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    Return of the dead Uchiha part: 2

    Chapter 2:The will of Uzumaki




    : RASENGAN!!!
    : Do u actually think u could snap a corpse?He is my slave now and he'll only obey me.

    Naruto pratically screamed when he hit itachi's corpse with his rasengan only to find it to be a clone.

    :I am behind u naruto kun...

    Itachi smiled with his sharingan.Naruto turned to face Itachi only to be caught in itachi's genjutsu.Naruto's eyes clashed with Itachi's crimson as pinwheel-like pupils spun wildly. Colors seeped away as red and black swirled in front of his very eyes.Naruto was officially trapped within the confines of the Tsukiyomi.

    He was bound to a mangled wooden cross, one that barely supported his weight. A world inverted, where there was only black and white.

    :Within the realm of Tsukuyomi... Space... Time... Everything... is under my control...

    The user of the genjutsu slowly stepped forward from among the many realistic versions of himself.

    :For the Next seventy-two hours.. I will continually stab you with these katanas...

    Itachi lunged the blades into Naruto's stomach. Naruto reacted to the horrible pain as his insides were torn apart. As his oppressor mentioned, the torture he withstood did not relent.There was no change in his eyes, such cruelty enacted by their sight, no emotion whatsoever.One agonizing thrust after another, Naruto screamed, his ears the sole recipients of the atrocity.

    :*So.. this is the power of the Tsukuyomi...?*

    The malice brought upon him was what he had thought unthinkable. It was at true reason the most powerful genjutsu known preformed by a master, a supreme prodigy of the Sharingan. Anything he would suffer would be without caution, full force.Naruto could never know how much longer it would be. Survival. Endurance. These were the skills a of ninja, yet with such strength the jutsu had, he felt nothing in his mind could conquer it. There was no escape. He had to endure.

    :What's wrong naruto kun?Just surrender and this pain will go away

    Naruto above all his pain just gave a short smile.Itachi Uchiha,who found the will in him to bring Sasuke back to light,was telling him to give up!

    So this is the great Uchiha Itachi who is just a slave to a snake guy.Ha! You are supposed to be with us Itachi,not with them.Madara told us the truth.You are not...
    :SILENCE!!Do you think running after something meaningless like peace is life?!This is life!!LIFE IS POWER!!
    :No,you are wrong.This is not what the true Itachi wanted!

    Itachi just stared at Naruto.He was rather amazed.In all his pain Naruto was still talking to him.How could this be!


    The true Itachi wanted peace and he trusted me.And i won't let him down!!

    Naruto screamed breaking out of the genjutsu and gave a sharp punch to Itachi's cheeks.Black and read swirled around and disappeared.They were back on the forest.

    :Naruto!
    :What happened?
    :You were caught in a genjutsu.We couldn't help you as we were fighting Kabuto but u broke free...
    :Itachi!where's itachi?

    There on the ground, panting for his life,was Itachi who had his face covered by his hair.Naruto pushed passed Sakura and ran upto him.

    :Naruto don't!He is dangerous

    Naruto ignored her and shook Itachi by his shoulders.Itachi's eyes fluttered open.His eyes shone with life and confusion.

    :Mmm...Na..aa..rut...to?Is that you?

    Itachi was conscious now.He didn't attack Naruto but stared at him confused.The last thing he could remember was his goodbye to his dear otouto.To say Kabuto was furious is an understatement.

    Pein! Finish them!!

    :Where am I?Wasn't I dead?
    :Well lets just say that the world wanted you back and....

    Pein charged to attack Naruto who was exhausted and too preoccupied in explaining to Itachi about what happened.He directed his hands towards naruto.

    Pein:Shinra....

    Suddenly he was kicked aside.Naruto sharply turned in time to see pein being kicked away from him by Itachi.

    : Don't worry Naruto kun,I'll take care of him...

    His face was marked by a calm and calculated smile.Itachi was back and Naruto could feel the power directly radiating from the prodigy's eyes.He couldn't help but smiled back at him as Sakura ran to heal him.

    Fine then,Pein finish him!

    Kabuto literally spat those words like venom.

    :*Sasuke......I have failed in my life but I've been given another chance.Don't worry otouto,your nii-san is on his way...*

    With that both Pein and Itachi entered their battle stance.The will of fire shone in the eyes of the Uchiha or what Itachi likes to call it as,'The will of Uzumaki.'

    To be continued
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    Link to your Fan fiction chapter 1:Chapter 1:The battle
    Link to your Fan fiction chapter 3:Chapter 3:Union of heart
     
         
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    Re: Return of the dead Uchiha part: 2

    I think you could do better with names than pictures of the person. I personally like letters better ^^
     
         

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    Re: Return of the dead Uchiha part: 2

    Nice
     
         

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    Re: Return of the dead Uchiha part: 2

    ...Interesting...
     
         

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    Re: Return of the dead Uchiha part: 2

    I kinda got bored mid way.. well as soon as i saw saku i was like nvm but anywaays Gj on the STORY~
     
         

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    Re: Return of the dead Uchiha part: 2

    Thank u very much everyone...
    I'll try to make it better next time..
     
         

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    Re: Return of the dead Uchiha part: 2

    man, inform me when there is chapter 3
     
         

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    Re: Return of the dead Uchiha part: 2

    wow awesome
    10/10
    can't wait for chapter 3
     
         

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    Re: Return of the dead Uchiha part: 2

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    man, inform me when there is chapter 3
    I will :D
     
         

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    Re: Return of the dead Uchiha part: 2

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    wow awesome
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    can't wait for chapter 3
    Arigato yahi-kun :D
     
         

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