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    [Bio Test- Third Raikage] Enzup

    Greetings, Enzup

    I will be your administrating your test and the rules are as followed:

    Rules:
    ~ Rules and Regulations according to Rei.
    ~ All basic elements and techniques up to your current rank are to be used.
    ~ Custom Jutsus and Elements are not allowed
    ~ Terrain: A vast wasteland with trees at long range around us, just like in the manga.
    ~ You may use The Third raikage's abilities up to your current rank
    ~ We start mid range from each other
    ~ If you have any questions please ask them via vm.


    I will be using a 2 canon Kage ranked biographies, Naruto Uzamaki (With Sage Mode and 9 tails Mode) and Onoki for this bio test against you. Please give a link to your bio that your testing and I will make the first move


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    Re: [Bio Test- Third Raikage] Enzup

    Thanks for conducting my test. :D

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    Re: [Bio Test- Third Raikage] Enzup

    Quote Originally Posted by Enzup View Post
    Thanks for conducting my test. :D

    Third Raikage
    Onoki stands in front of Naruto, approx 5 meters facing you.
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    *As soon as you appear, Onoki makes 1 clone, which stands beside him*

    (Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique
    Rank:B
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.


    *As soon as the clone comes into existence, he creates 3 handseals, causing a tidal wave of earth to emerge under him, as he rides it towards you. As soon as you see the wave emerge under Ononki1 (clone), earth immediately is created, that wraps around your legs. Then as he(the clone) gets close to you, he shoots 3 giant bullets of fire down onto you, creating a geyser of fire, that burns you alive.*

    (Doton: Doryūha) - Earth Release: Earth Flow Wave
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Mid - Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: After performing the required hand seal sequence Rat → Snake → Tiger the user creates and rides a wave of earth that can branch of to attack from a distance. The user can also use the technique to manipulate the terrain and trap the target by wrapping earth round their legs preventing them from moving


    (Katon: Hoenka) - Fire Release: Flame Flower
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user jumps in the air and shoots three giant bullets of fire that come down like giant meteors then erupt into a geyser of flame.



    *As you're trapped and Onoki1 rides towards you, Onoki(real) takes a defensive stand in front of naruto, as he gathers natural energy*
     
         

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    Re: [Bio Test- Third Raikage] Enzup

    As the moment I see that a clone of Ōnoki came into existence, I quickly do a single handseal and expel a massive wall of intense flames at you all from my mouth. Just after I finished with my fire technique, our view will still be blocked for a couple of seconds, so taking advantage of this I start running to my right (ur left) and performs a single handseal and hence creating a black panther that emanate from my body which comes after all 3 of you. And electricuting you, if you uses a water technique to extinguish my fire technique.

    (Katon: Gōka Mekkyaku) - Fire release: Great Fire Majestic Annihilation
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: A technique where the user makes the horse hand seal and then the user kneads chakra inside the body is converted into fire, and then expelled from the mouth in a massive wall of intense flames, which covers an expansive range in both vertical and horizontal dimensions, making it extremely difficult to avoid.


    (Raiton: Kuropansa) - Lightning Release: Black Panther Technique
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: After performing a single hand seal Ram the user creates a black panther like creature composed of electricity that seems to emanate from the users body. It can be used to attack multiple targets by extending from its body tendrils of lightning to electrocute the targets.
    Note: Can only be used by the Third Raikage or Darui


    After which I stops running and creates 3 clones of me, named C1 left to me, C2 right to me and C3 in front of me.

    (Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique
    Rank:B
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.
     
         
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    Re: [Bio Test- Third Raikage] Enzup

    Quote Originally Posted by Enzup View Post
    As the moment I see that a clone of Ōnoki came into existence, I quickly do a single handseal and expel a massive wall of intense flames at you all from my mouth. Just after I finished with my fire technique, our view will still be blocked for a couple of seconds, so taking advantage of this I start running to my right (ur left) and performs a single handseal and hence creating a black panther that emanate from my body which comes after all 3 of you. And electricuting you, if you uses a water technique to extinguish my fire technique.

    (Katon: Gōka Mekkyaku) - Fire release: Great Fire Majestic Annihilation
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: A technique where the user makes the horse hand seal and then the user kneads chakra inside the body is converted into fire, and then expelled from the mouth in a massive wall of intense flames, which covers an expansive range in both vertical and horizontal dimensions, making it extremely difficult to avoid.


    (Raiton: Kuropansa) - Lightning Release: Black Panther Technique
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: After performing a single hand seal Ram the user creates a black panther like creature composed of electricity that seems to emanate from the users body. It can be used to attack multiple targets by extending from its body tendrils of lightning to electrocute the targets.
    Note: Can only be used by the Third Raikage or Darui


    After which I stops running and creates 3 clones of me, named C1 left to me, C2 right to me and C3 in front of me.

    (Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique
    Rank:B
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.
    *As the Fire is shot at us, Onoki1 quickly creates a rasengan in one hand, then a destruction torrent in the other, creating a vortex of water that is shot at your fire, thus extingushing it, creating steam.*

    (Suiton: Gufuu Suika) - Water Style: Typhoon Water Vortex
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description:The user will create a ‘Wind Style: Rasengan’ in one hand, and ‘Water Style: Destruction Torrent’ in the other. By combining them, he will create a tornado of water that can be used to attack or defend. This jutsu can also be used to drown out wind and fire combos
    Note: No water source required.


