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    ~Warlock~ Chapter 2

    ~Warlock~ Chapter 2


    White- *In hes Dream* Whats going on... who are you?

    ???- I'm Zoribatsu the Demon hidden inside of you...

    White- This is just a dream... White call down its just a dream...

    Zoribatsu- FOOL! that guy called ''Alex'' just defeated you with a simle Illusion Spell... how are you going to kill ''that'' man if you got caught by simple illusion spells like this one?... Wake up White!

    *Middle of The schoolyard*

    *Students*- Teacher Please wake him up! hes trapped under a illusion

    Alex- pff... what a loser.

    White- Whats going on where am I?...

    Teacher- ''What is this... Evil Magical power... i feel from White.. ?'' Hmm White are you okey?

    White- Yeah i just had this crazy dream though... Why is there so many students here?

    Tenma- They were all worried about you! How are you ? *hugs white*

    White- Tenma... Im fine... my head hurts though...

    *What was it... this dream of mine?... This demon named Zoribatsu... was it for real?...*

    *Later after School*

    Teacher- Principal Zodac, did you notice the evil magical power before... just when White Gildray woke up from the illusion...

    Zodac- Hmm Teacher Kaylen it most be a demon sealed inside of him... Question is why...?

    Kaylen- But that is impossible... The former Warlock Radiant Mirvana Sealed the demons away... how could they possible exists? and whitin that child?

    Zodac- Patient... I will personally examine White tomorrow... Make sure you send him to my office.

    Kaylen- Yes Master...

    ~Whites House~
    *White enters the house*

    White- What a day... Brother!.. Whats for dinner?

    Brother- My thats rude!, dont you think!? without saying hello! and ask how i feel!.. you just care about food dont you!??..

    White- Yeah... right.. so whats for dinner?

    *Walks towards the Kitchen*

    White- Awesome! Roast Beef damn your really a great cook brother!

    My brother! Red Gildray... hes 15, that means hes my older brother... unlike me.. hes a master at cooking and hes not a mage... Hes dream is to become the Paladin of Azorah.. Paladin is given to the Strongest Warrior in Azorah... Unlike Mages are Warriors Knights users who use Weapons and uses their magic powers to enchant their weapon with special powers.. ... they are very rare in Azorah ... only 10% of all the citizen are Warriors, 70%Mages and 20% who cant use magic at all..

    but Warriors are at a political war with Mages... Warriors belives that Magic isn't everything and Magic is not needed in Azorah and that is too dangerous and one day... Magic will make the Kingdom fall... while mages thinks that magic is everything... without magic... there would be no balance in this world..

    Red- So.. White.. How was your day?

    White- It was fine... nothing actually happend... just had a fight with some guy..

    Red- What! with a mage...? did he hurt you? i swear i will cut him into pieces if he did any harm to you!

    White- Brother calm down! im fine... he just trapped me into a low level Illusion spell... i woke up without breaking it though... i had some kind of wierd dream... about a demon..

    Red- Demon? *Guess its no point in hiding it*

    Red- White... there is something you should know about... Its about us... and why our parents died....

    Chapter 2 Finished! Here is chapter 1 http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...d.php?t=141417

    my first fanfiction... it might be bad... but i will try to improve it later thanks!
     
         
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    Re: ~Warlock~ Chapter 2

    nice story
     
         

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    Re: ~Warlock~ Chapter 2

    Cool story bro
     
         

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    Re: ~Warlock~ Chapter 2

    Quote Originally Posted by Sage of Infinity Paths View Post
    Cool story bro
    Thanks:D
    Quote Originally Posted by ron74 View Post
    nice story
    Thanks:D
     
         

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    Re: ~Warlock~ Chapter 2

    nice story dude
     
         

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    Re: ~Warlock~ Chapter 2

    keep writing it
     
         

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