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    The Sacred Stone: Chapter Three

    The Sacred Stone: Chapter Three

    here's chapter one linkhttp://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...d.php?t=124377
    chapter two linkhttp://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...d.php?t=124551



    In the south was a station that housed 1,500 Buma clan members, the Buma clan was allied with the Uga clan, In a small bar were two warriors, Captain Mira, and Lieutenant Kira. Captain Mira is one of the most famous woman of this war, she is well known for her close combat skills, plus her agility and flexibility. She's 5'9" and has long brown hair with dark brown eyes. Kira is 19 years old and obtained his rank through bravery, he laughs death in the face and treats it all like a game. He is especially useful for keeping the moral up of his fellow clansmen, breaking up the tension in the air whenever he as around. He's 5'11" and has low-cut light brown hair, they were talking about their allied friends, the Uga.


    Mira: What's up with the Uga?

    Kira: Huh? What do you mean?

    Mira: I mean thy have been acting pretty strange lately.

    Kira: Don't they always act like that?

    Mira: Yeah, but this time is different. They hauled in a weapons shipment onto our base, but demanded that they bypass our regular inspection. Normally they wouldn't consider that as an option, but main HQ said let them through.

    Kira: I say just let the higher-ups worry about that stuff. *He said as he took a sip of his sake*

    Mira: Maybe...tell me why they would hide something on our base?

    Kira: Huh? Well, it is a very well hidden base; nobody could find it unless they already knew exactly where it was at. Plus, it's completely off the map.Hey!! You haven't drunk an ounce of your sake captain, I'd be glad to take it off your hands.


    Mira picked up her cup and chugged the sake.


    Mira: If you want it now, you're going to have to wait a couple hours if you know what I mean.

    Kira: Heey!! That's not right. *frowns*

    Mira: *Laughs* Well anyway, back on topic. The fact that they are using this hidden station to house "weapons" is in itself proof enough that there is something else in that shipment, and I don't like being kept in the dark. I wish the commander would have been more persistent on getting some answers out of them, sometimes he's such a-

    Kira: Commander! How are you doing today?

    Mira: Oh...hello...Commander Takashi.

    Takashi: Hello. I just heard that someone from HQ is suppose to be on his or her way here.

    Mira: Who is it?

    Takashi: I don't know.

    Kira: What the...look outside, is that snow in the middle of the summer?

    Mira: Oh no! It can't be the Elema?!


    They heard screaming from outside, the horses were going crazy as well. Soon, the windows was frozen over with ice, they began to see the warmer air coming out of their mouths causing the difference in temperature to clash and turn into a gas. They stood up and ran to the door to look outside, mostly everything was frozen over, and the warriors were pierced with ice spears. And in the center of this mayhem was a man in a blue hooded robe, the only things that shown was his blue icy eyes.

    Mira and Takashi: WE HAVE TO ESCAPE!

    kira: Darn, so it's really an Elema.

    Mira: Yes, it's the ice Elema from the Iwagara Clan. All the five great clans have one, Iwagara has the ice, Yamadara has fire, Iganama has water, Kagabama has earth, and the Uga has lightning. The Elema are mindless, they have no feelings, no remourse, or anything along those lines. They simply follow orders, after one dies, another one is born into the clan, the clan then raises it, teaching it to obey its will, this has been going on for thousands of years. Since they are all divided, it keeps balance within this world, but if one clan were able to gain control of all five, it would mean the end of the world.

    Kira: I see, I heard bedtime stories about them, but I never really saw one, Let's fight!

    Mira and Takashi: YOU IDIOT! LET'S RUN!

    Kira: Huh?

    They grabbed Kira by the arm and proceeded out the backdoor, as they were running it began hailing, the size of the hail were the size of boulders. They violently shook the ground, causing earthquakes throughout the entire station.

    They dodged the boulders left and right, as they also worried about the shattering of the ice boulder, and the slippery ice on which they were running.

    Kira: Man, this ice on the ground makes it hard to dodge the boulders.

    Mira: Yeah, I wonder what that Elema is doing here. It has to be related to what they were hiding, they got all of our men killed.

    Takashi: The hail have stopped, and the ice has disappeared.

    Mira: Crap, we've been spotted, up ahead, Iwagara warriors.


