Techniques
    - After using the Swords Absorbing Ability the user can not use any Water Technique above A- rank
    - After the 2 Techniques are absorbed Sword can no longer have any use with water it basically becomes a regular Sword

    Please make any changes need to be approvable even if you have to remove the. Part about absorbing water technqiues also I'm dropping my current CW Nightmare Blade

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    link to the CW you are dropping


    Taifuu Hidai - Typhoon Swell
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Found at a secret cave in the land of mountains, Amaterasu...grew connected to the sword and it didn´t take long for him to realize that this wasn´t any average sword. From the style guard, to the fang shaped doubled edge blade with center blood groove. A very tight sword with unique styles. Tightly wrapped white cord gives the handle texture. Gold finished all cast metal guard and fittings bring out all the rich color on this piece. Possessing Red scabbard with shoulder strap, blades length being 28. Handle being 10 and overall length is 40. This weapon weights 1,4ibs.
    Blade is made of special material that absorbs the users water chakra and amplifies it. Water techniques can be used through the weapon as medium without the need for handseals.
    Abilties:
    - Almost Indestructible
    - Wielder can use water techniques through the blade without handseals
    - Absorbs opponents water techniques into the blade
    - Water techniques increased +10
    Restrictions:
    - Can´t use techniques that require handseals while wielding the sword
    - Only Amaterasu...can use this
    - Can only Absorb 2 Water Techniques Per match
    - Can only absorb B - ranked or Below Water Techniques
    - After using the Swords Absorbing Ability the user can not use any Water Technique above A- rank
    - After the 2 Techniques are absorbed Sword can no longer have any use with water it basically becomes a regular Sword

    Please make any changes need to be approvable even if you have to remove the. Part about absorbing water technqiues also I'm dropping my current CW Nightmare Blade
    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...postcount=4029 here's the link

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    No weapon that can make you use all jutsu from one element without handseals, no damage boosting sword, no elemental absorbing swords. Said countless times. Don't resubmit.

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    (Kasai rirīsu: Coy no sakana hinotama) Fire Release: Coy Fish Fireballs
    Type: Attack|Defense
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 100
    Description:
    The User will start by doing five Handsigns and while gathering up a large amount of Katon Chakra the user will release several large coy Fish shaped Fire balls the fireballs will then attack the opponent and explode on contact with any solid mass

    Restrictions:

    - the user after this jutsu can not use any A ranked or above jutsu for 3 turns
    - this jutsu can only be used once per battle
    - the user will become short of breath after the use of this jutsu
    - Can only be used by Tsukuyomi...

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    Incorrect damage info. A forbidden rank without damage to yourself. Basically, Don't resubmit.

    (Mizu rirīsu: Mizu no gurētobōruzu) Water Release: Great Balls of Water
    Type: Attack|Defense
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 100
    Description:
    The user will start by doing 2 hand signs after performing the Handsigns the user will release 4 Giant balls of water at there opponent the water balls move with so much force that when it come in ontact with the opponent the Giant balls of water will crush them them

    Restrictions:

    - can only be used by Tsukuyomi...
    - can only be used once per battle
    - the user can not use any A ranked or above Water jutsu for 3 turns after the use of this jutsu

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Don't resubmit. Same as above.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 09-24-2012 at 09:37 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Ninpou: Hachūrui no baindo || Binding Ninja Arts: Reptilian bind
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: For this jutsu the user makes a single Tiger seal and after inhaling some air opens his mouth wide, out of which a mutated tongue (which stretches upto long range) comes out. This tongue has two small slits like nostrils, that can smell the opponents stench and using this stench it can pin point the opponents location precisely. After which it extends at a very rapid pace towards the opponent and then wraps around him (opponent) and secretes a very sticky and hot greenish liquid from its pores that burns the opponent to death. The tongue can also be used to exert high pressure on the opponent's body (squeezing his body) causing him to burst and die.

    -The tongue moves at speeds that is very hard to keep up with normal eyes.
    -The tongue in this jutsu is also strong enough to rip through solid rock.
    -Can only be used thrice in a battle.
    -Only Anduril can teach this jutsu.

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Don't resubmit. This is a copy, albeit in Snake version, of Ma's abilities.


    Genjutsu: Shi no keshin || Illusionary Arts: Death Incarnate
    Type: Offensive-Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description:
    In this technique Minato uses his fame of being the fastest shinobi alive to his advantage. For this jutsu Minato raises a kunai marked with FTG symbol showing it (the symbol) to his opponent. This sets in motion a genjutsu in which minato simply disappears from in front of his opponent (In actuality however nothing of this sort happens and Minato remains at the same position). After that the opponent witnesses flashes of yellow as he sees Minato appearing and disappearing around him. While the opponent is busy trying to guess a plan of action, the real Minato pierces his opponents heart with a FTG kunai. (He does this in person where he approaches the opponent himself and does not throw the kunai)
    The time window between Minato casting the gen and stabbing his opponent varies as per the distance between them.
    For short range it's almost instantaneous.
    For mid range the window is of about 4 seconds.
    And For long range the window is of about 10 seconds.

    -Minato can cancel this technique almost in an instant if he understands that his opponent has managed to escape the genjutsu.
    -Also if there are like 4 opponents, then all of them will fall under the genjutsu. But the person who Minato will eliminate first depends upon him.
    -Can be used only twice in a battle.
    -Only Anduril can teach this jutsu.

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    ±± Declined ±±
    No long range Genjutsu. Needs something else other than simply seeing the seal to trigger. Isn't really an A-Rank genjutsu but more a B-Rank.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 09-24-2012 at 09:40 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±


    Summoning Animal: Crocodile
    Scroll Owner: SHARINGAN_USER UCHIHA_ITACHI
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: not yet!
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A

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    ±± Declined ±±
    No font or formatting whatsoever in submissions. Resubmit properly.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 09-24-2012 at 09:40 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Raiton: Saturn (Lighting Release: Saturn)
    Type: Offensive-Suplementary-Defensive
    Rank: Forbiden
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 150
    Damage: 200
    Description: The user first jumps in mid air, performs 5 hand seals, and creates a sphere of raiton around him (about 4 meters diameter). This sphere will completely guard the user from up to A-rank jutsu, and won't be affected by suiton. Then, the user manipulates raiton chakra and creates 8 rings of lighting around the main sphere, each ring being 3 metters away from the other (covering a distance 24 metters from the user). This rings are not made of focused raiton, and will only numb an opponent who touches them. Finally, the user creates 62 small spheres of focused lighting chakra (about 20 cm in lenghth), that orbit at high speed around the user (from mid to long range), making it difficult (but plausible) to notice them without a dojutsu.
    Notes:
    -Usable once per battle
    -Can stay activated for up to 2 turns
    -After deactivating it, the user cannot use Raiton chakra for 3 turns. Also, the user will be exhausted, and will have diminished reflexes.

