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    The story of a boy name'd Hassan(part three)

    Hassan had gone through 20 years of hard training and is 34 now.After his training he is a master at both self defense and knows how to use a gun.He has been trained by Reza and Porroshan.However,was his training enough?Omar,Hassan's uncle had a underground training area for the men on the neighborhood,they have formed a group named white eagle.They were certain to fight and destroy oghab seyah.In this chapter Hassan prepares to go to California.
    Omar: Asghar,have you found ale's location?

    Asghar: Yes,one of my friends that lives in California has found the location.

    Omar: Well?

    -It is in a place named Pleasant hill.

    Reza: Excuse me master,may i enter?

    Omar: Come in.

    *Reza and Porroshan enter Omar's office*

    Omar: Did you need something?

    Reza: Yes,we wanted to report that Hassan's training is finally over.

    Omar: Oh,what good news!You may go now.

    -Yes.

    Omar: Now that we have their location and Hassan's training is over,i want a complete report on our groups status.

    Asghar: Understood.

    *Omar views report*

    Total report.

    Training status: Almost done

    Members XP:Veteran

    Weapons: MP4,Shotgun,Colt,RPG,China lake,C4 and Grenades.

    Ammo: 500 boxes

    Total members (with others that were hired): 200

    Omar: Hmm...Make preparations for a council.

    Asghar: Already on it.

    After two hours a council was held,they were to decide that are they ready to travel to California or not.

    Omar: Very well,the council begins.As you all have been told,this council is for all of us to state our opinions that are we ready to attack oghab seyah now,or if not,what should be doing before that.We will start from here.Now i will be showing you a total report on our current status.Asghar.

    *Asghar brings report*

    Abdul: I believe that we are completely ready.

    Husein: I belive that we must first wait until our men's training to be finished.

    The council continued for two hours.

    Omar: Very well,the council is over,now i will read the number of people that said we must attack and those who disagreed.

    People who agreed:8

    People who disagreed:2

    Very well then,we will start our attack.And before you go,be in the strategy room at this time tomorrow for us to make a strategy and on what to do when we arrive in California.

    The next day.5:10 pm

    Omar: Alright,is everyone here?

    Asghar: Yes master.

    Omar: Very well,we will begin.

    Mohammad: I believe first we must go there and set up a secret base,like a bar from the outside but a base from the inside.

    Sepehr: I agree with you on the base part Mohammad but i believe we must make it a different kind of place because people who "over do it" will interfere with our work.I say we make it a...Restaurant.

    After two hours they finally decided to make it a restaurant with Asian food.

    Omar: Very well,it is decided then,we will make it a Asian restaurant.But what about the location?

    Asghar: I believe we must make it in very crowded place so that more people will focus on the restaurant then whats happening inside.

    Omar: Any objections?

    Rangin jalaly: No

    Mobin: Me neither

    Bateny: Like Mobin said.

    Pashotan: Like the others said.

    Abdul: No objections.

    Husein: Like Abdul said.

    Namvarrad: Like the others.

    Ismael: Like the others said.

    Sepehr: I cant disagree with the others.

    Poya: No objections.

    Omar: Very well then.That settles that one too.Dismissed.

    Then they got on the first plane to California and then when they arrived there,they used there money to make a Asian restaurant and in their,they made a back door and from there,you entered another room that was the place that they managed there group and made a underground that they train there men.After white eagle traveled to California,they made a restaurant named the sham restaurant,later known as the five star sham restaurant.As the name says it was turned to a very popular restaurant in Pleasant hill ,in fact so popular that it was rated five star.Omar made a new identity,as well as Hassan,Omar was called Reza and Hassan was called Erfan.White eagle became rich because of the restaurant,they made lots of money each month so they used that money to make White eagle stronger.They bought new and advanced weapons,hired more men etc.years have past and White eagle was now ready to make there attack.

    Omar: Asghar,we are now ready to make our move.Its finally time to destroy Oghab seyah!

    Asghar: Yes.That day has finally come!

    -Ready the men.

    -Yes sir.