    As Mira approached five of the thirty-five Iwagara, she flipped forward using her calves to crush the shoulders of the Iwagara; falling to the floor with him. As the other warrior ran up to her to try and stab her while she was on the ground, she tripped him with her legs, she quickly rose up on her feet, only to see another warrior leaping over the one she had tripped, after jumping over his comrade and landing on his feet, he swung to take her head off..


    She flipped forward in the air and gabbed his head, and used it for support as she brought her legs high in mid-air, causing the swing to her head to miss, and snapped his neck. She then let her legs come down hard onto the chest of the warrior behind him that she had tripped earlier, crushing his organs. The other Iwagara charged at her raising his sword in the air with the desire to split her in two, she let his arm come back down, with his elbow meeting the armor on her foot halfway, instantly breaking his arm. Before his sword fell to the ground, she kicked it back up, caught it, and then stuck it through the Iwagara's skull.

    Another warrior charged her with his sword swinging low to separate her body from her waste, she then jumped high at him, with her knee meeting his throat and landed on top of him that way. The sight of seeing his throat get crushed made the other hesitate on attacking. By the time he was ready to attack, he saw a shattered piece of those ice boulders coming straight to his head. She then looked to see Kira and Takashi fighting the last four of the Iwagara.


    Mira: Those guys work fast. Hey, Lieutenant Kira, Commander Takashi, calm down on the ice would ya?


    Nearly all the warriors they had slain had were killed with some form of ice. In fact, one of the warriors Kira was fighting was getting beat in the head with an ice ball, he then picked up an ice spear and stuck it through the knee of an Iwagara, once he bent down in pain, he got another one in the back of his head. Another warrior was coming up behind Kira.


    Mira: Behind you!

    Takashi: Kira, duck!


    Once he ducked, Takashi threw an ice spear at the Iwagara, piercing him through the chest and pinning him against a tree. Mira then ran up and drop-kicked an Iwagara in both knee caps. Once he fell to the ground, Takashi stomped his head in.

    Takashi: That's all of them, let's get out of here.

    Mira and Kira: Yeah


    (On to a different scene)

    Hyunimara and Yugimara: What do you mean there was never a team in the east?

    Lee: I mean that we never sent a team to the east.

    Yugimara: But word from the main HQ said there was.

    Takashi Hmm...we can try to track the origin of that message if you tell me the name of the warrior that told you this.

    Yugimara and Hyunimara: WE DON'T KNOW!

    Takashi Okay, calm down. It doesn't make sense that you guys were lured into the east just so your foot soldiers can get killed.There has to be something we are missing.

    Yugimara: I don't understand it at all.

    Hyunimara: Me either.

    Yugimara: Hmm...when you think about it, it seem like they were luring us away from something.

    Lee: Yes! That's probably it. Where were you guys before this happened?

    Yugimara: We were on a road heading further south, that is when the messenger from the main HQ came to us and showed us a documented report from HQ, it said that we were to head there immediately.

    Takashi: Hmm...I have a map, can you show me the route that you were on. *Goes and grabbed the map*

    Yugimara: Sure, it was that route right there.

    Lee: Strange.

    Yugimara: What is?

    Lee: Well, I got word from the main HQ not too long ago that this route wasn't safe, and to give word to all my men to stay away, they said there were too many enemies along this route. I never got the chance to spread the word around to every team.

    Yugimara: I understand now.

    Hyunimara: You do? There was something of such grand importance, that the Batawama revealed their betrayal, and someone in HQ also gave orders to stay off this route.Something was very important, and whatever it was, it took this route.


    TO BE CONTINUED
     
         
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    Re: The Sacred Stone: Chapter Three

    nice
     
         

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    Re: The Sacred Stone: Chapter Three

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    Re: The Sacred Stone: Chapter Three

    I like your story line ^_^
     
         

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    Re: The Sacred Stone: Chapter Three

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    I like your story line ^_^
    thanks sensei :D
     
         

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    Re: The Sacred Stone: Chapter Three

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    thanks sensei :D
    np ^_^ just keep my advice in mind when you write your next one.
    Draw a picture with words so that way the reader keeps their intrest and you will be fine
     
         

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    Re: The Sacred Stone: Chapter Three

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    np ^_^ just keep my advice in mind when you write your next one.
    Draw a picture with words so that way the reader keeps their intrest and you will be fine
    will do
     
         

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    Re: The Sacred Stone: Chapter Three

    its good
     
         

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