    *Then Onoki quickly sees the Black Panther, he makes the Bird handseal, creating a wave of wind, which he directs with his hand, crashing it into the lightning, negating it.*

    (Fūton: Fūjin no Jutsu) - Wind Release Dust Cloud Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: After performing the Bird hand seal the user creates a stream of high velocity wind combined with scouring dust. The completed technique is directed through overlapping hands.


    *As all of this has happened, Naruto has gathered enough natural energy in order to enter sage mode. He then steps forward in front of Onoki, taking the lead*

    (Sennin Modo) – Sage Mode
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra cost: N/A
    Damage points: N/A (+ 10 to Taijutsu)
    Description: The user stands still in a motionless state to gather natural chakra to then enter Sage Mode. The user can eliminate the weakness of remaining still by using a shadow clone to stand still and absorb natural chakra whilst the main body remains in combat and by dispersing the clone the user will gain the natural chakra thus entering Hermit mode. This mode causes the user to take on characteristics of a frog. Red pigments surround the eyes and their pupils take on a rectangular shape. The user also gains the ability to sense chakra and the mode increase the power of the Taijutsu by +10.
    Note: Sage Mode lasts for a total of 5 turns.
    Note: if user uses Frog Katas length of Sage mode is cut by two turns.


    *Naruto, then starts to run towards you at high speeds and towards your newly created clones.*

    Note: All of this happened according to all the moves you created, so Naruto, should be stepping in front of Onoki, as your clones, have been just created.
     
         

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    Re: [Bio Test- Third Raikage] Enzup

    As my clones are created and I see Naruto steeping forward, so C3 quickly throw a smoke bomb in front of him, 1m away in front of him, preventing you all to see what we are doing. And as the moment C3 throw a smokebomb, he activates his lightning armour, while C1 slams his hand on ground, sending an electric current racing through the earth, it splits into multiple tendrils to attack you all 3.

    (Raiton no Yori) - Lightning Release Armour
    Rank: A
    Type: Defensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30 (-10 per turn activate)
    Damage points: N/A (+ 20 to regular taijutsu)
    Description: The user will wrap themselves with lightning chakra, which then electrically stimulates their nerves system and speed up their neural synapse to react faster to danger and push away any physical prowess to the absolute limit. allowing him to gain tremendous raw speed and monstrous power. This armour, combined with Taijutsu allows the user to utilize a Nintaijutsu. However due to being enveloped by lightning chakra, wind techniques cause more damage.
    Note: Technique lasts for 3 turns
    Note: Can only be used or taught by the 3rd Raikage or Raikage A biography


    (Raiton: Ikazuchi no Utage) - Lightning Release: Lightning Burial ~ Banquet of Lightning
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense
    Range: Mid/Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user brings their hands together and an electrical energy will begin to crackle around them. They will then slam their hands to the ground to send an electric current racing through the earth. When the current approaches its target, it can split into multiple tendrils to attack separate targets individually.


    As you all will be distracted with C1's lightning move with lightning coming in the earth below you, C3 rushes towards the real Ōnoki surprisingly from the cloud of smoke with his tremendous speed to target him. And as the moment he start running towards Ōnoki, he focuses his lightning chakra into his 4 fingers, creating a strong piercing effect, with which he knocks Ōnoki's head off.

    (Raiton: Jigokuzuki: Yonhon Nukite) -Lightning Release: Hell Stab: Four Finger CrossBeam Hand
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: 30
    Description: Whilst the 3rd Raikage is cladded in the lightning Release Armor He builds up lightning chakra in the tips of all four of his fingers and then uses that together with a piercing move. This four finger concentration is the weakest level of the 3rd raikages technique and can be concentrated more into a three fingers for a stronger attack.
    Note: Can only be used by the 3rd raikage whilst cladded in the lightning release armor. This technique is considerd similar in respect to the Raikiri and Chidori.


    Note: When the effect of smoke wears off, you'll be unknown of the fact that which one of us is the real one, as naruto would have been distracted from C1's lightning move, so while he won't be sensing us, so we could have changed our places, But in actual we didn't, but you all will be unaware of it.
     
         
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    Re: [Bio Test- Third Raikage] Enzup

    Quote Originally Posted by Enzup View Post
    As my clones are created and I see Naruto steeping forward, so C3 quickly throw a smoke bomb in front of him, 1m away in front of him, preventing you all to see what we are doing. And as the moment C3 throw a smokebomb, he activates his lightning armour, while C1 slams his hand on ground, sending an electric current racing through the earth, it splits into multiple tendrils to attack you all 3.

    (Raiton no Yori) - Lightning Release Armour
    Rank: A
    Type: Defensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30 (-10 per turn activate)
    Damage points: N/A (+ 20 to regular taijutsu)
    Description: The user will wrap themselves with lightning chakra, which then electrically stimulates their nerves system and speed up their neural synapse to react faster to danger and push away any physical prowess to the absolute limit. allowing him to gain tremendous raw speed and monstrous power. This armour, combined with Taijutsu allows the user to utilize a Nintaijutsu. However due to being enveloped by lightning chakra, wind techniques cause more damage.
    Note: Technique lasts for 3 turns
    Note: Can only be used or taught by the 3rd Raikage or Raikage A biography


    (Raiton: Ikazuchi no Utage) - Lightning Release: Lightning Burial ~ Banquet of Lightning
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense
    Range: Mid/Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user brings their hands together and an electrical energy will begin to crackle around them. They will then slam their hands to the ground to send an electric current racing through the earth. When the current approaches its target, it can split into multiple tendrils to attack separate targets individually.