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    Don't resubmit. Don't even need to read it when it has a chakra cost of 150 and a damage of 200, basically not following the template.

    Raiton: Asmodeus (Lighting Release: Asmodeus)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B-Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user will first need to have eye contact with the opponent. Then, the user will perform the rat hand seal. By doing that, he will transfer a genjutsu-like order to the opponet's chakra, that will be transformed into a small amount of raiton, directly on the opponent's eyes, hurting them, and blinding the opponent.
    Notes:
    -Must have an activated sharingan
    -Must be of sannin rank or higher to use
    -Only an activated sharingan can use this

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    Dont resubmit. Doesn't even make sense. And elemental Genjutsu is a field of NB Genjutsu. This isn't the same as the lightning flash illusion.

    Magen: Fuan (Demonic Ilusion: Anxiety)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: E-Rank
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 5
    Damage: N/A
    Description: This simple genjutsu requires eye contact. Once the opponent's eyes see the user's sharingan, they will be put under a small genjutsu, that will hit their subconscious. The genjutsu will seem not to have any effect, but it will make the opponent think about any obligations they have, and make them anxious to finish them, making them less concentrated to the fight, and missing some details...
    Notes:
    -Needs activated sharingan.

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    ±± Declined ±±
    You can't create anxiety just like that...
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 09-24-2012 at 09:43 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Summoning Animal: Bald Eagles
    Scroll Owner: -Logic-
    Other Users who have signed contract: none
    Summoning Boss if existing: will create later
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: later
    Description and Background:

    The Bald Eagle (Haliaeetus leucocephalus Greek hali = salt, aeetus = eagle, leuco = white, cephalis = head) is a bird of prey found in North America. It is the national bird of the United States of America and appears on its Seal. This sea eagle has two known sub-species and forms a species pair with the White-tailed Eagle. Its range includes most of Canada and Alaska, all of the contiguous United States, and northern Mexico. It is found near large bodies of open water with an abundant food supply and old-growth trees for nesting.
    Its diet consists mainly of fish, but it is an opportunistic feeder. It hunts fish by swooping down and snatching them out of the water with its talons. It is sexually mature at four years or five years of age. The Bald Eagle builds the largest nest of any North American bird, up to 4 meters (13 ft) deep, 2.5 meters (8.2 ft) wide, and one metric ton (1.1 tons) in weight.

    Here is the tatto:



    Also, before you decline this, I have permission from the original owner of the Eagle contract, who allowed me to make a sub-species:

    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/con...5096&u2=132801

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    (Burutus No Yoroi) The Armour of Brutus
    Rank: S
    Type: Armour
    Range: N/A
    Chakra cost: N/A
    Damage points: +20 to elemental attacks
    Description: The Armor of Brutus is a virtually unbreakable set of armour, once in the possession of a legendary Uchiha. It was one of the strongest armours in the Uchiha's Golden Era. As it existed in such an Era where the scientific advancements were at such a high standard, it was modified to augment the elemental techniques of the person who wore the armour moderately. The armour was hidden somewhere deep in Konoha but Uchiha Itachi was able to locate this armour and utilize it to the highest potential. This armour is created out of a special metal lent down from decades ago which was said to hail from the Rikudo Sennin's time. Because it is created out of a special metal, it is able to protect the user from C rank Taijutsu attacks and below, all while putting minimum strain on the user. Due to the armour being originally created for those who could not use chakra, it has two secret passageways on each side of the arms and a sharp blade is able to slip through with momentous speed to the extent that assassinating an enemy can be done with virtually no difficulty. Because the armour also has a hooded cape it makes stealth like assassinations much much easier.



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    Don't resubmit. Ever.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Zero Kelvin View Post
    (Ichitenkai) One Point Release
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: A Taijutsu technique where the user opens the First Gate (Kaimon) for a single moment, harnessing all of its power into a single punch or kick. While destruction on a great scale is the trademark of the Eight Internal Gates, this technique requires a great deal of finesse and skill. By using the joints in the arm and by moving one’s body with incredible precision, the user transforms the single, destructive attack into a focused, whip-like strike. Instead of breaking many bones or crushing entire boulders, this technique allows the single attack to solely affect the point it hits, in return for completely destroying that single point. It is possible to use this technique with more than one Gate open, which increases its speed and power exponentially.
    -Can only be used twice (2) per battle.
    -No Forbidden-ranked Taijutsu techniques can be used during the following turn.
    -The user must be able to open the Kaimon to use this technique.
    -Can only be taught by Zero Kelvin.

    Now it counts.
    ~Declined~ Exponentially? I'm sorry, please elaborate. Also, make it clearer that this counts as opening the eight gates. Otherwise, nice idea.
    Resubmitting:

    (Ichitenkai) - One Point Release
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: A Taijutsu technique where the user opens the First Gate (Kaimon) for a single moment, harnessing all of its power into a single punch or kick. While destruction on a great scale is the trademark of the Eight Internal Gates, this technique requires a great deal of finesse and skill. By using the joints in the arm and by moving one’s body with incredible precision, the user transforms the single, destructive attack into a focused, whip-like strike. Instead of breaking many bones or crushing entire boulders, this technique allows the single attack to solely affect the point it hits, in return for completely destroying that single point. It is possible to use this technique with more than one Gate open, with each Gate increasing the power of the technique as it does the power of the user.
    -Can only be used twice (2) per battle.
    -No Forbidden-ranked Taijutsu techniques can be used during the following turn.
    -The user must be able to open the Eight Gates to use this technique.
    -This technique counts as an opening of the Gates, should they not already have been opened when used.
    -Can only be taught by Zero Kelvin.

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    ±± Declined ±±
    First open the gate, then use this. So no, you can't use this to act as opening a gate, specially when you say this can be used with any gate opened (meaning that "restriction" can't be there or its DNR). Not only that but this should only get damage boost until you open 3rd gate at which point it shouldn't gain more power by opening other gates. That enough is a enormous boost.