    They all gathered ad went to one of Oghab seyah's hideouts.A engineer came and picked the lock on the door.One of the men slowly opend the door a bit then throws a flash bag,as oghab seyah's men were blinded and surprised,White eagle's men charged in from the back and main doors and killed everyone that was on the first floor.They quickly went up the ladders and went on the second floor.They kicked a door and a gunfight took place.The sound of bullets flying,suddenly one of the White eagle members shouted:Amir is hit!
    Two men came and dragged Amir away from the door, then finally they killed all of the Oghab seyah members inside.they went in and saw one of them was still alive on the ground and dragging himself to the door,Asghar went near him and kicked the oghab seyah member in the stomach then saw the mark on his neck and said:He is a Oghab seyah captain,take him to the car and get everything he knows
    They took him to the car and got every little bit info he had with cruel ways then killed him.they used that info to find the main hideout's location.they go to that place and before reaching it,they get two snipers on the rooftops and tell them to take out the guards on the rooftops so that they can make a clean entry.They take out the guards and sneak inside by climbing the walls.As they go in they see two guards approaching,they hide behind a wall and when they were passing signal the snipers to kill them.They drop and two of the men drag them behind the wall.They pick the lock on the door and sneak inside.There were four doors and then they splitted to four groups of hundred,then each group went through a different door but two groups waited outside since it would be too hard for 400 men to sneak inside and to prevent any surprises from the outside.The two groups sneaked inside and when a guard passed by,they killed him silently with a knife and then hided there body however they were spotted and had to engage a firefight,a huge firefight,in the end they were able to kill the Oghab seyah members with grenades and many other weapons but took 180 casualties as well.Afterwards they searched the hideout until they found Ali in his office but was already dead and Omar too.They were both shot in the head by a sniper.It turned out that when the snipers were going to another rooftop Omar sneaked in as well but used the distraction his men made and went to Ali before he escaped.when the snipers had Ali in their shooting range,they fired but right before they fired,Omar got behind him and shot him with a colt but was shot by his own men accidentally.They held a proper funeral for Husein and Omar in California and buried them there and they might have left us but will always be in our minds and hearts as heroes.That was written on their grave stones and from there on,Hassan was both relived that Ali is dead,but also sad of the death of Omar and Husein.And from there he was known as the master of White eagle.

    THE END
     
         
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    Re: The story of a boy name'd Hassan(part three)

    Got......bored.....
     
         

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    Re: The story of a boy name'd Hassan(part three)

    Huge!!
     
         

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    Re: The story of a boy name'd Hassan(part three)

    sorry if it was bad though,this is my first story.
     
         

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    Re: The story of a boy name'd Hassan(part three)

    wow. I just remebered there was this parody in bulgarian on Loca People.
    Where it was said that hassan stole johny's current.
    No offence by the way!!!! I like the story :D.
     
         

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    Re: The story of a boy name'd Hassan(part three)

    Quote Originally Posted by EmeraldHope View Post
    wow. I just remebered there was this parody in bulgarian on Loca People.
    Where it was said that hassan stole johny's current.
    No offence by the way!!!! I like the story :D.
    why would that offend me?:D and really?
     
         

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    Re: The story of a boy name'd Hassan(part three)

    its not that bad its good
     
         

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    Re: The story of a boy name'd Hassan(part three)

    thanks,this one is a bit boring compared to the next one cuz here they just made preparations but in the next one,they will act.i wanted to make it all in one chapter but thought it would be too long.:D
     
         

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    Re: The story of a boy name'd Hassan(part three)

    Its okay. I guess you can do better, bored a little
     
         

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    Re: The story of a boy name'd Hassan(part three)

    thanks for sharing your story bro

    keep practicing your getting better
     
         

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    Re: The story of a boy name'd Hassan(part three)

    Quote Originally Posted by uchiha paulsama View Post
    thanks for sharing your story bro

    keep practicing your getting better
    thanks bro.
     
         

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    Re: The story of a boy name'd Hassan(part three)

    Quote Originally Posted by uchiha paulsama View Post
    thanks for sharing your story bro

    keep practicing your getting better
    This I mean. Though as some people mentioned, the story gets somewhat boring to read after a while. The positive side is that your writing skills are improving. Continue to write and you'll eventually reach the top!
     
         

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    Re: The story of a boy name'd Hassan(part three)

    Quote Originally Posted by ElricBrothers View Post
    This I mean. Though as some people mentioned, the story gets somewhat boring to read after a while. The positive side is that your writing skills are improving. Continue to write and you'll eventually reach the top!
    thanks
     
         

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