    As you all will be distracted with C1's lightning move with lightning coming in the earth below you, C3 rushes towards the real Ōnoki surprisingly from the cloud of smoke with his tremendous speed to target him. And as the moment he start running towards Ōnoki, he focuses his lightning chakra into his 4 fingers, creating a strong piercing effect, with which he knocks Ōnoki's head off.

    (Raiton: Jigokuzuki: Yonhon Nukite) -Lightning Release: Hell Stab: Four Finger CrossBeam Hand
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: 30
    Description: Whilst the 3rd Raikage is cladded in the lightning Release Armor He builds up lightning chakra in the tips of all four of his fingers and then uses that together with a piercing move. This four finger concentration is the weakest level of the 3rd raikages technique and can be concentrated more into a three fingers for a stronger attack.
    Note: Can only be used by the 3rd raikage whilst cladded in the lightning release armor. This technique is considerd similar in respect to the Raikiri and Chidori.


    Note: When the effect of smoke wears off, you'll be unknown of the fact that which one of us is the real one, as naruto would have been distracted from C1's lightning move, so while he won't be sensing us, so we could have changed our places, But in actual we didn't, but you all will be unaware of it.
    Naruto would be well aware of who is which. ~_~ Ask Dan if you don't believe me or any other Sage Mode user.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    *As the smoke is thrown and the lightning heads our way, Onoki1 quickly creates a mudslide, which comes into contact with the lightning, therefore hardening itself, while also stopping the lightning.*

    (Doton: Dochūbaku) - Earth Release: Landslide Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user will manipulate their chakra to create the earth infront of them to turn to a lose like quality and create a landslide that is directed towards the enemy target.


    *Then as the Raikage makes his way towards Onoki, Naruto senses him and quickly makes his way over there also (In fact, Naruto is a lot closer, so he'd be a little off in front of Onoki, as he charged). Right when the Raikage is getting closer, Onoki starts to make 1 handseal, while in conjunction, Naruto creates a Giant Rasengan in his hand. When the Raikage reaches Onoki, he is so focused on Onoki, that he doesn't realize that Naruto has approached him. Naruto then hits him in in his lower legs with the rasengan, throwing him off. Then Onoki quickly traps him in a cube of dust, then compressing him finishing him off. as Naruto jumps away.*

    (Oodama Rasengan) - Big Ball Spiral Sphere
    Rank:S
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: Oodama Rasengan is an advanced Ninjutsu technique that creates a very large Rasengan ball.
    Note:Must already know rasengan


    (Jinton: Genkai Hakuri no Jutsu) - Dust Release: Destruction of the Primitive world technique
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user after performing a single hand seal to create a cube with a sphere at its center that expands in size when dropped on the target and crushes them due to the density.
    Note: Can only be used by Onoki or Muu
     
         

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    Re: [Bio Test- Third Raikage] Enzup

    As I see that my clone is being eliminated and naruto is jumping away, I quickly create a blinding light which enamate from my body, by making a single handseal (due to lightning being my speciality) which blinds you all. While I am blinding you all, at the same time C1 summons water on top of you all, at height 10m.

    (Raigen Raikochu) – Lightning Illusion Flash of Lightning Pillar
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementaty
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: After performing the following handseals Ram → Horse → Snake → Tiger the user will then create a blinding light that appears to emanate from the users body and blind the target/s.


    (Suiton: Haran Banshō) - Water Release: Storm Upheaval
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This technique allows the user to summon a massive amount of water from the sky, crushing it into the opponent. If needed, the user can cancel the technique in an instant.
    Note: The water needs to be summoned at least 10 meters above the opponent to have any real effect.


    Just after a few second C1 summons water, C2 sends an extremely quick wave of electricity when water reaches close to you, C1's water technique and C2's lightning wave combines just above you (say 1m) and then shocking you all.

    (Raiton: Kangekiha) – Lightning Release: Wave of Inspiration
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damage point: 30 (normally) 50 (when used in conjunction with water technique)
    Description: After using a Water Style technique, the user releases a wave of electricity that can electrocute any water within range, electrocuting and knocking back an opponent in contact with the water. When used without a water technique, its power is moderate. The technique can be used extremely quickly, so that it finishes almost in conjunction with the previous jutsu.
     
         
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    Re: [Bio Test- Third Raikage] Enzup

    Quote Originally Posted by Enzup View Post
    As I see that my clone is being eliminated and naruto is jumping away, I quickly create a blinding light which enamate from my body, by making a single handseal (due to lightning being my speciality) which blinds you all. While I am blinding you all, at the same time C1 summons water on top of you all, at height 10m.

    (Raigen Raikochu) – Lightning Illusion Flash of Lightning Pillar
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementaty
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: After performing the following handseals Ram → Horse → Snake → Tiger the user will then create a blinding light that appears to emanate from the users body and blind the target/s.