    Editing an approved technique. The technique was approved in the old thread, so I can't quote it, but I'll leave the link and bold the edits.
    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...postcount=4562

    (Suiton: Naiagara no Mizu) - Water Release: The Waters of Niagara
    Rank: S
    Type: Defensive/Offensive
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user claps his hands together while releasing a large amount of water chakra from his body; this causes a great body of water to materialize out of nowhere. The water materializes in three very large pulses that appear in very quick, explosive bursts, right after each other. The materialized water appears very close to the user, and all the pulses are, even upon materialization, pushing outwards with great force. The water from this technique will leave the area flooded with a five meter deep layer of water in within the span of a few seconds.
    -Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    -Once the water is sent toward a target, it's impossible to change its direction.
    -This is an advanced version of: (Suiton: Suishouha) - Water Style: Water Shock wave.
    -The user cannot use any water techniques of S-rank and above during the same turn.
    -The user cannot use any water techniques above S-rank during the following turn.

    -Can only be taught by Zero Kelvin.

    ______________
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    Very similar to existing techniques, including my posssession of the water goddess.

    Editing an approved technique. The technique was approved in the old thread, so I can't quote it, but I'll leave the link and bold the edits.
    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...postcount=3094

    (Fūinjutsu: Tōtemu Bakuyaku) – Sealing Technique: Explosive Totem
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user focuses chakra through his body, marking an object he's in physical contact with as a 'totem', causing a small, transparent sealing array to appear on the object. When the user activates it, the totem will use the chakra stored inside it to act as a portal, summoning a great amount of explosive tags. The tags will activate as soon as they are summoned, causing an enormous explosion.
    -Can only be used two times per battle.
    -Activating the totem does not count as a move if it's done immediately after the seal is applied. Otherwise, it counts as a move.
    -Can only be taught by Zero Kelvin.


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    makes it very similar to Minato's FTG abilities.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Mugen Ittōryū: Mugen Kyūsū) Infinite One-Sword Style: Infinite Series
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: +20 to IOSS
    Description: The name of the Infinite One-Sword Style comes from the nearly endless number of blades found on the battlefield during its use – this technique’s purpose is to allow the user to use them all. While most IOSS techniques do use multiple swords for their attacks, there is generally a set number for each technique. When this technique is activated, the user will double the number of swords used in IOSS techniques, thus increasing the techniques overall strength by adding extra blades to the barrage.
    *Once activated, it remains activated for the rest of the match.
    *Requires the Infinite One-Sword Style set-up to have been used.
    *Does not affect Gale Slash.

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Too much going on here. You know this can't be accepted as it is. +20 damage without a single activation limit? without a single real restriction? Nope. And lets not forget, without even a usage lmit.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Kuchiyose no jutsu: Goku) Summoning: Goku
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/a
    Description: The user wipes blood on their cardinal tatoo and summons Goku. Goku is a male cardinal with a bright golden coat and is also fluent in english. He is a master of assasination and spying due to him being able to use the E rank Transformation technique. It took him many years to master this simple tehnique of course, him being a cardinal, but he can use it to the extent of any shinobi, although this is the only ninjutsu technique he can use. He also has a natural affinity to lightning, being able to use any lightning technique up to s rank without the use of handseals. No one quite knows his true size, but when first summoned he is the size of Sasukes Hawk, and able to fit up to 1 riders on him when flying.

    -Once summoned stays on the field for 4 turns before disappearing
    -Only usable once per battle
    -Can only transform once per turn but transforming doesnt count towards 3 moves per turn
    -Only usable by those who sign the cardinal contract
    I am the owner of cardinal contract
    Signed here

    Note to checker: if you want the transformation to count towards the three moves simply delete the last part

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Yes it needs to count towards the move count. Transform into what exaclty? anything? and please make sense of your descriptions " although this is the only ninjutsu technique he can use. He also has a natural affinity to lightning, being able to use any lightning technique..." You do know that Lightning techniques, well, every elemental technique is Ninjutsu right? There is non elemental Ninjutsu and Elemental one, but they are all ninjutsu just the same.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by william24 View Post
    Summoning animal: Tiglon ( Wiki Link)
    Scroll owner: William24
    Other users who have signed contract: none
    Summoning boss if existing: None yet
    Other animals tied to contract: None
    Description and backgrond:
    A tiglon ( /taln/) or tigon (not tigron) is a hybrid cross between a male tiger (Panthera tigris) and a lioness (Panthera leo). Thus, it has parents with the same genus but of different species. The tiglon is not currently as common as the converse hybrid, the liger; however, in the late 19th and early 20th centuries, tiglons were more common than ligers. Tiglons can exhibit characteristics of both parents: they can have both spots from the mother (lions carry genes for spots—lion cubs are spotted and some adults retain faint markings) and stripes from the father. Any mane that a male tiglon may have will appear shorter and less noticeable than a lion's mane and is closer in type to the ruff of a male tiger. It is a common misconception that tiglons are smaller than lions or tigers. They do not exceed the size of their parent species because they inherit growth-inhibitory genes from the lioness mother, but they do not exhibit any kind of dwarfism or miniaturization; they often weigh around 180 kilograms (400 lb). A century ago, tiglons were evidently more common than ligers. Gerald Iles, in At Home in the Zoo (1961), was able to obtain three tiglons for Manchester's Belle Vue Zoo, but wrote that he had never seen a liger. A number of tiglons are currently being bred in China.



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    ±± Pending ±±
    Resubmit with LordOfKaos permission.
    Permission from LoK: http://www.narutobase.net/forums/con...0502&u2=119127

    Summoning animal: Tiglon ( Wiki Link)
    Scroll owner: William24
    Other users who have signed contract: none
    Summoning boss if existing: None yet
    Other animals tied to contract: None
    Description and background:
    A tiglon ( /taln/) or tigon (not tigron) is a hybrid cross between a male tiger (Panthera tigris) and a lioness (Panthera leo). Thus, it has parents with the same genus but of different species. The tiglon is not currently as common as the converse hybrid, the liger; however, in the late 19th and early 20th centuries, tiglons were more common than ligers. Tiglons can exhibit characteristics of both parents: they can have both spots from the mother (lions carry genes for spots—lion cubs are spotted and some adults retain faint markings) and stripes from the father. Any mane that a male tiglon may have will appear shorter and less noticeable than a lion's mane and is closer in type to the ruff of a male tiger. It is a common misconception that tiglons are smaller than lions or tigers. They do not exceed the size of their parent species because they inherit growth-inhibitory genes from the lioness mother, but they do not exhibit any kind of dwarfism or miniaturization; they often weigh around 180 kilograms (400 lb). A century ago, tiglons were evidently more common than ligers. Gerald Iles, in At Home in the Zoo (1961), was able to obtain three tiglons for Manchester's Belle Vue Zoo, but wrote that he had never seen a liger. A number of tiglons are currently being bred in China.



