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    Life in Konoha after the War Continued

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    Life in Konoha after the War

    Chapter 6


    A few hours later Sakura and Shizune finally finished making the medicine for the unknown Ninja. They then thanked the Medical ninja of Cloud four there help, a few minutes later they made their way to the Hospital They then arrived at the hospital and went to were the unknown ninja who was sleeping she had to wake him up.

    A few mins later he woke up

    Sakura: hello I am from am from Konoha and this is the cloud village I hope you had a good sleep me and my friend here spent alot of time healing you, we have now made an antidote for you to take so you will not be in any danger any more.

    The Unknown ninja had a shocked but relieved look on his face after he had calm down.

    Unknown ninja: thank you both it is good to see ninja that care so much for a ninja they don’t know I am going to guess that you would like to know what village I am from.

    Sakura: yeah we will talk about that tomorrow when I have made my report to the Raikage any way you need your rest.

    Unknown ninja: I understand I will wait till then to discuss everything I am very willing to let you know anything because I did not like the way things where going back in my village.

    Sakura: ok well I am off to make my report to my Jounin leader and the Raikage.

    Sakura and Shizune then left the room of the unknown ninja and went to find captain Yamato so she headed towards the Raikage mansion and Yamato was walking towards her.

    Sakura: Captain Yamato the unknown ninja is recovering well from the and he will be ready to talk to us tomorrow.

    Yamato: hi Sakura and Shizune thanks for the report Sakura is the Raikage aware of the situation

    Sakura: me and Shizune where just going there now to inform him

    Yamato: well I shall come with you both

    All of them stared to head towards the Raikage mansion it took them maybe five mins to get there they then went straight up to the Raikage office they knocked on the door.

    The Raikage: Enter

    Yamato: the ninja in the hospital is recovering well we will hear what he has to say and I guess me, Sakura and the others should return to report to the Hokage after we have listened to what the unknown ninja has to say.

    Sakura: he will be cleared for interrogation tomorrow some time

    The Raikage: Okay then I was thinking of maybe sending him back with you along with my brothers team to help guard him just in case he does not tell us everything you could have him interrogated again even if he does tell us everything he will be better in your village.

    Sakura: ah he should tell us everything but if you insist we take him back with us to make sure he has told us everything if he agrees to it we have Inoichi help out Yamato.

    Yamato: yes Inoichi is real good at that, well if you insist Raikage Sama we will take him after the interrogation tomorrow.

    The Raikage: I will have Samui, Karui & Omoi will join you just to be on the safe side they will help escort him, and I will have them join in on the meeting tomorrow.

    Suddenly there was a
    “knock knock”

    The Raikage: ah Samui just the person I want to see the unknown ninja is asleep after tomorrow interrogation I want him taken to Konoha, I would like you and Karui along with Omoi to help escort him.

    Samui: Understood Raikage Sama

    The Raikage: Sama ok I guess it is all set now all we need to do is get some rest night everyone your all dismissed.

    The next day......

    They had gathered in the hospital room where the unknown ninja was.

    Samui: are you going to tell us why we have never seen your head band protector before

    Unknown ninja: I am willing to cooperate

    Samui: just letting you know once we are done here my team and the Konoha ninja will be escorting you to their village.

    Unknown ninja: I understand ok shall we begin I’m only guessing everyone is here that needs to be

    The Raikage: Yes that is true now you can start by telling us your name and the name of your village.

    Unknown ninja: well my name is Akira Yuuto and I am from the Hidden Storm Village.

    The Raikage: How come none of the hidden villages know about your village?

    Arkira: well the village I am from has been there for a very long time we just have this barrier that hides the village it was created by the first Arashikage, we have been at peace for while but now the 3rd Arashikage wants to stir up trouble I am pretty sure that someone is controlling him. So I decided to come out here for some help I am happy that I have found that help thanks to everyone here thanks for curing me and saving my life.

    Sakura: what makes you think he is being Controlled?

    Arkira: well he was my best friend and ever since that time we had an unknown ninja come to our village he has changed. There are ninja looking for me and the village does not like outsiders finding out about our village usually but for some reason they allowed him to enter I am not suppose to talk to you but I had to come.

    The Raikage: Well thank you for informing us we will make sure you get to

    Konoha safely and I will send a brief letter ahead to their Hokage. Hopefully all the villages can help you in some way.

    Arkira: thank you for your hospitality Raikage Sama
    The Raikage: You’re welcome

    Yamato: Okay Raikage Sama I think we should be on our way

    The Raikage: I understand I reckon the five Kages may have to get together who knows.

    Everyone then took off and started heading back to Konoha to escort Akira safely.

    Chapters 1 - 5 http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...d.php?t=100566
     
         
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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Continued

    There are alot of grammar mistakes in their I must say. But overall it was pretty good.
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Continued

    grammar mistakes but awesome :D
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Continued

    Quote Originally Posted by yahiko24 View Post
    grammar mistakes but awesome :D
    thanks for your comment

    sorry everyone i know i have to work on my grammer sorry about the Grammer mistakes
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Continued

    U need work with ur English a bit but i think.....its awesome...
    Do PM me when the next chapter comes...:D
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Continued

    Yes the grammar needs to be finished, but overall it was really good i liked it, keep it up
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Continued

    Overal its awesome
    i wish i see the sayings in "these"
    +rep
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Continued

    Quote Originally Posted by Yanto View Post
    Overal its awesome
    i wish i see the sayings in "these"
    +rep
    fair enough, thank you for your Comment and also thank you for the rep
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Continued

    Pretty sweet Can't wait for more... Make sure to PM me when the next chapter comes out
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Continued

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    Pretty sweet Can't wait for more... Make sure to PM me when the next chapter comes out
    i will thank you for your comment
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Continued

    Sweet!!! Its awesome, but the language needs to improve
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Continued

    really nice
    but seemd short to me :P
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Continued

    awsome dont care about da grammar just keep making it
    pm me if tha next comes out
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Continued

    it is awesome
     
         
    Last edited by NarutoXL; 02-04-2012 at 05:31 PM. Reason: I meant to put is instead of was

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Continued

    thank you for all the nice compliments i will try to have the next chapter out soon as i can i have just been a bit pre ocupied with my new game and i have been a bit busy.
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Continued

    O_o I enjoyed this
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Continued

    Game what game are you playing
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Continued

    awesome story dude.thanks to your advice i'm writing cool stories like you.you could check my out.it's called (sonic x: knuckles kidnapping)it's on the story of the master emerald and knuckles.i should be able to finish it this week and next week i will go straight for the naruto story.keep me posted.
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Continued

    Wow!! nice ^_^
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Continued

    Pretty good. I like it. Thanks for the link
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Continued

    The main plot has surfaced in this chapter and I like it ^.^ You have an awesome imagination I believe there hasn't been any fighting as of yet but the way you unfold your story-I haven't exactly missed it even though I'm a big fan of battle scenes lol Looking forward to more about the mysterious Arashigakure as well as the antagonist

    You added to your title continued instead of chapter 6 and it may pose a problem when readers attempt to search for it. I would advise before posting the following chapter, in the title bar you type the chapter number. The numbers really identify the chapters better I think but it is ultimately up to you
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Continued

    you welcome, ....well done!
     
         
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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Continued

    Really liking these haha :D
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Continued

    it is awesome
    i'll read other chapters later
     
         

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    Re: Life in Konoha after the War Continued

    Nice work, it was fun to read.
     
         

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