    (Suiton: Haran Banshō) - Water Release: Storm Upheaval
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This technique allows the user to summon a massive amount of water from the sky, crushing it into the opponent. If needed, the user can cancel the technique in an instant.
    Note: The water needs to be summoned at least 10 meters above the opponent to have any real effect.


    Just after a few second C1 summons water, C2 sends an extremely quick wave of electricity when water reaches close to you, C1's water technique and C2's lightning wave combines just above you (say 1m) and then shocking you all.

    (Raiton: Kangekiha) – Lightning Release: Wave of Inspiration
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damage point: 30 (normally) 50 (when used in conjunction with water technique)
    Description: After using a Water Style technique, the user releases a wave of electricity that can electrocute any water within range, electrocuting and knocking back an opponent in contact with the water. When used without a water technique, its power is moderate. The technique can be used extremely quickly, so that it finishes almost in conjunction with the previous jutsu.
    *As soon as Onoki1 sees the light start to come from your body, he quickly creates a dome of earth, that arises over the three of them, therefore blocking the light and the water/lightning combination, as it comes down. As soon as the dome is erected(meaning being formed), Naruto slams his hand on the ground, being able to sense your location with his abilities, making a tunnel underneath you very quickly. He then proceeds to breathe fire into the tunnel, causing it to become molten lava. He then makes a handseal, causing the lava to erupt burning you and your clones.*

    (Doton: Iwa no Hogo) - Earth Release: Earth Shelter Technique
    Rank: B
    Type: Defensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user surrounds themselves with earth, taken from the immediate vicinity, in order to fabricate a formation of rock that is capable of protecting both the user and others in close proximity, if desired. Doing so, seemingly leaves the surrounding terrain unaltered, even when the quantity of earth used is enough to form a complete dome around multiple individuals as seen when Ittan used this technique. The user can also manipulate the resulting shelter to have openings in it so as to be able to observe outside, as demonstrated when used by Kitsuchi.


    (Katon: Keshi Makuga Hara) - Fire Release: Exploding Flame Crater
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user first stomps on the ground, making an underground tunnel form between themselves and the opponent. They then breathe out fire into the tunnel, causing the fire to turn into lava as it travels. With a single hand seal, the lava will erupt from the ground underneath the opponent, engulfing them in lava.


    *Then Onoki makes the dome retract, allowing for sight. As soon as the Dome retracts, Naruto quickly takes off running towards your vicinity, sensing where you are and located. While Onoki takes to the skies, getting an overhead view of you. Onoki1 stands watching, waiting for a counter*

    (Furaito no Jutsu) - Flight Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30 (+15 per turn to maintain)
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This technique grants the user the ability to fly. Onoki is able to transfer this technique to others through physical contact with them for an unspecified amount of time. The Transfer of flight can only last one turn.
    Note: Can only be used by Onoki and Mu
     
         

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    Re: [Bio Test- Third Raikage] Enzup

    Quote Originally Posted by Darui.. View Post
    *As soon as Onoki1 sees the light start to come from your body, he quickly creates a dome of earth, that arises over the three of them, therefore blocking the light and the water/lightning combination, as it comes down. As soon as the dome is erected(meaning being formed), Naruto slams his hand on the ground, being able to sense your location with his abilities, making a tunnel underneath you very quickly. He then proceeds to breathe fire into the tunnel, causing it to become molten lava. He then makes a handseal, causing the lava to erupt burning you and your clones.*

    (Doton: Iwa no Hogo) - Earth Release: Earth Shelter Technique
    Rank: B
    Type: Defensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user surrounds themselves with earth, taken from the immediate vicinity, in order to fabricate a formation of rock that is capable of protecting both the user and others in close proximity, if desired. Doing so, seemingly leaves the surrounding terrain unaltered, even when the quantity of earth used is enough to form a complete dome around multiple individuals as seen when Ittan used this technique. The user can also manipulate the resulting shelter to have openings in it so as to be able to observe outside, as demonstrated when used by Kitsuchi.


    (Katon: Keshi Makuga Hara) - Fire Release: Exploding Flame Crater
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user first stomps on the ground, making an underground tunnel form between themselves and the opponent. They then breathe out fire into the tunnel, causing the fire to turn into lava as it travels. With a single hand seal, the lava will erupt from the ground underneath the opponent, engulfing them in lava.


    *Then Onoki makes the dome retract, allowing for sight. As soon as the Dome retracts, Naruto quickly takes off running towards your vicinity, sensing where you are and located. While Onoki takes to the skies, getting an overhead view of you. Onoki1 stands watching, waiting for a counter*

    (Furaito no Jutsu) - Flight Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30 (+15 per turn to maintain)
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This technique grants the user the ability to fly. Onoki is able to transfer this technique to others through physical contact with them for an unspecified amount of time. The Transfer of flight can only last one turn.
    Note: Can only be used by Onoki and Mu
    Your B-Rank earth dome can't block my A-Rank (B+B) water/lightning combo, since my lightning attack is of B-rank. And you know that a C-rank lightning technique is enough to shatter B-rank earth. So there is no way that a B-rank earth can stop a B-rank lightning, especially the combo of water/lightning which is of A-rank. And you stated that "Then Onoki makes the dome retract", that means after taking my water/lightning combo, your dome still stands.. No way.. Anyways continuing according to you..
    _________________________________
    As the moment I noticed that something is changing beneath me in the earth, I quickly pull out my sword from my back and channels my lightning chakra into it and stabs the ground with it, sending non-focused electricity which cancels your earth chakra and thus stopping you from creating an underground tunnel, and continues towards you.