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    ±± Approved ±±

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    (Suiton: Suibun bunri)-
    Water style: Moisture separation

    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description:
    The user uses his Suiton mastery in order to manipulate and extract moisture from anything within his range such as mud, a living thing or a swamp. When separating the moisture from an object the water simply turns into a mist that lingers around the area. When separating the moisture from a living being such as a human it simply dehydrates them. When separating the moisture from a swamp or some mud it simply turns the said thing back into regular earth.

    • Can only be used twice
    • Only taught by William24
    • Can only separate water/moisture from one object/person at a time.
    • When separating moisture from a living being they have to be close range.

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    ±± Declined ±±
    I won't allow you to take the moisture out of humans or animals. Also, this would only work in short range and is an S-Rank ability. Also, no damage.
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    (Suiton: Nōmu)-
    Water style: Heavy mist

    Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defense
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description:
    After using the "Hidden mist" technique the user focuses chakra into every single piece of moisture within the mist in order to make the mist heavy. With that done the mist will stick to any chosen person(s) inside the mist whilst applying a massive amount of weight onto them thus making them fall to the ground and unable to move due to the weight of the mist.

    • only taught by william24
    • Can only be used twice
    • The mist can restrain the likes of summons the size of Gamakichi, though it is useless against things such as Gamabunta.

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Similar to existing techniques
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Fuuton: Chibikazebenso - (Wind Release: Tiny Wind Defense)
    Type: Defensive/Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user performs two handseals, thus coating their entire body in chakra. At that point, any time something tangible (minus whatever they’re walking on) gets within an foot of their body, a tiny burst of air will move out to block and try and displace the attack. This technique is used against object like techniques such as arrows, swords, or anything else. The burst of winds quickly rushes pushing out into the distance knocking all that gets close enough away from the user, to keep the user safe.
    -Note: Lasts for 4 turns
    -Note: May be only usable once.

    ______________
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    Why does this do damage? What would be the effect of this on an enemy in range?

    Fuuton: Seppaku Tei Jutsu - (Wind Release: Pressurized Air Technique)
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: +5 to Wind Jutsu
    Description: The user first molds there chakra out into the air. Moving the chakra out to about quarter of a mile's radius. Once this happens the users strings out the wind chakra into the air. This sets a chilling feeling through the air that makes anyone other than the user feel cold. The jutsu sets a chill down the spines of all that inhabits the jutsu. As the air because thick, and its harder for anyone around the user to breath. This cold air soon weighs heavy on all around. As it seems like the air is pressuring down on everything. As this happens movement to anyone beside the users seem to be harder. Either that or everything around feels sluggish.Also all Ninjutsu's around the area not from the user are weaker than normal. This is because the jutsu makes the users chakra settle in the air. Pressuring all around it with its chilling stroke. The users chakra begins to make it harder for all within the jutsu's radius to mold there own chakra. While the users wind ninjutsu's are stronger and faster. Anyone besides the user ninjutsu's become weaker, and slower. Physical Ninjutsu/Taijutsu that are B Rank or lower go down one rank. Non physical jutsu's are cut down in strength by half.
    -Note: Lasts for 3 turns
    -Note: No Wind Jutsu next turn.
    -Note: May be only usable once.
    -Note: Cannot be used when an opponent is molding chakra.

    ______________
    ±± Declined ±±
    Description has parts that don't make sense and I honestly don't see the use for this as its a mishmash of some existing techniques.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Kyoushinken) - Sword Resonance
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: This technique consists on shattering a sword's blade, making it burst outwards, effectively destroying enemy weapons and also damaging the opponents because of the shrapnel.
    To do this, the user concentrates his chakra, either on his hands, feet or sword and then, releases it in form of a pulse, which will, on contact, move through the opponent's weapon and shatter it in pieces, sending the shrapnel outwards, relatively to the user's position.
    This technique can be used with great versatility as it can be used on the user's own swords, keeping the opponent from getting close; on the opponent's weapons through direct contact; or through the ground, where the pulse will burst and move outwards like an expanding ring and shatter any blades in contact with the ground.
    -This technique is not restricted to swords only. It can also be used on all other metallic weapons
    -Usable three times per battle

    (Takamagahara: Kyuumin Kontan) - High Plain of Heaven: Dormant Soul
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: -
    Description: This technique uses Takamagahara's ability to disrupt chakra, to keep the opponent from flowing chakra through his weapons, putting him at a disadvantage.
    Upon contact with an opponent's weapon, Takamagahara releases some of its chakra, which stays there for a short period of time. However, because of Takamagahara's chakra disruptive abilities, any chakra the opponent tries to use on the weapon, will immediately be disrupted. The same can be used on a Custom Weapon, however, not only is the chakra immediately disrupted when it comes in contact with the weapon, it also cancels the weapon's abilities. This, however, only lasts a few moments since with time, Takamagahara's chakra on the weapon will fade away.
    __________
    -Requires Takamagahara to be used
    -Usable three times per battle.
    -Lasts 4 turns if used on CW.

