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    Re: Custom Element's Jutsu

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    (Masshuru-Muton: Shuju no Dokusei ) Mushroom Style: Toxic Dwarf

    Rank: A
    Rank: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: Creates one large mushroom anywhere within range, with either a bright red top with orange particles, black with purple waves or white with yellow stripes.

    If red, the mushroom will release a blinding mist of spores that will secrete a liquid that causes irritation to the eyes, nose and throat of anyone who inhales them.
    If black, the mushroom will release an odorless, colorless mist with hallucinogenic properties, making them see a party of dwarfs all around them, which will forcefully distract them from the fight.
    If white, the mushroom will emit a poofy mist of spores which will allow the cap and surrounding surfaces to withstand large impacts, absorbing it's momentum and send it back, bouncing the impact. (5 meters max) Poofy spores aren't breathable.

    The mushroom will release it's toxins over the course of 3 turns, at the end of which it will decay. The mists will take 1 full turn to spread through the max reach (about 20 meters all around the mushroom)
    *Only one mushroom at a time*
    *Must wait 2 turns after the mushroom decays in order to use the jutsu again*
    *The user and her summons aren't affected by neither mist. Allies can be given antidotes beforehand, which will only last 5 turns in the organism*
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    -Approved-

    Updating again:

    (Masshuru-Muton: Shuju no Dokusei ) Mushroom Style: Toxic Dwarf
    Rank: A
    Rank: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: Creates one large mushroom anywhere within range, with either a bright red top with orange particles, black with purple waves, white with yellow stripes, or grey with sporadic holes.

    If red, the mushroom will release a blinding mist of spores that will secrete a liquid that causes irritation to the eyes, nose and throat of anyone who inhales them.
    If black, the mushroom will release an odorless, colorless mist with hallucinogenic properties, making them see a party of dwarfs all around them, which will forcefully distract them from the fight.
    If white, the mushroom will emit a poofy mist of spores which will allow the cap and surrounding surfaces to withstand large impacts, absorbing it's momentum and send it back, bouncing the impact. (5 meters max) Poofy spores aren't breathable.
    If grey, it will act like a vacuum whenever the user preforms an handseal (counts as the same technique). Thus able to suck up any small particles in the air (Poison, toxines, sand, lethal chemicals) up to the maximum range of this technique, absorbing and neutrilizing them into their harmless by-products, up to one rank above of this technique.

    The mushroom will release it's toxins over the course of 3 turns, at the end of which it will decay. The mists will take 1 full turn to spread through the max reach (about 20 meters all around the mushroom)
    *Only one mushroom at a time*
    *Must wait 2 turns after the mushroom decays in order to use the jutsu again*
    *The user and her summons aren't affected by neither mist. Allies can be given antidotes beforehand, which will only last 5 turns in the organism
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    -Approved-


    Quote Originally Posted by Lili-Chwan View Post
    New:

    (Masshuru-muton/Suiton: Mahou Momsuta-mokuren ) Mushroom/Water Release: Monstrous Murk-Dweller Mandrake

    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: 6 marks materialize a monstrous and massive mountainous mindless moorish and malodorous militant mandrake-like mesh of mold, mirroring the measures of monarchical monsters. It is mighty against it's mundane maladies for it's magnified moisture, masterfully marred in it's midst. It's muddy materials are malign, menacing, malevolent and not merciful, melancholy melting mischievous miscreants, the miserable menaces to it's maternal master. It's moaning moldy mouth of mire is master of Mushrooms, up to it's mark. The mesh of mold may materialize a myriad no more than 6 miniature monsters from it's might, mischievous militant mini murk-dwellers. The murderous musky mandrake mockingly manages a myriad of no more than 4 move-sets before it's muted. Moribund it is made milky and messy, melting mile-wide and measly.
    *Mushrooms managed by the Monstrous Murk-Dweller Mandrake are 1 mark more mighty than mundane Mushrooms*
    *1 monotonous use*


    Note in current english: Creates a madrake-like structure of fungus of the size of a boss summoning, heavily infused with water, which counters the element's natural weakness to fire. It's body has the same yet enhanced effects of normal main-release Mushroom. It can use mushroom techniques up to its ranked, whose effects get enhanced 1 rank. Is able to spit out mini copies of itself, up to 6. Lasts 4 turns if unblocked, can only be used once and requires 6 handseals. When the jutsu ends, the fungus just falls on the ground like it lost the force that was keeping it together.
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    lol... you must have a lot of free time on your hands. I'd be happier if you just used a proper english description.
    I made the edits you wanted. I chose techniques over fire resistance, thus removed Water combination and everything in both descriptions.

    (Masshuru-muton: Mahou Momsuta-mokuren ) Mushroom Manner: Monstrous Murk-Dweller Mandrake

    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: 6 marks materialize a monstrous and massive mountainous mindless moorish and malodorous militant mandrake-like mesh of mold, mirroring the measures of monarchical monsters. It's muddy materials are malign, menacing, malevolent and not merciful, melancholy melting mischievous miscreants, the miserable menaces to it's maternal master. It's moaning moldy mouth of mire is master of Mushrooms, up to it's mark. The mesh of mold may materialize a myriad no more than 6 miniature monsters from it's might, mischievous militant mini murk-dwellers. The murderous musky mandrake mockingly manages a myriad of no more than 4 move-sets before it's muted. Moribund it is made milky and messy, melting mile-wide and measly.
    *Mushrooms managed by the Monstrous Murk-Dweller Mandrake are 1 mark more mighty than mundane Mushrooms*
    *1 monotonous use*


    Note in current english: Creates a madrake-like structure of fungus of the size of a boss summoning. It's body has the same yet enhanced effects of normal main-release Mushroom. It can use mushroom techniques up to its ranked, whose effects get enhanced 1 rank. Is able to spit out mini copies of itself, up to 6. Lasts 4 turns if unblocked, can only be used once and requires 6 handseals. When the jutsu ends, the fungus just falls on the ground like it lost the force that was keeping it together.
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    -Approved-

    General note, this was checked ahead of line just because I requested the re-post.
     
         
    Last edited by Nexus; 07-24-2012 at 06:03 PM.

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