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    Team I.U.T Lightning (chapter 2)

    Link to previous chapter: http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...d.php?t=147348
    Mysrerious Ninja's Motives


    Kakashi:I'm Kakashi Hatake but more importantly why are you fighting especially you two leaf ninja's.

    *Kakashi looks at the kids.*

    Utaka:I was walking here in the training grounds when suddenly this punk here *pointing to mysteripus ninja* attacked me and demanded my money.

    Kakashi:I see....And you why did you attack him and whats your name.

    ??:My name is Takuto Kazumi i am a rouge ninja I do not know my origin nor my parents since they were killed by an unkown ninja when i was 2,then i was raised by a man named Diedra who killed people for his own fun.I was tired from that life so i escaped and i am traveling the lands trying to survive.

    Kakashi:And you *Pointing at Imad*why did you attack.

    Imad: Well the pathetic excuse of a ninja*pointing at Utaka* attacked me after i saves his a$$.

    As kakashi looks away to think for a while the three ninja's attack kakashi in retaliation of stoping there fight.

    Kakashi: Wtf as he dashes away from the attack,then hits Utaka with a relatively small water dragon bullet sending him flying hitting the log,then He swithes his attention to Takuto attacking him with Earth Release:Double Suicide Decapitation Technique then followed by a chakra concetrated punch to head,Imad seeing the attacks of Kakshi activates his two tome sharingan jist in time to dodge Kakashi's front lotus.

    Imad:You may be strong but you will not defeat me.


    As Imad finishs his sentence he attacks using Great fireball jutsu on kakashi which easily dodges it.

    Kakshi thinking to self how can this be another uchiha and that much chakra that must mean he is....

    Kakshi interupted by Imad's combination of wind release's great breakthrough and fire release's great fireball which hits Kakshi in his left leg.

    Kakshi: Nice work kid you actually hit me,but before i get serious i'll give you one more chance to surrender.

    Imad's-o ooh I'm so scared,bring it on old man.

    As soon as Imad's said thatKakshi revealed his sharingan.

    Kakshi:Kid you think your the only one that has a sharingan.

    Imad's as astonished as Utaka and Takuto where made the fatal mistake in looking at Kakshi's eyes to check for authenticity was trapped in Kakshi's gen-jutsu demonic illusion:hell viewing technique.

    As Imad's worst fear is realized he finds himself.....


    Next Chapter: The Kage and the Truth.




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    Re: Team I.U.T Lightning (chapter 2)

    not bad man :D try to make it longer :D can't wait
     
         

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    Re: Team I.U.T Lightning (chapter 2)

    sure i'll make it longer next time
     
         

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    Re: Team I.U.T Lightning (chapter 2)

    Dont use abriviations,and instead of just posting the justu's name how about describing them a bit?
     
         

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    Re: Team I.U.T Lightning (chapter 2)

    Sure i'll describe them and about your fan fuc please use space bar my eyes are burning from close words
     
         

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    Re: Team I.U.T Lightning (chapter 2)

    Quote Originally Posted by mangekyo byakugan View Post
    Sure i'll describe them and about your fan fuc please use space bar my eyes are burning from close words
    @ bolded If you did that on purpose the flaming is about to begin
    @ The rest. Its clear that there are spaces .-.
     
         

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    Re: Team I.U.T Lightning (chapter 2)

    wow I didn't even notice that sorry I meant fic but lolling so hard at the fail
    And I meant spaces between each line not every paragraph cause your fan fic is very long
     
         

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    Re: Team I.U.T Lightning (chapter 2)

    Its not speech so i dont ned it
     
         

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    Re: Team I.U.T Lightning (chapter 2)

    sure do as you like although my eyes will get burned so what
     
         

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