    Takamagahara:

    (Takamagahara) - High Plain of Heaven
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - (Mid When shooting needles)
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: - (60 When shooting needles)
    Description: Takamagahara is a large living sword comparable in size to the Kubikiribōchō. This sword was created before Samehada, but soon abandoned and sealed away when Samehada was created, as it was significantly stronger than Takamagahara.
    Takamagahara is very similar in appearance with Samehada, the only difference being that the actual blade is covered in needles instead of scales, which can be shoot to inflict damage. It is also covered in bandages and inflicts shredding or shaving damage rather than cutting what it comes into contact with. While it ordinarily remains rigid, Takamagahara is able to stretch and bend to a great extent (the same range Samehada can extend), allowing it to be used like a flail.
    Takamagahara has the ability to disrupt chakra and it can be used in two ways: to disrupt the chakra of an incoming technique and disperse it (mostly energy based techniques like fire, lightning and wind) and to disrupt the chakra flow in the opponent's chakra pathway system.
    __________
    Note: All of the sword's abilities will be submitted as custom techniques techniques, which obviously will count towards one of my three moves per turn, except the ability to shoot needles which is part of the sword. The sword can shoot needles up to three times per match, and every time it does it count toward the user's three moves per turn.
    Note: The sword can disrupt mostly energy based attacks since that energy can be disrupted and dispersed. Solid attacks, like water or earth, can also be cancelled, but it depends on the attack itself. If it's a rock or wave of water coming at me, i can't cancel that, but creatures made of water or earth for example, can be cancelled by disturbing the chakra which is maintaining them ''alive''. This way they loose their form and turn into rocks or a lake, depending on the element they are made of.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Katon: (Gatsūga) - Fire Release: Fang Over Fang
    Rank: B
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user and their ninken partner spin at a ferocious speed and the user starts releasing fire chakra as they start spinning creating a big fire attack while spinning inside, the user is concentrated the whole time and never forgets to release enough fire chakra for the jutsu. The attack can collect wind jutsus up to(and including) B rank making the jutsu even more powerful
    Note:
    -Must be a member of the Inuzuka Clan and have a ninken
    -Usable 3 times per battle
    -No F or S rank in the same move this was used

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    Similar technique exists.

    Raiton: (Gatsūga) - Lightning Release: Fang Over Fang
    Rank: B
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user and their ninken partner spin at a ferocious speed and the user starts releasing lightning chakra carefully enough to not paralize themselves or the ninken. The jutsus is strong enough to pierce trough one A rank earth jutsu.
    Note:
    -Must be a member of the Inuzuka Clan and have a ninken
    -Usable 3 times per battle
    -No F or S rank in the same move this was used

    ______________
    ±± Declined ±±
    Similar technique exists.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 09-27-2012 at 08:01 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by -Vasto Lorde- View Post



    Yamato: - ( Devil Blade )
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S-Rank
    Chakra Cost: 40 (+10 for each turn activated )
    Damage: 80 (+10 to all fire jutsu)
    Description: It is a sword said to be forged long ago by a skilled sword smith from Konohakagure, the sword weighs 50Kg.It is said that this sword has many dormant abilities.The swords blade is about 2 feet long and its hilt is roughly a 5 inches. The width of the blade is roughly 5 inches.The sword was forged from a special alloy. Yamato is an Ōkatana which has a black scabbard with a golden ribbon tied around it with the blade's handle itself was wrapped in white silk cloth with an intricate design of black silk covering the sides of the handle making a straight line to the guard while sheathed. It had several engravings located around its white handle and on the endpoint of its sheath.


    The sword gives the following abilities:

    ~The sword can only be infused with fire chakra
    ~The sword is not indestructible but is slightly stronger than your average sword due to its density
    ~It takes one turn for the sword to finish repairing
    ~While fire chakra is channeled into the swo
    rd gains extra abilities giving the user:
    ~+5 to all kenjustu and fire justu
    ~Sword can only be infused with fire chakra for five turns afterwards the sword requires a two turn cooldown before it can be infused again.
    ~No water justu above B rank can be used while holding this sword.
    ~Can only be wielded by -Vasto Lorde-

    ~ Explain finished reparing. Second, if its 50 kg, then it should really slow you down, so note that somewhere ~
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    Katon: Jajjimentokatto - (Fire Release: Judgement Cut)
    Type: Offensive/Attack
    Rank: C
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: 30
    Description: The user takes a Stance ( shown in the spoiler below ), where he concentrates all his Fire Chakra into his sword and then slashes through the air engulfing it with fire and sending a small wave of fire towards the Target.

    -Can only be used three times per battle.
    -Can be used with other Jutsus to create Combos.
    -Can only be taught by -Vasto Lorde-


    Judgement's Cut Stance:


    ~ Get sword approved first ~
    Resubmitting:




    Yamato: - ( Devil Blade )
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S-Rank
    Chakra Cost: 40 (+10 for each turn activated )
    Damage: 80 (+10 to all fire jutsu)
    Description: It is a sword said to be forged long ago by a skilled sword smith from Konohakagure, the sword weighs 20Kg.It is said that this sword has many dormant abilities.The swords blade is about 2 feet long and its hilt is roughly a 5 inches. The width of the blade is roughly 5 inches.The sword was forged from a special alloy. Yamato is an Ōkatana which has a black scabbard with a golden ribbon tied around it with the blade's handle itself was wrapped in white silk cloth with an intricate design of black silk covering the sides of the handle making a straight line to the guard while sheathed. It had several engravings located around its white handle and on the endpoint of its sheath.

    The sword gives the following abilities:
    ~The sword can only be infused with fire chakra
    ~The sword is not indestructible but is slightly stronger than your average sword due to its density
    ~While fire chakra is channeled into the sword gains extra abilities giving the user:
    ~+5 to all kenjustu and fire justu
    ~Sword can only be infused with fire chakra for five turns afterwards the sword requires a two turn cooldown before it can be infused again.
    ~No water justu above B rank can be used while holding this sword.
    ~Can only be wielded by -Vasto Lorde-

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Enough with the damage boosting swords, infusable swords, etc. ITs all been done before.
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    Katon: Jajjimentokatto - (Fire Release: Judgement Cut)
    Type: Offensive/Attack
    Rank: B-Rank
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user takes a Stance ( shown in the spoiler below ), where he concentrates all his Fire Chakra into his sword and then slashes through the air engulfing it with fire and sending a Small Sized wave of fire towards the Target.

    ~Can only be used three times per battle.
    ~Can be used with other Jutsus to create Combos.
    ~Can only be used while wielding the "Devil Blade"
    ~Can only be used by -Vasto Lorde-

    Judgement's Cut Stance:


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    ±± Declined ±±
    sword not approved

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    Katon: Faiāgōremu - ( Fire Release: Fire Golem )
    Type: Offense/Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: A-Rank
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user first does the Ox>Dragon>Snake>Monkey>Boar Handseals, then transfers a large amount of fire Chakra into his palms and slams the ground creating two Fire Golems made from Rocks and Fire. The Golems are 6.6 ft Tall and 2.5 Meters in width each. The fire Golems Stay on the battle field for 3 turns unless being released by the user himself or destroyed. When released the Fire Golems tend to Explode at the same time creating a big explosion that can harm any nearby object. If the Golems are destroyed then they simply crumble back to rocks the dissolve into the ground.