    (Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense/Defence
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electrically charged chakra from their body. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it only paralyzes. The lightning can be channelled through metal objects, as well as spread out into the air or ground.


    After which we see that dome is being retracted and Onoki start taking flight, So C1 quickly sends electrical essence into the clouds and strikes him with lightning from sky.

    (Raiton: Ikazuchi no Kiba) - Lightning Release: Lightning Fang
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user sends an electrical essence into the clouds, allowing them to create lightning strikes in the desired location.


    And while C1 is sending his lightning chakra, C2 prepares himself for the real deal by activating his lightning armour.

    (Raiton no Yori) - Lightning Release Armour
    Rank: A
    Type: Defensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30 (-10 per turn activate)
    Damage points: N/A (+ 20 to regular taijutsu)
    Description: The user will wrap themselves with lightning chakra, which then electrically stimulates their nerves system and speed up their neural synapes to react faster to danger and push away any physical prowess to the absolute limit. allowing him to gain tremendous raw speed and monstrous power. This armour, combined with Taijutsu allows the user to utilize a Nintaijutsu. However due to being enveloped by lightning chakra, wind techniques cause more damage.
    Note: Technique lasts for 3 turns
    Note: Can only be used or taught by the 3rd Raikage or Raikage A biography
     
         
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    Re: [Bio Test- Third Raikage] Enzup

    Quote Originally Posted by Enzup View Post
    Your B-Rank earth dome can't block my A-Rank (B+B) water/lightning combo, since my lightning attack is of B-rank. And you know that a C-rank lightning technique is enough to shatter B-rank earth. So there is no way that a B-rank earth can stop a B-rank lightning, especially the combo of water/lightning which is of A-rank. And you stated that "Then Onoki makes the dome retract", that means after taking my water/lightning combo, your dome still stands.. No way.. Anyways continuing according to you..
    _________________________________
    As the moment I noticed that something is changing beneath me in the earth, I quickly pull out my sword from my back and channels my lightning chakra into it and stabs the ground with it, sending non-focused electricity which cancels your earth chakra and thus stopping you from creating an underground tunnel, and continues towards you.

    (Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense/Defence
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electrically charged chakra from their body. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it only paralyzes. The lightning can be channelled through metal objects, as well as spread out into the air or ground.


    After which we see that dome is being retracted and Onoki start taking flight, So C1 quickly sends electrical essence into the clouds and strikes him with lightning from sky.

    (Raiton: Ikazuchi no Kiba) - Lightning Release: Lightning Fang
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user sends an electrical essence into the clouds, allowing them to create lightning strikes in the desired location.


    And while C1 is sending his lightning chakra, C2 prepares himself for the real deal by activating his lightning armour.

    (Raiton no Yori) - Lightning Release Armour
    Rank: A
    Type: Defensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30 (-10 per turn activate)
    Damage points: N/A (+ 20 to regular taijutsu)
    Description: The user will wrap themselves with lightning chakra, which then electrically stimulates their nerves system and speed up their neural synapes to react faster to danger and push away any physical prowess to the absolute limit. allowing him to gain tremendous raw speed and monstrous power. This armour, combined with Taijutsu allows the user to utilize a Nintaijutsu. However due to being enveloped by lightning chakra, wind techniques cause more damage.
    Note: Technique lasts for 3 turns
    Note: Can only be used or taught by the 3rd Raikage or Raikage A biography
    Time to turn it up!
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    *As Onoki sees the lightning start to crackle, he quickly dodges it with little time to spare, by flying forward, while in conjunction he makes the "Tiger" handseal, shooting 3 dragon shaped fireballs at your location. Simultaneously while this is happening, Naruto saw a current of electricity heading his and Onoki1's way, so he quickly takes off towards the current of electricty, while making the "T" handseal, creating one clone, which also runs beside him. As soon as they get within jumping distance of the electricity, the clone grabs Naruto and throws him up and over the electricty (as I'm guessing you sent in directly towards them, since you never specified either in the air or through the ground) causing him to land on the other side of it, as it fries the clone.*

    (Katon: Gouryuuka No Jutsu) - Fire Release: Great Dragon Fire
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal, the user will expel dragon head fireballs at their opponent. These powerful fireballs can punch through concrete.


    (Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique
    Rank:B
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.


    *As soon as Naruto lands, which would be within short range of you, he creates a giant flame bullet, which is equal to 10 fire bullets, that erupts from his mouth, which hits both you and your clone.*

    (Katon: Dai Endan) – Fire Release: Big Flame Bullet
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: This technique is an altered version of Flame bullet using Senjutsu. The user fills their mouth cavity with oil, created inside the body using Senjutsu chakra. The user then spits out the oil and at the same time igniting the oil creating a giant flame equivalent to 10 flame bullets.
    Note: Can only be used in Sage mode.
     