    -Can withstand up to C rank Technique of every basic element.
    -The User cannot use Water Techniques of any Rank while the Golems are on the battlefield.
    -The user can only use up to B-Rank fire Jutsu as long as the Golems are on the battlefield.
    -Can only be used twice in battle.
    -Can only be Taught by: -Vasto Lorde-

    (Remove and Add whatever you feel is necessary )

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Rocks and Fire? This would need Earth chakra which if to be done at the same time would require Yin/Yang and if it was to be done in different steps then it would need to count as two techniques but even so, I wouldn't approve this because it collides with Lava Release. So Don't resubmit.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 09-27-2012 at 08:04 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    ‡ [Vongola Sakugu: Buru-Maboroshi] - Vongola Gear: The Blue Phantom ‡
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The Blue Phantom or Vongola's Blue Phantom was originally worn by Hibari Kyōya The Cloud Guardian of the Vongola Family.Kyōya Found the Ring on the border of Kumogakure the village of lightning back then when he was a shinobi from Kumogakure.He was in a mission given to him by the Raikage himself which is killing a traitor,that had left Kumogakure in the seek of joining Kirigakure the mist village.While leaving the gate of Kumogakure he found something shinning on the ground so he bended and took it with his hands,once he had took it within his hands he figured out it's a ring,so he took it and worn it as it looked nice,and afterwards he continued his way going after the traitor.After long journey took days he found the person who he was searching for,he challenged him for a fight to death,torturing him because of leaving his village.The traitor accepted the fight,they begun the fight and in the middle of the fight,the traitor vanished thus Kyōya felt that the fight is over and he is dead soon being unable to find the opponent nor see him,however surprised that while his opponent was attacking him from backwards he actually sensed him and thus he avoided the attack and instead he performed a deadly attack killing the traitor,after the fight he wondered how did he sensed the traitor's place and he kept wondering ,till his eyes went towards the ring,he wondered if the sensing ability where gained to him through the ring or not,thus he decided to give the ring to a great shinboi in Kumogakure that has a great knowledge of chakra being a sensor,and also a weapon expert,once he reached Kumogakure with the dead body of the trairor he gave it to the Raikage and afterwards he ran to the sensor shinobi,He gave him the ring telling him that this is a ring he found in the border of the village and he suspects that this ring posses a sensory abilities.The Shinobi examined it well with his sensory,and after a while he told him that this ring does have a sensory ability that is given to the wearer of it and not only that but he also said that the ring somehow injects chakra inside the wearer of it,but not only that he also told him that it posses another weird kind of chakra inside it that he can't figure out what is it so he sent him to two shinbois works together and lives together,one from The Uchiha clan and one from the Hyūga clan.So he followed the orders and went to them,they also examined the Ring very well using their Byakugan and Sharingan,and after a while they talked to each other for a while and then went to Kyōya telling him that this ring have water chakra within it alongest with the chakra inside it,and told him that this ring was made from a special steel,that gives the ring the ability to store a huge amount of water chakra within it and thus it gives the wearer of it the ability to perform any water technique with one less hand seal and not only that but also due to the amount of water chakra inside it he will be able to perform the water jutsus that requires a large water source without any water source however that is only for several times.

    ʊ If the user used the ability of non using water source to the techniques that requires a water source in a fight more than 3 times the chakra water chakra inside the ring won't be available anymore in the fight.
    ʊ If the user took of the ring from his finger he can no longer use the sensing ability of the ring in the fight he is using it on even if he reworn it.
    ʊ Can only be used by Kàiten and whoever has the permission to do so.
    ʊ Must master water release to use the Ring's water abilities.


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    ±± Declined ±±
    Incomprehensible babble. Resubmit with a proper description that is understandable or don't resubmit at all. Btw, you do know that periods exist right?

    [Ninpō: Mini Touhou] - Ninja Arts: Mini Me!

    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B-rank
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user gathers a decent amount of his pure chakra and once finishing doing so he focuses his chakra into a spot of he choose in any part of his body and then he channels his gathered chakra into that spot,creating an addition body part in the spot he focuses the chakra into that helps the user while fighting.
    - Max amount of arms are 2
    - Max amount of Legs are 2

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Similar to existing techniques.

    [Manipyureito Yougu/Suiton: Uesokudo Omokasui] - Manipulating tools/Water Release: Overrated Mainstream
    Type: Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage: 100
    Description: Similar to "Earth Release: Sticky Earth Drop" The user creates openings into the sky however instead of creating a single opening the user creates three opening into the sky,one opening above the opponent with 5 meters and one 5 meters from his left and one 5 meters from his right,the user uses each opening to summon different stuff,the user uses the opening above the user to create lots of water spikes that rains down on the opponent alongest with two big metal spikes,one on the right side of the water spikes and one on the left side of the water spikes and thus the metal spikes and the water spikes smashes the opponent from the above,the user uses the second opening that is on the opponent's right to summon lots of strong,sick and big strings made of metal that wraps around opponent from the front side,and at the same time the user uses the opening that is on the opponent's left side to summon lots of strong,sick and big string which is also made of metal that wraps around the opponent from his back,wrapping all of the opponent's body with sick string binding the opponent in his place and also inflicting damage to him due to the pressure that the strings will cause while being around the opponent,causing the opponent to be open for water and metal spikes that is coming from above.
    - Requires a mastery over Water Release
    - Requires a mastery over Manipulating Tools
    - Counts as two moves
    - The user won't be able to perform any Manipulating tools technique nor Water techniques at the same time
    - Counts as two moves
    - The user won't be able to perform Manipulating tools techniques nor Water techniques higher than A-rank
    - Can only be taught by Kàiten

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Incorrect damage info. Didn't even bother to read the description as it suffers from the same issue as the first submission and if you don't bother to actually follow correct damage/chakra template then I won't bother to check this.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 09-27-2012 at 08:08 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    (Kugutsu: Shi no Shūkaku) - Puppetry Technique: Death Harvest
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user will segregate a puppet revealing hidden blades at it's joints. Then with full throttle and at a specific angle, the user will throw with their chakra threads these parts, to slice through anything which is in it's path. The parts thrown return to the user like a boomerang, due to being thrown at a specific angle to do so.
    Notes:
    - Requires disassembly of a puppet, and said puppet cannot be used for the next two turns.