         

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    Re: [Bio Test- Third Raikage] Enzup

    Quote Originally Posted by Darui.. View Post
    Time to turn it up!
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    *As Onoki sees the lightning start to crackle, he quickly dodges it with little time to spare, by flying forward, while in conjunction he makes the "Tiger" handseal, shooting 3 dragon shaped fireballs at your location. Simultaneously while this is happening, Naruto saw a current of electricity heading his and Onoki1's way, so he quickly takes off towards the current of electricty, while making the "T" handseal, creating one clone, which also runs beside him. As soon as they get within jumping distance of the electricity, the clone grabs Naruto and throws him up and over the electricty (as I'm guessing you sent in directly towards them, since you never specified either in the air or through the ground) causing him to land on the other side of it, as it fries the clone.*

    (Katon: Gouryuuka No Jutsu) - Fire Release: Great Dragon Fire
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal, the user will expel dragon head fireballs at their opponent. These powerful fireballs can punch through concrete.


    (Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique
    Rank:B
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.


    *As soon as Naruto lands, which would be within short range of you, he creates a giant flame bullet, which is equal to 10 fire bullets, that erupts from his mouth, which hits both you and your clone.*

    (Katon: Dai Endan) – Fire Release: Big Flame Bullet
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: This technique is an altered version of Flame bullet using Senjutsu. The user fills their mouth cavity with oil, created inside the body using Senjutsu chakra. The user then spits out the oil and at the same time igniting the oil creating a giant flame equivalent to 10 flame bullets.
    Note: Can only be used in Sage mode.
    So my lightning was able to kill both, 1 of naruto's and other of onoki's clone.. Hmm

    As for Onoki's fireball heading towards us, I quickly gathers water in my mouth and spits out a large sphere of rotating water at your fireballs cancelling them completely and producing steam and thus blocking your (Onoki) and our vision.

    (Suiton: Teppoudama) - Water Style: Water Bullet
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user gathers water in their mouth and then spits out a large sphere of rotating water that can blast a huge area leaving it soaked.


    Also we see that naruto has jumped in front of us, so C2 quickly without any delay start running towards Naruto with lightning speed. And while Naruto prepares for his fire technique, my clone C2 starts preparing for hell stab: 2 finger by building up lightning chakra in the tips of two of his fingers creating very strong piercing effect in his right hand. And as naruto spits giant flame, C2 without any stoppage heads straight through the giant flame and takes the little to No Damage from it and knocks Naruto's head off using his lightning move which he has created in his right hand, killing him.


    (Raiton: Jigokuzuki: Nihon Nukite) - Lightning Release: Hell Stab: Two Finger Crossbeam Hand
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: Whilst the 3rd Raikage is cladded in the lightning Release Armor He builds up lightning chakra in the tips of two of his fingers and then uses that together with a piercing move. This Dual finger concentration is the second strongest variant of the 3rd Raikages technique and can be concentrated more into a single finger for a stronger attack.
    Note: Can only be used by the 3rd raikage whilst cladded in the lightning release armor. This technique is considerd similar in respect to the Raikiri and Chidori.


    Note: You used your fire tech first and just after that (or simultaneously) C2 used his Hell Stab on you. Also your fire doesn't harm C2 or anyone of us because we are invincible to B-Rank and below jutsus.

    After which C1 do a single handseal and creates blank panther like creature which enamete from his body to attack you in the sky.

    (Raiton: Kuropansa) - Lightning Release: Black Panther Technique
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: After performing a single hand seal the user creates a black panther like creature composed of electricity that seems to emanate from the users body. It can be used to attack multiple targets by extending from its body tendrils of lightning to electrocute the targets.
    Note: Can only be used by the Third Raikage or Darui
     
         
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    Re: [Bio Test- Third Raikage] Enzup

    Quote Originally Posted by Enzup View Post
    So my lightning was able to kill both, 1 of naruto's and other of onoki's clone.. Hmm

    As for Onoki's fireball heading towards us, I quickly gathers water in my mouth and spits out a large sphere of rotating water at your fireballs cancelling them completely and producing steam and thus blocking your (Onoki) and our vision.

    (Suiton: Teppoudama) - Water Style: Water Bullet
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user gathers water in their mouth and then spits out a large sphere of rotating water that can blast a huge area leaving it soaked.


    Also we see that naruto has jumped in front of us, so C2 quickly without any delay start running towards Naruto with lightning speed. And while Naruto prepares for his fire technique, my clone C2 starts preparing for hell stab: 2 finger by building up lightning chakra in the tips of two of his fingers creating very strong piercing effect in his right hand. And as naruto spits giant flame, C2 without any stoppage heads straight through the giant flame and takes the little to No Damage from it and knocks Naruto's head off using his lightning move which he has created in his right hand, killing him.


    (Raiton: Jigokuzuki: Nihon Nukite) - Lightning Release: Hell Stab: Two Finger Crossbeam Hand
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: Whilst the 3rd Raikage is cladded in the lightning Release Armor He builds up lightning chakra in the tips of two of his fingers and then uses that together with a piercing move. This Dual finger concentration is the second strongest variant of the 3rd Raikages technique and can be concentrated more into a single finger for a stronger attack.
    Note: Can only be used by the 3rd raikage whilst cladded in the lightning release armor. This technique is considerd similar in respect to the Raikiri and Chidori.


    Note: You used your fire tech first and just after that (or simultaneously) C2 used his Hell Stab on you. Also your fire doesn't harm C2 or anyone of us because we are invincible to B-Rank and below jutsus.

    After which C1 do a single handseal and creates blank panther like creature which enamete from his body to attack you in the sky.