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    Sgregate a puppet? Uh? also use proper chakra info
    (Kugutsu: Shi no Shūkaku) - Puppetry Technique: Death Harvest
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user will seperate a puppet revealing hidden blades at it's joints. Then with full throttle and at a specific angle, the user will throw with their chakra threads these parts, to slice through anything which is in it's path. The parts thrown return to the user like a boomerang, due to being thrown at a specific angle to do so.
    Notes:
    - Requires disassembly of a puppet, and said puppet cannot be used for the next two turns.

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    ±± Approved ±±


    (Raiton: Chidori Kauntāshīrudo) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Counter Shield
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: - (+20)
    Description: The user will perform a Chidori, and channel the chakra around his body, creating a field of static lightning around himself. The lightning chakra is similar to the "Chidori Nagashi" technique, as it's weak and doesn't serve to kill, but allows the user to get into closer to the target without as much fear. The technique also absorbs weak lightning such as the Chidori Nagashi, and can absorb any lightning technique up to A-Rank. The technique can be cancelled at any time by dispersing the original Chidori, although can't use any Chidori variants for the next turn.
    Notes:
    - Can only be used once a match.
    - Can only absorb one lightning technique.
    - Cannot use lightning for the next two turns, should the technique absorb a jutsu.

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Don't resubmit.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    Hishou Shukumei Kunai (Flying Destiny Kunai)
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The Flying Destiny Kunai (Hishou Shukumei Kunai) are custom-made kunai. They differ from a standard kunai in that they have three thin blades instead of one and the blades (which is thicker than normal) is hollow, carrying different ninja tools inside the hollow kunai. These tools can be anything from; Senbon, smokebombs, tags, flashbombs etc. They are also slightly heavier than normal kunai, which also makes them more lethal in melee fighting. The mechanism behind the kunai is that, when the kunai strikes any surface or is stop in mid air, it will detach the end of the blade and release the hidden weapon inside the kunai. The mechanism can also be activated by simple weaving the tiger hand sign. These kunai can also be utilised in close combat and therefor they have a special ability to when, the wielder inserts his chakra into the kunai it will extend a small chakra blade onto it's original blade making it longer and more lethal in combat.
    Abilities:
    - Wielder can use any weapon related jutsu through these kunai
    - Cannot use Kenjutsu through the kunai (Kunai are not big enough)
    - Wielder can engulf the kunai in fire chakra making it more lethal
    - The kunai can emit a small blast of fire around the wielder when struck into the ground for defensive purpose (Can defend against C-rank earth and stop an enemy from closing in on you)
    Restrictions:
    - All techniques used through the kunai count towards the move count
    - All techniques used through the kunai does not need hand seals
    - Can only be wielded by Gutsy Jiraiya
    ~Leaving for Scorps~

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    How many kunais are these? To much going on to be honest.
    - Resubmitting -

    (Hishou Shukumei Kunai) Flying Destiny Kunai
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The Flying Destiny Kunai (Hishou Shukumei Kunai) are custom-made kunai. They differ from a standard kunai in that they have three thin blades instead of one and the blades (which is thicker than normal) is hollow, carrying different ninja tools inside the hollow kunai. These tools can be anything from; Senbon, smokebombs, tags, flashbombs etc. They are also slightly heavier than normal kunai, which also makes them more lethal in melee fighting. The mechanism behind the kunai is that, when the kunai strikes any surface or is stop in mid air, it will detach the end of the blade and release the hidden weapon inside the kunai. The mechanism can also be activated by simple weaving the tiger hand sign. These kunai can also be utilised in close combat and therefor they have a special ability to when, the wielder inserts his chakra into the kunai it will extend a small chakra blade onto it's original blade making it longer and more lethal in combat.
    Abilities:
    - The kunai can emit a small blast of fire around the wielder when struck into the ground for defensive purpose (Can defend against C-rank earth and stop an enemy from closing in on you)
    Restrictions:
    - All techniques used through the kunai count towards the move count
    - All techniques used through the kunai does not need hand seals
    - The user can carry up to 15 of these special kunai
    - Can only be wielded by Gutsy Jiraiya

    Changed the abilities, restrictions & put a limit of Kunai's carried

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    ±± Declined ±±
    bold changes on resubmissions

    Summoning Animal: Secretary Bird
    Scroll Owner: Gutsy Jiraiya
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
    Description and Background: The Secretary Bird is a large, terrestrial bird of prey. The Secretary Bird has an eagle-like body on crane-like legs which increases the bird's height to as much as 1.3 meters in height. This bird has an eagle-like head with a hooked bill, and it has rounded wings. When in the air the Secretary Bird looks more like a crane than a bird of prey, the tail has two elongated central feathers that extend beyond the feet during flight. It's flight feathers and thighs are black, while most of the coverts are grey with some being white. The adults have a featherless red face as opposed to the yellow facial skin of the young.


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    ±± Declined ±±
    *contract already exists

    Summoning Technique: Shuji Tori Kingu Shen (Secretary Bird King Shen)
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: After performing the necessary hand seals and wiping blood across his left hand, slamming his hand upon the ground, summoning The King of the Secretary Birds, Shen. Shen is the largest of the Secretary Birds, he is the same size as Gamabunta. He is the only Secretary bird whom have mastered wind release. Shen has red skin and grey and white feathers all over his body except for his back which is entirely black. He has mastered wind release to such an extend he is capable of absorbing the powers of a wind release jutsu and strike back with equal force upon the enemy. He is one of the fastest birds of his kind, and capable of dodge attacks head on.
    Note: Must have signed the Secretary Bird contract
    Note: Can only summon once per battle
    Note: Can only absorb Fuuton up to 3 times per match
    Note: Fuuton counts as a move
    Note: Absorbing Fuuton counts as a move
    Note: User can not use Fuuton during this summon
    Note: No other Secretary Birds can be in play during this summon

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Summoning Animal: Philippine Eagle
    Scroll Owner: PandaMan.
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: None yet
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: yet to be added
    Description and Background:http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Philippine_Eagle
    The birds are capable of human speech and are far more intelligent. They have tremendous strength and speed. Their society is set upon a hierarchy and they tend to not like other living creatures besides those who are friends with them.