    (Raiton: Kuropansa) - Lightning Release: Black Panther Technique
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: After performing a single hand seal the user creates a black panther like creature composed of electricity that seems to emanate from the users body. It can be used to attack multiple targets by extending from its body tendrils of lightning to electrocute the targets.
    Note: Can only be used by the Third Raikage or Darui
    No, you only killed Naruto's Clone, Onoki1 was still a ways off.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    *As the Raikage clone rushes Naruto, as he released the flame, Naruto smirks, as the Raikage stabs at him. When the Raikage stabs at him, he dodges to his right, while he uses Frog Katas to knock the Raikage to his right going with all of his momentum, completely obliterating his arm, causing him to disperse(since he was a clone, it wouldnt be hard to disperse him, remember Frog Katas killed a Pain instantly) and causing Naruto to exit Sage Mode. Simultaneously, Onoki, who was in flight in the air, rushes through the steam, allowing for it to burn him a little, making a single handseal. He then creates an orb of dust within his hand again, descending it upon the Raikage and his close by clone, C1 trapping them, then compressing it, therefore killing them. This would suprise the Raikages, since the steam blocked their view also.*

    (Jinton: Genkai Hakuri no Jutsu) - Dust Release: Destruction of the Primitive World Technique
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user after performing a single hand seal to create a cube with a sphere at its center that expands in size when dropped on the target and crushes them due to the density.
    Note: Can only be used by Onoki or Muu


    *If the Raikage dodges Onoki, he is met by Naruto, who has 2 Futon: Rasengans in his hands, plunging them into his chest. If you still try and use the Black Panther Technique, Naruto just cancels them out with his Rasengans. If you use it on Onoki, he just Dodges it, then descends still at the Raikage.*

    (Fūton: Rasengan) - Wind Style: Spiral sphere
    Rank: A
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60 (-20 to user if attain direct hit)
    Description: Rasengan doesn't require handseals, only molding of the chakra. The user focuses and creates a fast, rotating sphere of chakra in the palm of their hand which can cause much destructive impact. A direct Rasengan hit can be lethal but the user needs to actually physically hit the opponent for it to work.


    (Fūton: Rasengan) - Wind Style: Spiral sphere
    Rank: A
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60 (-20 to user if attain direct hit)
    Description: Rasengan doesn't require handseals, only molding of the chakra. The user focuses and creates a fast, rotating sphere of chakra in the palm of their hand which can cause much destructive impact. A direct Rasengan hit can be lethal but the user needs to actually physically hit the opponent for it to work.
     
         
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    Re: [Bio Test- Third Raikage] Enzup

    Quote Originally Posted by Darui.. View Post
    No, you only killed Naruto's Clone, Onoki1 was still a ways off.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    *As the Raikage clone rushes Naruto, as he released the flame, Naruto smirks, as the Raikage stabs at him. When the Raikage stabs at him, he dodges to his right, while he uses Frog Katas to knock the Raikage to his right going with all of his momentum, completely obliterating his arm, causing him to disperse(since he was a clone, it wouldnt be hard to disperse him, remember Frog Katas killed a Pain instantly) and causing Naruto to exit Sage Mode. Simultaneously, Onoki, who was in flight in the air, rushes through the steam, allowing for it to burn him a little, making a single handseal. He then creates an orb of dust within his hand again, descending it upon the Raikage and his close by clone, C1 trapping them, then compressing it, therefore killing them. This would suprise the Raikages, since the steam blocked their view also.*

    (Jinton: Genkai Hakuri no Jutsu) - Dust Release: Destruction of the Primitive World Technique
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user after performing a single hand seal to create a cube with a sphere at its center that expands in size when dropped on the target and crushes them due to the density.
    Note: Can only be used by Onoki or Muu


    *If the Raikage dodges Onoki, he is met by Naruto, who has 2 Futon: Rasengans in his hands, plunging them into his chest. If you still try and use the Black Panther Technique, Naruto just cancels them out with his Rasengans. If you use it on Onoki, he just Dodges it, then descends still at the Raikage.*

    (Fūton: Rasengan) - Wind Style: Spiral sphere
    Rank: A
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60 (-20 to user if attain direct hit)
    Description: Rasengan doesn't require handseals, only molding of the chakra. The user focuses and creates a fast, rotating sphere of chakra in the palm of their hand which can cause much destructive impact. A direct Rasengan hit can be lethal but the user needs to actually physically hit the opponent for it to work.


    (Fūton: Rasengan) - Wind Style: Spiral sphere
    Rank: A
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60 (-20 to user if attain direct hit)
    Description: Rasengan doesn't require handseals, only molding of the chakra. The user focuses and creates a fast, rotating sphere of chakra in the palm of their hand which can cause much destructive impact. A direct Rasengan hit can be lethal but the user needs to actually physically hit the opponent for it to work.
    Blue Part = Explanation

    About your clones, a C-Rank tech is enough to kill a clone, and my lightning was of B-Rank, and since both of your clones were at mid range, so my B-rank would've killed both of ur clones..
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    Acc to wikia "This flame can completely cut off the front escape route of an enemy cornered in a hallway or room, or it can thoroughly burn each respective escape route." Means the fire is huge and thus you will require some time in keep expelling fire.


    So I think naruto would still be spitting fire while C2 knocks naruto's head off as we are standing in short range, and as the moment you jumped in front of us (short range), C2 was on his way to you with lightning armour activated. And then you start spitting fire and C2 builds up lightning in his fingers. So while we just start performing our respect jutsus, C2 would be in point-blank range of you, also since you have to spit that much amount of fire so you need a few seconds to expel fire from your mouth and since we are in short range, C2 would easily reach you in no time and kill you.

    Note: I also watched the episode in which Jiraiya performs this jutsu, and I think he expel fire for atleast 6-7 seconds (I noted it). Also you can watch any episode in which raikage rushes towards his target while lightning armour activated. Say, sasuke vs. Raikage at Kage Summit, he dodged sasuke's amaterasu without even running, it was like teleportation. Karin said "nothing can match raikage's teleportation speed". Sasuke even with his Mangekyo Sharingan activated, couldn't match raikage's speed, so he used black flame shield to protect from his "Lateral Bolt of Pain".

    So there is no way that you can complete your "Big flame bullet" before my clone C2 hits you.
    But lets continue according to you. ^_^
    _____________
    About your move, you can't just say "he uses frog katas, completely obliterating his arm" Its b'coz I believe that Frog Katas is a fighting style and you should mention that using what part you are attacking me. like, punching, kicking etc. Its like saying I use Taijutsu on your right hand. (But its just my opinion, I don't know much about it )

    And while in fighting between 4th and sasuke, sasuke used raikiri (S-Rank), while 4th's lightning armour was activated, and he was just able to touch him. 4th said "A thrust attack using the lightning style to increase force and penetration. The same used by Kakashi Hatake. I wear lightning style armour, yet you actually touched me. That is some jutsu"
    So if thats the case with 4th, so you can imagine it with 3rd. Coz 3rd's skin is considered as strongest shield. Also in description of lightning armour its written that "which then electrically stimulates their nerves system and speed up their neural synapes to react faster to danger and push away any physical prowess to the absolute limit.".
    So even if you hit C2, it won't do much damage, atleast not enough to poof him away while his lightning armour is activated. (again its just my opinion)

    Also the frog katas might count as 1/3 moves, if I am not wrong.
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    As the moment C2 see that naruto is dodging to his right (C2's left) and going to punch his left arm, C2 quickly draws his left body part backward and thus dodging naruto's punch and at the same time swings his right hand (with "Two Finger Crossbeam Hand" still activated) at naruto's right arm, and thus cutting his right arm completely just before naruto could punch C2. (as you dodged to your right, and C2 somewhat spun, so C2 and Naruto are at EQUAL distance from me and C1 [imagine it prctically])
    Note: Since C2's lightning armour is active, so his reflexes would be very very fast, faster than Naruto.

    As the moment me and C1 see that naruto is dodging to his right, at the same time C1 do horse handseal and expel a massive wall of intense flames, which covers an expansive range in both vertical and horizontal dimensions, making it extremely difficult to avoid for 3 of you, Naruto, C2 (decoy) and Onoki.

    (Katon: Gōka Mekkyaku) - Fire release: Great Fire Majestic Annihilation
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: A technique where the user makes the horse hand seal and then the user kneads chakra inside the body is converted into fire, and then expelled from the mouth in a massive wall of intense flames, which covers an expansive range in both vertical and horizontal dimensions, making it extremely difficult to avoid.


    As of me, I quickly create a swamp below you and C2 simultaneously along with C2 expelling fire, such that we (me and C1) are on edge of the swamp and you both (C2 and Naruto) are in the swamp, I focus my earth chakra that deep, that you can't use earth pillars to shoot yourself up.

    (Doton: Yomi Numa) - Earth Style: Swamp of the Underworld
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user will first perform Boar → Tiger and then by changing the surface of an object beneath an enemy into mud and creating a non flammable swamp, the user can sink his enemy into the mud. The adhesive, chakra-infused mud ensnares the enemy's body, making it almost impossible to recover one's strength and escape from the swamp. The size and depth of the created swamp depends on the user's skill and the amount of chakra used, but if the user is an expert in this technique, it will always be possible to make a fair-sized swamp which is extremely effective against a great number of enemies or when having to face gigantic creatures.


    Note: As Onoki would be in steam at that moment while C1 expelled fire, so he would be unaware of the fact that C1 used a fire technique, as he would be somewhat burning. And steam would not allow him to use his senses in the steam produced, so it would be extremely difficult for him to concentrate whats happening out the steam.
    As of Naruto, if naruto tries to block fire first, then he losts his right arm. If he tries to deal with C2 first, then he gets burn in S-Rank fire. And swamp is made such that the earth will turn into mud just after the action (2 finger crossbeam) of C2 on you.

    Note: Refer to ep. 132 for Jiraiya's Big Flame Bullet technique.
    Note: Refer to ep. 202 and 203 for Raikage's lightning armour technique.
    Note: I was going to use Liger Bomb on Naruto after cutting his right arm, but I changed my mind.
    Note: I spent SEVERAL hours working on this move. (imagining situation practically, reading wikia about frog katas, watching episodes of frog katas style, big flame bullet, lightning armour, thinking of moves, and typing this all.lol..)
    Note: I imagined all the situations practically.
     
         
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    Re: [Bio Test- Third Raikage] Enzup

    -Test Failed-
    Although Darui didn't do a good job either
     
         

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