    Requires Bio to have a Summoning Tattoo:


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    Requires permission from the eagle contract owner
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Ittō-ryū Tsuka Shotto) - One Sword Style Hilt Shot
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage: 50
    Description: Based off the style of the "quick draw" sword technique, where you unsheathe the sword in a quick motion, cut your target and resheathe it, this technique is similiar. Instead of totally drawing the sword, the user gets in the same stance as the "quick draw" technique making the opponent thinking that's what they're going to do, but in reality, the user quickly pulls out the hilt in one powerful shot, this shot is strong enough to stun the opponent and even knock them off balance. Also this technique is quickier than the "quick draw" because the user is not drawing the full sword and attacking, but instead is quickly pulling on the hilt in a quick motion. If the opponent's mid-section is open at the time, it's almost 100% certain that the attack will make contact.
    Note: Can only be taught by Axle

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    incorrect damage info

    Genjutsu: (shujutsushitsu) - Surgery
    Rank: S
    Type: supplementary
    Range: short - Mid
    Chakra: 60
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user casts a genjutsu on their opponent, causing the opponent's limbs to be in the user's control. The user can disassemble the opponent's body anyway he'd like. He can even reassemble anyway he'd like, like putting the opponent's foot in place of their head, or putting their arm where their leg goes. Because the opponent thinks this is real, he will be trying to move his body in reality that way.
    Note: can only be dispersed by pain
    Note: can only be taught by Axle

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    incorrect chakra info, no restrictions and every genjutsu can be dispersed by other means other than pain except ms ones.

    (Kuro Tama) - Dark Sphere
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 80
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user holds their hands in the shape of a circle, causing a black circle to form around the opponent, this circle opens and closes on the user's command however, in order to maintain the circle, the user has to keep his hands in the form of the circle. Because the circle is totally closed off, air cannot get in, leaving the opponent with a limited air supply.
    Note: can only be used once per battle
    Note: must have Sealing mastery
    Note: can only be used by Axle
    Note: cannot be taught

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    incorrect chakra info, this is forbidden why? by definition forbidden techs need to give damage to the user...thats why they are forbidden. Also, what is this? sealing technique? then its name is wrong. also, if its a sealing technique don't bother resubmitting.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Genjutsu/Fuuinjutsu: Kusari Baindingu Fuu) - Illusion Sealing art: Chain binding seal
    Type: supplementary
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: This is a fuuin based genjutsu. The user will start by touching an object such as a weapon or a rock or anything solid really, releasing the seal onto the object, much like Minato's Flying Thunder God seal. This seal remains on the object until the object is destroyed, or the seal is removed. The user can then perform one handseal at any point releasing the seal which will bind everyone on short range in a genjutsu where they see chakra chains shoot up from the ground behind them binding their entire body tightly so that they can't move and their arms are bound to their sides. As long as the oppenents are in range of the seal (short range) they will keep being bound in this genjutsu until the object is destroyed or they move out of range. The reason this jutsu is short-long range, is because if they user is long range from the seal, they can activate it still, but it will only effect someone in short range. If the user used this 3 times in the same turn, placing 3 seals, he can activate all the seals at the same time.

    Note: The seal only stays active for 2 turns tops once activated before it runs out of chakra.
    Note: Useable 3 times
    Note: No genjutsu in the same turn the seal is activated.
    Note: Placing the seal is classed as the jutsu, activating it is like activating an explosive tag.

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    for this to work the seal would need to release sound or something that the enemy could smell or light/color to induce the genjutsu. A seal can't mold chakra to form a genjutsu on release. You can, however, make the seal release something that would trigger the genjutsu. If its sound, you need sound training. If its smell then you need to explain it quite thoroughly specially since we have Lili's Perfume CE. As for light, if such, the rank needs to be smaller.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Kuchiyose no jutsu: Sin kitahankyuu Kaze no ousama) Summoning Technique: Sin King of Northern Winds
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user summons Sin a giant bustard and King of the Northern winds and one of the oldest bustard. He is 25 feet tall and is capable of using wind element up to A rank, and one S rank jutsu per battle. The user can fly on his back at fast speeds with great manouverbility providing the user with good aerial skills and making them a hard target to hit. Sin is also the fastest among all bustards. Sin is also capable of summoning a strong current of wind up to A rank power by flapping his wings and send the blast at the opponent(s). He is also capable of using his wings, beak and his long legs as extra means of attacks.

    Note: Wind Current can only be used 2 times per battle.
    Note: Can only be summoned once per battle.
    Note: Lasts for 5 turns max.
    Note: Any other techniques used by Sin count towards the users move count.
    Note: Can carry only one person on his back as a result of his fast speed.

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    why long range?

    (Kuchiyose no jutsu: Tiamat Umi no Megami) Summoning technique: Tiamat The Sea Goddess
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Tiamat is a white with sea greenish feathered bustard. The color of her feather is due to her affinity towards water element and hence called as Sea Goddess. She is capable of using water element up to the user's rank(The user requires to waive hand seals, if any for her). She is capable of shooting blasts of water bullets at the enemy (equivalent to A rank) from her mouth. She has also trained herself to use her beak and legs for attacking her opponents (and other summons).

    Note: Can be summoned once.
    Note: Lasts for 4 turns max.
    Note: Her abilities can only be used 3 times.
    Note: Tiamat's techniques count towards the users move count.
    Note: Can carry two persons on her back.

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    same as above

    (Kuchoiyse no jutsu: Nisroch & Ninlil) Summoning Technique: Nisroch & Ninlil
    Type Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range:Short- mid
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points: N/A(60 for feather Strike)
    Description: The user summons the two twin Bustards Nisroch & Ninlil, who are known for their teamwork. Being twin brother and sister, they are of exactly the same size i.e. 12 feet in height and fly with great manouverbility. Nisroch specializes in fire and Ninlil in wind, and they both can use up to B rank jutsu. They have trained themselves to use their attacks in combination with each other. Also they both are able to shoot feathers infused with their respective chakra at high velocity from their fingered wing tips that can even pierce through rocks.

    Note: can be summoned twice and lasts for 4 turns.
    Note: Can only shoot feathers 3 times per battle.
    Note: The summons cannot use feather strike and elemental techniques in same turn.
    Note: can carry one person each.

    Link to approval.

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    why mid range?
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 09-28-2012 at 05:34 PM.

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